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Part 4

Ash: let's carry on Jogging

Everyone carried on jogging around the park. It had been a couple of minutes, when all of a sudden, Ash cornered Juliiet away from the others, making sure they would not hear her.

Ash: Stay away from Romeo! I know your intentions.

Shocked Juliet pulled her arm away from Ash's grip and ran off cathching upto the rest of the girls. Deciding to return their respective homes, Julliet sat ont he bench in the park, for a break and to see if her brother had rang. Tking out her phone, she saw a text from her brother. Reading it to herself she smiled.

'My lovely Di,How are you? I will be late reaching Mumbai as I missed my train Sorry. Don't worry no need to wait for me. I will be on time for my bus. Tell ma and pa about the change of plan. Chat soon Di'

Juliiet smiled at her brother, and told herself mentally to remind her parents. Just as she was about to get up, and leave for home, she felt domeone pull at her hand. Turning around she saw Romeo. Surprised, she looked up at him, and then remembered what ash had said to her. With tears building up in her ewyes she turned around and tried to pull her hand out of his grip. With Romeos clasp being too tight, she turned around again with a few tears coming out of her eyes k now.

'Kya huan? Why are you crying?' Romeo asked Julliet.

Julliet was silent, and didn't say anything.

Romeo: Tell me what happened.

Julliet: Woh... Nothing. Its just that your friends dont wont me to be near you, so i shouldn't be here. Please let me go.

Romeo@ Who said that?

Silencce was in the air as Juliiet said nothing,

Romeo: Bolo. He said sternly.

Julliet: Ash

Romeo: Dont worry, she wont say it again.

Letting her hand go, Julliet walked away, whilst Romeo thought about why Ash woulkd say such a thing.

Meznwhile in Barada, Ranjha had packed his bag, and was running extremely late for his bus. Running out of his campus, he hailed taxi to go to the bus stand, where his school bus was leaving from.

He ran up to the bus stand and then said to himself thank god I reached on time he waited in the line as no one was on the bus and were getting something to eat in the nearest cafe. On the other hand Heer, zain, aarushi were coming back to their bus when a car drove pass them and Heer started shouting

Heer: 'Aye, samajh tha kya hai apne aap ko. Bari bari gaarion mein ghoomthe ho aur bhool ja the ho ke yaha aur bhi log hothe hai. Sadak kya tere baap ki hai. Eh agar maa ka dood piya hai tho ruk...baar nikhal saale!!' She shouted as she started wiping her white salwar kameez with her bare hands. It was covered in mud and Coffee stains from the splash the car had caused.

At that point Zain and Aarushi say that they will get her bag so that she can change her clothes quickly meanwhile Ranjha decided to grab himself a quick bite as he skipped breakfast he walked pass as he could hear a girl who was shouting so much he thought she was talking to him as no one else was around and stopped right in front of her.

Ranjha: 'Excuse me kya bola tum ne??' He asked in his husky voice.

Heer looked up at him he was dressed in casual clothes; jeans, t-shirt with a Black blazer, rings in his fingers, chains round his neck, little earrings in his ears. He looked at the girl who all this time was busy abusing the car driver whilst trying to wipe the mud stain off her dress.

Ranjha: 'Maine poocha kya bola tumne?' He again asked slightly angrily this time.

Heer: Utharo..' she replied calmly.

Ranjha: 'What?' He asked questioningly.

Heer:'Maine bola utharo.' she said demandingly

Ranjha:'Kya?? tum theek tho ho...pagal tho nahi hogi...ye tum kya ke rahi ho...Utharo kya Utharo?' He asked surprised and worried at the same time

Heer:'Apna chashma utharo!' She snapped at him.

Ranjha was wearing sunglasses which made him look even more attractive. He looked at her up and down twice and then said 'Kyun..?'

Heer: 'Kyunki mujhe tumse baat karni hai..' she said

Ranjha: 'Tho isme chasma utharni ki kya zaroorat hai?' he asked.

Heer: 'Tum andhe ho?' She asked sarcastically.

Ranjha: 'What...no!' he said

Heer: 'Tho kya tume conjunctivitis hai?'

Ranjha: 'Nahi kyu?'

Heer: 'Tho chasma kyun pehan rakha hai utharo!' She yelled

Ranjha just looked at her in shock. Nobody had ever dared to speak to him like that and this girl wearing a simple salwar kameez that too with mud stains on was saying all sorts of things to him. It was definite he didn't like her at all.

Ranjha: 'Dekho...' he said raising his finger in front of her face.

Heer: 'Dikh hi tho nahi ra isleye ke rahi ho apna chasma utharo!!' She again said

Getting fed up from the way this girl was talking to him he took off his glasses exposing his deep brown expressive eyes.

Ranjha: 'Tumhari problem kya hai?' He said irritated.

Heer:'Tum!' she replied. 'Dekho tumne mera kya haal kar diya hai...dekh kar nahi chala sakthe kya? Mere saare kapre haraab kar diye ab mein kya karogi..?' she said angrily.

Ranjha: So whats the big deal aur suno yeh maine nahi kiya mujhe tumhare chilna ki awaaz ayi aur mein dekhne chalne aygya ke tum mujhe kya kehna chati ho tum to aik num ki pagal lagte ho. He took out some money from his pocket and handed it to her without counting it to get her off from his back.

Heer: She looked at the money and this set a wrong aspersion on her 'Aye!!' She stormed up to him and he stopped by the cafe and turned around.

Heer: 'Samjh the kya ho apne aap ko...tumhari himmat kese hoi? Pakro apne paise mujhe inko koi zaroorat nahi hai.' She said slamming the money back into his hand. 'Tum ameer logo ki yehi problem hothi hai har baat pe apne paiso ka rob jamathe ho...paiso do aur kaam hatham karo hena?'

Ranjha: 'Uff tum...tum tum ho kya yaar? tumhari problem kya hai?!' He sighed irritatingly. This girl was getting on his last nerves; she was really wasting his time.

Heer: 'Mein un ladkion me se ho jo tum jaise logo ko kaise handle karna hai achi tara jaanti ho...' Ranjha just stood there with his arms folded and rolling his eyes and sighing. 'Tum kya samjhe tum mujhe paise do ge tho mein tumhe chor do gi.' Ranjha put his finger in one of his ears and started shaking it and then started yawning. 'Tum jaiso ko mein aise..aise..chutkio mein theek karna jaanti ho' she said whilst clicking her fingers in front of his face.

Ranjha:'Gosh you're so rude! Tum jaisi ladki ko mein aaj thak nahi mila...tum jaanthi bhi ho mein kaun ho? Do you even know who i am?' He said with arrogance.

Heer: 'Hoge kisi ameer baap ki bigri hoi aulad ya kisi laila shaila ke majnu...mujhe is se koi farak nahi partha' she said waving her arms about.

Ranjha: 'Tum chahthi kya ho?' He said getting fed up, he wanted to get away from her as soon as possible.

Heer;'Maafi!' She said folding her arms and slightly turning so that his face was on her side.

'Ranjha:Huh?'

Heer:'Haan...tum mujhse maafi maango?' She said

Ranjha:'What? kyun mein kyun maafi mango?' He said

Heer:'Arey tumhari wajah se mere kapre haraab hoge.' She said turning back to look at him

Ranjha:'Kya' He said

'Heer: kya..maafi mango!' She said widening her eyes

Ranjha:'Huh you must be kidding...mein aur tumse maafi! Shakal dekhi hai apni?' he said holding his palm in front of her face.

