~~Zindagii.. Khel Lakeeroon Ka ❤️❤️ FF~~

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Hey guys my name is Alka and i am a huge fan of Vivan Bhathena I decided to wirte an FF with my friend Mariam. This FF will include other characters too i am posting the character sketch please give me your true opinion on what you think...then I will Post the rest of the Story..

Hiya everyone my name is Mariam and I am a Huge Fan of Shahid Kapoor...as Alka Explained on this we will post the charater sketch 1st please reply..
PS: (Alka): Im putting myself as Heer.. but i want mariam to put herself as Juliet please guys can you convince her to put herself down cause she wants the most people to read so she wants juliet to be amrita rao 😭😭😭...
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Zindagii.. Khel Lakeeron Ka is a Story about four normal people 2 brother-sister jodi's falling in love with each other but they have alot of hurdels in there way including when they 1st meet and how they fall in love.. these four people's names are Heer Romeo Ranjha and Juliet.. Romeo and Juliet already know each other from school and Heer and Ranjha they came into the same college from different schools so their behaviour towards each other is alot different this story is also about how they handel their friendships when its gets it trouble and there is always someone who is out to not let them be together..
Juliet is a calm girl who stays quiet all the time and on the other hand Ranjha her little brother is one of the most popular kids in his school days.. and Romeo who is the most popular senior in the college is now comming to his final exams where as his sister Heer is finding it a little hard from going to the face of her school to a newbie.. this is a story of their lives and how they kinda get along through balancing home school and social lives but destiny has something else in store for them..
(Sorry about the summary i didnt know what exactly to write about it so i made it sound a little like MJHT and Bidaai and all other shows mixed together...)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interesting start guys!

Vivan as a guest apperence only not done! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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niki dii... i wanted vivan in it :( but what happened was that mariam wrote vivan's entry as a host so i cant put him in but dw there is gunna be more then one apperence of our VIVAN!!! :D.. esp in one part which im gunna write...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hahahaha Alka I am glad! 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lol niki how did u ever believe that i was gunna not put vivan in my very 1st FF lol *SHOCKED*
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Alka I knew he would be in there but I was suprised he is not in the main cast!
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awh ya i was surpised when i read vivan's name as a host too lol but then i sed oh well.. but i knw i was thinking that i could tell mariam and maybe we could add him to the main cast later on in the FF.. :)
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Part 1


The opening scene we see a mandir with kaanaji's murti a woman in a Pretty Pink saari praying, so that her daughter passes her High school exams so she can go to college. Panditji hands her her thaali back as she turns around a nice lady with long black hair and then just as she walked up she saw her friend a woman holding an aarti thali in a blue Saari her name is Soniya 'nameste' was what was said to the lady in the pink saari the soniya then continued and had said 'aare Rekha kasie ho... waise tum yaahan iss waqt' Rekha just smiled as they both walked upto the panditji 'Meri beti exams ke results aa rahe hai naa iss liye mein bhagwaan ke paas aayi thi!!' Soniya which then had replied 'Kya Baat hai Rekha mein bhi apne bete ki liye yahan aayi thi woh parsu ke train se wapas aa raha hai baroda se' the pandit gave them back Soniya's thaali and as they walked down the staris they were talking about their daughters.
Soniya - aare yeh loh humaare baache itne baade hogaaye hai... waqt kaise beeta hai!!!
Rekha - haan sacchi... Meri Beti bikul alag hai!!! Ek minute woh toh aapki beti se abhi mile nahi hai naa
Soniya - haan paar jab woh College start karegi tab pata chal jaaye ga.
Rekha - Woh dono kitne alag hai naa ek dusere se
Soniya - haan woh kucch bolti hi nahin (her big and bold brown eyes shine in the sun as she looks up at time in her classroom) aapne khayalon mein khoyi rethi hai (her long hair shines in the sunlight as the final bell goes she stands up and comes out the door) bhaut smart hai yeh ladki (She looks up and the wind blows a tree shakes and leaves fall on her) Meri beti Juliet (a small face with shoulder length brown-ish hair she smiles as her friends walk up and they start to walk home)
Rekha - aapki beti baut hi shaant sound karthi hai
Soniya - bahut zayda shaant hai Juliet
Rekha - meri beti puri opposite hai Joh Dil Mein Aaya Woh Keh diya Koi Fikar nahin kal kya karna hai thodi si pagali hai, Filmy duniya mein rethi hai... Ek dum mufaat paar dil se baadi pyaari hai!!

