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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
And Manav da bacha,he doesnt wanna ask archu to come back in his life by himself,doesnt want to tell shravni to leave by himself - he wants the gals to do all the wrk.Look at all of us working soo hard for this guy now,writing sooo much

he beats up people , but does't work on his marriage . After Sachin 's death the go-getter manav is lost.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
Kool yaar tu sab kuchh karti hai? Tujhe kya nahi aata? Awesome dawsome commentary...⭐️
Loved Almost rape scene between Prakash-Archu😈
Kools Archu's Amma ishtyle blouse is almost backless so much easy to tear yaar 😉 Soooooo Inviting 😆 For foul play 😛
Loved Consoling and almost making love scene between ArMan...❤️😍
Man you gave me goosebumps just reading it...☺️
Stupendous write up
Kya baat kya baat kya baat Mithun Duh Ishtyle me...👏
Keep it coming love...🤗
CVS learn something from our cewl Kools and get with the programm guys...Wake up and smell some Chai-Coffee 🤡
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
Varsha I wud LOVE to see Manav in this predicament . He dumped Archu coz she was a virgin and unconsummated wife for an unwed prego gal .He will dump Shravni , the already badnaam one for Archu who is YET to become badnaam .In shravnis case bacha has already ben born , In Archus case Bacha is yet to come so he can 'SAVE"😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Kool I missed you for the last two days. Excellent commentary. Boredom continues in PR. I concur. I am bored to death. Yesterday and today were the pinnacle of boredom. Love your ideas and suggestions for that novice and unintelligent Shibu. Some kids can do a better job to PR. Ekta Kapoor needs to fire her immediately. PR has become a rushed show with roundabout and senseless tracks.
I find Manju, Rasika, Sulo, Bhavna dull and pitiful. I use to admire Varsha until Shibu destroyed her too. Now she is rude, overconfident and dull. Satish was such a nice character but now he makes fleeting appearances to solve saas-bahu problems and listen to Dharmesh.😭
I dislike Dharmesh very much. Vaishu is still to be ruined by Shibu dear but do not be afraid, she won't disappoint us. 😡😡
Savita is the devil's advocate and Shravani, no comments. She has overstayed her pesence.
I like Damodar. As you said, very consistent character.
Kool, you have not read the upcoming track is that Archana and her family will loose their home and move in with Manju? Recession in Ekta-land🤣🤣😆😆
Kools reporting from base : BOREDOM increases in PR 👏👏👏
. Guys PR has become BORING . Todays commentary will be different , and I want u all to chip in more than usual and give a thumbs down sign in ur posts so CVS sit up and take notice and stop destroying this lovely serial as if they have secret DUSHMANI with EKta. (You still have doubts that PR is not totally destroyed?)😲😆 .
ARMAN
Guys , guys what is left of ARMAN except a sufi song blaring in the background and the PAvitra Rishta title song ? Nothing ! Arre in that Pee Loon song Emraan Hashmi's character as SHOAIB is so passionate , what is milk sop Manav who shuts his mouth when Savita tells him compared to him , does that song suit him ? Ha ? Who told u creatives that by putting passionate background songs hero becomes passionate ? (I try to fast forward the nonsense, they already made him passionless the day savita told them no SR and then the divorce. )
Archana...........as goofy as ever , STILL weak in front of Manju , wears blouses unsuitable for her age to denote nunhood . I heard the actress thought she was setting trends ............I wud seriously advise her to fight with the creatives to give her a look that makes her look her age ! Why make her look 5 years older when ALL heroines in Hindi films are trying to look younger than their age all the time ? And what is the actress happy about ? She has immense beauty and even this Amma look makes her look so lovely , can u imagine what a heartthrob she will be when she is dressed NORMALLY and like her AGE ?👏👏👏👏👏 (I like Ankita a lot but totally disagree with that trendsetter statement, she needs a reality check, she does look 5 years older with that hairstyle and dresses)
Who is that MUHFAT GOLDEN HEARTED LADY In hospital who pays for Manav's lunches and demands special khana as if its a hotel not a hospital ? R CVS mad ? Each Patient gets his diet according to his DOctors orders , there is no common diet in hospitals ! (She is Shibu dear way of showing more Arman moments, since Manav said he will visit her and she pleaded with him to bring Archana)😡 These tracks are so infantile and unintelligent that I feel ashamed of myself for watching PR.