Heer:'Tumse tho achi hai!' Yelled Heer holding her hand in front of his face.

Ranjha:'Oh please is shakal pe tho laakho larkia marthi hai' he said proudly holding his chin

Heer; 'Marigi nai tho aur kya karegi tum ho hi itne daroone bechari daar ke mare marjati hogi' she said sarcastically.

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Part 5
Heer: Seriously meine aaj tak tum jasia ladka nahin dekha hai
Ranjha: toh tum kaunsa kaam ho aaj tak meine tum jasie ladki nahin deki hai tum ho kaun mujhse yeh sab khene wali

Heer: tum kaun hote ho mujhe yeh sab khene wale tum apne aap ko baut smart samajthe ho naa!! she said point at his face
Ranjha: Samajtha nahin mein Smart HOON HOON HOON!!!! snapping back at Heer as she was getting so irratated at him
Heer: Tumhe toh mein...Zain and Aarushi ran back up with heer's bag as Aarushi cut her in between!!!
Zain:Yeh lo yaar jaldi se change karo...jee aap kaun ho Zain said looking at Ranjha
Ranjha looked up at Heer and then Zain...he rolled his eyes and said i have no time for thsi meri bus miss hojaayegi!!!
Heer turned to him looking confused she said BUS???!!!!
Ranjha: haan BUS!! now excuse me!!! and ranjha grabbed his luggage and walked off
Aarushi: kya hua Heer
Heer: woh ladka...mein abhi i mean itni badi bhool!!! i had a go at him...uski koi galti nahin thi!!
Zain: oh well who cares chalo ab change karlo!!!
Heer takes her bag and walks off she gets changed into these clothes that wouldnt get stained eaisly!! talking to herself she came out of the locker stall and put on some makeup!!...uss ladke ko meine kya kucch nahin kaha meine galti ki hai mujhe usse maafii mang leeni chaaiye!! then thinking back on what she said...WHY should I aare uss ladke ki aakar ko dekho he snapped at me!!! no ways yaar mein uss ladke se kabhi maafii nahin mangoongi!!!
Aaruhi walks up and says come on Heer bus jaane wali hai come on!!
they both run up to the bus Meanwhile the conductor asked them to get on...Ranjha was the last in the Que behind Zain as ranjha saw none of his classmates or friends he got confused as the conductor of the bus asked Ranjha his name he told him and the conductor said I have never seen you before kaun ho tum
Ranjha: i said my name is Ranjha...Ranjha Gupta!!!
Zain walked down and said Sir Heer aur Aarushi abhi tak nahin aayi thats when you see that the conductor is their drama teacher Mr Moore!!
Mr Moore: Zain Tum yeh raho woh dono aati hi hongi aur aap... Lagta hai aapki bus miss hogaaye hai im sorry but aap iss bus pe nahin aa sakte
Ranjha: Kyun mein bhi Summer Dhamaka contest pe jaa raha hoon
Mr Moore looks at him and says im sorry but yaha humari zimadaari hai un baachoon ki so im very sorry!!!
As Ranjha gets upset he texts Juliet saying he had missed his bus!!! and as he turns around Heer runs into him and he grabs her... they both lock eyes... then Heer looks down then back up at him and then tells him to let go of her
Ranjha comes back into his senses as once again Heer says meine kaha mujhe chodo and Ranjha comming totally back to his senses drops Heer and walks off as Heer stands up
Heer: AYE!!!! ruk tu ...Ranjha Stops... Tumne mujhe ghiraya kyun!!
Ranjha: tumne toh kaha tha mujhe chodo!!!
Heer: teri toh tujhse mein maafii mangne wali thi lekin tu toh itna batameez hai!!!!
Ranjha: excuse me tum hoti kaun ho
Aarushi: bas karo Heer
Heer: aye matlab kya hai tera mein kya karoongi huh ek baar meine tumpe haath utaaya na toh hospital kya seeda upar pauchjaaogaaye
Ranjha: to tum kya jhansi ki rani ho??!!! scarcastically
Heer: aye jhansi ki rani kisko bola...tu kaunsa kaam hai Ravaan ho tum Ravaan
Ranjha: Ahbe Ravaan Kisko bolti hai!!
Heer: Teri toh mein...
Mr Moore (cutting Heer): Chalo girls humne jaana hoga!!!
Heer Tujhe mein baad mein dekhloongi
Ranjha looks at her has they both aboard the bus and says kamaal hai before leaving!!

Juliet then gets Ranjha's text and texts him back saying that she will pick him up but can't get her text through so she decides to call him but can't get any signal so she decides to go downstairs to tell her mum but no one is at home so she leaves a note where everyone can see it and drives up to the Barodda bus stop which is about an hour!!!

Romeo on the other hand is sitting in his room wondering why Ash had said all that to Juliet as his freinds run in to the room
Friend 1: dude hey
friend 2: Kya hua why you so down your never down
Freind3: Apni bhen ko chidaana ka mauka hi nahin mila naa issliye
Romeo: Chacko, Bharat, Pundir chillax!!! aur haan Pundir Appni bhen ko mein miss nahin kar raha hoon!!
Chacko: toh
Romeo then tells them what happened yesterday in the park whilst jogging!!
Bharat: dude chill...don't you get it!!
Romeo: Kya
Pundir: sach?? Ash likes you yaar!!!!!
Romeo: what... this made him more upset!!! then he asked them to leave him alone for sometime and the three leave and he gets out of the houe and drives off

At the bus stop Juliet gets there and looks around she walks up to the stand and asks if the bus for the summer dhamaka left the person said which one the one from Barodda high school or the one from Mumbai high school?? Juliet then realises that Ranjha must have got one of the 2 busses and she says which was the one who left after (she looks at her phone) 1:10pm the person says the bus from Mumbai high school left then!!
Juliet: (Talking to herself) lagtha hai Ranjha ne woh bus pakarli hai as she says thanks to that person she walks off and these goons gather around her!!
Goons: kaha jaa rahi ho yaha aao hum tumhe chod deyenge!!! He grabs juliets hand and as she says chodo mujhe Romeo Drives up and as he sees juliet he gets out Juliet tries to get him to let go and the goons throws juliets dupaata on the ground then romeo grabs that goons arm and they get into a fight and then as he beats up those goons he picks up Juliets duppatta as it starts to rain they look at each other
Romeo: Come on!! as he takes her away from the bus stop!!

Meanwhile the bus finally reaches Lucknow where the summer dhamaka is being held and as Heer, Aarushi and Zain get of the bus Ranjha jumps from the top of the bus and lands into Heer!!! They both fall down and lock eyes yet again!!!
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Part 6


Heer just couldn't remove her gaze. She was left speechless, and continued staring. She knew from inside that she shouldn't stare at him. Moving her hair slowly out of the way, she stood up slowly still not moving her gaze. Finally, when she had stood up and fixed her hair, she looked deep through his chocolate brown eyes. They where a lovely shade, and were gripping Heer to just drown into them. Realizing she was making herself look silly, she moved her gaze, and once again whispered a little too loudly,
'Ranjha.'


