And they Lived Happily ever after P1 updatd p2

Hi,
My name is Mandira. I am a rather new member of the Forum...well not quite new... since i am a regular reader of several FFs here...

Here is a short story that i wrote and want to share it with you... I wont give an intro, coz i feel that the story will become clear as you start reading it...

You guys have read a few of my creations before posted by my friend Gaurav:

The world stopped that Moment

Marriages are made in heaven

You are my love...

Hope you guys will like this one too!!!😊

She opened the lock and pushed the door open'.

She walked in slowly and looked around' the things were covered in white and the floor was dusty'

She stood there' the house that had cradled their dreams of a happy life, the dream that someday they would be a family with 2 kids'

Her eyes wandered to the book shelf next to the stairs' she slowly walked to it and picked up a frame out of the many kept on top and wiped the dust off with her hand'

A smile came to her lips' he was ducking while she wet him with the water sprinkler'

She kept the frame back on the shelf and looked at the stairs' a tear fell down her cheeks'

Suddenly she heard her cell phone ring' she walked back to the couch and picked up her purse and took out the phone' "Haan bolo' main yahan apne purane ghar mein'"

"Tum wahan kya kar rahi ho'maine tumhe mana kiya hai na wahan jaane se'???", he scolded her gently'

"Woh main' ??"

"Look baby I don't want you to go there'chalo wapas aao'"

She was quiet'

"Phir se ro rahi thi na'.???"

"Nahin tou'", she said wiping her tears'

"Jaise main tumhe jaanta nahin hoon'"'. "Achcha chalo wapas aao' main kab se tumhara wait kar raha hoon'."

"Tum ghar aa gaye..???"

"Phir bhul gayi' hamein Coffee day mein aaj milna tha at 6 remember???"

"Hmmm' tum ruko main abhi aati hoon'"

"Love you baby' and jaldi aao I really miss you sweety'", he said and hung up'

She closed her eyes and let the tears flow for some more time and then turned back and walked out' she locked the door and sat in the car'

is this an AR ff?

Nice ff...continue soon...Pls PM me...

heyy dear
loved it
cont soon
n is it AR story??
n plzz pm me whenever u update
thx
dhruvika

do continue and pm me when ever u update

nice start

heyyy dear,
nice concept
continue soon



love
Riddss

nice concept dear
continue soon
n do pm me

***Guys thanks for your comments and encouragement...here the next part***

Armaan was waiting at the entrance of the Coffee shop' he saw Ridz's car and went to receive her'

She parked her car and was about to open the door when she felt the door open'

"Madam' allow me'", Armaan stood their smiling at her'

She stepped out and smiled lightly'

"Yaar why do you torture yourself like this'???", he said looking at her swollen eyes' "Dekho ro ro ke tumhare aankhein sooj gayi hain'"

Fresh tears welled up and drops flowed down her cheeks'

She leaned on the car door facing him'

He used his finger and picked the tear that was about to leave her cheek and fall down' "Yeh pearls past par waste nahin karte basket'"' "jo hona tha ho gaya'", he said and opened his arms'

She went near and he hugged her tight' he kissed her forehead lightly, "Sab theek ho jayega' dekhna'."

They stood in an embrace for sometime' "Yaar mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai, chalo na lets eat something'maine lunch bhi nahin kiya'"'.

"Kyon'lunch kyon nahin kiya???", she wiped her face clean and separated from him'

"Kya karta basket' ek emergency case aa gayaa tha' and mujhe attend karna para' it was a 7 hour surgery' jab khatam hui to dekha its quarter to 6' socha you must be waiting so I rushed here'"

Ridz looked at him, and touched her ears' "Mujhe maaf kar do Sonu'maine tumhe wait karaya'"

"Oye hoye' is Sonu ne tou meri puri thakaan hi utaar di'"' "Achcha chalo ab kuch khate hain please mere pet mein haathi kood rahe hain'", he winked at her'

They go in and take a seat next to the window'

"Tum kya khaogi'???", he stands up and asks'

"Kuch bhi and please ek coffee'"

"Black with little sugar..hain na???"

Ridz smiled and nodded' and he went to the counter to place the order' he turned around and looked at her' she was looking out of the window'

He felt for her, but there was not much that he could do to ease the pain' he turned and picked up the tray' and turned around to walk towards their table and saw that she was no longer there'

He placed the tray back on the counter' and looked around for her'

His eyes searched her every where' he went outside the door'

Suddenly he heard a commotion and saw a group of people gathered in a circle and some people fighting with a bike driver'

He went near and was shocked to see Ridz in the middle of the circle' she was holding her elbow and he saw blood on her clothes'

"RIDHIMA'", he shouted and pushed the people and went near her'

He went and knelt next to her' she looked up' she had tears in her eyes and she held her elbow tight'

"Yeh sab kya hai???"' "Tum yahan kaise aayi'???"'

"Armaan who bachcha us bike ke niche aa jaata'main use bachane'", she stopped midway and grimaced'.

"Chalo utho'"' he picked her up and brought her to the car'

He drove home as fast as he could' he opened the door and picked her up and brought her to the bed room'

"Ek second'", he ran to the study to get the First aid box'

He came back and saw her crying'

"Bahut dard ho rahaa hai'isn't it???", he opened the box and took out some cotton and dipped it in antiseptic'

He lightly took her elbow in his hand and touched the cotton on it'

She grimaced' "Mmmmm"

He blew softly on the wound to ease the sting' he slowly cleaned the wound and bandaged it'

"Tum do min ruko main abhi aataa hoon'", he left her and went to the kitchen'

After a while'

"Lo basket yeh pi lo' and yeh pain killer lo'", he sat next to her and handed a glass of milk to her'

He then made her lie down and switched off the light' he sat next to her and caressed her head'

She closed her eyes'

He walked out of the bed room and came to the drawing room and sat on the couch'

He covered his eyes with his palms' and started to cry' "Main kuch nahin kar pa raha hoon tumhein is dard se nikaalne ke liye' kuch bhi nahin'"' "kya karoon that tum phir meri hansti khelti basket ban jao'"' he continued to sob for a long time'

Suddenly his phone buzzed in his pocket' it was still on vibration'he took it out and looked at the screen' "Dr. Shashank calling'"

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