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Guys I wrote an sg scene two days back...but didn't feel lyk posting it bcoz of the trauma all of us r going thru from the past two days as we heard the news of our frnd reeshu's sudden demise.
But finally i thought of posting it today...don't know how it has shaped up...for the first tym I am not satisfied with what I have written. so all critisizm is whole heartedly welcome...sorry if my writing disappoints u this tym.
But finally i thought of posting it today...don't know how it has shaped up...for the first tym I am not satisfied with what I have written. so all critisizm is whole heartedly welcome...sorry if my writing disappoints u this tym.
This is a scene wherein mayank samrat and gunjan have found nupur. Though she hasn't forgiven them completely but she had began to again live with mayank and everything is falling back into place.But ash hasn't still come out of her trauma and she rarely comes to clg. So here it goes guys...pls feel free to comment/criticize.
Samrat and gunjan are in excel hell worried abt ash. No one of them knows where she has gone. Sam just attended rohan's call who too had been searching for ash...
G: samrat rohan ne kya kaha???
S: chashmish ash na hi college mein hai aur na hi ghar pe...
G:kya! Samrat mujhe...mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai...pata nahin ye ladki kahan gayi hogi...I hope woh koi galat kadam na utha le...
S:(keeping his hand on her shoulder)relax chashmish...aisa kuch nahin hoga...rohan gaya hai na use dhoondhne...woh theek hogi...
G:nahin samrat tum ashwini ko nahin jaante...jab woh gusse mein hoti hai to use kuch nahin sujta...woh gusse mein kuch bhi kar sakti hai...
Gunjan's words were now making samrat worried as well...as he himself had witnessed ash's painful side and her suicidal tendencies.
S:ohh friek!! I hope ash bas wahan na gayi ho...
G(shocked):kya! Samrat tum...tum kya kah rahe ho...ashwini kahan na gayi ho???
S:chashmish tum chalo mere saath...
G:par kahan samrat...
S:abhi kuch mat poocho chashmish...bas chalo mere saath...jaldi (he holds her hand and both of them move out)
Scene shift(bike racing track near the cliff)
Gunjan is shocked to see the place.
G:samrat ye tum...ye tum mujhe kahan le aaye ho...aur humein to ashwini ko dhoondhne jana hai na...phir yahan???ashwini yahan kaise ho sakti hai???
S:chashmish relax...meri baat suno...ye wohi jagah hai jahan ash mujhe pehli baar mili thi...n I am sure woh aaj bhi yaheen hogi...
G:what!!! Howz it possible samrat...main ashwini ko achchi tarah se jaanti hoon...woh yahan kabhi nahin aati...aurr woh yahan tumse kaise mil sakti hai...tum to yahan kabhi aaye hi nahin...
Suddenly gunjan realizes what has she said...her words are a shocker for herself only...this simply meant that when she wasn't here...samrat too used to participate in the race...ofcourse as ashwini said samrat was the same guy whom ashwini always talked abt. gunjan's eyes r moist realizing that how much pain samrat has given himself when she wasn't with him...
Gunjan looks at him with questioning eyes...
G:samrat tum...how can u do this??? Tum ne ek baar bhi nahin socha ki agar tumhe kuch ho jata to un sabka kya hota jo tumse pyaar karte hain???just how can u do this???
Samrat is left without a word hearing her...but one thing he surely realized...that she still cares for him very much.
S: I am...I am sorry chashmish...main bhool gaya tha ki koi mujhse bahut zyaada pyaar karta hai...
samrat's words leave gunjan still...she is held back with what he said...that seemed actually so true...she still cared for him the most. Unable to bear his questioning eyes anymore...gunjan moves her gaze down in embarrasement...while samrat still looked at her...
G:mera matlab woh nahin tha...main tumhari mom ke bare mein baat kar rahi thi...
S:hmmmm I know...tum kis ke bare mein baat kar rahi thi...
Only then both of them hear the crowd hooting ashwini's name...she was participating in the race.
G:ashwini!!! ashwini is race mein...samrat...samrat pls kuch karo...pls samrat agar ashwini ko kuch ho gaya to main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahin kar paungi...pls use roko samrat...
Samrat cud clearly see how tensed gunjan is...but he knew there was no way to stop ashwini...now he had only one option...TO PARTICIPATE IN THE RACE!
