Maaneet- A new dimension to the love (Ch 30 Pg.74) - Page 51

waiting for the reasons from Maan..

wow it was lovely, please add me to ur pm list :D

its amazing pls update and send me too

Originally posted by: deejagi

Hi, yet again one more nice update. Plesae do not let Maan fulfill her wish of parasailing. She is pregnant & weak, so it is dangerous for her child.
Jaya

Well... So you guessed it right....
I actually wondered whether pregnant women can do para sailing or not, but then I searched for it and was disappointed that they can't. They are advised not to. So, I wanted to drop the idea initially but then I changed it for the better. And how's that going to happen...you would see in my next update....


With Luv,
Jhankaar

Hi everyone...I'm back after much time. Sorry, to keep you all waiting. Here's your new update. Hope it gives some relaxation to those who had got hyper-tensed with my previous update. I'm not able to reply to your comments, too. I'm really sorry for that. But' I love it when you all comment.

Chapter-30

CHORI CHORI!! CHUPKE CHUPKE!!!

Maan was caught amidst the whirlpool of contradictory thoughts. Being a Business Man, saying 'no' to someone was not much difficult for him, but today it was the woman of his life in question, and hence the fear. Maan's mouth had dried up, and he doubted his own speaking abilities. Yet he realized he has to clear this issue, sooner or later, so why not today itself.

With this self decision and determination, Maan opened his mouth and spoke in the softest of voice that he had ever used, which could melt even a stone, "Geet, I'm afraid, I will not allow you for para sailing. It's not…" and he couldn't utter a single word more.

Hearing herself refused by Maan, made Geet forget about all her blushing and embarrassment, thumping of her heart with his closeness and all she could reconcile was the disapproval by Maan. She could have taken all this silently, had she been Geet of earlier times, but it was the new Geet, who knew how to fight, and she said vivaciously, "It's not…what??? Not for women. Do you still think that I'm weak, even after going through everything that I went through. Am I so incapable and weak in your eyes? I am…am…", she shook her head the other side, to dispel the tears that were filling her eyes, and unable to voice out anything, just said, "I am going for para sailing and that's final."

Maan felt hurt, seeing her tears, and then her behavior seemed like she was having a mood swing. Yesterday only, Maan realized that even though she had forgotten Dev and that entire sham marriage, and her heart was only his and no one else, she had had a deep impact on her mind, due to those cruel happenings, due to which her temper was difficult to handle. In simple words, she suffered mood swings, when it came to anything with Maan and herself, for he was the only one she loved most.

It was another such moment with Geet. And Maan had to deal this silence and love.

As Maan took in all these observations and conclusions, his lady love had started moving away towards the lake, in her own anger.

Maan saw her moving and ran before her, and decided in an instant that he had to stop her from front and not by back. He leapt towards her in one jump, and landed ahead of her, stopping Geet out of shock.

He then bent down on his knees again, and said, "I'm sorry Geet, that…" his voice broke off, and he reached out to her soft belly, where 'his' child rested safely (Yes, the child was his and Geet's).

Geet blinked her eyes slowly. She was unable to comprehend his eyes and her own behavior. Already his touch was like heaven's feeling, and his eyes full of love, made it impossible for her to behave normally.

Her touch gave him some peace, he looked up to see her face to gather more courage and started again, with softness and genuineness, "Geet. Para-sailing isn't safe for our child. I know you are more capable and stronger than all the humans that I've come across, not just women…. But, this isn't safe for our child, whom I've started to love as much as you. It doesn't matter, I'm not the father, I promise, I would love him/her, and care for him/her, more than any other father of the world.

And for your para-sailing, I promise I would fulfill this dream of yours one day, but I'm sorry to say that this day is not today."

Geet was clean bowled by his true words. Her trust on him deepened, and her love increased manifolds. It was too much for her to digest, so she struggled to speak something that would convey her feelings, her hand went over Maan's hand that was on her belly, but all she could say was, "But… My baby wants para-sailing. Promise, you will take the baby for the ride in the sky, irrespective of a boy or girl" she spoke disconnectedly, words barely audible.

A smile appeared on his face, seeing that she has at last believed him with her baby. He said, "I promise. I will do that myself. And not just, my baby, I don't have any problem to take his mother for a ride then".

Geet's face lit up instantly. With a gesture of her hand, she motioned him to get up. As Maan stoop up, he intentionally got closer to her, and made his grip on her hand tighter. Geet just blushed the darkest shade of red, and before she could react, something in her mind jerked her.