If Manav had a BRAIN SURGERY how can he go home in two days ?He was hit on the head wasnt he ? (Ask the whiz kid Shibu dear. I have no respect for her, she is a dunce and must be related to Balaji just like Pooja.)
Why weren't Vandu , Ajit and Girish informed ? Whats this NONSENSE CVS have come up with to show ARMAN moments ? KUCH AUR NAHI MILA KYA , SIRF HOSPITAL MILA ? ARRE EVEN KIDS HAVE BETTER IMAGINATION YAARS ! 😆😆😆
And what moments ? Feeding ?With spoon ? He was sitting up , talking , he cudnt eat is it ? And buttoning and unbuttoning his shirt and feeling shy at seeing him in BANYAN ? When will this idiotic serial go BEYOND THE BANYAN ? Will Archana see Manav beyond the Banyan or no ? 😆😆😆😆😆😆 Some special muhurath the CVS r searching KYA for the moment ? (Kool Manav and Archana scenes have become a blur for me.) I use to be so excited about this couple until divorce.
I request CVS to show ALL 3 sisters joining the BUSINESS with DHARMU SATISH and looking after their parents and severing relationship with Manju and NOT bending EVEN FOR PUNNI . TRPS will increase , SHOW TOUGHNESS . PROPER TOUGHNESS . This track will be worth it if Manju goes away from Sulos heart forever and NEVER regains her place till the end of the serial . EVER .👏👏
VARSHA BHAVNA BOREDOM
Varsha BHAVNA SATISH have no story left . Satish enters through doors in the evening and smiles bas . BHavna and Varsha who have NOTHING to do except fight over the remote of the TV , the KITCHEN and MOHANRAOS MEDS when nothing else is there literally WASTE the reels shot on them . Varsha who was such a tough , exciting character now comes across as sPOILT , ARROGANT and USELESS . Someone rightly asked that day that how come Dharmu chose an emotional nOVICE like Archu instead of experienced good at job VArsha , his partners WIFE in this business ?(👏👏👏)
The latest is Varsha 'IS NOT READY FOR BACHCHA " ............may i know WHAT she is ever ready for ? She was not ready for marraige , then consummation , then an amicable solution to her SAAS 's problems , now , a BACHCHA . (What nonsense yaar) What is this girl ready for ?
Dharmu Vaishu Marraige
Seems Sukhi . But boring . Today Dharmu was , inspite of being newly married , with laptop in bed [ ok that too i understand] but later both talked like a twenty year old marraige wallah couple and slept with blanket upto their chin 🤣🤣🤣..........no attempt at AHEM or ROMANCE . ARRE they r NEWLY MARRIED for gods sake CVS .😆😆😆
Dharmu is ok but UPTIGHT , and all he does is constantly tells Manav I DO UR IZZAT BUT IM UPSET .I DO UR IZZAT BUT IM UPSET . WATZ THIS ?Will Story move forward ?Last one month we r seeing SAME dialogue .
Thank goodness Vaishu wore a nightgown while sleeping AND removed her jewellery and make up . What a RELIEF .😆😆😆😆
AJIT VANDU MARRAIGE
THE BEST . AJIt did ALL that Manav the lead NEVER did in his marraige . He fired his mom , raised his hand on the evil woman , threatened her with police complaint , showed no remorse when she left the house and REFUSED to call her back when his stupid BAKRI WIFE suggested it . I feel like blowing this villain turned hero kisses with RELIEF at some SANITY shown in this show . Not just that , the first thing he did after his job is deciding to let Vandu go to college to complete her degree as he took it away from her . What a change , what repentance ! No sex , romance shown but introspection of this character is enough ! It is THIS RISHTA that is the true PAVITRA RISHTA in this serial ...............ARMAN is a most STUPID RISHTA thanks to creatives .👏👏👏👏
As far as Vandu goes , I still demand a psychiatrist for her .First she stayed put in the marraige due to marital rape now after getting BURNT by her saas she wants that woman in the house . (Shibu is showing these ill treated girls still longing for their saas😡😡😡) She must be some abused person. Very sick and sad.
Send Shravni to States (Kool I just need her absence)
Damo is the one character who is CONSISTENT in the serial .Same DRUNKARD, SAME ROOTING FOR ARCHU AS FAV BAHU , SAME BAPPA KI MARZI DIALOGUES . GOOD , at least sumone is CONSISTENT .👏👏👏
Archu shud get PREGNANT
MORAL RECTITUDE took Archu away from Manav .Had she nOT listened to her saas like a holy bahu in those fifteen days and consummated secretly with Manav , her VALUE wud have increased .The PRICE she paid for her holiness and VIRGINITY was her marraige altogether .PRe MARITAL sEX and as some say , discarding shame , gave Shravni everything ..........Manav , doting saas , and a family AND a BABY . So here is a suggestion for bringing ARMAN close in case CVS r depleted thoroughly .........
