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Posted: 14 years ago
Muskaan,

so sorry for the later review..chpts 65-68.. were totally amazing. geet finding out she is pregnant, her trying to tell man.. I love krish.. naming the little one.. Maan trying to be mad at her, but deep down inside he is all but love towards her. Your sexy scenes are beautifully written. Oh boy.. nw i just want her to tell maan he is is indeed going to be a father again, and i am sure.. he is going to be overjoyed!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
muskan di update chhota tha 😭 but it was fantastic!!!! finally maan ki ignorance khatam hui n best is dat geet came 2 knw abt her feelings!!! lekin yeh ladki maan ko gud news kab degi???? i cant wait to read maan's rxn 😃 😃

Edited by SakshiGarg - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh wow thank god they patced up
dear maan still doesn't know about khushi do tell him
bye sumi
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey muski i wanted to confirm sumthing did geet tell him about preg ?
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Posted: 14 years ago

ohhh my lovely update Muskaan 😊 but it was short....... when will Geet inform Maan about her pregnancy ??????

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Posted: 14 years ago
hi guys..thanxs for all ur support & replies...thanxs u thanxs u soooo very much
both of them started to get a little breathless while their hands wandered the other body.
When maan went down on her as he owned her. He gave her everything she ever wanted
all that she longed for ..he longed for..

Part 69

maan kissed her & said..aab to mujhe jaane do..
maan - i need to rush i am getting late..mera flight ka time ho raha hain..
geet - ji..
there was very distinct feeling in them..they did'nt want to let go...
the feeling was very weired..& scarey..
geet - i have something very important to tell u ..
(maan was getting ready..)
maan - umm..kaho
geet - ji main..aap..nahi.humare.khushi..
maan - geet please abhi nahi...i am really getting late..
geet - u never have time for me maan..she soabed..(mummered)
geet felt she really needed to talk to him..she felt if she does'nt tell him now..she may never be able to say...maan was in too much of hurry to read her eyes..he kissed her..i love u..sweethart.. bye & rushed out..geet smiled sadly..she wanted to tell him how happy she was...
she wanted to share their khushi...not able to express herself was
difficult to bare...she felt ..with so much to be happiness around .. she was still
not happy...she realized wat maan meant to her...she realized wat this bechani was..she wondered how every thing in her life revolved around him..she is not even able to enjoy the best moments of any womens life because maan is not in them..she felt as if
a peice of her is missing from her...she looked and looked but never found untill..
for in this world all she seeked ..is that special peice that makes her complete
but when she realized ...wat she was seeking.. she could see him going ...not
sharing..not listening to her...she cried, she smiled & realizing how much she loved him..


next day maan called from london..
maan - geet ..i have booked krish's ticket for simla..
he will have to leave tomorrow
geet - lakin..can he not continue here with us?(her voice was sinking)
maan - yah ..i was thinking about that..after his 10th..may be
we will get him back..ok(maan could sense geets voice changing)
geet - ji..(she could barely reply..with tears in her eyes)
maan - ok then..he paused(maan could fee her tears rolling down)
geet kya baath hain
geet - wow..when re u coming back..(she pretends to be fine)
maan - 2 more days..dear(kal raath ke flight hain)
geet - mm..
maan - miss u ..(maan was expecting her to say something....)
geet - umm..(but..he was bit disappointed..)
maan - bye..
geet - bye..
maan met up with his clients & latter stopped by a gift shop..
he picked a diamond bracelet for geet..he could closed his eyes & imagine
how beautifuly they would glow up with her touch...he could'nt stop thinking about her ...
if she loves me..why does'nt she say it...
why is she so shy...warna to..talwar lekar uthar jathi hain ladne kaliya
lekin pyar ka izhar nahi karthi...uske har baat pe mujhe uska dil ka haal
dikh tha hain...uske ankhein to har pal mujhe donthe rahthi hain
mano mujh main samnae ko tarsthi hoon...uska sharmana...(he smiles)
ab to uske bina kanhi man bhi nahi lagtha..
ab yeh do rathe kasie rahoo..uff...sadiyoo se lagthi hain..
kab kaho ghi..mujh se. geet ..of god..why do I love her so very much...

