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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey there galz.....
I have decided to write a new Fan-Fiction on Maneet
I have come up with various ways to start but I can't decide which one to choose so I desperately need your help....
Should I even start a new ff?
Anyways please give me your views.....

These are the ideas I have come up with....I will add more if I come up with any...
1) I should continue Maan and Geet's journey of love from the last episode (6 August episode)

2) The story has moved 2 years ahead, Maan and Geet have separated after Maan finds out about Geet's pregnancy and misunderstands. He doesn't even give her a chance to speak and...
a)thinks that she was cheating him all along
b)finds out later about dev's betrayal and sends DevTara to jail and looks for Geet.

3) Geet has come for an interview to work as Maan's secretary...
NOTE:Geet is not Geet Handa of Hoshiarpur. She is a powerful, independant daughter of Mohinder Handa, owner of Handa Constructions, Khurana Constructions' strong rival who has faced financial difficulties.

4) Maan has confessed his feelings accidentally while arguing with Geet and Geet is dumfounded...She starts crying and he tries to console her and she confesses that she is pregnant and all about her past but doesn't reveal the names....Maan wants to help her but she doesn't agree

5) Geet and Maan are arguing about something. Geet feels weak and has no more energy to argue.She hears Maan scolding her in the background and feels dizzy.She faints and Maan get worried and puts her on the couch and regrets having scolded her so much.He calls the family doctor but she is unavailable so he decides to bring her to the hospital by himself..
He reaches the hospital and calls dadi to reach there too.Doctor checks her and tells him that Geet almost had a miscarriage.He is in deep shock and confusion that HIS Geet was pregnant....

That is all for now....For 2), I have thought of 2 different scenarios. If u are voting for 2),please indicate whether you support a) or b)

Please give me your comments... This is my first ever fan-fic. Please give me your precious feedback...Please get as many people to read this

Please give me all ur views by Friday,13 August so that I can start my ff in the weekend

I need a lot of input so that I can decide which one to write so please please please comment and get people to comment.

Thanks a lot!!!!!!
Love you all....

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: desigurl953

Hey there galz.....
I have decided to write a new Fan-Fiction on Maneet
I have come up with various ways to start but I can't decide which one to choose so I desperately need your help....
Should I even start a new ff?
Anyways please give me your views.....

These are the ideas I have come up with....I will add more if I come up with any...
1) I should continue Maan and Geet's journey of love from the last episode (6 August episode)

2) The story has moved 2 years ahead, Maan and Geet have separated after Maan finds out about Geet's pregnancy and misunderstands. He doesn't even give her a chance to speak and...
a)thinks that she was cheating him all along
b)finds out later about dev's betrayal and sends DevTara to jail and looks for Geet.

3) Geet has come for an interview to work as Maan's secretary...
NOTE:Geet is not Geet Handa of Hoshiarpur. She is a powerful, independant daughter of Mohinder Handa, owner of Handa Constructions, Khurana Constructions' strong rival who has faced financial difficulties.

4) Maan has confessed his feelings accidentally while arguing with Geet and Geet is dumfounded...She starts crying and he tries to console her and she confesses that she is pregnant and all about her past but doesn't reveal the names....Maan wants to help her but she doesn't agree

5) Geet and Maan are arguing about something. Geet feels weak and has no more energy to argue.She hears Maan scolding her in the background and feels dizzy.She faints and Maan get worried and puts her on the couch and regrets having scolded her so much.He calls the family doctor but she is unavailable so he decides to bring her to the hospital by himself..
He reaches the hospital and calls dadi to reach there too.Doctor checks her and tells him that Geet almost had a miscarriage.He is in deep shock and confusion that HIS Geet was pregnant....

That is all for now....For 2), I have thought of 2 different scenarios. If u are voting for 2),please indicate whether you support a) or b)

Please give me your comments... This is my first ever fan-fic. Please give me your precious feedback...Please get as many people to read this

Please give me all ur views by Friday,13 August so that I can start my ff in the weekend

I need a lot of input so that I can decide which one to write so please please please comment and get people to comment.

Thanks a lot!!!!!!
Love you all....



Tumhara dimaag to express train ki tarah chalta hain... 😆 To be frank I like fanfics where Geet is Geet Handa the betrayed in love girl, because it is her experiences in Hoshiarpur which made her the girl she is today..plus that's where Maaneet began, so you should preserve the nostalgia. 😳

I like the scenario where Maan discovers the pregnancy himself...rather than having Geet do 'main baad mein bataaongi' and then be exposed and called a liar. And DevTara going to jail! That's simply awesome. shaayad unki narg ki sazaa thodi reduce ki jaayegi...depends on how many years they are imprisoned. 😃

These are just my views...but in the end do what your heart says. 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey gal Sorry I don't know your name
But I thing you should start the stroy from option 1
However the final choice will be yours
Option 2 (b) is also not that bad either
But which ever story you chaase to write do add me to your PM list
If you choose to write option ! can you please include a scene in which Geet does GUGLI of Miss Risika Rathore
And also Maan punishing Dev and Naintara in his own way first then handing them over to police
Nidhi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#4
Start writing from the 4th option or 2(b)....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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1 all the way and then you could continue and weave the story as you go along

Whatever you enjoy writing..will be great!!

Good luck!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I like option 3😊
Its something different...add me to your PM list when u get started😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: IndigoBlues



Tumhara dimaag to express train ki tarah chalta hain... 😆 To be frank I like fanfics where Geet is Geet Handa the betrayed in love girl, because it is her experiences in Hoshiarpur which made her the girl she is today..plus that's where Maaneet began, so you should preserve the nostalgia. 😳

I like the scenario where Maan discovers the pregnancy himself...rather than having Geet do 'main baad mein bataaongi' and then be exposed and called a liar. And DevTara going to jail! That's simply awesome. shaayad unki narg ki sazaa thodi reduce ki jaayegi...depends on how many years they are imprisoned. 😃

These are just my views...but in the end do what your heart says. 🤗



Thanks for your support and comment... 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer



Sorry I don't know your name


But I thing you should start the stroy from option 1



However the final choice will be yours



Option 2 (b) is also not that bad either



But which ever story you chaase to write do add me to your PM list






If you choose to write option ! can you please include a scene in which Geet does GUGLI of Miss Risika Rathore


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And also Maan punishing Dev and Naintara in his own way first then handing them over to police


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Thanks for the comment
BTW My name is Shaila
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks everyone
sorry for not replying to ur comments seperately as a message pops up saying spamming is not permitted....now what is that about?

Anyways thanks for your valuable comments...Luv ya all...hope to see more comments
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Posted: 15 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: ann65

I think option 2 is good.






2a) or 2b)

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