ManeetFF..Mujhe Haq Hai:: Chp 28::PG. 144 - Page 36

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Posted: 14 years ago
just loved ur ff amazing concept yaar i just loved them but plzzz try to update soon this is the first ff which i read in this forum n i really cant wait 4 the next update i m asilent reader but ur ff is to gud that i have to tell u this n also request to update soon plzzzz
n plzz do add me to ur PM list thannxxx n continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Nida!
Loved ch. 13! Geet & Maan r so comfortable w/each other.
Again loved their convo...very easy reading. Keep it up!
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Posted: 14 years ago
very cute epi...

MG going 2 stay alone .....WOW
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Nida,
Loved the jodi of Sasur & Bahu, pulling Poor Maan's tang! 😛
So Baccha log Home Alone. I hope they don't get married while family is away!
-Sona
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww thx a lot nida 4 da special dedication... I reaally luvd it... Sorry 4 commenting on it soo late but i hope u understand... Thx once again and it was a fabulous update.. Plzzz yaar continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello guyss..im back..again late..Eid thi na..iss liye..😒..well first of all
Eid Mubarak..and Happy Ganesh Chaturti to u all..
🤗...hope u all had fun..and enjoyed to the fullest..and so so so much thanks..for leaving such Amazingly wonderPhul comments frendz..missed u all..love yaa..ee..and Maan 2 ☺️..LOL..😆...yes Maaneet are alone in the FF..and therez alot to happen..alot of stuff that u all wud love😛😉..and mujhe phir se maaf karna for being late..sachi guys..now will try my best to update soon..but agar choti upadate huwi to chalay ga kya?..plzz tell..kyunki long update karne main..thoda time lagta hai..but no worries..will try my best..so u guys enjoy reading..and don't 4get to leave the comments..coz woh mera haq hai..LOLS..😆😆..EnJoyyy~~
~Chap 15~

"Aap log kitnay din k liye jaa rahe hain??.."..Geet asked sorrowfully..

Mr. Khurana: hmm..meray khayal se aik hafta to lagay ga..ya phir aik week say zyada ya kam bhi..

Geet: ohhh..she was still sad

Mrs. Handa who was noticing her..spoke up: Geet agar tum asiay behave karo gee na..to phir main nahi jaa rahee..

Geet: no maa..i mean..hum phir aap logon ko receive karne aaingai na..so iss liye..she made an excuse after seeing Mrs. Handa getting upset..she didn't want to ruin their trip..

Mrs.Khurana: we are sorry Geet beta..hum nay iss tarhan achanak se yeh plan bana liya.. tum bhi humaray saath chaltee..lekin tumhara college..

Geet was regretting now.." no aunty..u don't need to be sorry..aap mujhko sharminda kar rahee hain..main to bas aise he..aur hum phir se aik baar sab kahin trip par jaain gai..once this last college year completes..now Geet smiled..aur waise acha he hai aunty..maa se thoda door rahoon gee..tou according to maa..thodi responsible hojaon gee..rite maa

Mrs. Handa: rite..she replied wid a smile..

Mr. Khurana: nahi bhayee..mujhe to Humari Geet bohot responsible lagti hai..and im sure woh hai bhi..he sed smilingly

Geet: ofcourse uncle..woh to maine awain..maa ka mood acha karne k liye bol diya..warna..u all knw na that i Am responsible..she sed to lighten the mood

Maan who was quietly driving laughed..

Geet: excuse me..maine koi joke sunaya hai kya jo tumko hansi aa rahee hai?..she complained..

Maan: kis ne kaha main tum par hans raha tha..kyon aunty..aapko laga k main Geet par hansa

Mrs. Handa: mujhe to nahi lagta..

Geet: o really maan..i knw y u laughed..yahee sun kar na..k main aik zimmaydaar ladkee hoon..aur tum samajhte ho k main nahi hoon..

Maan: Ab tum jo samajhna chaho..he sed shrugging

Geet angrily looked at Maan who was smiling and looking for a parking..they had reached the airport..Maan finally parked the car..and all got out..Maan was taking out all the luggage by himself..Geet who was looking around glanced at Maan..she cud see his broad back..he was wearing casuals.. pants which looked like trousers and a blue T-shirt..Geet quietly moved to the other side so she cud see his face..there was a calm and serious expression on his face..he was lifting all the heavy suitcase if there was nothing in them..which showed he was pretty strong..which really impressed her..

She moved forward.."Need sum help?"..she asked friendly..

Maan who gazed at her for sum moments..and then moved forward..Geet stepped back..nervously.."No thanx..im done"..he sed closing the van..and walked away..Geet stood there in amazement..she was sad..that Maan was still mad at her..and more importantly the old Maan was cuming back!

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"chalo ab humaray jaanay ka time hogaya hai..they called the passengers.." Mr. Khurana sed..

Mr. Khurana: Maan!..tum apna..aur Geet ka khayal rakhna..achay say..aur haan I will try to keep in touch for the business news..he sed hugging him..