geet & krish spend the whole day shopping for khushi & krish
geet picks a soft toy for krishs friend..
geet - yeh tumhari friend ke liya
krish - wow maa.. i am sure she will like it..
he picks up another soft teddy for khushi & says this is for my khushi
they reach home ..geet does the packing for krish & he was arranging
khushi's stuffs..& he writes a note ...miss u little angle..

geet was not very happy with krish leaving..
she was really upset & disturbed..she was feeling lonely..already..
she slept with krish..holding him close to her heart..

next day..
both of them were very emotional..
krish spend most of the time playing with geets tummy..& talking
to khushi...geet was trying to put up a brave face..trying not to sulck
geet cooked krish's fav lunch..packed some snack for him to munch in hostel

it was 4pm..krish's filght was at 6..they both hugged & cried..
krish kissed khushi..lot many times..& kept on saying..
how lucky she was..being with mummy...
geet & krish went to the airport..
geet got a call from maan..
maan - we are boarding the flight now..
will be there tomorrow morning...has krish left
geet - no..no..we are at the airport
maan - give it to krish
krish - hi dad..
maan - all the best do well..have a safe trip
krish - u too..bye..umma umma
maan - love u...bye..
maan cuts the call...
suddenly there was a car off the road cutting through the
divider onto the platform ..the car almost hit a person standing
next to them..geet held on to krish & pulled him back...the car went on
to the other side of the path & hit a car..just missing them by inches..
geet hugged krish tightly..not letting him away from her...breathing really hard
& scared ..she feared ..geet looked ..checked krish..every where..he fell down
in pool of blood...geet realized she managed to pull him from the hit of car..
but the glasses that flew away from the impact of cars accident just hit & spilt
his stomach..geet rushed him to the nearest hospital..
geet tried calling maan..his phone was not reachable..
geet called priya & told her to be hear at once...
geet called armaan & pleeded him to help her...
as they reached the hospital..krish was immidiately taken to the OT
geet walked up & down infront of the OT ..armaan just reached the hospital
armaan - geet
geet - mera bacha armaan...(broke down)
armaan - just relax...tell me wat happened
geet - hum..airport..car accident..she narrates the whole thing
armaan - let me check with the doctors..I am sure there is nothing to worry
u saved him from the main impact..I am sure it may be just
some small bruces..maan kidhar hain
geet - he is in the flight..
armaan - does he know about it..
geet - nahi..he spoke to us before boarding the flight..just a sec before
the accident..main maan ko kya kahoon ghi...
armaan - maine kaha ne krish will be fine..
geet - nahi main maan ko kya javab doonghi..how will i explain all this to him..
krsih to meri responsibilty thi na...how could I let this happen
armaan - stop blamming ur self...there is nothing u could have done about it
geet - main maan kya kahoongi
geet faints...

precap..
maan blamming geet

ok the twist does'nt seem to end..hope u all like this part
please comment.. love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 update!!! jst luvd it!!!
Edited by SakshiGarg - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Kya Di?How can you worsen it...maan doesn't even know that she is pregnant and now will even blame her for Krishna....

Kya hai Yeh Di....i saw the update and was so happy that u updated so fast but now am that unhappy that u made the story so bad....

I hate u Di okay i don't but am really upset
very unhappy....


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Posted: 14 years ago

muski .

u are killing us with ur updates...😆😆😆
cant stop loving them,,,,,,,,,stupendous......👏👏
if maan blames geet..........i am really goin to kill him.....how can he be such a jerk yaar..........
anyways....i hope u have some great things in store for them and us..............the suspense is killing....
will be looking forward for the upcoming updates
plzzzzz update soon
reva
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Posted: 14 years ago

whoa

it was really scary
loooooooooooooooooooooved da update
update romantic ho, emotional ho, funny ho ya jaisi b ho it is always superb
cont. soooooon
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago

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