RN FIC: UNCHAINED HEART--13UD pg 70 4/5/11 - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
nice update.loved it continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
nice part
but is she really married
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
Hey Pinka finally got the time to read ur fic and i must say it's very interesting.

the way it began and got till now is surely intriguing to read on further and i cud sense a lot of mysteries here

Surely wud like to find out more and i'll try to read ur fic regularly even if i can't reply.

Carry on with the gud work.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
drishti is marrieddddd?????????????? 😲 😲 To whom????😲 😲
Aur why does Ishi hates him???
and how come she met Raj???
and what exactly is the prob????😲
and i know there are many whys and hows...jinka answer tum KEEP READING 😛 aise hi dogi 😆 😆 😆
but a wonderful ud and nice suspense building up....
keep it up and UD soon,...
Oh ! Btw..here's some crap that I've managed to write..😛 Himmat hai toh padhna jaroor...😆 😆 😆
1) Luv happens only once (RN) [completed]
2) MERE SAATHI (RN) [Running]
3) Sirf tum....hamesha (RN) [Running]
ONE SHOTS:
1) Khamoshi (RN)
2) The moment of truth (RN)
3) The first encounter (RN)
4) papa ki parii ( non serial )
hope yeh sab padhne ke baad tum kuch karne ke kaabil raho...aur mujhpar tamatar na phenko...😆
luv,
mana😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95
to whom is married its really a shock to know that she is married cont soonnn tc ammu
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
Hiii Pinka....
Awesome part ...lekin tune ye kya jatka diya yaar?
Ye Drishti ne kisse shaadi karli???.....Ishika hates that Man ..Sirf Ishika hi kyun i also hate him....hope wo jisse bhi shadi ki haina wo ab is duniya main nahin raha
How she met raj ??? how he became her friend???
Thank God Raj ne drishti ko bachaliya...n liked th cute hugging scene between them
U know ye itna bhi long update nahin tha...so please continue soon with longgggg part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
oh God oh God.ye fic mujhe boht pasand araha hai.i am now boiling with suspense.there are so many question which to be answered.and mujhe sab janna hai .sabse pehle to mujho janna hai ki naina (sorry cant help it.waise bhi naina aur drishti ka meaning to nearly similar hi hai.so i think u dont mind) ne kisse shaadi ki?mujhe lagta hai wo jarur majburi mein kya hoga.kyunki jaha aapna raj hero hai baki sabko villain banna hi parega.i hope naina na ka wo shaitaan pati abtak narak pohoch chuka hai.aur agar nahi to raj pohucha dega.tum pakka ye fic end karogi na.dekho mai tumpe bharosa karke ye risk le rahi hun.agar bich me latkaya to mujhse bura koi nehi hoga.aur ab jaldise cont karo.waise ek baat samajh nehi aya.ishika ki age kiti hai.raj uska first crush kaise?dono ek hi colg me the kya?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98

awesome part...

vaise yeh UD itna bhi bada nahi tha...ha ha ha...
yeh Drishti ne shaadi kis se ki thi...??? ishika us inshan se nafrat karti hai...??? sahi hai na...hum bhi karte hain...!!! raj k hote hue us ne drishti k sath apni dal galane ki himmat kaise ki...??? vaise main janti hun ki voh kambakhat abhi tak zinda hoga...!!! kyoun ki agar voh marr gaya...toh apna hero kise marega use...??? ab ishika us se nafrat karti hai toh us ne jarur koi na koi gushtakhi toh ki hi hogi na...jis ki wajah se us ki raj k hathon se peetai hogi jarur...
ab shaadi hui hai...toh is k piche bhi koi solid reason toh hoga hi...bass...voh reason jyada khatarnak na ho...!!! yaar...vaise bhi main baht kam serial dekhti hun...isiliye ishika k role k liye main kisi bhi actress ka naam nahi bata payungi...!!!
ab jab hero raj hai toh heroine k sath kuch galat nahi hoga...!!! aur dekha tum ne raj ne apni heroine ko bacha hi liya na...ha ha ha...!!! vaise na...mujhe voh hug scene sab se jyada achha laga...
ab jaldi se cont karo...
p.s:- tum toh ...'ehsaash, zindagi teri meri kahani...aur tere naina' par comments karr hi rahi ho...!!! baki aur ek hai...(ankahi...LRL-RN www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1207994) aur ek mini short rajeev fics hai( Lamhain...wid rajeev...par voh RN nahi hai...sirf Rajeev based short fics hain)...aur maine 2 OS bhi likhe the RN par... ' ek towel ki atamkatha... www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1338949 '...n raaz... www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1125496&TPN=61 '
bakwas likhne k liye toh main hamesha taiyar rahti hun...!!! ab agar ise padh kar tumhara dimag kharab ho gaya...toh plz mujhe dosh mat dena...ha ha ha
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
hiii pinka hows u?
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
mindblowinggggggggggggg
superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
fantabulousssssssssssss
amazingggggggggggg
rockingggggggggggggggg
loved it
gr8 work
keep it up

love
Deepa
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome updt...

too good...but shocking......naina is married???

updt soon...waiting to read ahead...but thoda sa lamba updt will be gr8.....

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