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Kools reporting from base : BOREDOM increases in PR . Guys PR has become BORING . Todays commentary will be different , and I want u all to chip in more than usual and give a thumbs down sign in ur posts so CVS sit up and take notice and stop destroying this lovely serial as if they have secret DUSHMANI with EKta. .
ARMAN
Guys , guys what is left of ARMAN except a sufi song blaring in the background and the PAvitra Rishta title song ? Nothing ! Arre in that Pee Loon song Emraan Hashmi's character as SHOAIB is so passionate , what is milk sop Manav who shuts his mouth when Savita tells him compared to him , does that song suit him ? Ha ? Who told u creatives that by putting passionate background songs hero becomes passionate ?
Archana...........as goofy as ever , STILL weak in front of Manju , wears blouses unsuitable for her age to denote nunhood . I heard the actress thought she was setting trends ............I wud seriously advise her to fight with the creatives to give her a look that makes her look her age ! Why make her look 5 years older when ALL heroines in Hindi films are trying to look younger than their age all the time ? And what is the actress happy about ? She has immense beauty and even this Amma look makes her look so lovely , can u imagine what a heartthrob she will be when she is dressed NORMALLY and like her AGE ?
Who is that MUHFAT GOLDEN HEARTED LADY In hospital who pays for Manav's lunches and demands special khana as if its a hotel not a hospital ? R CVS mad ? Each Patient gets his diet according to his DOctors orders , there is no common diet in hospitals !
If Manav had a BRAIN SURGERY how can he go home in two days ?He was hit on the head wasnt he ?
Why weren't Vandu , Ajit and Girish informed ? Whats this NONSENSE CVS have come up with to show ARMAN moments ? KUCH AUR NAHI MILA KYA , SIRF HOSPITAL MILA ? ARRE EVEN KIDS HAVE BETTER IMAGINATION YAARS !
And what moments ? Feeding ?With spoon ? He was sitting up , talking , he cudnt eat is it ? And buttoning and unbuttoning his shirt and feeling shy at seeing him in BANYAN ? When will this idiotic serial go BEYOND THE BANYAN ? Will Archana see Manav beyond the Banyan or no ? 😆😆😆😆😆😆 Some special muhurath the CVS r searching KYA for the moment ?
SULO MANJU TRACK
Another irritating track . May I ask WHY Sulochana is this much in love with Manju ? I have never seen Manju being decently civil to her even once , so WHY ???? Its not as if Vinod is the ONLY CHILD ! Any logic there ? She is going on taking responsibilities on her asthmatic chest and setting a stupid example of what a 'GOOD MOTHER IN LAW" shud IDEALLY BE . WHO says being a good saas is like this ? Is becoming a servant of Bahubeing a good SAAS ? No other ideas for CVS ? APNA GHAR BHAR CHOD KAR BAHU KE GHAR MEIN PADE RAHNA KOUNSI ACHI BAAT HAI ? Bahu went of her own accord , let her manage !
How long will CVS show this pampering of Manju ? Is it as endless as the boredom of this serial ?Is there any character who will slap Sulochna [ not Manju] please ? Manju has a flat , husband , a second kid , everything AFFTER DESTROYING ARCHUS MARRAIGE ? To Top it a SAAS who loves her more than her daughter ARCHU who needs her the most at this point ? The most SUKHI character in this serial is Manju thanx to CVS !
Manju shud not have pettily told Sulo I brought pizza and PAV BHAJI for PUNNI ALONE . She shud have gone one step further and EATEN it in front of SULO without offering it to her , showing her the pizza slice and PAV . There is a LIMIT to taking insults as THIICK SKINNEDLY as SULO does and ARCHU does from MANJU .😡😡😡😡
I request CVS to show ALL 3 sisters joining the BUSINESS with DHARMU SATISH and looking after their parents and severing relationship with Manju and NOT bending EVEN FOR PUNNI . TRPS will increase , SHOW TOUGHNESS . PROPER TOUGHNESS . This track will be worth it if Manju goes away from Sulos heart forever and NEVER regains her place till the end of the serial . EVER .
VARSHA BHAVNA BOREDOM
Varsha BHAVNA SATISH have no story left . Satish enters through doors in the evening and smiles bas . BHavna and Varsha who have NOTHING to do except fight over the remote of the TV , the KITCHEN and MOHANRAOS MEDS when nothing else is there literally WASTE the reels shot on them . Varsha who was such a tough , exciting character now comes across as sPOILT , ARROGANT and USELESS . Someone rightly asked that day that how come Dharmu chose an emotional nOVICE like Archu instead of experienced good at job VArsha , his partners WIFE in this business ?
The latest is Varsha 'IS NOT READY FOR BACHCHA " ............may i know WHAT she is ever ready for ? She was not ready for marraige , then consummation , then an amicable solution to her SAAS 's problems , now , a BACHCHA . What is this girl ready for ?
