Maneet Self-dialogue 2nd August

Hey guys!

Sorry for the delays because of college n stuff...but m back..Aaj I'm confused..MAan ka self- dialogue karu ya Geet ka.. 😆 😆

anyways..here it is, let me know ur views

Geet(heart)- I had said such awful things to him..what if...I hope he's fine..protect him...please Babaji..protect him..

Geet(brain)- he always helped you..but you...you said this to him in your hurt...

Geet(heart)- I hope he's fine..I need to go..I need to search for him...

Geet(brain)- are you crazy...you're going to run all the way??!!

Geet(heart)- shut up.

while running...

Geet(brain)-damn..you're gonna fall girl...slow down..

Geet(heart)- maan maan maan... maan maan maan..I hope he's fine...

Geet(brain)- wow..I'm tired.. But there are so many people here...where do I find him? should I just randomly ask people??

Geet(heart)- DO something!!

Geet's chunni gets stuck somewhere..

Geet(brain)- ek toh yeh chunni...

Geet(heart)- where are you maan?

Geet(heart and brain)- where is he??

Geet(heart)- just once..let me see him once..

Baba take Geet inside..

Geet(heart) - he's here? where is he? Why can't I find him anywhere?

Geet(brain)- how do I know...Oh God..where is he? Let me see him just once..
aaahh...

Dhaaga falls...

Geet(brain)- oh..it was a dhaaga..mujhe laga..whew...okay, so where did this come from anyway?

Geet turns, sees someone,..walks towards him

Geet(heart)- what if it's maan?
Geet(soul)- it is HIM. No one else..

Geet(brain)- yeah..who else can have such a fine presence?

Geet(brain)- suniye...yeh shayad aapka hai..

Maan turns...OH MY...sooo FINE!

MAan(heart)- Brainy..I told you..stop hallucinating..she doesn't wanna see us no more... 😭

Man(brain)- yahan bhi?? God..I think mujhe apne sahi hone ki dua maangni chahiye...dawa nahi toh dua sahi...
Cuz I have gone completely crazy...( oo that rhymes)...

Geet(brain)- haila...thank God he's fine

Geet(heart)- oh my...wow..okay...I'm going too fast...is he okay? he looks okay..I am so glad he's okay..

Geet(brain)- yeah..that's why I'm letting you smile that smile of yours..

MAan(heart)- aww...pakka sapna hai nahi toh itni pyaari mile...haye..main mar jaawan...Geet with a dhaaga..
But..why is she crying? Those tears....my hanky..

Maan(brain)- on the head dumbo...you can't offer it this time..

Maan(heart)- my jaan..she's here..
Maan(brain)- yeah dude..she really is..

Maan(soul)- So..finally you're here..I have been dying waiting for you!

Geet( soul)- time ho gaya na bohot...sorry..but I'm here now...It won't be long...I missed you so much..but these two dumbos...they really drive me crazy

Maan(soul)- yeah...ask me..I live with MSK's brain...ugh..talk about conflicts..the guy's going insane..At least the heart is cool!

MAan(heart)- Howdy there!?
Geet(heart)- hi... 😳

Maan(brain)- Geet..tum yahan kyun aayi ho?

Maan(soul and heart)- *roll eyes* oh God..as if we don't know..though we'd love to hear it..

Geet(soul)- hmm..I see what you were saying..will take time..but we have that..right..? 😆

Geet(brain)- haan?khelne..mann kar raha tha..

Geet(heart)- here I am..relieved out of my senses...dazed by his utter hotness and he's asking me to answer...

A woman comes to take her away

Maan(brain)- wow..she's really here..It isn't like her hallucinations haven't talked to me..Now I believe it..

Maan(heart)- take the dhaaga..please..

Geet(heart and soul)- don't take me away..please...no..I will die..Please..

Geet(soul)- please..Bohot mushkil se bahar aayi hoon..I can't let go..MAan...

Maan(soul)- 😭 😭 Don't go...please...

Geet(soul)- tie this dhaaga..for you and me...please..I will be yours...I am already but please do it..

Maan(soul)- tie it with me..don't go...

Maan(heart)- ahem ahem..convo khatam ho gayi ho..toh might I add something?

MAan(brain)- no..Shut up...all of you..making me go crazy!! But why do I see those emotions in her beautiful tear-filled though dazed eyes- the same emotions I battle with every day..

MAan(heart)- OYE chak de phatte!!! 😆

Teri Deewani sequence...I don't want to ruin it... except...he looked so so hot on it..she looked so beautiful..perfect tha..m not ruining it...except...