Show ARchu becoming JHANSI KI RANI and putting Prakash in jail for this HAMLA on Manav . Show a month of Jaywant doing fraud , chalega . Then Prakash comes out and decides to RAPE Archu . He calls Archu falsely telling her Manav is waiting for her or something in a lonely BARN near Dombivli . Ajit overhears this and rushes to tell Manav while foolish Archu GOES , her red light experience taught her NOTHING as so do other experiences dont affect her .
Scene goes like this ............[ Guys it turned out COMIC}😆
🤣🤣🤣😆😆😆 Shibu has to be fired for this to happen.😆😆 Hilarious
Archu enters the barn looking beautiful and goofy in mango colored sari and Amma blouse attire saying '' Manav ? Tum Kaha ho Manav ? Manav ? Mujhe idhar kyu bulaya ?
Just then a voice speaks from the darkness .........Manav ne nahi , MAINE BULAYA JANEMAN .
Light falls on Meanie Prakash , sleazily chewing a BEEDI .
Archu stares at him , shocked , angry ." TUm ! Yeh Kya mazaak hai ! Mujhe is tarah idhar bulaane ka matlab ? "
'' Woh Tumhe Abhi samjha deta hoon Janeman !' says Meanie Prakash , taking a flask out of his pocket and taking a deep, satisfied swill . "Yeh SAMJA DENEWAALI BAAT HAI , TUMHE IS MEIN KOI TAJURBA NAHI ."
" Kya !' Archu says , goofy as ever , even in Anger . " Kounsi Baat ? KIS BAAT Ke baare mein bol rahe ho tum ? "
Meanie Prakash throws his flask away after a second swill and laughs heartily . He comes near Archu and runs a sleazy finger on her lovely forehead and cheek and comes to the throat and stops . " SAmjhaata hoon na Janeman " he says sleazily " Itni bhi kya jaldi hai , ha ?'
Prakash ! Screams Archu in fury . She furiously tries to dislodge his finger from her throat with both her nazuk hands but Prakash cackles , embedding it deeply in her skin and POKING her . " Mujhe yeh BILKUL Pasand nahi Prakash ! "
" Aur Mujhe YEH pasand nahi' says Meanie Prakash , fingering her Amma Blouse neck . " Yeh Kya roj Amma Banke office mein aati ho ? Yeh Sundarta Dhakne ke liye nahi , Dikhane kje liye hai Madam ! Har Roj aap hum WORKERS PAR ANYAY Karti rahi Yeh Amma Blouse Pehenkar Par Ab nahi . ............' And Meanie Prakash tears the blouse at the shoulders till her elbow .........TARRRRRRRR . Then , before she recovers from her SHOCK he tears it at her back .IN ONE SHOT .
Nahiiii ! says Archu and runs . Meanie Prakah runs after her and catches her hair and shakes it a little .
Will u ever wear it again ? He asks furiously . This Amma blouse ? Will u do such ZULUM on us WORKERS ?
Chod Do Kameene! Meri sundarta sirf Manav ke liye hai !
Acha ? Hai kya us mechanic me jo mujh mein nahi ?If u like mechanics so much , Why not me huh ? CMon now Be a good gal and let me sniff ur hair . Im very very good at guessing shampoos , ull be surprised , says Meanie Prakash and shakes her hair a little more . Archu squeals .
Just then Bhagwan enters , throwing the barn door open . He then beats Meanie Prakash to a pulp and Meanie Prakash runs away , hopping into the same rickshaw parked outside tby which Bhagwan had come to this barn in the suburbs . So now Bhagwan has no rick to go and he rushes to look at Archu who is cowering in a corner .
Archana...he says hesitatingly .
Manav ! Says Archana trembling and clings to him . She starts sobbing and sobbing and Manavs chest becomes wet with her tears . He puts hand on her back to console her only to find it has torn too in the BHAG DOUD . He hesitatingly touches her soft , fair back .
Archu looks at him with an upturned , wet eyed face , with widened , startled eyes . They have an eyelocking moment and Bhagwan hurriedly removes hand from back and puts it on shoulder to find even that is open and torn . [ Meanie Praklash has done his job Very Well.]
Archu starts sobbing again so Manav strokes her bare shoulder with pure intentions .
Chup Ho jao Archna . Main tumhe rote hue nahi Dekh Sakta ! says Manav emotionally .
Manav woh Badmash woh cheenne ja raha tha jo maine tumhare liye bacha ke rakha tha Manav ! says Archu , weeping .
Manav is stirred by this valiant declaration . 'Archana....Tum ....'
"Bolne do Manav , Mujjhe Bolne do ! Yeh Tan , Yeh kanwarapan kiske lye Manav ?Tumhare liye to tha ! AAj log uspar bhi daaka daalne lage !'
Nahi Archna Chup ho jao ...says Manav , stroking her shoulder even more . [ He rather likes it now .]
Archna flings herself in his arms and sobs , sobs . " Agar tum na aate to Manav ? Ha ?'
" Aisa mat Sochna Archna' says Manav , now stroking her fair back .