A girl in jean shorts and a red top was running down the corridoor of the high school she ran up to the results board and didnt see her name as she turned around her eyes were watery as she walked down the stairs in her cowboy boots and sat down by a tree then all of a sudden a guy runs up saying 'Heer tum yahan kyun beti ho tumare naam toh 1st class 1st mein hai tumne toh top kiya hai 98%'
Heer - Kya??? sacch iska matlab mein summer conest mein hisshaa leh sakti hoon aur mein college bhi jaa sakti hoon
She stands up and with long tied back hair and bold eyes and a big smile her face is shown...Toh ab yeh Summer Dhamaaka Contest kab ho raha hai
Aarushi - chay din mein aapni bus jaati hai phir contest ke baad... college
Soniya - haan saayi baat hai!!! Chalo ab mein tumse kal milti hoon bye
Rekha - Bye!!!!
Rekha returns to the Kapoor Mansion to see that a boy about the age of 21 in a Green top and black jeans, Arhaan is Playing video Games on his PSP, whilst this other girl about the age of 17 is sitting there in a Pink and Purple dress, Jhanvi she is reading also there is Rekha's Maaji watching a saas bahu show Rekha Walks Further in to be confronted by her Bhabhi an old woman in a white saari with a wrinkled up face and a shrily voice, Yashoda Kapoor!!!

Yashoda - kahan thi aap devraniji aapko malum nahin ke Arhaan aur Jhanvi iss waqt college se aate hai undono ko khana do abhi
Rekha - jee Bhabhi mein abhi banti hoon, woh mein kaanaji ke paas heer ke liye paratnaa karne gaayi thi aakir aaj uske results hai
Yashoda - teek hai Jao abhi!!!
meanwhile a girls standing outside the college started to giggle as a sexy chilled dude who lives life in the moment comes outside Juliet looks at him and sort of goes into her dream world, he was the one for her she knew him since 7th but she was never able to say as he was the type of guy who doesnt care what he wants to do in the future and doesnt regret anything in the past, he is that type of guy who is willing to be the class clown and the smarty pants at the same time!!! a guy in a stripy vest top and jeans with more then half the buttons on his shirt undone and a hair cut u just want to touch walks out of the school with salman khan type style and attitude and as he came out he grabbed a water bottle and just washed his face with it the girls that were giggling about him stared like they were in a trans as the water spilled out of the bottle and onto his milky baby soft looking face, Juliet who cant take enough looks away as the guy turns with his big and bold eyes his hair and face soaking wet with water walks up to juliet and looks at her 'Hey Juliet' he says Juliet slowly turns around and looks at him
Juliet - hey Romeo
Romeo - How are you...before she could answer he inturupts...wait mein tumse baad mein baat karonga i have to go bye!!!
back at the Kapoor mansion Heer runs in through the front door and screams the loudest she can and hugs her dadi
Dadi - Aare Heer itna kyun shor macha rahe ho chal jaldi se baata ke kya hua mujhe akshay ki movie start hone wali hai
Heer - AKSHAY KUMAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dadi - haan woh naaye wali
Heer - Blue??
Dadi - haan wohi ab chup beth aur baata ke Tumaare results kasie the
Heer - nahin pehle aap naa mujhe ek treat promise karo
Dadi - iska matlab...tu...paas???
Heer was just about to say yes as storming through the door was a guy shouting Heer's name (in a delightful manner) it was Romeo
Romeo - Heer!!! Heer!!!!! Maa!!! Buaji Dadi!!!!!!
Dadi - lo tum aur ab tumaara bhai aare Romeo ab tum itna kyun shor macha rahe ho
Rekha - Kya hua Romeo sab teek toh hai naa??
Romeo - Maaa!!!! We had like the best day ever!!! Seriously aap dargaayi na
Rekha -teri toh...Rekha runs behind him as he runs everywhere else laughing then he finds the most convenient sopt to hide, behind Heer!!!
Heer - aare aare maa guess what
Rekha - Kya
Heer - Meine....Meine....
Rekha - kya???
Heer - Meine... 1st Class 1st paas kiya hai!!!!!!!!!!!!
everyone's Smiles get bigger as Dadi walks up to kanaji and says thank you
Romeo - ab Party???!!!
Everyone - Nahin Romeo!!!!!!!!!
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Part2

Romeo- magar aaj ocasaion banta hain party rakne ka kyuin ke mere behn 1st class pass hue hain

Rekha: nahi Romeo no Party mein janti hoon tum sirif yeh apni masti ke liye rak re hoon aur Heer ka pass hona aik bahana hain

Romeo: No maa mein sirif Heer ke dost ko bulonga and aap apne sare dosto ko balasakte hain now can we have the party