Blushing as she realized what she just did, she looked down, making her hair fall in front of her face again. She moved it behind her ear, and slowly picked her bag up and with Zain and Arushi started moving towards the camp gate saying to herself

'Heer kya karee thi tu? But his eyes, so lovely and brown, I wish I could stare at them all day. Heer felt like kicking herself for having any feelings for such a Jerk she said to herself Heer focus you have to win all the contests and show him you're the best he is a stranger who you won't meet ever again after this she stood in the queue while the teacher took register and was going to allocate them there rooms. 'Heer.' Ranjha said to himself. Feeling really giddy inside due to Heer staring at him, he felt a connection between them both despite being complete strangers. Shaking his head he tried to clear it. Chalo Ranjha andar tumne yeh Contest jitna hain aur us miss know it all ko dikhado that Ranjha is no less picking up his bags and guitar he headed towards the summer camp gate finding his classmates so he can join that specific line. On the other hand Romeo and Juliet were drenched in the rain by the time they got home as they entered inside Juliet's house they heard a woman calling them as Juliet turned around It was an old lady with an evil crunched up face and grey hair that shows her wisdom in a not too heavy looking white sari with not much designs on it as she spoke in her crooked old voice

Lady: agi tum wo be kisi anjaan larke ke saath besharme ki haad bi hote hain.

Juliet: massi jaise aap samaj ri hain wasia kuch bi nahi hain wo hum rain mein wet hogaye te.

Mausi: Jhooti kisi larke ke saath affair chal ra hain aur upper se kaise kaise bhane banari hon tum apni halat dekhe hain tumne. Juliet was wearing a white shalwar kameez which was stuck to her body now and was transparent and you could see through on top she had Romeos jacket wrapped around her to keep herself warm

Tears started flowing out of Juliet's eyes after hearing Mausi bitter and harsh words she wasn't able to reply back and Romeo sensed that the tense atmosphere was because of him and he tried to calm the situation down

Romeo: Mausi ji jo aap samajri hain waisa bilkul nahi hain. Koi goons messed with Juliet I just came and saved her that's all

Mausi carried on taunting them when Juliet's mother Soniya walked in and heard all this and spoke

Soniya: Di please aap soch samaj se bola karein yeh kya bacho ko aap no reason ke liya taunt kare hain

Mausi: Soniya tumhe ye hi lage ga tumne apne bacho ko sar mein chara ke rakha wa hain yeh kisi anjaan larke ke saath ghar ate hain aur tum kare hoon

Soniya: Bas di yeh hain Romeo mere dost Rekha ka beta aur Juliet ke collage mein be partha hain she turned towards the kids bacho tum log jao ya summer contest mein dere hogaye gi aur han suno Juliet Ranjha ka hain.

Juliet: Maa usne apne bus miss karde thee so he said he is going to go direct to the summer contest and I found out and he already boarded the bus

Soniya: Yeh larka be na anyways tum change karlo then both of you head towards there.

On the other hand at the summer dhamaka contest the first contest Dancing was going to take place between two schools Baroda high School and Mumbai High school and two students were going to be chosen from the class. Mr Moore spoke to Mumbai high school students.

Mr Moore: Students this is a tough competition and we have to choose one of our best dancer who can compete in this so anyone has any suggestions who to nominate

Zain: Sir we should choose Heer she is the best dancer out of all of us here and I think all of us will agree with this

Arushi: Yeah sir I think Zain is right.

All the student agreed among themselves that the best option was to nominate Heer on the other hand the Baroda High school students didn't need to discuss who to nominate as they had one person who was the best dancer and singer and it was none other than Ranjha who was busy boasting about himself.

Vivan: Hello my lovely students we are gathered here for the summer Dhamaka contest and the first event is dancing which is among a few schools. I was a great dancer in my time and no one could ever beat me you see before he could speak further a lady interrupted him

Lady: Vivan you are wrong you see you love to boast about yourself a lot and I beat you, clearly

Vivan: Kritika no need to discuss about old stuff lets announce the name of the students competing in this round.

Kritika: we will leave talking about Vivan and his past for a minute all the students laughed at her she continued ladies and Gents put your hands together for our first student she is an all rounder and one of the best dancer of Mumbai high school Heer Kapoor put your hands together for her while Heer came on stage.

Vivan: Ok we have the girl now the next contestant is from Baroda high school who is one of the best singer and dancer none other than Ranjha Gupta give it up for him

all his friends whistled and cheered as he approached the stage

Kritika: Heer, Ranjha what song are you both going to perform to for us.

Before Heer could speak Ranjha blurted out boys are the best of course

Heer: Kaise Ghatiya song tune choose ki hain tujhe Lagta hain boys are the best tujhe galat fami hain

Ranjha: miss attitude boys are the best and open your eyes nahi main tu bhool gaya tha aap ko dikhta nahi hain aur apko tu options ke paas jana hain

Heer: kya tune mujhe anda bulaya

Ranjha: agar smart ho to correct well done aur mein tumhe is completion mein hara kai zaroor raho ga my challenge

Heer: Bring it on.

The song started Playing and they started dancing along to it

Teeri Rappa Teeri Rappa Teeri Rappa Re..
Hum Se Hai Zamana Sara Hum Zamane Se Hai Nahin

Clicks his fingers in front of Heer and shows of his dance moves


Hum Jo Chaahe Chura Lenge Tumko Tumhi Se Ae Haseen

Ranjha goes close to Heer and looks into her eyes trying to divert her attention


Boys Are Best Jaan Lo Baat Yeh Maan Lo..

He puts his thumbs up to Her


Teeri Rappa Teeri Rappa Teeri Rappa Re..

Tumse Hai Zamana Sara Maanenge Kabhi Hum Nahin

She looks at him with a smile


Jo Karoge Usse Behtar Kar Dikhayenge Hum Wahin

She does her dance moves


Girls Are Best Jaan Lo Baat Yeh Maan Lo..

She shows her thumbs at him


Teeri Rappa Teeri Rappa Teeri Rappa Re..


Sheron Jaisa Dil Hai Cheeti Ki Chaal Hai
Ladkiyan To Hai Billy Billo Ka Janjaal Hai

Giving her a glare


Hum Mein Hai Adaye Tum Jaise Hum Nahi
Dekhne Mein Hai Chawde Andar Se Hai Dum Nahi
Tumse Hai Zamana Baat yeh Maan Lo

Hum Na Ho Jahan Mein Kuch Na Kar Paaoge
Kispe Mar Mitoge Kisse Tum Itraooge
Makeup Agar Na Ho To Khud Se Darr Jaaoge

Making ghost like expressions


Dieting Karte Karte Pure Hi Dhaal Jaooge
Hum Se Hai Zamana Tumhi Se Ae Haseen
Boy Are Best Jaan Lo Baat Yeh Maan Lo..

Emphasising on his point


Girls Are Best Jaan Lo Baat Yeh Maan Lo..

Doing the same


Boy Are Best Jaan Lo Baat Yeh Maan Lo ..

Doing it once again

As they finish everyone claps for them and as the contest goes on many more dancers are shown and their range of unique dance skills too.

Vivan: That was a tough competition for our judges Anadi and Maithali to decide but they have the results and I am pretty sure i know who won...

Kritika: Whatever Vivan lets ask the judges

Anadi: Well me and Maithali given it a lot of thought and indeed it was tough but I am afraid to say .... Heer won the event.

Kritika: well done Heer keep it up

Heer started Jumping up and down and Ranjha was shocked how can he loose to her she must have cheated he went and confronted her who was celebrating her victory with her friends and classmates

Ranjha: Cheater mere sare dance moves copy ki hain aur jeet gaye hon

Heer: whatever I didn't copy you aur tumhe to jalan hore hain now you can say Girls are the best

Ranjha: tere to apne aap KO kya samajhte hoon miss attitude

Heer: Tumshe to better Mr akro

They both started arguing fiercely and no one could stop them at that moment Romeo and Juliet entered inside and they both holded there siblings trying to separate them.

