.: My Heart Beats For you (MN OS) :.

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My Heart Beats For You



I saw him. Yeah, I saw mayank. Is this reality ? Or just simply a nightmare ? Is he here in real ? Well I have got all the answers to my queries quite fast. I am told that he has been shifted here, in Delhi from Dehra and he'll be completing his college here only. No one knows what happened between us about six months ago. I didn't even dare to tell all this to my best of best friends, Gunjan and Samrat.

'No nupur, i liked you but me and Riya had been in a committed relationship for almost six years. You deserve someone better than me.'

'But then why did you said that you loved me ?'

Mayank kept quiet.

'Why the hell mayank..tell me..i want an answer !'

Arghh, it still hurts me a lot. I wasn't able to even share my sorrows with anyone. No one..

Next day in the college was even worst of all. An empty seat beside my seat in a boring history lectures was surely a pain in the neck. He came and sat next to me though there were so many seats empty. At that moment I felt like punching his face and flunk away from that place. Think so he understood what I was feeling at that time. Yet he didn't clarify anything. He tried talking to me, enquiring how I had been after shifting here back again. I neither answered his questions nor I asked how he had been with that Riya as I knew he must had a gala time. But I wanted to ask..wanted to ask about his relationship with Riya. Thought he knew what I was thinking. Without even asking he told

"I and Riya broke up around five and a half months ago."

After listening this statement made by him, I surely wanted an explanation. He further explained.

"She said I wasn't the same after you went. According to her I was behaving indifferently. I don't know why but it looked she was bored from our relationship. So the best thing was to break up."

Should I to be blamed for all this ? Well, why should I ? I have done nothing at all to destroy his life. Feel so sorry for him. But that's life.

As soon as the lecture got over, he dragged me into a corner and asked if I still felt he same I used to some months ago ? I was not able to answer anything. He had held me by my waist. As soon as he touched, a full 100 watts current went through in my whole system. It was interesting to notice that he still had the same effect he used to have before. I was neither able to move nor speak anything. But just then

"Hey you, do you know where is Nupur ?"

The voice was familiar to me. The time I could recognize it he was there. Without even wasting a second I left the arms of mayank and got myself drowned into that of Adhiraj's. He asked me if something was wrong while looking at mayank who was not understanding a bit what was happening. But I just requested Adhiraj to leave the place immediately.

We left but I still remember Mayank's painful eyes full of tears when he came to know that Adhiraj is my fianc. I too wanted to console him as I still love him and will always do but it was too late. Too late. As life and time doesn't wait for anybody.

But still my heart will always and always beat for him !


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyloo Freindzz !

How you all are ? Hope so goodie good !

Anyway this is my kind of 1st One Shot on Mayank-Nupur..

Can say first piece of writing on them as normally write on Armaan-Riddhima Or Armaan-Shilpa ! This OS is similar to the one which i wrote on AR !

I know thoda sad sa hai..but kya karoon this story was revolving in my mind for quite some time..and I wanted to write sumthing tragic for MN, though it's time for party as Rati is bak ! But still..b/w please mujhe maarna mat ki maine Riya ko mayank ki ex bana diya..i wasn't finding anyone else yaar !

Hope you had enjoyed reading it !

Please do comment and press the like button. It'll encourage me to write more !

Thanks !

Cheers !

*radz*

Edited by xxiheartmexx - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Special Messages :

Now time for some special messages ! The best part ! lol..

Chuddy Buddy Pari (..NiyaPari..)

Hi cb ! how are you doing ? Gud na ! tu toh hoti hi wsie guddie gud :P

Lol jokes apart..serious thingy..*main paagal ho gayi hoon..me n serious..hahaha*

Anyway..hope your examzz going off well and tera chem ka exam achcha hua ho..lol..you go to the chem tutz na ! With that loser ! Aaj achchnak se us loser ki yaad aa gayi..so so socha usko bhi thoda famous kar doon..waise bhi he's such a loser, a loser, he's such a such a such a loser.. :P Usko bolna ki tera naam International Newsgroup par aaya aur unhone uski photograph mangi hai..and wahi waali laana..fancy dress waali :P jo tune mujhe dekhayi thi gtalk par :P

Yaar tere jaldi exam khatam ho..we have to do loads of work ! Remember na CC and mujhe tujhe bahut saari baatein batani hain..loads..waiting for you to come back ! Hope we'll meet up soon !

B/w hwz your mum-fever going on ? :P

I'm done with my SM ! Will wait for your comment !

Luv ya

Radz/CB

Vampire aka Bestie Aryan (snazzychamp)

Heyloo Bestie ! New nick..kaisa laga tujhe..do mention in ur comment ! so how are you ? Same ques to you too..uff..main iss ques se itna paagal ho chuki hoon..jab dekho only one question ! but bolo bolo that you are awsum..mera same ques n tera same ans :P anyway..finally ji..i've written sumthing on MN ! Hope you liked it..mention in your comment too..agar nahi achcha laga tab bhi praise my work..you know na I like being appreciated ! :P

Between more to come up for MN..Khushi manao..Rati is bak ! lol..MJHT is now gonna be so awsum ! Bas uss Rohan and Ash ko bhi bahar phek do and unki jagah give us Dodo n Benji..OLD MJHT then would be defo bak ! Waiting for her cumbak ! B/w do you know kya ki has rati made a comebak entry in MJHT on Friday ?

