OS~ MEETING IN RAILWAYS ~OS - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nyc update.......
please continue it.......... its gr8
and do PM me.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Pleaaase conitnue..loving it😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks a lot to everyone......
I will be continuing it soon...
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PART 4

Maan was running beside the coaches...His eyes were searching for just one person...GEET!!!!!!!!!....and so was his heart...He had never been like this.Just going on running..without any concern for the people , for the society...This is actually what we call love.......He was searching for Geet...The first coach,,, then came the second one..the third one....But he was missing one thing..He was only looking at the platform side of the coach and not the other side...Actually he wasn't clear at anything His heart was having sudden splashes of emotions...Again and again he was praying to God only...and only...for Geet...No one can imagine if at this moment he found Geet before his eyes there was nothing for which he would desire more.....Yesss....Geet was his only desire.....😭

On the other side.....

Geet was going in flashbacks sitting in that empty compartment....She didn't know Maan was there....(this is different from the actual precap)....Sitting beside the window which showed the platform she didn't have tears in her eyes now....Becoz ..... She had wept so much now that even her tears had rebelled against her...not to come out any more....Her heart was not with what she was doing but her mind was somehow taking her to follow the decision....N now...😔
Geet - (to herself) - Nahin..main kahin nahin jaoongi....Main maan ke paas wapas jaoongi....main unke bina nahin rah sakti....Main ye kurbani kyon de rahi hoon??Jahan tak maine maan ko samjha hai wo abb mujhse naraz nahin honge...hai na...??Aurr dadi ma ka kya hoga???Aurr jab duniya maan se ye puchegi ki unki mangetar kahan gayyi to wo kya jawab denge??nahin...main unke saath aisa nahin karr sakti.....mujhe unke paas chalna chahiye.....haan..

She got up with a much more determined thought and.....

PART 5

Edited by Mg777 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 5

and......... She was about to get down from the train..but a thought struck her again.....again she was thinking about her wedding and all the moments which she spent with Dev...n the one line from maan..."mujhe to laga tha ki tum sirf meri ho geet."...and againn she sat back...no she couldn't go back...how could she???with this unfortunate fate she couldn't put maan under it..no she wouldn't go...She again sat down on the seat which was in just the second compartment after the door of the coach....

This side.....
Maan got heaven ...Yess after running a lot he had seen Geet....was it Geet??Not clear....Maan was even now far away from that coach.....where he had seen Geet..He thought he may be hallucinating...but no.....
Maan - (to himself) - Ye geet heen hai...haan...ye geet heen hai....😃😃😃
Saying this he ran towards the coach...People on the platform were watching him.....some recognised him as he was a well known personality of the city.....But the personality didn't care about these things..He wasn't even having any consciouness of the people.....Finally he reached the window...What a moment was that.....Maan felt like flying in the sky........Yes he had found GEET.....His geet.... 😭😭😭(ye khushi ke aansoo hain ...)

Edited by Mg777 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful 👏

Continue!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 6

Geet was looking the other side when Maan saw her...Her hands were on the bars of the window...she felt someone's fingers on her hands..n a small current blew through her hand...and made her look this side...She just turned towards the window with a heavy but curious heart and then was the shock coming.....She had maan standing out of the window...She didn't know what to do..She immediately took her hand off...
Maan - (to Geet) - GEET!!!!.......
(There was pain of separartion,... but also the relief of meeting ,,,..in this single word spoken by maan...)
Geet didn't speak anything ...She just didn't want maan to make her weak by his emotions...She was just getting up to go other side...When maan stopped her..not physically but...by starting his flow of speaking...Every line and every word spoken by him was bringing a lightning effect on Geet..But lightning too...was not able to shake her.....
Maan{to geet)- Geet..Tum kahan ja rahi ho???Mujhe chodkar.....
Geet (to maan) - Mujhe jaane dijiyee......
Maan (cutting her in the middle...) - Main tumhein jaane doon??Kaise jaane doon Geet??
Geet (to maan) - mujhe nahin pata .....mujhe bass aapse door jaana hai....
Maan(to geet) - Geet...tum mujhse door nahin ja sakti geet....main tumhare bina kaise rahoonga......
Geet became speechless.This line was echoing in her ears again and again....But she couldn't decide...
Maan ( to geet) - Main jaanta hoon maine ek adhoora sach jaankar tumhenn galat samjha ..parr main tumse us sabb ke liyye maafi maangta hoon geet....please...mujhe maaf karr do...,....itni badi galti ka bhar le kar main sari jindagi nahin gujar sakta ..agar tum abhi chali gayiii too......
Geet stopped maan in middle....
Geet (to maan) - Main aapse naraz nahin hoon....bass main aapki jindagi se door jaana chahti hoonn....maine aapse kaha tha na..meri..(weeping)....parchainn bhi aapke liyye achchi nahin hai..phir kyunn aap mere pichche pichche aaye.?????
Maan( to geet) - Haan..aurr tumne ye bhi kaha tha....Ki sach janne ke baad meri marzi chalegi ..kaha tha na??
Geet (to maan) - parr...
Maan(to geet) - Parr kya Geet???Meri marzi ye hai..ki tum yahan se kahin nahin jaoogi..bassss....
Geet (to maan) - nahin...main aapki koi baat nahin manoongi.....Aap mere liyye itne pareshan kyunn ho rahe hain??
The train gave whistle..............
Maan became extremely worried....
Maan( to geet) ...kyonki...kyonki main tumse p y a a r karta hoon Geet..........I love u......
Geet became surprised....She was not able to speak a word..She justt went on looking his face...and his words were echoing in his heart all over......what had she heard now?????The whole world just came to her...as if she was the queen of the whole world.....

PART 7

Edited by Mg777 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@HehehehDramas thanks a lot..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey ggood one yaar pls update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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excellent.luved all ur parts,add me to ur pm list plz.do continue n pm me .thx

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