Edited by -PrinKa- - 14 years ago
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Hey Alka darling I'm here and I shall come back to read it sweetheart🤗
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Hey guys ... this is great ... i am gonna read it soon !! ... 🤗🤗
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Part 7


Romeo and Juliet looked at each other trying to get Heer and Ranjha to get off each other
Romeo - Heer chill yaar why are you so aggressive

Heer - Bhai aaj toh iski Kher nahin just because i won yeh ladka apni haar nahin dekh saakta


Juliet - Ranjha...tum mere pyaare bhai ho naa ab bas bhi karo
Ranjha - nahin di issne cheating ki hai
As Ranjha was about to have a go at Heer then Overhead speaker inturpted him

Speaker - all team please get togther and make your decisions as Round 5 will start between the 6 remaining schools that got in...Thank you

Ranjha then looks at heer - koi baat nahin lets see the 6 schools on the leader board
on the board the teams come up one by one 6 school names appear on the board as on stage Vivan is annocing the teams
Vivan - okay so after round one list of results mere haath mein hai joh humari honest judges ne banyi hai Thank you Maithali and Anadi...Right 1st school is Dehli's Polk middle school
2nd humaari very own home team Lucknow's St Fancais' College
3rd school (As heer and Ranjha look up at vivan's face on screen eagerly) Mumbai High School
Heer Jumps up with joy then gives Ranjha a ha in your face look
and vivan then says
4th School is Poltanganj's Forest School
School number 5 is... baroda high... *vivan's voice fades*

Ranjha gives her back that ha in your face look as he says Meine kaha tha na tumhe toh mein dekhloonga
Juliet - Ranjha!!! Chalo yahan se...Ranjha walks off as Heer looked at him
Juliet - see you Romeo
Heer looked at Ranjha dissappear in the distance tum itne Ravan jasie kyun ho tumhe toh mein baad mein dekhloongi
later on aarushi and Zain were talking as Heer runs up to them Mr Moore walks up and says okay everyoe humaari pheli jeet puts us in a good place BIG hand for heer as he congraulates heer on her performance okay who is going to take part in Round 2 art a student says Aarushi's name and everyone says yes so Mr Moore says okay aarushi now its your time to shine as they all laugh and start to talk Mr Matthews is getting confused on who to choose and Ashish (one of Ranjha's friends) says that he can give it a go as he was a good artist and no other artist even showed up so Ranjha says Ashish go on uss Heer ki school ko hawa se girhado and Ashish says tum usse Heer ke baare mein itna kyun sochte ho asia lagtha hai ke tu uss Heer ke Ranjha ho!!
Ranjha - mein aur uss Heer ka Ranjha kabhi nahin meri Heer uss stupid ladki se kahi zayda aachi, pyaari, khubsooraat aur smart hogi.
Ashish - tu kucch bhi kahe mein sunen wala nahin mein tumare problems mein faasna nahin chaata
Ranjha thinks of things to do and gets an idea and says to himself tomorrow will be the day of your fall miss heer kapoor and then it is morning and Ranjha gets up earley as he knows that Heer and her friends went for a jog after he sets up the trap he hides behind the wall meanwhile Heer and aarushi are comming back from jogging

Heer - aare i left my waterbottle on the bench outside the gate...tum aage jao i will catch up with you
Aarushi - okay!...she runs off as ranjha was getting excited but the realises its not Heer but Aarushi as Ashish was streching in the garden and he sees Aarushi and then looks up at Ranjha's plan
Ashish - oh god Ranjha yeh toh Heer nahin hai
Ashish runs up to Aarushi as Ranjha prays that aarushi doesnt walk up the stairs as she runs up the stairs Ashish runs jumping the small stone berrier and as he grabs her Ashish trips over the wire and the bucket full of maggots which fall as the end of the buket falls too aarushi and Ashish fall down the 3 stone steps later on up in the medical room both teachers are told that they have hurt their hands and ashish had hurt his leg as the bucket fell on it
Mr Moore turned to Zain and Heer and told Zain your going to do it okay
Zain - sir mein draw nahin kar sakta please mein nahin kar sakta Heer yaad hai tumhe woh phool tumne draw kiya tha
Heer - Team spirit ka matlab hai yaar!
Mr Moore - it doesnt matter you can draw anything now you're gunna have to do it

Zain - okay sir
Mr matthews meanwhile tells Ranjha to please do it and unfortunatly he is the only one that can pull it togther so he says okay and he does it
as the drawing Contest starts Vivan and kritika start to talk
Kritika - Vivan it's nearing the end tumhe kya lagta hai kaun jetega
Vivan - I dunno kritika but its obviouly gunna be either our Sizziling Sonali, Zabardast Zain or Boys are the best Ranjha
Kritika - tum itna sure kyun ho because theres also Lucky Laxman, Girl power Geet yah Crazy dude Krishna
Vivan - oh well joh bhi ho time is almost up
as they both turn around and walk up to the contestents
Kritika - Times Up everyone put down your brushes!!
Vivan walks down to the right side and Kritika goes to the left
Kritika - Well judges pehle Sizzling Sonali ne yeh bahut he pyara sunset draw kiya hai
the audience applauses as Vivan says
Vivan - well Girl power Geet ne yeh wow not bad turn your board geet (as he turns her board there is a family picnic going on) as the audience clap Krikita says
Kritika - Crazy Dude Krishna ne yeh bird draw kiya hai very nice
Vivan - okay so Lucky Laxman ne yeh aapne tarah ek lucky sa gulab banya hai... and Zabardast Zain ne ek Aachi car banyi hai... hope this zooms into 1st...
Kritika - Aur yeh (as she tunrs ranjha's board around everyone starts to giggle as he looks at heer in the audience laughing)
Vivan - Boys are the Best ranjha ne toh yeh Bhaut accha...acchi drawing banaya hai
As Maithali and Anadi talk they give out their result

Vivan - Anadi can i all you to the stange please
Anadi - it was a hard decision paar humne uss drawing ko chuna hai jissme bhaut detail ho aur winner hai Zabardast Zain
heer jumps, knowning that she made zain believe in himself... and their school won round five

Behind the scenes as Everyone congraulated Zain the scores came up Kritika stood there top 3 schools on the final will be

1st Mumbai High school
2nd Poltanganj's Forest school
3rdly after having such a hard time in round 2 managed to pull himself enough audience votes to get into the final round Baroda's High School
Ranjha smiled after that performance he thought he was going to be out

heer - kismat acchi hai ab baachke rehna Heer kapoor se!!!!
as she walked off Ranjha thought of another way to get his revenge meanwhile Romeo ran up to his sister from the crowd
Romeo - well done sis loh yeh meri taraf se ek min let me leave warna mere kaan ko koi nahin baaksh saakta as he leaves Heer opens the present and its Vivan's Poster with his autograph saying to Teeki Mirch Heer love Vivan Bhathena!! Heer screamed as Zain and Aarushi told her tooo calm down Ranjha heard this scream and ran up to her room Zain and Aarushi were talking to heer
Heer - OMG Vivan is my idol woh mera sapna hai can't believe this Mera idol, Sapna sab sach hua thanks bhagwaan
ranjha then looked with the bad boy face and said to himself
Ranjha - Ab dekhna mein kya karta hoon so Called Miss Heer Kapoor!!!
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After Ranjha overheard Heers conversation an idea struck in his head like lightening to embarrass her in front of her Idol he said to himself chal Ranjha lag ja kam par his idea was to get Heer on stage saying Vivan wanted to meet her and at the same time green ink will spill on her and make her look silly he chuckled to himself getting happy about his plan. He implanted his idea and decided to call miss attitude on Stage

Ranjha: miss attitude I just heard before the next event starts you're allowed to go on stage and meet Vivan and Kritika Maine socha to tell you.