B/w you know what the show off guy aur teri language mein bechara..he's leavin the skool..yay !

Going bak to hell again..lol..zyada ho gaya na..but I'm so happy..issi baat par party de rahin hoon :P ppecha toh chuta usse.. b/w have you watched eclipse ? maine nahi dekhi..isliye going and bying dvd aur mujhe aisha ki bhi dvd chaiye..lol..

Aur..aur kuch nahi hai abhi likhne ko !

So closing my SM !

Want your comment..want your comment and want your comment !

Luv ya

Radz

So these were the Special Messages for some special people !

Hope they all read it soon !

Thanks !

Cheers !

Radz

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hiii My chuddy Buddy..!!!

kaisi hai OMG same old question i knw par wat to do yaar formality 🤣
First of all thnx but no thnx..!!
Thnx isliye i guess 2 reasons hai
1st is that for giving me link so that i cud res and again 1st to comment :)
2nd coz of posting such a wonderful os..!!
Now No thnx coz its in our rules that we must not tell thnx na so 🤣

P.S My bakwaas will be chaalo in middle middle..!!
ok now to part..!!
u knw Radz well i never liked MaYur soo much like i did in ur OS..!!
well i m seriously in love with ur ff..!!
I guess yeh tera Ar waala woh were Armaan and Muskaan are commited us ke jaisa hai..!
But i seriouly love this
And u knw i cud really feel the pain the way u wrote the OS..!

Lolz i loved that 100 watts 🤣 waala line yaar 🤣
Tu na OS bahut accha likhti hai..!!
seriouly love ur Os..!!
tera OS na awesome..!!
Aur ms. riya yaaay She got a gud lesson mayank and she broke up yaay..!!
But bechari suhani agar use pata chala ke Adhiraj use dhoka de raha hai to woh to 🤣
Lolz loved it..!!

Tu bhi na itna accha likhti hai and shuru karti hai par khatam nahi karti hai
and u make us wait like u did in ur FFs 🤣
BTW same pinch!!! mein bhi meine bhi continue nahi kiya bahut din se 🤣
Lolz ab madam ji baaki do ffs kab update karogi?? 🤣🤣
Jaldi kar nahi to mein wait karte karte mar jaongi 🤣

Now reply to ur SM..!!
Lolz me as usual gud..!!
And well i didnt do maths well too :(( time wasnt enuf :((
OMG even i want to tell u soo many things i want to talk soo much with u..!!
Par jab i m on tu nahi hoti and jab tu hoti hai i m not there 😔
I wish we can talk sometime..!!
Mein na7 tak on rahoongi and morning i can try to come for 10-15 min :((
i want to talk to u soon..!!
i have loads to tell u...!!
U knw my MUm fever changed to dad fever..!
Mum is much better than dad..!!
Lolz..!!

Chal i guess Dad is back now..!!
so have to go bye..!!

My msg was longg so reply must also be long k?

Gud..!!

lolz..!

Chal me chalti hoon ab..!

Bye Love Ya

Keep writing more and more..!

ur Chuddy Buddy
~Pari~
Edited by ..NiyaPari.. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Radz 🤗
Aww, this was such a tragic one. 😔
But don't let me bring you down, it was beautifully written. The flow, the story everything was perfect. I could feel both Mayank and Nupur's pain.
Especially in the end.
But this was a beautiful piece. Brilliantly written
Loads of love <3<3
Daania
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Daania-

Radz 🤗

Aww, this was such a tragic one. 😔
But don't let me bring you down, it was beautifully written. The flow, the story everything was perfect. I could feel both Mayank and Nupur's pain.
Especially in the end.
But this was a beautiful piece. Brilliantly written
Loads of love <3<3
Daania



Hey Daania !🤗

aww..thanks yaar !
ya..that was a tragic one !

i feel Mayank-Nupur fit into all the tragic stories..dunno why 😆

Thans so much for appreciating my work !

-Radz
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesomeeeeee os radz loved it altough its was sad bt mondblowing simply loved it thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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👏👏👏👏👏 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 👏👏👏 ⭐️⭐️ 👏 vvvvvv niceeeee Radzzz Mayur were very lovely nd adoringgg
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyy dear,
nice OS
thanks for PM.
do write more


love
Riddss
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Posted: 15 years ago
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res! HHP u wrote on MN!!! 😲 🤣

*EDITED*


I have specially come to edit!!! so it wont b long! 🤣
maine socha advance main bata doon! nhi toh kya pata tu kya uthaake mar de 😆 🤣 😆
ok so tu kaisi hai??? mujhe toh bhool hi gayyi hogi! after all hum aapke hain kaun? 😭
chal dil pe nhi leti! 😆 😆 😆
so now dis OS was AWESOME!!!! 👏 👏
hayye tune mujhe rula diya!!! kyun kiya aisa..............
btw doid u notice m doing hayye while crying also!:P 😆
Nupur was soo gud!!!
mera bichaara mayu!!!
do write more OS!!!! (on SG , KaSh nd MN 😆 esp SG..........lalchi aunty's bak 🤣 )

P.S do cont wid ur AR /SG FF!!!! I'm dying to read it!!!!

Luv ya always teri HHP!! 🤗

Pagalpanti rox! 😆
Edited by AttractiveAdya - 15 years ago

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