S(holding gunjan from her shoulders):chahsmishhh...do u trust me???
gunjan is left dumbstruck hearing his words...what did he ask...she had nothing to say...
S:bolo chashmish do u trust me???
She is still too numb to answer this question of his...after a few moments of looking deep into his eyes...gunjan slightly nods her head...
S:to bas...I promise ash ko kuch nahin hoga...she ll be fine...tum yahin ruko...main use lekar aata hoon.
Saying so samrat leaves towards the racing track...
G:(shocked)samrat!!! Samrat meri baat suno...samraaat plsss ruko...samraaat'.!!
The race begins...both ashwini and samrat start racing their bikes...gunjan sees ashwini speeding towards the end of the cliff while samrat chased her and tried to stop her. Now gunjan was becoming more n more worried...she cud easily see two of her most loved persons going away from her...suddenly the entire scene of the accident began to rotate in gunjan's mind...she cud absolutely feel the way she felt during the accident...as if...as if shes gonna lose someone very important forever!
On the other hand samrat was finally catching up with ashwini's bike...he tries to stop her...but she pays no heed...now both samrat and ashwini were just a few metres away from the cliff's end...samrat knew he had he had to stop ashwini just then n there only in any way else she will surely end up falling from the cliff...thus samrat tries to overtake ashwini and stops his bike in front of her in order to stop her...
But all of a sudden ashwini loses her control...her bike collides head on with that of samrat...making samrat's bike skid towards the cliff's end...
The scene...and for a moment everything in gunjan's life came to a standstill...suddenly she became oblivious to every other thing around her...what all she cud see was samrat's bike slipping towards the cliff...what all she cud feel for that second was the terror of losing samrat forever..!!
G:samraaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Suddenly while skidding towards the cliff samrat's bike stopped miraculously near the end of the cliff...as if gunjan's voice connected directly to his soul...
Gunjan's heart thudded vigourously against her chest...tears flowing down her cheeks...she runs madly towards samrat...n everyone else as well rush towards samrat's bike...rohan too reaches the place...
R:ash tum pagal ho gayi ho...r u mad???what the hell where u doing...agar...agar samrat sir ko kuch ho jata to...
Ash feels really guilty for what all she did...she has tears in her eyes...
A: I am...I am sorry rohan...I am really sorry...main bahut gusse mein thi rohan...pata nahin mujhe kya hogaya tha...
R: achcha ab jaldi chalo...
Both rohan and ash too rush towards the spot where samrat had fallen.
Samrat injured himself severely...there were deep bruises on his arms and his forehead bled profusely. Reaching near samrat gunjan quickly bends down n takes his head into her lap. His pain was clearly visible in her eyes...and her sobs easily audible to him...
G:(her eyes moist completely)sam...samrat!!
S(in a low tone):relax chashmish...I am ok.
Only then ash and rohan too come near samrat...
A:I am..i am really sorry samrat...agar aaj tumhein kuch ho jata to main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahin kar pati...I am really sorry di...pls mujhe maaf kardo di...plsss...
S:its ok ash...lekin tumhein maafi tabhi milegi jab tum...jab tum ye promise karo ki tum aaj ke baad kabhi aisa kuch nahin karogi...kabhi is race mein participate nahin karogi...
Ash luks towards gunjan with tears in her eyes...
A:I promise di...main aaj ke baad aisa kabhi nahin karungi...I promise...main kabhi phir tum sabko aise pareshan nahin karungi...
Gunjan too has tears in her eyes...she hugs ash tightly and caresses her...while rohan and samrat watch them with a smile on their faces...
R:ab excuse me gals...agar aap dono behenon ka Krishna milap khatam ho gaya ho to hum samrat sir ko andar lekar chalein...
A:ohh god rohan kabhi to kuch sahi bola karo...krishna milap nahin...its bharat milap...
R:haaan haan wohi...waise miss ash tum bhi...meri kamiyan nikalne ke alwa bhi kuch aur kar liya karo...
A:enough rohan...ab samrat sir ko andar lekar chalein...
R:arey maine kab mana kiya hai...chalo...
Now the three of them take samrat under a small camp lyk canopy that was set up near the racing track and help him lie down.
Scene shift:
Making all the arrangements both rohan and ash move out so that gunjan can bandage samrat's wounds. But gunjan is still lost...she hadn't yet come over of what all happened during the race...what if samrat wud have fallen off the cliff...what if something had happened to him...