Dharmu Vaishu Marraige
Seems Sukhi . But boring . Today Dharmu was , inspite of being newly married , with laptop in bed [ ok that too i understand] but later both talked like a twenty year old marraige wallah couple and slept with blanket upto their chin ..........no attempt at AHEM or ROMANCE . ARRE they r NEWLY MARRIED for gods sake CVS .
Dharmu is ok but UPTIGHT , and all he does is constantly tells Manav I DO UR IZZAT BUT IM UPSET .I DO UR IZZAT BUT IM UPSET . WATZ THIS ?Will Story move forward ?Last one month we r seeing SAME dialogue .
Thank goodness Vaishu wore a nightgown while sleeping AND removed her jewellery and make up . What a RELIEF .
AJIT VANDU MARRAIGE
THE BEST . AJIt did ALL that Manav the lead NEVER did in his marraige . He fired his mom , raised his hand on the evil woman , threatened her with police complaint , showed no remorse when she left the house and REFUSED to call her back when his stupid BAKRI WIFE suggested it . I feel like blowing this villain turned hero kisses with RELIEF at some SANITY shown in this show . Not just that , the first thing he did after his job is deciding to let Vandu go to college to complete her degree as he took it away from her . What a change , what repentance ! No sex , romance shown but introspection of this character is enough ! It is THIS RISHTA that is the true PAVITRA RISHTA in this serial ...............ARMAN is a most STUPID RISHTA thanks to creatives .
As far as Vandu goes , I still demand a psychiatrist for her .First she stayed put in the marraige due to marital rape now after getting BURNT by her saas she wants that woman in the house .
Shravani SAVITA DAMO
Shravani track has dragged too much YET CVsNOT coming to their senses . To top it They may plonk the Jaywant Dude on Archu ....today we saw Manav talking about JEALOUSY . Its gonna be a Pathetic track , plzzz keep it only restricted to PROFESSIONAL FRAUD . Shravni hates giving Sachu to Archu . Archu STILL doesnt get it and takes opportunity of becoming MAA .......on road , train , everywhere ...why ?????? No KAAM DHANDA or what ?And thats what i ask ..this MAA BETI ...SULO ARCHU seem to LIKE HUMILATION !
Send Shravni to States
Make her die in accident
Send her in cOMA
Marry her off to another dude
Best is , Let her walk out of the house with hER BABY .
GET HER OUT OF THAT HOUSE PLZZ . ADVANCE THE STORY ! AAGE BADHO ! If Vandu can have education again why not Shravni ?
Savita needs sumone to tell her that if Archu Manav consummate , she can have BABIES ! Let SHRAVNI GO !
Damo is the one character who is CONSISTENT in the serial .Same DRUNKARD, SAME ROOTING FOR ARCHU AS FAV BAHU , SAME BAPPA KI MARZI DIALOGUES . GOOD , at least sumone is CONSISTENT .
Archu shud get PREGNANT
MORAL RECTITUDE took Archu away from Manav .Had she nOT listened to her saas like a holy bahu in those fifteen days and consummated secretly with Manav , her VALUE wud have increased .The PRICE she paid for her holiness and VIRGINITY was her marraige altogether .PRe MARITAL sEX and as some say , discarding shame , gave Shravni everything ..........Manav , doting saas , and a family AND a BABY . So here is a suggestion for bringing ARMAN close in case CVS r depleted thoroughly .........
Show ARchu becoming JHANSI KI RANI and putting Prakash in jail for this HAMLA on Manav . Show a month of Jaywant doing fraud , chalega . Then Prakash comes out and decides to RAPE Archu . He calls Archu falsely telling her Manav is waiting for her or something in a lonely BARN near Dombivli . Ajit overhears this and rushes to tell Manav while foolish Archu GOES , her red light experience taught her NOTHING as so do other experiences dont affect her .
Scene goes like this ............[ Guys it turned out COMIC}😆
Archu enters the barn looking beautiful and goofy in mango colored sari and Amma blouse attire saying '' Manav ? Tum Kaha ho Manav ? Manav ? Mujhe idhar kyu bulaya ?
Just then a voice speaks from the darkness .........Manav ne nahi , MAINE BULAYA JANEMAN .
Light falls on Meanie Prakash , sleazily chewing a BEEDI .
Archu stares at him , shocked , angry ." TUm ! Yeh Kya mazaak hai ! Mujhe is tarah idhar bulaane ka matlab ? "
'' Woh Tumhe Abhi samjha deta hoon Janeman !' says Meanie Prakash , taking a flask out of his pocket and taking a deep, satisfied swill . "Yeh SAMJA DENEWAALI BAAT HAI , TUMHE IS MEIN KOI TAJURBA NAHI ."
" Kya !' Archu says , goofy as ever , even in Anger . " Kounsi Baat ? KIS BAAT Ke baare mein bol rahe ho tum ? "
Meanie Prakash throws his flask away after a second swill and laughs heartily . He comes near Archu and runs a sleazy finger on her lovely forehead and cheek and comes to the throat and stops . " SAmjhaata hoon na Janeman " he says sleazily " Itni bhi kya jaldi hai , ha ?'