'' Lekin aisa ho sakta tha na Manav ? Shayad tum nahi aate aur woh Prakash mujhe nigal jaata ! Nahi Manav ! Issse pehle ki koi yeh bhi mujhse cheen le , Tum use chhen lo Manav ! Waise bhi ye haq tumhara hi hai !
"Archana !' says Manav in a trembling voice , turned on .😃
"Kuch mat boliye Manav ! Kuch mat boliye ! Zindagi ne hume kya diya Manav ? Meri Pavitrata ka muje yeh silaah diya ! AAj thoda Apavitra hone ka din aaya hai Manav ! Issse pehle ki tumhaari Archna ko koi Prakash nigal jaaye aap hi use apne aap mein sama lo Manav ! Sama loge apni Archna ko ?
Archna ! Says Manav , now all defences down .
Manav ! Mere Bhagwan ! Main apne aap ko aapko soupna chahti hoon !
Manav buries his face in Archnas hair and both sleep in the barn hay . Light dims .
When two months later Archana faints on Shravnis wedding day in the mandap just before the wedding and is diagnoised pregnant by a doctor present , Damodar says , unperturbed as others looked shocked
'' Yeh Bappa ki Marzi hai Savita . Jo Baat Shaadi karne ke baad na hui woh Shaadi ke bina hui .Wah re Bappa teri kartoot ! Dekha Savita ? VIRGINITY ne toda lekin PREGNANCY ne JODA !
Savita nodded , open mouthed . When bahus become pregnant wIthout assking her , decision making goes OUT of her hands .😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Just now I came on my computer to take a break and got a lovely surprise , Kool' commentry ...
And what a commentry ....👏
I pray to God that some writer out there reads this . Oh for the love of God read this guys ...
It is so true that everything in PR is going towards boredom and it is just not exciting any more . they have a very able cast , a very hot lead couple but the way these writers are wasting all this talent ..It's just unbelievable .
Their fascination with being losers, mahaan , kurbani ka bakras and worst of all being so bloody Pavitra ...it makes me sick .
I don't know what to say Kool, there is nothing to dispute in your commentry . Every thing is perfect , every word, phrase , sentence , full stop and comma....
They need to employ you as the head of the creative team ....
I agree with everything you have said today .. I don't think I will be disputing anything today ....
But you know as well as I do , these fools will do just the opposite of what we are asking for .
It is looking more and more apparant that Jaywant will be Archana's new lead . It will be Dharmesh who will arrange this rishta and convince Archu's family . I don't know how Archu will be convinced but some thing will happen to make her say yes ...probably a kurbaani for manav or her parents ..
Maybe to get her house back or something ridiculous like that ..
Possibility of a new Manav , the new angry , jealous and heart broken Manav ...
Shravani track will continue ...she is not going to go anywhere , believe me she is not .Even today after making a loud and clear confession of his love to Archana , Manav still said ' I love you but this love has no future because of bad luck ...but I feel lucky to be in love with you'.
I don't know why he is telling her this if he does not intends to take this any further ...he knows she is nuts about him ...
Only yesterday he told her ' please stay strangers ...and turned his back and walked away ' , today he is again talking strange ...
As for salochna being stupid ...salochna and Archana are the most stupid peole in PR ...foolish , extremely foolish .
And yes , Varsha's character is very poorly written these days ..
How does satish puts up with her . She sounds arrogant all the time .
Ajit is my ray of sunshine in PR today . Just loved his scene with vandu ....He was fantastic . he is the hero of PR for me , not Manav ....He is doing everything for his wife that Manav should have done ...Still not doing it .
Even after telling her that he loves her and knowing that she loves him ....he still doesn't wants to do anything about it ..
He tells her that he got jealous when he saw Satish standing next to her ...
Not once did this guy thought what Archu felt when he did all that he did with Shravani .... for example his engagement day ..............
What love is he glorifying and talking about .
I don't think this love has been very good for Archana . I wish she was not that much in love with him ....
I hope she takes that woman's advise and starts living for herself ....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I loved the seduction scene ...haha ...
very well written ....
That 'll be the day when Archu asks him to do something like this ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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kools mogga:🤗