Heer looked at him suspiciously and answered

Heer: Tumne mere mein itne marbani kyuin kare ho Boys are the best Ranjha and I don't believe you and will do whatever I like so go away from here.

Ranjha: I was just trying to be helpful I thought being to competitive isn't good and I want to get on a fresh start magar tum hamesha shak hi karte rehte hon

Heer: She didn't know whether to believe him or not he looked regretful from his actions but it can be an act of his to get her back but Vivan was her idol and she would do anything to meet him and life was giving her a chance and she didn't want to miss this opportunity so she thought of going on the stage without uttering a word to Ranjha she headed towards there

Ranjha on the other hand was happy his plan was getting successful so he headed toward the audience.

Heer climbed up the stage her heart was pounding so fast she could hear her own heartbeat she was nervous, excited different emotions were running through her body she was finally going to meet her first crush her idol after 11 years She liked him since she was 5 and knew every single fact about his life sometimes she felt that she knew Vivan more then he knew himself finally reaching the stage and she looked around no one else was there beside Vivan and Kritika she thought that maybe all the students met them before and left she made her way to the middle of the stage when all of a sudden green ink fell on top of her she didn't know and started walking near Vivan when she heard him speak.

Vivan: Excuse me you're not allowed on the stage and by the way you're covered in green ink.

Hearing Vivan saying all that Heer looks down embarrassed and starts scratching her arms without uttering a single word from her mouth when Vivan speaks again

Vivan: Hello can you hear me you're covered in ink.

This time Heer looked up at him and she seen a smirk on his face tears started coming in her eyes she had a chance to meet her idol after 11 yrs and he sees her in such a horrid state she coudnt take the embarrassment anymore and excuses herself and runs of the stage on the way she bumps into Ranjha who was laughing so hard and he goes to her got you this makes Heer cry and she runs off from there.

Ranjha: miss attitude to ro rhee hain maine sirif to mazak kiya hain

Heers friend Zain had seen all this and he ran towards Ranjha and says

Zain: yeh tumne kya kiya hain she is allergic to ink usko allergic reaction be hosakta hain tum itna ghir sakte ho mein nahi janta ta he goes away towards Heer

Ranjha was left shocked, astonished and thinking to himself when Juliet approached him

Juliet: Hey bro Whats up yeh kya Tere muh pe baara kyuin baje hain

Ranjha: Kuch nahi di I am just I am fine

Juliet: Oh really come on Ranjha you know as well as I do you've never been able to hide things from me toh chal spill

Ranjha: (in a reluctant tone): woh di kya hua ke and Ranjha tells her everything that happened.

Juliet: Ranjha yeh tune acha nahi kiya Bechari ladki ko humiliate kiya and now shes not able to face anyone I didn't expect this from you Ranjha.

Ranjha: Well di How was I suppose to know that she was allergic and I was just paying her back for what she did?

Juliet: What she did face the reality Ranjha you have been winning every single competition so kya hua agar you lost one of them isme kaunsi badi baat thi jo tune Heer ke saath yeh sab kiya.

Ranjha: (loss of words) I just

There was a silence for few minutes between them as Juliet know that Ranjha sub consciously regrets what he did but is to proud to admit it. The silence is broken by Ranjha speaking again.

Ranjha: di I really didn't meant it. It was just a small prank

Juliet: I know bro but I am not angry with you at all just disappointed tune kabhi socha what will ma and pa think when they find out about all this

Ranjha: Nahi di it was just a joke app fikar nahi karein I can't see you disappointed mein ja kar use mafi magne jara hon.

Juliet: That's like my bro both of them hug each other and he heads outside to find Heer.

Heer was sitting in the garden it's the sunset and around 8pm she is lost in her own thoughts not knowing the world around her or who is approaching her when ranjha reaches there

ranjha: Hey Heer mein tumse mafi magne aya hon i am really sorry for what i did earlier to you trust me it was just a prank i didnt mean to hurt you unitently.

Heer: I hate you (tears started coming out of her eyes) I hate you...

she ran away from there leaving Ranjha all confused.

Heer was sitting in her room crying and her eyes were swolen due to this she kept on having flashbacks about the incident and how vivan smirked at her when romeo walked inside the room

Romeo: Hey sis hw r u tum abhi tak kyuin ro re hon you know I cant see tears in your eyes

Heer: Phir mein kya karo bro mujhe woh incident abhi tak nahi bula you know vivan is my idol aur woh idiot ranjha...sab ke samne jaan bhuck ke... front of him aur phir sorry.... i just hate him

Romeo: tumhare baath mujhe samaj mein are hain magar galte insaan se hote hain aur usko apne galte ka ehsaas hua hain thats why he said sorry tum usko maaf kardo

Heer: Never bro I always wanted to meet Vivan and ranjha ruined my moment

Romeo: mere pyaari bhen mere baath mano aur usko maaf kardo aur rahi baath vivan ki I am sure he didnt mean it and when he says sorry to you will you forgive him

Heer: of course bro usko apne galti ka eshaas hoge na so why wont i forgive him.

Romeo: thats my point jaise ranjha ko apni galti ka ehsaas hue hain and he came to say sorry to you

heer understood romeo words now and she knew he was right and was willing to forgive ranjha and talk to him the following morning she hugs her bro and thanks him.

on the other hand ranjha was in his room sulking away he said sorry to someone first time in his life and that also cause of his di and she didnt forgive him how can she do this after all he is ranjha gupta, Juliet was trying to explain him the situation.

Juliet: I told you she wont forgive you that easily after all what you did to her wasnt nice so it will take her time

Ranjha: But di no one ever said no to me so how can she do all this samajthi kya hain apne aap ko miss attitude

Juliet: galte uske nahi tumhare hain and you should appoligise again.

Ranjha: No way di apne kha tha ke tum sorry khena aur uske marzi wo tumhe maaf karein ya nahi. Now its up to her and i am not saying sorry again and dont emotionally blackmail me again.

Juliet knew she coudnt convince him more but she knew her bro tried to say sorry so he has relized his mistake and was regretting for it both of them hugged each other and went to sleep.

In the morning everyone arrived in the main hall where the events were meant to take place for the following day heer was trying to talk to ranjha to tell him she forgives him but he was ignoring her completly and not giving her a chance at all she was fustrated and gave up and thought now if he wants to talk to her he can approach her both of them knew they were wrong in there own place but there ego was to big to approach each other more then once.

Then Vivan and Kritika come on stage to make the announcment.

Vivan: Hello everyone and welcome to the last event of the day which is singing and we have our three schools in the final mumbai high school, baroda high school and Poltanganj's Forest school

Kritika: wow the contest is intense and we have our usual three representives so please welcome theeki mirch heer, Krazy dude Krishna and Boys are the best Ranhjha.

all the contestants made there way to stage and vivan started to explain the rules.