She realized something was amiss there, but couldn't locate what. She just motioned her head sideways to look both directions.

Meanwhile, Maan realized someone was calling him, and her turned his head back and murmured 'Princess', while Geet was reminded of Muskaan, with whom she had come.

Both turned their heads to face each other at the same-time, and yelled simultaneously, "Muskaan…", "Princess…"

Geet's eyes narrowed at the mention of Princess, but she was too alarmed to find Muskaan first and then to take care of other matters. "Maan, Muskaan kaha hai???"

"What, Muskaan… Who???"

"Arey… Muskaan… Pata nahi is ladki ka kahi bhi chali jati hai? Bas, kisi mushkil mei na ho.."

"Geet. Who is Muskaan?"

Geet was too busy looking here and there frantically, to notice the question of Maan.

"Ek toh Princess ka pata nahi hai. Or ab kisi Muskaan ko dhundo. Kya musibat hai?"

While he desperately tried to locate Princess, Geet had run to look for Muskaan.

After few minutes of searching Maan found out Geet was missing from his side, Maan got really worried. He didn't know what to do, and suddenly he spotted Princess, among the lush green grass.

He shook his head in both the directions quickly to find Geet, but unable to do so, he ran after Muskaan, yelling Princess.

He reached to her and calming him down, he asked, "Princess… Where were you??", in a tone that was mixed with worry and hurry.

"Superman.. I was just here", she said trying to sound normal, but she was searching for Geet Di, whom she had left at the same place. Although she had spotted her Superman, she was unable to locate her Di.

"Here… You realize how worried I got? And who are you looking for?", Maan enquired getting skeptical.

Before she could give any response, Geet came towards her, and took her in a close hug. After staying like that and calming her over sensitive nerves, she started banging questions at Muskaan, that were more or less the same, as asked by Maan.

When, she had finished with her incessant rant, Muskaan said, emphasizing her words, "Di.. Wo… Aap dekho".

And she turned her head to see Maan staring at her wide-eyed.

"Why are you staring?"

"Nahi… vo…", snapping his gaze off her.

"Tum Princess ko janti ho…", Maan said.

"Princess!!!! She's Muskaan. She's my sis", she asked confused, and acting protective at same time.

Maan now understood the whole story, so Geet was living with Muskaan and her parents.

"Princess. Was it your plan?", Maan asked to Muskaan, with a crooked smile.

Muskaan burst into fit of laughter, holding Geet by one hand, and Maan by the other, to maintain her balance, and then told them the whole story.

Geet smiled at her listening all that, and said, "I love You, Muskaan. Don't know about Maan, but I will never leave you."

At this Muskaan got little sad, and hung her head down.

Geet was amused at her behavior, and Maan was the first to ask now, "What happened, Princess?"

"I've to go. Mom-Dad decided, that we're leaving."

"But where?", asked panic-stricken Geet.

"To US. To my grandparents. We're going to live with them for sometime", said Muskaan in a sad voice.

A tear rolled down Geet's cheek. Maan held her by the shoulder, and gave her a comforting look through eyes.

And then to lighten the mood, "Princess. Humari shaadi mein dance kaun karega?"

Immediately, Muskaan was overjoyed, "Who's a better dancer than me? Do you have any doubt?"

"But you are going na…", Maan said teasing her.

"So what, I can return also…"

"Pakka, promise", Maan said bring a hand forward.

Muskaan placed her hand on it, and Geet too joined them, all saying "PROMISE".

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The next day shone brightly, but a shock waited for Maan and Geet. After the events of yesterday, their love and respect for each other increased and cemented. Yet, was it enough to tackle the Breaking News, "Chori- Chori… Chupke- Chupke…"

Also, press the 'like' button after reading the update and do leave your comments. So, wondering what's the breaking news...a small twist or major upheavel. Do think, and suggest.

a very emotional and a fantabulous update..........

Originally posted by: revav

a very emotional and a fantabulous update..........

so good to read ur updates.............

plzzzzzz update soon

reva

Thanx Reva....
I never knew, somone would like reading my crazy story, or that I would actually start writing at the first place.😉
The story is gonna wound up in the next update or two.

Actually, I can't guarantee you updates any sooner, as I'll be leaving for the college and then hostel tomorrow. Throughout this week, I've been shuffling between the home, college and hostel, but once there, I get quite busy.

With Luv,
Jhankaar

great update

A new dimension to the love the name is so gripping.... i have just started... i hope to finish it soon...part 1 was really nice.... i loved it..keep writing

That was a very cute update! It was really sweet.....loved them! Twist........do continue soon.