ManeetFF..Mujhe Haq Hai:: Chp 28::PG. 144 - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Liked both the parts

Maan n Geet were getting close
Liked wat Geet said all the thsg in breath to Maan in the garage
Why was he so nervous to show his room to her yaar
Liked that wen Dadi said u mad Maan ladkee
Cna imagine that
Maan was getting sttracted towards here
That lizard part was awesum😆😆
Update soon n longer updates plzzzzzzzzzzzzz


thanks soo much afsha..Maan didnt want to show her his room because shez not that important to him yet..and he dusnt like to show his personal things to any1..(u knw the akrhoo attitude 😆)..but as the story will go on..there will be sum changes 😳😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u soo much guyss...i loved reading the comments..im so glad it made u smile..i tried to make this update longer..if u want much longer..then will try to next time..i hope u all will like it..plzz share ur views..and leave comments..Enjoy
~Chap 7~

"Chalo chalo..jaldi karo!..late honjainge.. "

Maan hurriedly ordered.. which made Geet more nervous..she took her bread and jam sandwich in her hand..and took a big sip of orange juice..

Mrs. Khurana: beta maan..bechaaree ko theek se khane to dou!..itna bhi late nahi huwe ho..

Mrs. Handa: nahi nahi..Maan bilkul theek kar raha hai..Geet ko bilkul bhi time ki value nahi hai..

Geet looked at her mom..wid complaining eyes..

Maan: thanks aunty!.. chalo geet..warna main office chala jaaon ga!..he sed while going to the garage..

Geet quickly took her purse and ran after him..

He had started the car..Geet hurriedly sat in..and finished her sandwich

Geet: Maan!..tum na..ughh..hum itna bhi late nahi huwe hain..its just 5 min.

Maan looked at Geet angrily.. " sirf 5 min?..Geet tum 5 min ki value jaantee ho..5 min main badi se badi business deals cancel hojatee hain.."..

Geet: acha acha..samajh gayee main 5 min ki qeemat..ab apna lecture band karo..aur jaldi chalo..warna aur late hojain gai

Maan realized and took the car out of the garage..and started driving..

Maan: Geet agar tumhara yahee attitude raha na..tou tum kabhi bhi aik achi businessman nahi ban paao gee..

Geet: mujhe aik acha businessman banna bhi nahi hai!

Maan looked at her shockingly.. "to phir.."

Geet told him to stop by her hand gesture and interrupted: Mujhe to aik ache businessWoman banna hai..wid that sed she chuckled..and made Maan a little embarrassed and very irritated

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Geet was very nervous while the administrator was checking her file

"Ms. Geet Handa!..ur portfolio was very impressive.. u can cum frm tomorrow! and we will show u the building.. the administrator confirmed her admission

Geet: thank u sir..

Maan and Geet got up..Maan shook hands wid Administrator..

Maan: thank u Mr. Shukla..ab hum chalte hain'and they both made their way outside..

Geet was very happy..which Maan cud notice from her smiling face..

Geet and Maan both got out of the academy..Maan put his shades on and walked to his car!..

"Style hai.." Geet thought and smiled..she was impressed by his looks the first time she saw him..she also sat in the car's front seat..maan started driving

Geet: thank u soo much Maan..u really did soo much for my admission..aik treat to banti hai..bolo kya chahiye treat main!

Maan: nothing..that's ok Geet..he sed while driving

Geet: ughhh..Maaaaan!!..tum kitnay sad and boring ho..main tumko treat dena chahtee hoon..aur tum mana kar rahe ho..agar abhi yahan rano ya Siddharth hote na..tou mera purse khaali hojata..magar unki treat khatam nahi hoti..

Maan: Rano and sidharth?

Geet: meray buddies..jinko main chor kar aagai.."huh" she sighed.."I really miss them..pata hai..hum log every weekend masti karte thay..movies jaate thay..restaurants..parties..aur college main bhi..humare group ko sab log teen ki toli bolte thay..i really miss them..she sed in depressing tone..

Maan: acha..chalo phir main tumko yahan k best restaurant main lai kar chaloon..mujhe meri treat chahiye..sochlo..he tried to cheer her up

Geet smiled: chalo..im ready..