Mrs.Handa: Geet tum bhi achay se apna aur maan ka khayal rakhna..usay pareshaan nahi karna..ladna nahi..khana time par khana..aur achay se padhna..

Dadi: Rupinder..tu Geet ko hamesha k liye nahi chod kar jaa rahee

Mrs. Khurana: sahi bola aapnay maa..bhabhi its just for a few days..

Mrs. Handa smiled..

Maan: ok ab aap log andar jaain..warna flight miss kardain gai..Aunty don't worry I will take care of everything..he sed looking at Geet..who had tears in her eyes..but she was smiling..pretending to be happy and ok

Byee Maa..Byee Uncle..Aunty..Dadi..byee..she was waving her hand..calling out loudly..

Maan noticed other ppl staring at them.."sshh..Geet..ahista..sab dekh rahe hain" he whispered standing close to her..Geet quietly put her hand down..and started looking at the floor..

Maan: ab chalain..he sed soflty..coz he knew that she was cheerless

Geet nodded and both made their way out to the parking lot..

"yeh van aapki hai?" the traffic police officer asked Maan

Maan: jee..yeh humari hai..y is anything wrong sir?

Geet was confused..

Officer: yahan parking mana hai..its an illegal parking..

Maan: but therez no sign..

Officer: aapko shayad chashmay ki zaroorat hai..woh wahan sign nahi dekha aapne..he sed in a strict tone..pointing toward the bushes..where the sign was standing

Maan: ohh..im sorry..mujhe dikha nahi..

Officer: aapko fine pay karna hoga..

Maan: ok..

Officer: chaliye meray saath..

Maan: kahan

Officer: meri car k paas..kaafi door hai.. I have to take the fine receipt..the ticket u knw..!

Maan: ohh ok..aik min. then he turned to Geet.."tum yaheen mera intezaar karo!.main abhi aa raha hoon..wid that sed he turned and followed the Officer

Geet kinda nervous..just stood there..started waiting for him ..

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"1050 rupees..aapka fine.."..the officer informed

Maan took out his wallet and payed him the money.."ab kya main Jaa sakta hoon!"..he asked..

Officer: haan..lekin next time be careful..

Maan: alrite sir..wid that sed he made his way back to where he parked his car

"Hey Maan!.." he just walked a few steps away when he heard sum1 calling his name..Maan stopped at the voice..

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Geet was waiting and waiting for him..and slowly losing her patience..

"yeh Maan mujhko akelay chod kar uss police waalay k saath chala gaya..aur ab wapas bhi nahi aa raha..kahin uss police waale ne usay arrest to nahi karliya..zaroor police walay k saath kuch kiya hoga..Baba jee..aakhir issko itna ghussa kyon aata hai..main kahan phas gayee babajee..she looked up at the sky complaining to her BabaJee

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"Hey Maaaaann..wow..tum yahan"..he turned around to see who it was

Maan: ohh tum!..he sed surprisingly

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Geet: Bas..ab main aur wait nahi karsaktee..BabaJee..main Maan ko dhoondne jaa rahee hoon..plzz help karna..she made her way in the direction where Maan went wid the Police officer

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Girl rushed to him..and then hugged him: how are u?..well u r luking perfect as usual..

Maan: hmm..tum yahan?

Girl: yes..actually aik frend ko chodne aai thi..

Maan: ohh ok..he sed looking at his wrist watch..(it was 4:15 am)..sorry but I have to go rite now..

Girl: oh cum on Maan..tum abhi bhi ladkiyon se door bhagtay ho..cumon..not atleast wid ME

Maan: no its nothing like that..but .....

The girl interrupted: no buts no ifs..cumon Maan..im no one else..im Samira Maan..

Maan: Samira..but sum1 is waiting for me..i really gotta go..

Samira: reallii..aisa kon hai..Girl friend?

Maan: umm..will tell ya everything later..but really I need to go..

Samira: ok ok..u go..i will call u..and plzz..call pick kar lena..maine pehlay bhi call kiya..but u never picked up

Maan: ohh..sorry I was a little busy wid the business..but yeah I will talk to u..ok byee..

Samira: bye!

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Maan quickly made his way to where his car was parked..thinking Geet must be waiting for him..but unexpectedly Geet wasn't there..Maan who barely gets anxious..was panicked at the moment..for sum moments he stood there still..not even moved an inch..thinking about where Geet must have gone..

Maan: oh God!..yeh Geet kahan gayee..he sed holding his head..then turned around..looking everywhere..

Maan: Geeet!! Geet!..he was shouting her name out while running around..like crazy..All he cud see were the cars and different people..he kept looking for her in the crowd of strangers..

After a little long search..he stopped and half bent down putting his both hands on his knees..breathing heavily..he was trying to breathe..when he looked up..still trying to look for her..not even missing a chance..when he saw a girl similar to Geet..walking in the opposite direction..he cudnt really see her because all he cud see was her back..but he was pretty sure it was Geet..he quickly rushed..and ran behind her..