"Prakash ! " Screams Archu in fury . She furiously tries to dislodge his finger from her throat with both her nazuk hands but Prakash cackles , embedding it deeply in her skin and POKING her . " Mujhe yeh BILKUL Pasand nahi Prakash ! "
" Aur Mujhe YEH pasand nahi' says Meanie Prakash , fingering her Amma Blouse neck . " Yeh Kya roj Amma Banke office mein aati ho ? Yeh Sundarta Dhakne ke liye nahi , Dikhane kje liye hai Madam ! Har Roj aap hum WORKERS PAR ANYAY Karti rahi Yeh Amma Blouse Pehenkar Par Ab nahi . ............' And Meanie Prakash tears the blouse at the shoulders till her elbow .........TARRRRRRRR . Then , before she recovers from her SHOCK he tears it at her back .IN ONE SHOT . EXPERTLY .😉
Nahiiii ! says Archu and runs . Meanie Prakash runs after her and catches her hair and shakes it a little .
Will u ever wear it again ? He asks furiously . This Amma blouse ? Will u do such ZULUM on us WORKERS ?
Chod Do Kameene! Meri sundarta sirf Manav ke liye hai !
Acha ? Hai kya us mechanic me jo mujh mein nahi ?If u like mechanics so much , Why not me huh ? CMon now Be a good gal and let me sniff ur hair . Im very very good at guessing shampoos , u 'll be surprised , says Meanie Prakash and shakes her hair a little more . Archu squeals .
Just then Bhagwan enters , throwing the barn door open . He then beats Meanie Prakash to a pulp and Meanie Prakash runs away , hopping into the same rickshaw parked outside tby which Bhagwan had come to this barn in the suburbs . So now Bhagwan has no rick to go and he rushes to look at Archu who is cowering in a corner .
Archana...he says hesitatingly .
Manav ! Says Archana trembling and clings to him . She starts sobbing and sobbing and Manavs chest becomes wet with her tears . He puts hand on her back to console her only to find it has torn too in the BHAG DOUD . He hesitatingly touches her soft , fair back .
Archu looks at him with an upturned , wet eyed face , with widened , startled eyes . They have an eyelocking moment and Bhagwan hurriedly removes hand from back and puts it on shoulder to find even that is open and torn . [ Meanie Praklash has done his job Very Well.]
Archu starts sobbing again so Manav strokes her bare shoulder with pure intentions .
Chup Ho jao Archna . Main tumhe rote hue nahi Dekh Sakta ! says Manav emotionally .
Manav woh Badmash woh cheenne ja raha tha jo maine tumhare liye bacha ke rakha tha Manav ! says Archu , weeping .
Manav is stirred by this valiant declaration . 'Archana....Tum ....'
"Bolne do Manav , Mujjhe Bolne do ! Yeh Tan , Yeh kanwarapan kiske lye Manav ?Tumhare liye to tha ! AAj log uspar bhi daaka daalne lage !'
Nahi Archna Chup ho jao ...says Manav , stroking her shoulder even more . [ He rather likes it now .]
Archna flings herself in his arms and sobs , sobs . " Agar tum na aate to Manav ? Ha ?'
" Aisa mat Sochna Archna' says Manav , now stroking her fair back faster and faster .
'' Lekin aisa ho sakta tha na Manav ? Shayad tum nahi aate aur woh Prakash mujhe nigal jaata ! Nahi Manav ! Issse pehle ki koi yeh bhi mujhse cheen le , Tum use chhen lo Manav ! Waise bhi ye haq tumhara hi hai !
"Archana !' says Manav in a trembling voice , turned on .😃
"Kuch mat boliye Manav ! Kuch mat boliye ! Zindagi ne hume kya diya Manav ? Meri Pavitrata ka muje yeh silaah diya ! AAj thoda Apavitra hone ka din aaya hai Manav ! Issse pehle ki tumhaari Archna ko koi Prakash nigal jaaye aap hi use apne aap mein sama lo Manav ! Sama loge apni Archna ko ?
Archna ! Says Manav , now all defences down .
Manav ! Mere Bhagwan ! Main apne aap ko aapko soupna chahti hoon !
Manav buries his face in Archnas hair and both sleep in the barn hay . Light dims . Pavitra Rishtaaaaaa music starts in background .😃😃😃😃😃
When two months later Archana faints on Shravnis wedding day in the mandap just before the wedding and is diagnoised pregnant by a doctor present , Damodar says , unperturbed , as others looked shocked
'' Yeh Bappa ki Marzi hai Savita . Jo Baat Shaadi karne ke baad na hui woh Shaadi ke bina hui .Wah re Bappa teri kartoot ! Dekha Savita ? VIRGINITY ne toda lekin PREGNANCY ne JODA !
Savita nodded , open mouthed . When bahus become pregnant wIthout asking her , decision making goes OUT of her hands .
Needless to say , Archu sits in the wedding besides Manav instead of Shravani .😃😃😃
Kools signing off for the day . Like button if u liked , comments if u dont .Sorry for delay but Im having some problems this week . CIAO and enjoy 😃
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