Vivan: Before I begin i would like to appoligise to theeki mirch heer in front of everyone for embarrasing her furthur yday please forgive me heer i didnt mean to hurt your feelings.

There was a big banner that said i am sorry.

Heer was over the moon her idol asked sorry in front of everyone how could she refuse so she replyed

heer: Its alright vivan you said sorry to me and relized your mistake means the world to me

she smiled at him

Vivan: Thank you heer tum bhot achi ho i will meet you after the contest i heard from your bro your a big fan of mine. heer looked at romeo who gave her a thumbs up and she gave a big smile and blinked her eyes at him this was the best day for her on the other hand ranjha was sulking thinking he relized his mistake and said sorry but she didnt forgive him.

Vivan: so the rules are simple guys all you have to do is sing and you must not exceed more then 3 mins. The song is entirely your own choice and in the end maithali and anadi will judge your talent so best of luck to all of you and we will begin with Krazy dude krishna you have 2mins to prepare a song as w have a small break.

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As Krishna perpared his song Heer and ranjha waited talking to themselves

Ranjha - Vivan ne galti ki maafi milgaaye meine maafi maangi toh usska gussa naseeb hua this is not fair
Heer - ill try again usse baat oh karni hogi
Heer Approches Ranjha as Ranjha had his back to heer she was about to tap on his shoulder as Ranjha turned heer got pushed into Ranjha again falling for the 3rd time locking into his dreamy chocolate brown eyes as Ranjha this time even noticed the innocence in heer's eyes as she looked at him innocently with her bold eyes!!

Ranjha helps her stand as Heer looks at him and starts to say that she was thinking all night and Ranjha dreamed away staring at heer as she looked up she watched him as her starred into her eyes Heer ignoring it started to say...

Heer - listen kal joh hua usske liye meine tumhe bhi maaf kya hai...as she looked at him he didnt pay attention...
Ranjha ...
said heer as it sort of echoed in Ranjha's ears...
Heer - Ranjha...
he got knocked into reality but it was too late Ranjha didnt hear Heer and she had given up as she looked at him and then just walked off

Ranjha realised that Heer had been talking to him but ignored it and thought since vivan did a thing like having a Banner saying sorry why not Ranjha express how sorry he feels like that Ranjha got an idea and a smirk on his face as his sister walked up

Juliet - uh-oh...ranjha mein Jaana nahin chaati but im warning you tum heer ko kucch maat karna warna mujhe naa chaate huye bhi tumko saaza deni padegi
Ranjha - chillax di kucch nahin karoonga mein asia ...as he thought to himself...im sorry heer

Juliet sighed and walked off as she sat on the Garden bench Romeo was already there waiting before the show started...
Romeo - aare juliet kya hua?..
Juliet - Im sorry mere bhai ne joh Heer ke...
Romeo (cutting her) - Woah tum kya sorry ho yeh Heer/Ranjha ko decide karne do naa
Juliet - right haan i know baas mein soch rahi thi undo ki jodi bansakti hai
Romeo - Too right the perfect love hate relationship!!
Juliet looked at romeo smile she had wondered laakon ladkiyaan iss smile pe maarti hai paar kabhi kisi ne tumaari smile ke peeche chuppi gheryaioon ko nahin dekha!! she looks down as she drifts off into her imaginationland as Romeo talked she just smiled and starred at his smile...
as romeo turned he noticed her eyes and he sort of looked at her in a trans both of them didnt hear the message on the speaker...which gave them a big surprise the sprinklers had turned on and both of them come to reality as they ran into the hall Romeo's blue jeans had gone drak blue and his purple top saying 'I Aint BOTHERED!!' had specs of water whislt water dripped from his face and hair down...juliet was also not that wet she was wearing a pink salwaar and started to laugh with romeo as water dripped from her hair then as heard another speaker they walked into the main hall where the 1st song was about to start
on the stage Krikita walked up in a Yellow and White saari
Kritika - Okay everyone 2mins are up ab suno humaare very own crazy dude Krishna ko...
Krishna walks onto the stage up to kritika
Kritika -so krishna anything you want to say before you sing
Krishna - this one is just for you and Maithali maam
Kritika - toh aap kucch khena chaati ho Maithaliji
Maithali - i can't wait to hear it agar yeh mere liye hai...
as Kritika walks off stage after saying... Lucknow this is Krazy dude krishna from Poltanganj Forest school then he sings

Sapno mein aii ke jai ke
O ri goriya
Humri churai le neendiya
Sapno mein aii ke jai ke
O ri goriya
Humri churai le neendiya
Humpe girai ke haaye re tu bijuriya
Humse churai le humko
Baharon mein tu hai
Nazaron mein tu hai
Dekhon jidhar mein wahan tu dekhai de
Prem ki naiya hai ram ke bharose
Apni ee naiya ko paar tu lagai de
Prem ki naiya hai ram ke bharose
Apni ee naiya ko paar tu lagai de

Romeo and Juliet were sitting in the back next to each other as romeos hand falls on Juliets and they look at each other it was the perfect place to be music in the background dark in the room and it wasnt late either
Romeo then broke into his senses and took his hand off her hand and looked down

Juliet - Im sorry
Romeo - oh no need please
Juliet and Romeo both felt awkward after that as Juliet closed her eyes and imagined them two dancing on that song

Kya mantar padhu mein
Kya tantar karu mein
Aankhon ki chahat tujhe bhi dekhai de

juliet starts to giggle at this point and then Romeo turns to look at her and sort of drifts away in her smile with those innocent eyes that both the siblings seamed to have

Prem ki naiya hai ram ke bharose
Apni ee naiya ko paar tu lagai de
Prem ki naiya hai ram ke bharose
Apni ee naiya ko paar tu lagai de

Romeo turned and leaned back not listening but wondering what juliet could be thinking of as the song comes to an end everyone stands up and claps which bring Juliet and romeo back to their senses and they both stand as well

Vivan walks onto the stage...

Vivan - well Krazy krishna ne saach mein yahan dhamaal machaliya so Anadiji and Maita... (his vioice fades as it shifts to backstage)

Heer - wow that was really good...

Ranjha walked up behind heer and looked at her she was standing where he could see her refelction in the window and gazed into the refecltion as her noticed after putting his ego aside that she was beautiful...

Ranjha felt like kicking himself how could he think that this Miss Jhansi ki rani is cute or beautiful

meanwhile back on Stage Vivan called apon the next Singer

Vivan - so ladies and gentlemen the next singer is the only girl out of the 3 schools i bet she must have the sweetest voice she is my biggest fan and she is probably my most favorite contestent of this whole contest i would like to call Teeki Mirch Heer to the stage...

Ranjha heard the speaker and got out of the way as Heer turned then walked towards the stage she climbed the steps and walked up

Vivan - So miss teeki mirch what song you going to sing

Heer - thats a surprise!!

Vivan - oh really would you like to comment

Heer - it's just for someone who i have been watcing since i was 5 and i have watched him preform and now if he has a chance to see me preform then it would be a great honour

Vivan - okay Heer i wish you all the best as i know that your chilled attitude will get you far in life...

Vivan Walked off stage as Heer looked up she looked at romeo who gave her a thumbs up as he blowed a kiss for his beloved sister...Heer hesitates... and then she notices vivan who gives her a smile and so she smiles back takes a deep breath and starts singing...

Kaisi Hulchul Hai.. Har Pal Kyon Chanchal Hai..
Kaisi Hulchul Hai.. Har Pal Kyon Chanchal Hai..