Maan: abhi nahi..abhi to office jaana hai..main tumko ghar chor deta hoon..phir aaj raat ko le kar chaloon ga..alrite

Geet excitedly nodded..Maan smiled to see her soo happy

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Maan left for office after dropping Geet..Geet gave every1 the gud news of her admission..Every1 was happy..Geet was very excited to go..after lunch she came to her room to decide wat will she wear at night..while deciding..she kept thinking about Maan.."itna bura bhi nahi hai..thora akrhu hai..but sweet hai.." she though wid a smile..after thinking hard for 1 and half an hour she decided to be dressed in a white dress..wid opened hair..

It was 10:15 pm and Maan still didn't cum from office..Geet was all ready and waiting for him since 2 hours.. she even didn't eat her dinner.. she was UPSET!..every1 else had dinner and now were in their rooms..Geet was sitting on dining table..on 10:30 she gave up.. went to her room and changed her clothes..she lied down in her bed..next to her mom..who was sleeping..she tried to sleep..but cudnt because she was angry and so was hungry..she got up..and went to kitchen..took out the bread and made herself a sandwich..she was nibbling it when she saw Dadi cuming to dining table..

Geet stood up.."dadi..aapko kuch chahiye..main..?

Dadi smiled: nahi beta..tum betho..hum to paani lenay aai thay..

Geet made her sit and brought water for her..then she sat in her spot and started eating her sandwich

Dadi noticed.."kya huwa..aaj to aap aur Maan restaurant jaane waale thay na!?"

Geet nodded.."tou phir yeh sandwich..humara matlab hai..program cancel hogaya kya?" she questioned

Geet took a deep breath..to calm herself down.."nahi dadi..hum dinner par jaane waale thay lekin nahi gaye..Maan abhi tak office se he nahi aaya..aur phone karke bhi nahi bataya k woh nahi aa paiga..agar boldeta..to main samajh jaate na..main wait kartee rahee..aur woh..

She got quiet after seeing Maan entering the dining hall..

Maan was looking tired..he was holding his vest in his right hand and cuming toward them

Maan: hii dadi..hii Geet!..

Geet looked at Dadi.. angrily got up..put her plate in kitchen..and furiously walked to her room..

"isko kya huwa?"Maan surprisingly asked Dadi

Before dadi cud say anything Maan remembered his promise.."ohhh..main to bhool he gaya..maine to isko le kar jaana tha..Huh!..he sighed in regret

Dadi: aapko aise nahi karna chahiye tha maan..woh bechaaree kab se aapka wait kar rahee thee..kuch khaya bhi nahi..koi aise wada karke..bhool jaaye..ghussa to aiga na..aapko uss se maafi maangnee chahiye..aur woh jo kahe karna chahiye..iss tarha woh maan jaaye gee..

Maan nodded.."main apologize karloon ga..subah..college to main he drop karoon ga na!" he sed

Dadi: gud..chaliye aap kuch kha lijiye..

Maan: nahi dadi..bhook nahi hai..main sone jaa raha hoon..

Dadi: theek hai jaise aapki marzi..wid that sed she left..and Maan went to his room..

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Edited by NZ_rockx - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Love your FF. You are an amazing writer :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Veryyyy nice update.
So in next part.
Maan will apologize.
Plzzz continue soon.
Next time plzzz update longer part.



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Posted: 14 years ago
Cute part hun 😳👏👏
Love the Business man/woman arguement 🤣
Maan is Maan, poor Geet he forgot about the dinner 😆
Hope he'll make up for his mistake 😉
Do update soon hun 😃
Love,
Humera 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was awesome! Aww...Maan, just to make her happy agreed for the treat...cute...but forgot about it...hmph! Poor Geet...she wasted so much of time in getting dressed and also did not have her dinner...am excited to see how Maan apologizes to her...do continue soon.


Edited by Antares - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

cute part jus to see a smile he agreed for the treat n forgot now tht's maan...........lolwaiting for next update

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Posted: 14 years ago

Great Update

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
thanks for da pm
cant wait for the nxt update
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Posted: 14 years ago
it ws soo nice!!!n funny..and maan he forgot!!:) i like ur ff!!!can u add me to ur pm list?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Brilliant update ⭐️
YAY! Finally she notices how HOT Maan actually is 😉 😳 😆
Awwww...should be fun to see how Maan tries to apologise and cheer Geet up 😃
Thanks for the P.M. and update asap 😊

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