Rekha: yeah that's a deal ma ji apko yaad hain mere Purane dost Soniya aaj wo mujhe mandir me mile thee bhot he arse ke baad to mein sochre thee ke usko be is party mein invite kar le te hain is bahane Heer unke bete se be mile ge

Ma ji: Haan Rekha mujhe yaad hain Soniya aur uska parivaar bhot ache log hain aur unka aik bete aur aik beta hain na

Rekha: haan maji aur Soniya betare thee ke unke bete kitne shant hain kuch be nahi bolte hain apne he khayalon mein koye he rehte hain

Romeo: maa yeh larki to bilkul humare Heer ki opposite hain behare aaj uska party mein kya hoga Heer uska damage ka gaye ge

Heer: Bro this is not funny mein apko choru gi nahi she starts running after him and Rekha and maji are just laughing when they bump into someone

It was a tall man who had on a 3 piece Armani suit with neatly polished black shiny shoes on his hand he had a expensive wrist watch his hair neatly combed back anyone who looks at him can tell he was a rich business man then he spoke

Man: Yeh kya hora hain yaha tum log bacho ke tara kyuin bagre hoon aur Heer aaj tumhara result ane wala ta tu uska kya bana

Rekha: Are Subhash aap aaj kitne jaldi agaya hain ache kiya apne aaj Humare Heer first class pass hoge hain usko 98% milen hain aur romeo ne socha ke hum party throw kare is occasion mein

Subash: are Mera bacha kitne ache tareeke se pass hogaya hain aur ab tum us summer contest mein jasakte ho aur is bevakoof romeo ne to pheli bar akal ki baat ki hain party to zaroor hoge

Heer hugs her dad while Romeo stands there sulking

Subash: are main to mazak kara ta ab jaldi se Party ki tyaariya karo aur guests ko balalo

Rekha: Mein abhi Soniya ke ghar mein Phone karte hoon she goes and starts making her phone call

Tring tring

A lady shouting at the top of her Voice

Lady: Sab kidar marge ho hain mein he hoon is ghar mein sara kaam karne walle oi Juliet phone utaha

Juliet: Maa kyuin chala re hain mein jare hoon Zaroor wo he hoga kitne dino baad humare yaad aye usko mein use bhot gussa hoon

Soniya: Tu gussa bilkul nahi hosakte mere bete bhot he shant hain ab ja aur phone utha

Juliet: Hello

Rekha: Namaste main kya Soniya se baath kasakte hoon

Juliet: jee zaroor aik minute (Maa!!!!!!! apka phone hain)

Soniya: she takes the phone and speaks, Namaste jee khon bolra hain maine pachana nahi

Rekha: Namaste Soniya mein Rekha bol re hoon

Soniya: Rekha kaise ho aaj kitne arse baad phone kiya hain kuch kass kam

Rekha: haan kya hain na meine aaj bagwan se apni bete ke results ke liya pratna ki hain na wo safal hoge usko 98% mile hain iskeliya aaj shaam ko humne aik chote se party rakhe hain aur apko ana pare ga

Soniya Mubarkh ho Rekha haan hum zaroor aye ge

Rekha: Theek hain phiir hum sham ko milte hain aur aaj tumhare bete ke be results ane wale te na kya bana uska

Soniya: Kya kaho rekha yeh larka kuch batata he nahi hain ab parsu ara hain tu phir pata chalega

Rekha: Theek hain fikar mat karo zaroor pass hoga acha ab mein rakte hoon namaste

Juilet: koon ta ma

Soniya: mere dost Rekha aaj uske bete pass hue hain aur is kushi mein usne party rakhe hain aur hum sab ko jana hain mein sab ko inform karte hoon aur tumhare us bhai ki kuch kabar aye abi tak