Geet(heart)- wow...Did I never notice how amazing he is...
Geet(brain)- what are you thinking Geet..? what are you feeling?? Ek toh background mein gaana..making me feel v uncomfortable..
oops..hide, he's about to look

MAan(brain)- okay..is someone stalking me?


Aww scene..choo adorable!!

Geet(brain) - he saw me again I think..

Geet tying a lose dhaaga..

Geet(heart)- oie..yeh yahan...

Geet(brain)- stop it Geet..

Geet looks at him singing..

Maan(heart)- teri deewani..main bhi toh deewana hoon,..Geet...

Maan(brain)- dude..someone is watching us..

MAan(heart)- wish it were here..but meri aisi kismat kahan...aa teri deewani gaate hain...

Maan(brain)- Oh...It IS HER!!

Maan(heart)- ek kadam woh badhaye..baaki ke kadam main badhau....meri Geet...

Maneet(souls)- So..we meet again..

Maan(soul)- soon...

Hand touching..I found it so pure..

Maan(heart)- mere haath mein soon tera haath hoga. I dunno when...but soon...

Geet(soul)- we're connected..always were..always will be..

Geet(brain)- hey..is it okay if I feel tingles up and down everywhere??

Baba- jodi banaye rakhe

Maan(heart)- aapke muh mein ghee shakkar!!
MAan(brain)- 😲 oo..whoops..

They remove hands...

MAan(heart)- as IF that makes a difference..

Maan(brain)- we are not together..

Maan(heart)- I hate you..

Geet(heart)- ouch!! that hurt...

Baba- God works in his way..not on the basis of what humans say..hmphh..LOL

LOVED that line!

Maan(brain) - what are you doing here? YOu left dadi..

maan(heart) I hope she's okay..

Mana(brain)- its your responsibility to stay with her??Do something thik se at least?? Aisi kya aafat aa gayi thi??Tell me?

Geet(heart)- kya bolu...ki aap thik na ho yeh soch ke meri jan atki hui thi??

MAan(brain)- will she ever listen to me?!
Geet...

Maan(heart)- where are you going alone..come with me..Dadi is waiting and don't you dare leave them alone..

MAan(brain)- meri zindagi mein unse badh kar koi nahi...She's everything..all else is nothing...

Maan(heart)- haan..tabhi Dadi-Geet mein similarities dhoondhta phir ta hai..

Geet(brain)- he's right..am I mad? why did I feel the world has stopped when he looked at me?Just for a glimpse..why did I run all this way, leaving dadi alone?

Geet(heart)- main kuchh bolu??

Geet(brain)- nahi.

Maan(brain)- I bet she isn't following...

MAan(heart)- haha..yeah..I bet she isn't too..stop na..

MAan(brain)- nahi..exit kharab ho jayegi...

Maan(heart and soul)- *roll eyes* bete entry exit ka impression toh first mulaakaat mein hi bann gaya tha..
Kar le..Mr MAan-livng- in -denial - Khurana..

Okay guys..over to you!!

Dp comment plz!

love

oh thnks sweaty i wz abt to go to bed ........i loved it .........once agn thnk you so much

To good...
I noticed the Maneert self dialouge title u gave...
great... so aaj se am sure it'll be maneet n not maan...

i loved the silent interaction that followed between them in today's epi in the first segment of course....the second segment took the storyline back to square one....
u hv done a good job of wording their silence....

i was so waiting for it yesterday ...wow loved it geet

good one... this episode was tough to write the self dialogue... but u did it👏.. keep it up gal...

geetu - 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 too good sweetie.....

Originally posted by: gouri.a

geetu - 🤣
<div></div>too good sweetie.....

thankie gouri!

I didn't do yesterday's...am going insanely crazy with all the tests..uff..lol...yday, i was reading, then I did Maan-pooja(instead of pet-pooja) and then started studying again...crazy..lol..

Glad you liked this one though...

Loved the epi!

Even yday's was great..quite self-explanatory, though, nahi?

love ya

Originally posted by: celestae143

<font color="#cc0000" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Wow... Geet.... This Brain-Heart-Soul Convo is one of your Master Piece.... Simply Awesome...... Feels great to read it.....

Ann.</font>

Hey!
how are you?

Thanks a lot! I love writing it! but sadly, no time 😭

oh well..thankfully Maan's brain and heart seem to be articulating well-enough..no?

haha, love ya!