hasu hasun pot duklein. aaning hasunk zaina.

maka bhogosh tu. please. please please. mottan angan. tein CVs chi vat lagli.😆😆😆😆😆😆

magir comments and sections highlight kotan tukka. ok?😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tanyaz

I loved the seduction scene ...haha ...

very well written ....
That 'll be the day when Archu asks him to do something like this ...

U know I have purposefully added comic relief to it but on serious basis...........
If they show Prakash running away and Arman embracing , Archna breaking down in his arms and Manav losing control , it wud be fantastic .Imagine the TRPS Tanya . Khoya Khoya in full swing . And th pregnancy shud be diagnoised on Shravnis wedding morning and Archu shud sit in the wedding . Girish shud get fed up and tell his daughter Im taking u to States , Enuf of staying here . Manav shud tell Shravni , Ur alredy badnam and Sachu has already been born but this child can still be saved from being born illegitmate .😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: stillhopeful

kools mogga:🤗

hasu hasun pot duklein. aaning hasunk zaina.

maka bhogosh tu. please. please please. mottan angan. tein CVs chi vat lagli.😆😆😆😆😆😆

magir comments and sections highlight kotan tukka. ok?😃😃😃😃

Ok Mogga . Haav kitle hasle goh while typing .😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG kool your back???? The day I decided to stop watching this show, you decided to come back :(

I just sat here and read through all your comments since I stopped watching the show now. LOVED THEM ALL! Especially this thread. I'm on the train going to work and I am sitting here laughing to myself with your whole 'barn' episode. LOL! That was just too good!

I wish the CV's are reading this and pay attention! I was a loyal PR fan and never failed to miss an episode. But I've completely stopped since 3 weeks back. That must definitely say something! The show is so damn BORING. No progression whatsoever.

Love your work kool. You definitely made my day! :)

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