Juliet: Nahi maa usne abhi tak koi phone nahi kiya

Soniya: aik number ka nailak hain

Soniya jee agar wo nailaik hain uske tareef kon karta rehta hain har waqt

it was none other then Rakesh Soniya husband he continued

Rakesh: Sab ko aisa beta milna chaiya hain studys mein num 1 hain (There we see a young boy wearing Jeans, Tshirt, a cool wrist watch on his hand and he has sun glasses his hair geled up cool dashing boy who is concerned towards other people loves to flirt a lot lives his life to the fullest very clever and talented looking at the notice board for his results and as he finds his name a big smile spreads across his face showing his cute dimples) usko har saal top karne mein award mita hain and I feel so Proud of him (then we see the same young boy running up to his friends and screaming on top of his voice meine phir se top kiya hain papa bhot kush honge mere se) Kitna talented hain( Then we see the same boy sititng with his friends playing the guitar dancing and singing to his favourite song Bholi si soorat from Dil to Pagal Hain) Music to uska shok hain har waqt guitar apne saath rakta hain (Then we see the same boy get up with his friends to go to the last assembly of there school year not forgetting his guitar) aaj to usko prize milra hoga na kash hum uske saath hote) Then we see the priciple call out the boys name and he goes up on to the stage and recieves his prize and says yeh hain mere parivaar ke liya aaj wo mere saath nahi hain magar is dil mein baste hain I love you all he blows a kiss) sare Larkiya usme fida hain aur wo aik number ka flirt aaj tak koin nahi mile use (then we see the same boy plying basket ball and all the girls drooling over him and he winks at them which makes there heat beat faster) aur yeah summer contest kai bare mein kuch bol ra tha bhot he competitive hain (then we see the boy talking with his friends about the summer contest and how they have to win at any cost) Yeh hain mera beta Ranjha (then we see some people running over to the boy and screaming ranjha tu idar behta hua hain jalde chal aaj farwell party hain na)

Soniya: ab kon uske tareef kara hain ab jaldi se tyar hogaye kyuin ke aaj mere dost Rekha kai party hain

Rakesh: Mera beta tu tareef ke kabal hi hain they all laugh and go and get dressed

now its the evening and the party is in full swing and the guptas soniya, Rakesh, Juliet, massi and her daughter ashaka arrive there

Rekha: Namaste soniya andar aou na

Soniya: Namaste Rekha and they both hug each other

everyone gets busy in the party beside Juliet who stands in one corner and Soniya see this

Soniya: Rekha tere bete kidar hain mere Juliet kitne chup hain ke kabhi kisi se baath nahi kare ge

Rekha: aik min she calls someone to call heer and they head towards Juliet

Rekha: Beta aap idar kyuin kare we hoon chup chap koi baath nahi abhi mere bete se milna

then we see Heer running towards her maa

Rekha: Kabhi sida se nahi asakte har waqt bagte rehte hain ab ise milo yeah hain mere dost soniya ke bete Juliet

Heer: Hey di aap kaise hain mera naam heer hain

Juliet: Hey heer bhot acha laga tumse mil kar

they both disapear in the party when Juliet bumps into someone its none other then Romeo

Romeo: Tum yaha kya kare hoon😡

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Part 3

Heer - Aare Chill Bro Kya hua why you so upset
Romeo - Come on heer!!! Mein yahan kitna bored ho raha hoon... Nameste aunty, nameste uncle, Aare chotu yahan maat kehlo bhar jao i feel like a Waiter!!!

Heer (Siming and giggling) aww Bhai seriously aap mere liye yeh nahin kar saakte please
Romeo - teek hai Heer tumaare liye kucch bhi!!! tum mere aanke taare ho... lekin phir bhi this is soooo annoying
Heer - toh aap di ko bol rahe ho
Romeo - sorry sis...ek minute..DI??????
Heer - haan Di...Juliet Di, Juliet Gupta!!!!
Romeo - ooooh tumhe toh mein college mein dekh tha tha issliye mein soch raha tha ke aap yahan kasie!!!! wasie i didn't know ke aap Soniya aunty ki beti ho
Heer - bro yeh zayda kucch nahin bol thi... aapko toh paata hona chaiya naa!!!!
Romeo - haan yeh toh mujhe paata hai lekin Juliet Yeh ladki bahut pakati hai toh sambhal ke
Heer - Bahi!!!!!! (she runs up to him and he runs off)...Saachi bro bhi naa wasie di aap ko pasand kya hai???...(voice fades)
Buaji - Aare Rekha Tum apne dost ke saat baat karogi... baaki mehmaan se bhi atleast hello hi kehdo...
Rekha - Bhabhi ek minute mein karthi hoon Soniya mere saat chalogi
Buaj - haan haan meri baat buri lagi naa issliye aapne dost ko bhi aapne saat leke jaa rahi ho
Rekha - asie baat nahin hai bhabhi!!! sachi teek excuse me soniya mein abhi aaye
Soniya - aare take your time huh mein itne jaldi bhi nahin jaane wali haan
Buaji - aur sab asie bete kyun hai koi ghaana shaana karo warna yeh party nahin hoti chalo Arhaan, Jhanvi dance karo zaara
Aarhaan - Koudoz... Heer... mujhe dance karna nahin aata par...

Heer - koi baat nahin aap try toh kar rahe ho naa?