Maan: GEET!..he shouted..and waited for the girl to turn..

The girl stopped and started looking around..which confirmed that it was Geet..Maan jogged to her..Geet finally saw him..Maan feeling relieved and content quickly hugged her..tightly..so tight that it was getting hard for her to breathe..but the feeling of finding her..the feeling that now she was with him made him so happy that he just cudnt stop himself..Geet after sum seconds understanding Maan..also wrapped her hands around his broad back..she cud hear his heart beating so rapidly..she closed her eyes..just listening to his heartbeats..his grip grew more stronger and tighter..

"Maa..Maan.."..she whispered

Maan opened his eyes..suddenly feeling awkward being this close..he slowly moved away..not looking at her..for a few seconds both looked away..but Maan broke the awkward silence..

"Tum kahan chaleen gayeen thee..mana kiya tha na..kahin nahi jaana..main aaonga..tum hamesha meray kahay ka ulta kyun kartee ho..meree baat kyon nahi maan sakti..ab jab tak mom and dad and tumhari mom nahi aajatay..u r my responsibility..pata hai..kitna pareshaan hogaya tha main..iss shehar main abhi bhi nayee ho tum..agar kahin kho jaateeen to!..sab mujhko boltay na..he was taking out all the anger on her

She was quietly listening to him..

"hogaya tumhara..cheekh liyay mujh par..ab main bolon..agar aap mujhko permission dedain!" she replied after he was done

Maan didn't speak.."tum..mujhko akela chod kar chalay gaye..main itni dair tumhara intezaar kartee rahee..lekin jab tum nahi aaye..to mujhe laga..kahin uss pagal police walay nay tumko arrest to nahi karliya..phir main ne socha k..mujhe tumko dhoondna chahiye..aur phir..maine tumko dhoond bhi liya..uss ladki k saath..tum jiski bahon main thay!..tum mujhko wahan akelay chodh kar uss ladki k saath..ughhh..tab tum ko yaad nahi tha kya k main iss shehar main nayee hoon..aur akelee bhi..she replied angrily

Maan: main!..ladki k saath!..bahon main..he sed confusingly tried to remember..

"ohhh..u mean..o WOW..so tum Samira ki baat kar rahee ho..woh.." he tried to give clarification..but Geet interrupted

Maan..plzz..im not really in a mood to listen to ur story..ab plzz pehlay ghar chalo..im feeling sick rite now!..she angrily complained..

Maan sighed..thinking she was very angry..its better if he takes her home first and then will talk to her later..: ok..cum lets go!

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On the way both were quiet..Geet leaned back on the seat wid her eyes closed..she was feeling tired..and sad..first of all her mom wasn't wid her..and then seeing Maan wid that gurl Samira..she didn't feel too great..she hated that Maan ignored that she was waiting for him..Maan knew that Geet was misunderstanding him..but he thought to be quiet and decided once they both reach home..the first thing he will do will be tell her the whole truth..he silently kept driving..and Geet also didn't bother to talk..as she was mad at him

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They reached home..Maan parked the car in garage..and was about to get out..when noticed that Geet was asleep..for sum moments he just kept staring at her..the peaceful expression on her face was making her look so calm and yet beautiful..he smiled..remembering the angry Geet who just fought wid him just an hour ago..

"ahem!..Geet..hum ghar pohonch gaye hain " he slowly tried to wake her up..but there was no response..

"Geet.." he again tried..but looked like she wasn't gonna wake up..he quietly got out..first thinking what should he do..after thinking for sum time..he decided to pick her up..and take her to her room..he opened the car door..leaned on her..picked up her hand..and put it around his neck..then slightly slide his 1 hand around her waist..and another 1 around her knees..and carefully took her out from the car..and made his way inside..the door was opened..but the house was drowned in darkness..all the servants had gone to servant quarters..Maan barely cud see anything..he carefully walked to the lounge..and now he didn't want to go upstairs..to Geet's room..he didn't want to take the risk of falling over Geet so he put her on the sofa in lounge..

Maan: huuff!..yeh dikhti slim hai..but bohot heavy hai..he sed looking at sleeping geet

Maan: ok Geet..kal baat hogee..have sweet dreams..main to chala..wid that sed he made his way to his room..

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Edited by NZ_rockx - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome chap nida..plzz dont pull sammy's chap longer

and omg thats wat guru sed that ye dikhti toh patli hain lekin bhari bohot hain 😆😉
copycat😆😛😉 anways upd shoon
Edited by Aabrayy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
can't wait for the next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr8888888 update.
Loveeee maneet's hug scene.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.


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Posted: 14 years ago
Eid Mubarak to you too 😃😃😃

Aww poor Geet! I remember the first time I had to live separately from my mum for a week...it was so hard 😔 and on top of that she's jealous 😉

I loved the line that Maan said saying that she looks thin but is really heavy...reminded me of the SBS segment when Gurmeet said that 😛

I hope Maan and Geet make up soon LOL 😆😆😆

Thanks for the PM and continue asap ⭐️

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