Tasha OS (after thursday's inkar)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Guys i know after thursday's epi all of u are disapointed,some hated the way nakku runned away leaving dutta heartbroken while others blamed dutta for yet doubting on nakku.
So here is a OS to entertain u, i will try to do justice to both of dutta n nakkusha.It's my first attempt so plz b patient n plz forgive my poor english.
It starts with nakku saying saab:

N:Saab...aap humesha khete ho k nakku aap ki man ki baat samaj leti hai...par aaj...aaj me nahi samaj pa rahi hai...

After a while.

N:Humare beech humesha se ek rishta tha...jo waqt k saaat saat naam badaltha gaya: kabhi farzangi ka rishta to kabhi dosti ka,kabhi dushmani ka to kabhi pati patni ka...
In har ek rishton ne hume ek dusre ko alag alag nazarye se dekne ka moka dya...
Mene aap ka dard dekha,apki nafrat dekhi,aap ki khushi pechani aapko samja...
aur ek guna gar beti...aap se pyaar...

D staring angrily a her :Aur kheti ti k ye guna bar bar karegi...bar bar karegi...lekin nahi...raising the knife toward her...aaj isi pyaar ki jaga....isi pyar ki jaga muje teri ankhon me dar dikha...wahi dar jo suprya k kampte hue haathon se zaher hota tha,wahi dar jo DSP ka naam sunte hue logon gi ankhon me dikhta hai... aaj wahi dar tujme dikhta nakku... kyu ?!

N crying :Han! Han me darti hai... darti hai k meri sachai janne k baad aap toot jao...aapka barosa toot jae..darti hai k iss nahe rishta ki zanjeer...in safed haathon ki kali lakhiron se kamzor na par jae...

He didnt understand anything...what did she mean by:safed haathon ki kali lakiren...But before he could say smthing, a gun shot echoed.Coming out of his thoughts he rushed towards the hall from where the shot seemed hve come, leavin nakku broken down on the floor.
Suddenly we heard a second shot.This time nakku recovered, took courage n steped toward the hall.As she heard her mother screaming she speeded up.
All the family members were there abnomarlly gathered. Two policeman were pointing guns at them.As she took another step she saw BGs lying dead on the floor.Dutta was standing next to them on the gun point of a sinewy policeman.She then saw him : Malmal morey.She was shocked.She never expected him to come so far.But he was there threatening her, threatening her love.At her sight her mother yelled:Baag ja meri baachi.
But before she could react Morey graabed her arm and pulled her in front of everyone.

M:Nakusha ji...Nakusha ji kitna intezar karwaya hai aapne hume...

Dutta remembered him.He was the one who was pursuing nakku the night he met her.A sudden anger overruned him.He couldn't bear this man holding nakku like that.By the way here was another proof that he was actually in love with her even if he was really mad at her after what she did earlier.

M:Aap ka kya khyal tha nakusha ji hum apko itne jaldi bhool jaenge...
Nakku was tremnling.

From behind Kala shouts:Humesha is churel ki waja se musibat ati hai...to morey aap ko iss kallo se kya chaye ?
Morey staring at Kala starts laughing.

K rudely:Iss me hassne wali konsi baat hai ?
M:Kallo...Kallo...he keeps laughing a while then suddenly stops...to nakku...chichi chi ine nahi bataya apne nakusha ji...then turns towards Kala n mokingly says In k samne to aap ka rang b pheeka par jae...He then starts caressing nakku's cheek with his gun...(filmy style)

Dutta in full sher mode tried to hit the policeman in front of him but a gun shot near him reminded him that all his parivar was in danger.He shouts to morey:

D:Agar meri patni ko tune haat lagaya to tere haathon k tukre tukre kar k tuje khilahun ga !

M:To ye teri patni hai...to nakku...chal meri jaan ye kalak utar...
As nakku was scared she didnt move.

M yelling:Utar warna tere is pati ko thok dunga.

Nakku looks at dutta with pleading eyes but all she saw was anger...
She started removing the makeup...Dutta was staring at her shocked now nakk's word were makin sense: safed haathon ki kali lakiren...In fact evryone was shocked...only babi was crying...Kala literarly fainted.

M turned n mokingly said: Mene to sirf rang ki baat ki thi lekin iska to man b pheeka par gaya...facing nakku...wah aisa item to kam hi milta hai...kyu Mr.Pandey ?

The man in front of dutta retorted:Par shaadi shuda hai...lafra b hosakta hai...

M:Kya yaar...han idea...an evil smile appeared on his face he turned towards dutta...Aise karte han aaj me isse le jata hun...kal tak wapis kardun ga...Kyu ?

Suddenly Mr.Panday turned his gun n pointed to Morey n so did the officers who were pointing towards the parivar.

Mr.P:Inka pata nahi lekin tera kam hogaya hai...He took a tape recroder out of his pocket...