Yeh Kisne Jadoo Kiya..
Kyon Mera Jhoome Jiya
Kya Mera Dil Kho Gaya
Yeh Mujhko Kya Ho Gaya

Yeh Kisne Jadoo Kiya..
Kyon Mera Jhoome Jiya
Kya Mera Dil Kho Gaya
Yeh Mujhko Kya Ho Gaya


as the music played in the background Heer noticed Ranjha watching her she looked at him and she got distracted meanwhile Romeoa dn Juliet also turned their heads and looked at Ranjha then just as romeo got heers attention by standing and waving his arms she looked at him and realised her que is going to start again


Panchhi Ke Jaise Main Udne Lagi Hun Kyon
Chanda Sitaron Se Judne Lagi Hun Kyon

Romeo and Juliet looked at each other and looked down and away as they both still felt awkward as before heer came on they were talking about school cause that was the only thing Romeo could think that related to her... and then Romeo said Chacko, Bharat, Pundir where are mujhe tum logon ki madat chaiye!!!!


Panchhi Ke Jaise Main Udne Lagi Hun Kyon
Chanda Sitaron Se Judne Lagi Hun Kyon

Yun Hi Main Khoi Rahun
Sanson Mein Sapne Bunu

Heer looked at ranjha singing better and better at each glance determined to win at any cost now for everything he did and it wasnt like they were going to meet ever again


Jaane Kya Socha Karun
Kya Mera Dil Kho Gaya

Kaisi Hulchul Hai.. Har Pal Kyon Chanchal Hai..
Kaisi Hulchul Hai.. Har Pal Kyon Chanchal Hai..

Yeh Kisne Jadoo Kiya..
Kyon Mera Jhoome Jiya
Kya Mera Dil Kho Gaya
Yeh Mujhko Kya Ho Gaya

Heer thought to herself after the last line whilst the crowd stood and clapped at her... as vivan came onto the stage as kritika was having a wardrobe malfuntion so he not only had a mike but also the script...Heer, i know you will do very well i personally love this song, oh and don't worry yeh baat scripted nahin thi mujhe bas khena tha haha

Heer: aww thanks vivan, actually meine yeh gaana aapke liye chuna tha
Vivan: that's very sweet...
Heer thinking: Heer you have to win this... uss Ravan ko tumne aajtak jeetne nahin diya hai dont loose at the last stage now

Ashish, Aarushi and Zain stood on the side of the stage as heer glanced at them they gave her a thumbs up to boost up her confidence...

Vivan- so Heer yeh song tumne bhaut aache se gaaya hai how do you feel

Heer: Stoked!!
Vivan: so comming to the judges aapko kya lagta hai humaari teeki mri... (voice fades again)

Backstage Ranjha walks up to Zain and Aarushi who look at him and then as they are mad at him walk off leaving Ashish to stand there

Ashish - tumne galti ki thi naa issliye woh dono tumse naraaz hai and tumne aarushi ka haath toda tha naa

Ranjha - oh yer hows ur arm and leg im very sorry yaar!!!!

Ashish - it's okay sab teek hai yaar meine toh tumhe maaf kardiya ab tumhe aarushi se maafi maange chaiye

Ranjha - uss heer ne Vivan ko maaf kardiya lekin mujhe nahin maaf kiya toh usske woh dost kya khaak maaf karengaaye...

Ashish - yaar chill okay chill come on... your on next good luck yaar as ashish goes away

meanwhile on stage Heer says thankyou and gets off the stage as Kritika walks up to vivan

Vivan -oh your here... great

Kritika -are you being nice or just arguing with me again

Vivan - well no im being nice and besides its normally you argue and i win... so its techniqally not an argument... see your argueing attitude is why all boys have to tell you to shut up everytime they have to say 'i love you'...

Kritika - excuse me...what!!!??

Vivan - exactly... Dekho in PKB i told you to shut up then i said 'I Love you' and in KMH Karan had to tell u to shut up before he could express his feelings

Kritika getting mad replies - bas jeez your so annoying...leave now please

Vivan -aare im only kidding...

Kritika - I dont like jokes

Vivan - well i don't like you...

Maithali - Kritika...chill naa you have a show to run

Anadi - calm down naa Vivan you know girls only act hard...

Maithali - excuse me...

Vivan - okay okay everyone is probably getting worried over our fight but what all four of us were doing is what our last contestant has done with aur teeki mirch contestant...

Maithali - vivan just spit it out...

Anadi - chill na maithaliji vivan don't tell me this participant is the boss.. our very own boys are best Ranjha..

Kritika - the one and only...but his name dont work chnage it to Boys Arent the best Ranjha...then it works or have Ranjha is the best... anyways lets call apon aaj shaam ki aakiri contestant Baroda High school's Ranjha Gupta

Kritika - toh Ranjha aapka gaana hoga...??

Ranjha - its a surprise for one special person

Vivan - wow Ranjha looks like there are loads of speical people according to the songs today

Kritika - Viv chill okay Ranjha go on and Best of luck

Ranjha looked at Heer who just glanced at him he then realised that he didnt even prepare a song as he was to busy with the sorry...at this point he remembered what his di had told him

Flashback in a park where Ranjha and Juliet are talking...

Juliet - Ranjha what happened

Ranjha - mujhe yaad nahin ke mujhe kya bolna hai im going to fail

Juliet - asia kucch nahin hoga ranjha just put your mind to it

Ranjha - aur agar i freeze of stage

Juliet - tab aapni aankein baand karna joh bhi dimaak mein aaya woh keh dena

Ranjha - it will make me look stupid

Juliet - nahin ranjha it will get you extra marks for keeping up the play even after forgetting lines

Ranjha looked at his di and she noticed he was stuck so she nodded yes and closed her eyes to remind him what to do

Ranjha closed his eyes and inside his mind all he saw was Heer Heer and Heer as ranjha thought to himself why heer?? he came out with teh most soothing vocie as to him it felt like he wasnt trying and the words were comming out of his mouth on it's own...

He sang

Shining in the shade in sun like a pearl upon the ocean
Come and feel me
Girl feel me


Shining in the shade in sun like a pearl upon the ocean
Come and feel me
Girl feel me


Thinking about the love we making
And the life we sharing
Come and feel me
Girl feel


Shining in the shade in sun like a pearl upon the ocean
Come and feel me
Com'mon heal me

He looked around the room for heer as before he sang he saw her in his mind he couldnt find her but he saw her picture in the hall with the rest of her team mates..

Tera hone laga hoon
Khone Laga hoon
Jab se mila hoon

Tera hone laga hoon
Khone Laga hoon
Jab se mila hoon

Shining in the shade in sun like a pearl upon the ocean
Come and feel me
O feel me


Shining in the shade in sun like a pearl upon the ocean
Come and heal me
O heal me

as the song ended Viv/Kritz walked onto the stage in the final round which declared the winners

Vivan - Kritika, tumhe nahin lagta ke Boys are the best Ranjha ne yeh gaana baut he bhakubi se nibaaya hai..

Kritika - yes viv and...

Vivan - toh u have to admit boys are by far the best

Kritika - never Vivan boys arent the best but ranjha's singing skills are by far one of the best...Ranjha how do you feel

Ranjha - i dunno hw did i do??

Vivan - thats not up to us but our judges to decide Ranjha... But have to admit you were really good...better then me even

Kritika shockecd - wait vivan tum VIVAN BHATHENA haar maan raha hai??

