Yehi Hota Pyaar Hai Kya??- A SaJan Scene!!! - Page 4

Originally posted by: aashizin

aayesha first of all u deserve standing ovations seriously 👏 👏 i have no words for this os i am totally speechless after reading it 👏 gosh honey u really made me senti with this os 😭 the way u described sam's feelings outstanding so true hon 👏 👏 and sajan's superb reunion 😳 the way u portrayed mayur and sajan superb gosh keep rocking and writing such a meaningful os 👏 👏

Originally posted by: naz17555

Beautiful ayeshhh! it was really beautiful! soo touching! everyone finally getting together and becoming that big family again was soo sweet! just felt for samrat! poor guy! he's been through soo much too! even more so! and we soo want him to say he's gonna leave india! you wrote it here and it was the best way to get that reaction from gunjy! her finally running to him without any qualms. Loved it! this was the best reunion situation (with nups return).

wow beautifully written

loved it to the core

great job

nice os

Originally posted by: aa123.80

Ayesha!! Glad to see another scene by you!!

EDIT: Loved Loved Loved it !! Again, the simplicity, the essence of SaJan is beautifully portrayed.

Loved how the sisters' resolve their misunderstanding. And the whole situation is very realistic.

Again, this is exactly how the SaJan track should proceed. Gradually and steadily, with Gunjan finding out what exactly Samrat had been through the past 3 years. Realising that it wasn't his mistake.... Though he was the one who brought Gunjan back to life, he was dying inside every day, cause he had no one by his side, and was blamed for something he wasn't responsible for.

I specially loved how you wrote the part where Gunjan said the following lines:

"Iski ankhon mein aanso they, jo hum ne diye they'mein ne diya they'phir bhi ye sirf humarey aanso ponchta raha"

"Jis ne her pal sirf hum se pyar kiya tha. Jis ke jeney ka maqsad hum they. Hum ne ussi ko tanha chod dia."

This is exactly what I'd like to see the CVs showing. Samrat, who lived for his friends, for whom his friends were the only family he had, was abandoned when he needed them the most, yet he never stopped supporting them. Each moment was a torture for him, yet he concentrated on making their lives normal. He wiped their tears, whereas there was no one to wipe his. He was blamed for being a part of the destiny which no one could control.He wanted Gunjan to live again, whereas he stopped living the moment she left him. Each day he wanted to kill himself, yet for her sake he plastered the fake smile so that her smile didn't die. And everyone's grieving about their loss, but what about him?

A very well written scene Ayesha. Thank you sooo much, and I hope the CVs write something just like this. 🤗

-Ishita

Originally posted by: ayesha_80

Awww!!! Thanks a lot Ishita. Soooo much appreciation, i never exprected this. I was like, i'm making it way too emotional. I'm extremely glad that u liked it. Ur words have really touched me.
Well, yeah it was hell emotional... But that's what's always been SaJan's strength. And your words totally reflected their essence.... Just can't get over this scene you wrote.... I'm actually watching the scenes on TV and comparing how it's going with this scene.....

I totally agree wid u. Samrat was there for everyone, but there was no one for him. He cried alone...hiding his tears from everyone, and had a fake smile, so that the other's around him (Gunjan and Mayank) also smile.Exactly... And everyone's thinking about his/her grief, but there's actually no one thinking about what Samrat's been through these 3 years, but I hope they're gonna show that now.

The basic reason of my writing this OS was to highlight the pain, both Samrat and Gunjan have gone through and are still going through. Now, when the reason of thier pain will become non-existent, adjusting to it will also be difficult, coz the marks it has left, will take time to heal. So, the pain doesn't end here...but the good thing is, S and G, both have each other (be it as friends) to stand by each other.Yes, and when the reason disappears, Gunjan will feel the guilt which she shifted on to Sam. And this will hurt her even more. But as you said, she'll always find Samrat by her side, and he'll never blame her for anything.

U're right..this SG track should proceed gradually and steadily. No abrupt and hurried ending for it, coz a whole LOT still needs to be done, said and felt. Seriously. Hope the CVs explore this track thoroughly and don't mess it up with an abrupt ending.

Thanks again for ur sweet comments and for liking my effort.🤗 Thank you for the lovely scene!! Loved reading and commenting!!🤗

Originally posted by: sharma.nat

Wonderful and very emotional Os loved it very much

Originally posted by: sanjay01

Outstanding performance.Awesome. Its very emotional painful and teare post.I love sajan and nupurgunjan scene.

Originally posted by: me_mohit

😭😭😭 I AM ACTUALLY CRYING!!!!!!!!!

girl.....wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT WAS JUS MIND BLOWING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i don't hav wrds to describe!!!!!!!!