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Radhika

@Contradiction01

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: snazzychamp
Thanks for the new nick buddy and I'm awesome as u expected me to be.😊

Congrats ki us bewakuf se tera aur teri frnd ka pichha chhoot gaya.....mujhe bhi is khushi me party dena.😛

Aur haan maine eclipse dekh li hai, badi phaadu film hai.....mujhe bhi ek DVD bhej de, dobara dekhunga.😉

Now coming to ur OS.......yaar ab main kya bataun? Itna chhota sa OS tha ki tujhe thappad maarne ka mann karraha hai par itna achha bhi tha isliye nahi maarunga.😆

Aur kripa karke aur bhi MN OSs likh....mere liye at least.

All in all, I would say......Good Job yaar, bahut achha tha.👏

Ab jitna hawa me udna tha ud lia, ab thoda sa niche aa ja.....😆

And yeah, last but not the least....THANKS A LOT FOR UR SPECIAL MESSAGE.😃

thank u..thank u !
haan he finally left..so relieved ! lol..we are planning to party in the skool of apples and pears..as we cannot enter the cafe..
haan haan..main de dungi...bata bata kab chaiye :P

lol..khardine toh de..haan tu mujhe huggies parcel karna n i'll parcel u dvd !

nahii..muj jaisi kamzor ladki par itna atyachar mat karo..
*tere saath rehkar meri hindi thodi better hui hai na *
haan will defo write more on MN !

haan tere liye..

thanks ke ujhe mera work achcha laga !

haan haan bas abhi aa rahi hoon neeche..
thoda time lagega..but kal tak sure aa jaungi :P

tc..
luv ya !
radz

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Nice os

It was simple but wit Senti end

I wished Mayu hadnt taken that step at that tim they wuld hav been togther now

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Radhika

@Contradiction01

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

pari, adz..
will reply to your comment tomorrw !

abhi thodi lazy hoon !
n abhi i'm going off too !

toodles !

-radz

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asmaanixx

@asmaanixx

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

This is amazing Radz!

Although it was a sad ending, it was sweet.

To tell you the truth, I can't find the right words to describe this OS.

It was... different.

I hope to see more Mayur OSs from you and please do give them a happy ending.

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517780

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

nice one shot. but very sad.

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SunshineGirl6

@SunshineGirl6

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

OMG thz was a sad OS.......😭......but u wrote it beautifully.......do write more on mayur........

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Januable Khan

@-BlueSoul-

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

hi radz..how ae you ?
Wow..it was such an excellent one shot..

loved it..i thnk it was similar to that AR n muskaan one na !
i hope i'm right !

between you write so well..
do write more on MN..