Vivan - nahin baas Ranjha ke samne

Kritika okay this is a picture perfect moment!!!...anywho who do you think won i think its a tie between the two guys

Vivan - nope Teeki Mirch heer was the best

Kritika - going for the girls... you argue for the sake of it dont you vivan and besides whoever wins is declared the best performing arts school of the year and will come back in 2020 to compete for the new decade winners as this is only the 1st school to win in this decade and that is going to be...??

Vivan - wait yaar kritika if you are going to do it do it right naa can we call Krazy dude Krishna to the stage and Meri pyaari Teeki Mirch Heer!!!

As all three of the students stood on the stage after being called by vivan kritika sopke

Kritika - Host Yahan, Students Yahan ab Judges bhi yahan aajaaye to we can start

Maithali and anadi walk up to the stage with the results envlope in their hands and tell everyone what an honor this is and dont only stop here but go further in life and dont get to stuck up because that will only drag you down they were talking about the honor and then Vivan says okay Anadiji will you please announce the winner!!

Anadi - the winner is...

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Part 10
Anadi: The winner is
there was pin drop silence in the room for a moment no one spoke and the 3 final contestants heart beats were pounding really fast and they were nervous due to the tension and were thinking what winning meant to them lets take a look at there thoughts

Krishna: agar aag mein jeet gaya my parents will be so proud of me aur no one will call me crzy and see I actually have some talent inside me that made me come all this way.
Ranjha: Dude you have to win come on you never have lost any sort of competition and then everyone will know boys are the best expecially mrs attitude magar woh rona shuru kar de ge and i cant see tears in her eyes. dude why are you thinking about someone else expecially miss attitude stay positive your going to win for sure.
Heer: Tum har nahi sakte now that you have came this long and i want to win so badly so i can get my prize and award from my idols hands a dream come true for me aur us ranjha ko be pata chal gaye ga that girls arnt less then boys.
Maithali: anadiji I think that there is enough suspense now and you should announce the winner all the audience and expecially the three finalists are eagerly waiting
anadi:agar suspence nahi hota to competition ka maza kya ata so thats why I kept the delay aab meine vivan jaise kuch zada he bolna shuru kar diya hain anyways ladys and gentelman hold your breath and I am going to give you all clues lets see if you can guess our winner.
gives there best in every single competition, full of attitude very talented the audince starts shouting Ranjha, Heer, Krishna from three different directions. he continuse furthur she is a theeki mirch and its none other then our pyaree Heer Kapoor

the audiece start clapping and all the students from mumbai high skool were jumping up and down scraming there heads off going mad while heer was stood speechless she never expected to win when anadi spoke again
Anadi: Calm down everyone and Heer tum chup chap kyuin kare hon you won speak up
After those words of anadi it actually sunk into her that she won she really won she started jumping up and down with joy while krishna was sad on his lost but was happy for her (he gives heer a hug and says well done) and ranjha's ego and jelousy was to big for him to be happy for her at that specific moment so he speaks loud and clear that she can hear
Ranjha: Lagta hai pagal hoge hain as she won but it was me fair and square magat judges must felt pity for her as she was the only girl around he smirks at her
Heer: Haan tum tu sirif jeleous ho you cant see anyone win expecially a girl cause after all tum he kehte ho girls are the best she starts gigling
Vivan and Kritika sensed a major fight was about to happen between the two so vivan spoke
Vivan: theeki mirch heer aap yaha aiye aur apna prize collect karein
Heer forgot about fighting with ranjha and went on to the stage to collect her prize it was an trophey for her skool and the name was written in the book
Vivan: So Heer please tell everyone how you feel about winning
Heer: Hello everyone aag mere liye bhot he special day hain as i won and recieved my prize from my idol she smiles at vivan and continues mere parents and bro will be really proud of me and all my fellow students and teacher aur meine yeh bi prove kar diya hain that girls are the best boys arent just good at everything she gives a smirk look at ranjha and then says meine speech nahi prepare kiya hain as i wasnt expecting to win so thanks everyone for voting for me and thank you anadiji and maithaliji for thinking i am capable of being a winner.
Vivan: Thank you for that wonderfull speech Heer and we are glad you won as you deserved it thank you anadi and maithali for joining us thank you everyone for coming to this competition having fun and making it memroble and thanks Kritika for joining me and being a wonderfull host thanks for our sponsers for this show, thanks to the organisers and technical team, Phew yeh thank you ka silsila katam hua mein to bore hogaya tha anyways Kritika ko bolena ka moka deta hoon...
Kritika: Ab mein kya kaho Vivan ne sab bol chuka hain and it was great plesure being in your company so Bye and see you all hopefully next year

All the skool people boarded on there buses back home when a little boy came up to heer and gave him a tulip
Heer: Beta yeh apko kisne diya
Boy: di un bhaiya ne waha he points towards a direction which she follows when she reaches there another little boy stood holding a daisy in his hand he gives it to her pointing towards a another direction
when she reaches there another boy stood with a rose he hands it over to her and points towards another direction
on the other hand ranjha stood there smiling to himself as he was looking at his big banner of sorry and thought to himself that heer had to forgive him now when vivan did it she was smiling now he used the same strategy he stood there waiting for her on the other hand heer was about to apprach the filed ranjha called her when someone calls ranjha it was none other then Mr Mathews
Mr Mathews: Ranjha come on quicly on the bus we are about to set of
Ranjha: sir plz 5 more minz
Mr Mathews: No excuses come on now
Ranjha went on to his bus when heer reaches the fieldz and sees a big I am sorry board and a little boy holding an explaination Mark she asks him who its from
Boy: di woh bhaiya waha he points towards ranjha
when she looks she cant see anyone leaving her confused as ever she heads towards romeo to go home
The next following day the Kapoors were heading towards the Gupta Familys who threw a graduation bash for Ranjha Heer was lost in her thoughts she knew that it could only be Ranjha who appoligised to her her heart was saying it was true her mind was saying it cant be he has a big attitude and ego problem why would he appoligise like that so many questions were running through her mind and she could only ask ranjha at the party. The Kappors arrived at the gupta residence and everyone greeted each other and Soniya asked Juliet to take Heer and Romeo with her
Juliet: Hey she looked at Romeo.
Romeo: Hey kaise ho Juliet
Juliet: Mein theek hoon tum collage open karne ke liye wait kare hoon
Romeo: No its boring mein sirif sports mein best hoon both of them look at each other and get lost into each others eyes and forgot everyone around them Heer clicked her fingers in front of them they still didnt move Ranjha came over looking for Juliet
Ranjha:Di kapoor family arrive hogay hain
He seen Heer there and looked at her
Heer: Boys are the best Ranjha where were you I heard the party was thrown in your honour
Ranjha: haan you heard right anyways I came to meet my di not argue with you
Heer; good thing tum agaye hoon help me snap them out
both of them nudged Julieo nothing happened Ranjeer were laughing and talking nicely together for the first time finally they managed to bring Julieo out of there dream world who were embarased to death ranjha decided to tease his di
Ranjha: Di what thoughts you were lost in
Heer: Haan bro hume bateya na
Romeo: Shut up Heer yeh kaisa mazak apne bare bahi ke saath kare hoon
both walked away embarased from each other
Heer decided to ask Ranjha about the sorry thing
Heer: Ranjha tell me did you say sorry to me with the big board in the fields.
Edited by -PrinKa- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey alka why dont u post a summary with the character sketch? it is a lt to read. will be back to read it. cheers!!

hope u have a great time with the FF

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