S:chashmish....
G:(coming out of her thoughts suddenly) haan...
S:chashmish main ab theek hoon...relax.
Hearing samrat's words gunjan looks at him with tears in her eyes but doesn't say even a word...she slowly picks up the first aid box and moves closer to him.
But she realizes that for her to dress his wounds he wud have to remove his shirt...
G:sam..samrat...tumhari...shirt.
Samrat is easily able to sense her discomfort...but without saying a word he slowly tries to remove his shirt. but much before he cud actually do so...he winces in pain...his wounds are too deep for him to even move his arm. Seeing him in pain...gunjan suddenly stops him from trying to remove it on his own...
G:main help kar deti hoon...
S:its ok chashmish ill manage...main khud karloonga...
G:khud karoge to..to aur dard hoga...rehne do main kar deti hoon...
Gunjan carefully rests his hand and begins to unbutton his shirt...now she was so close to samrat that she cud actually feel his breaths falling on her lips. Samrat is just looking at her with unblinked eyes...while she moves down her gaze n pretends to look away to distract herself...
Unbuttoning his shirt gunjan carefully tries to remove his shirt...so as to cause minimum pain to him...
Removing his shirt gunjan is left shocked to see the wound on his shoulder'it was a very deep and a dirty cut...gunjan's eyes are brim with tears seeing him lyk this...
But still trying to control her feelings she takes out the antiseptic dipped cotton swab from the first aid box and begins to clean his wound with it...
S:aahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
Gunjan's hands shake seeing his pain...she cant do this...she just cant...samrat's wounds somehow again and again realized her of the pain she had given him in the past three years...it wasn't just his physical bruises that made gunjan's heart sink but the internal wounds from which samrat suffered as she abondonbed him in the worst phase of his lyf...
The cotton swab drops from gunjan's hands and she breaks completely. her head resting on samrat's shoulder and her eyes shedding incessant tears'
G:tum hamesha aisa kyun karte ho samrat...kyun hamesha har dard...har taqleef bina kisi shikayat ke sah lete ho...kyun mujhe nahin roka jab main tumhein itna dard de rahi thi...kyun mujhe jane diya samrat...kyun mujhe nahin roka...
Samrat is shocked to see gunjan lyk this...he turns around towards her...he slowly lifts her face keeping a hand under her chin and wipes her tear...
G:kyun kiya aise samrat...kyun kiya...kyun chup chaap is pain ko sahte rahe...kyun mujhe kabhi saza nahin di...kyunn...
S:nahin chashmish...ismein tumhari koi galti nahin thi...shayad destiny ko yehi manzoor tha...tumne jo bhi kiya sirf isliye kiya kyunki tum nupur se bahut pyaar karti ho...
But believe me chashmish main kabhi nupur ko nuksaan nahin pahunchana chahta tha...jo bhi hua woh mere haath mein nahin tha...
G:main janti hoon samrat...mayank bhi hamesha se mujhe yehi samjhata tha...par shayad main hi kabhi samajh nahin payi..aur tumein aaj tak saza deti rahi...
S:sirf mujhe nahin chashmish...apne aap ko bhi...main janta hoon chashmish mujhse door rahna tumhare liye bhi utna hi mushkil tha jitna mere liye...mujhe maaf kardo chashmish...pls mujhe maaf kardo...meri ek galati ki wajah se teen sal tumhein nupur ke bina rahna pada'achcha hota ki us din nupur ki jagah...mere saath woh sab ho jata...
Gunjan is shocked to hear what he said...
G: samrat tum ye kya kah rahe ho...us din jo bhi hua woh sab kismet ke haath mein tha...aur agar main di ke bina nahin jee sakti..to main...main tumhare bina bhi nahin jee sakti...maine jhooth kaha tha ki jeeju ke alawa meri lyf mein aur koi important nahin hai...agar aaj tumhein kuch ho jata to main...main mar jati samrat...main mar jati...
Hearing her words samrat keeps his finger on her lips...and gunjan...she just breaks herself into his arms...
G:I...I love u samrat...i love u...pls mujhe chod kar ab kabhi mat jana...plssssssss..
S:(carrasing her hair)ab hum kabhi alag nahin honge chashmish...kabhi nahin...I love u chashmish...I love u...
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