Aarhaan - 100%
Jhanvi - meine aapna makeup bhi finish nahin kiya hai
Romeo - Toh teek hai (Walking up) aapni pyaari bhen ke liye kucch preform mein bhi kartha hoon MUSIC!!!
the song from Heer's favorite movie plan was plaued, 'Hota Hai' as romeo was dancing Juliet looked at him smiling and goes into her dream world as the girls lyrics play in the background she sings imangining herself with Romeo
"Chupake Chupake Chup Chup Ke Dil Kisi Ka Hota Hai, Baadalon Ki Bhahoon Mein Chand Jaise Khota Hai, Ishq Ke Nashe Mein Deewana Samaan Ho Jaata Hai, Oooh, Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Hota Hai Hota Hai, Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Ho Jaata Hai, Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Hota Hai Hota Hai, Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Ho Jaata Hai"
just as the song carries on Heer brings Juliet back into the reality world
Heer - Juliet Di
Juliet - haan
Heer - kahaan khogaayi thi kabse mein aapka naam pukaar rahi hoon Bro kitne aache gaate hai naa
Juliet -Haan Heer saach mein Tumaare bhai ki awaz bhi baut sureeli hai bilkul mere bhai Ranjha ki tarah
Heer - Ranjha??? lekin woh hai kahan aur yahan aaya nahin hai kya
Juliet - nahin woh baas parsu aaega woh abhi baroda mein hai naa lissliye
Heer - accha
Just as the song finishes another one starts this time Aarhaan is dancing and then Subash Rakesh and Chriag join in...
Yeh khuda na jaanoon woh khuda
Yaar hi mera to hai khuda
Yeh khuda na jaanoon woh khuda
Yaar hi mera to hai khuda
Deewane chalte hain girte sambhalte hain
Hai phir bhi sab se juda
Yeh khuda na jaanoon woh khuda
Yaar hi mera to hai khuda
Deewane chalte hain girte sambhalte hain
Hai phir bhi sab se juda

Beeta kal tha ab jaane de na
Kal bhi kal hai woh aane de na
Beeta jo kal tha woh ab jaane de na
Kal bhi to kal hai jo woh aane de na
Aane wale kal ke us kal ke har pal ke
Aakhon mein sapnein saja
Yeh khuda na jaanoon woh khuda
Yaar hi mera to hai khuda

Kehti duniya humse hamesha
Darte rehna humse hamesha
Kehti hai duniya jo hum na karenge
Humse kya darna hai hum na darenge
Yaaron ka woh yaara
Yaari mein jo yaara
Begaan haske loota
Yeh khuda na jaanoon woh khuda
Yaar hi mera to hai khuda
Deewane chalte hain girte sambhalte hain
Hai phir bhi sab se juda


everyone claps as romeo walks up to his dadi
Romeo: dadi aaj ke shaam pheli baar mujhe asia karne ko mila joh itna boring nahin hai'

Subash - tu bhi naa Romeo ek dum pagal hai
Romeo - Aakir beta kiska hoon
Subash - aacha baacho chal jaa yahan se warna
Romeo - (laughing) okay okay!!!!
Subash - saach maa yeh ladka ek dum paagal hai
Buaji - Isliye Kehti hoon Romeo ke shaadi karke ussko
business mein beta do... college ke baad aur padne ki kya zarooraat hai
Subash - Didi abhi uske khel ne ki umar hai aur waise bhi phele Arhaan ke shaadi hone to do woh toh Romeo se bada hai!!
Buaji - haan haan Subash uski toh hogi lekin Arhaan toh romeo ke tarah yahan wahan ghoomta phirta nahin naa aur wasie bhi shaadi nahin toh kaamse kaam uski saagaai toh karwaa do phir woh dusroo ki ladkion ko chedega nahin!!!
Subash - haan didi...Haan Mehra saab mein abhi aaya didi (he walks off without giving an answer)
Buaji - haan haan Sab toh mujhe he bura samahte hai
The party had eventually ended with Romeo askin one last thing to juliet before she left 'Heer ne toh tumhe taag toh nahin kiya naa'
Heer - Bro chill huh meine toh di ko kucch nahin asia kaha ke uska bheja fry ho okay!!!
Romeo - haan haan
Juliet smiled and walked away
Romeo - isse kya hua???
Heer - aap huye!!!
Romeo - what
Heer - exactly
all the guests left one by one and later on that night everyone went to sleep after talking about heer's grades and the fact that she is aloud to go to the Summer Dhamaka Contest!!!
The Next Day juliet and her Friends were jogging in the park and then Romeo and his friends ran up to them and all of a sudden juliet fell over as she got pushed by someone esle as they ran past her!! she fell down but Romeo had caught her just in time they locked eyes and there tey were in their on world as romeo then realised it was Juliet he let her up andshe looked down
Ashlesha - Guys???
Edited by -PrinKa- - 14 years ago

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