He arrested Morey apologised for the disturbance and went away leavin all stunned.Before someone coule move dutta grabbed nakku's hand and took her to his room, locked the door n stared at her without any espression...He crossed his hands behind his back and walk to the window.

D:Samaj me nahi a raha...Aaj tune meri soch hila k rakh di hai...samaj me nahi a raha k tune apna chipaya kyu rakha...jab k tu iska faida utha sakti thi...lekin nahi ulta logon ki tere kalepan par batein sheti rahi...

N:Saab ab bi nahi samje ? Morey ki gandi nyat dekhte hue b nahi samje...Saab khubsoorti ne jitna dard apko dia hai utna hi muje dya.Saab iske peeche ek bohot lambi kahani hai jo me aap pir kabhi sunae gi...Is waqt sirf itna hi kahe gi k is kalepan ne muje ek nahi zindagi di hai,muje buri nazron se bachae rakha hai...Log muje kallo kahen balah ya churel muje manzoor tha...muje pata tha is kalepan ne meri izaat ki ifazat...rahi baat aap se chipane ki to saab aap hi batao...suprya tai ki bagne se pele mera chera dikhane ka koi matlab nahi banta tha...uske jane k baad aap sochte k me apni khubsoorti se aap ko pana chati...phir jungle...apna ne kaha k aap ko khubsoorat cheron se nafrat...to muje dar laga...meri aslyat dekh k aap ka barosa na toot jahe...aur aaj jab aap ne shaadi ki baat ki tu muje mehsoos hua k itna bara sach apse chipate hua aap ek bar phirse andere me nahi rakh sakti thi...to islie me wahan se chali gahi...with teary eyes...muje maaf kardo saab...

Dutta was staring a her without any words...after a while.

N:Waise saab agar abhi b...lookin here n there...mera matlab hai agar abhi b muje shaadi...karna..chate ho...to me tayar hai...she was shyly lookin down...

Dutta steped toward her yet without expression...stared at her a while admiring her beauty n thinkin hw courageous she was...he suddenly hugged her...Nakku sarted crying...He removed her tears n took her in the hall were evryone was waiting.

D:Shaadi ki tayarian shuru kardo...


Hope u like it
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-Carrie- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Yay!👏👏👏 Awesome Zubi! Hmmm there is a CV hiding in my friend too good really😊I hope Zubi it happens just like ur OS on monday.Ufff! But anyway I was really feeling miserable I feel much better now.
Many on this forum and nakku herself feel Dutta will get angry after Nakku reveals her color but I have always said Dutta will truly understand her plight. He is foremost a kind human being.Who better to understand the hardships of poverty than him. After all it was poverty that put him on the path of becoming a killer for a profession.Nakku has grossly misjudged him this time. If only she had the courage to tell him all this sooner.
Keep up the good work,Zubi.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very interesting indeed, hope the story turns out to be like this.. But Pandey didnt have any mast mast dlogues, i want him to give atleast ten minutes entertaining dlgs..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesum missmilly...👏👏👏...!!! loved it....OMG ...Moreyz re-entry, Mr.Pz entry, nakuz revelation ...and dutta accepting naku..OMG ...!! itz juz too good...!! keep rocking yaar...!!👍🏼
Edited by shonapinky - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Damn, well now after readin this i can wait till monday but u sud hve added Bajii Lool but now u gave me courage to wait 2 days Very well written!
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wow......i loved it! kash k aise he ho....
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Awsummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm..............wow!...............I am sendin one too...............😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ZubyDutta

Yay!👏👏👏 Awesome Zubi! Hmmm there is a CV hiding in my friend too good really😊I hope Zubi it happens just like ur OS on monday.Ufff! But anyway I was really feeling miserable I feel much better now.

Many on this forum and nakku herself feel Dutta will get angry after Nakku reveals her color but I have always said Dutta will truly understand her plight. He is foremost a kind human being.Who better to understand the hardships of poverty than him. After all it was poverty that put him on the path of becoming a killer for a profession.Nakku has grossly misjudged him this time. If only she had the courage to tell him all this sooner.
Keep up the good work,Zubi.



glad u liked it... i knew u were very sad that's what pushed me to write it. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -kritz-

Very interesting indeed, hope the story turns out to be like this.. But Pandey didnt have any mast mast dlogues, i want him to give atleast ten minutes entertaining dlgs..



i know it wasnt perfect i just wanted to uplift u guys after thrusday's epi...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shonapinky

Awesum missmilly...👏👏👏...!!! loved it....OMG ...Moreyz re-entry, Mr.Pz entry, nakuz revelation ...and dutta accepting naku..OMG ...!! itz juz too good...!! keep rocking yaar...!!👍🏼



thx u a ton yaar 😳...bdw was waitin for u to updt precap but there wasnt 😕
aur meri os me to sab goody goody tha...there will b much more drama in LTL

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