AKNV;Written Update 28th July '10

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AKNV;Written Update 28th July '10
~*Start*~
In the palace
Arya was in his day dreaming n wakes up as he listens yash n reva talking n got angry on yash n thinks that he again came in between reva n him n goes from there, reva ask yash, how come he came so early n yash told her that he was so bored n hungry also, reva says that she immidiately bring sum food for him but yash stopped her n ask wat do she likes reva thought that he was asking about food but he correct her n says that he was asking about her hobbies, like music or sumthing else, he says that he knews reva likes painting statues but inspite that wat she likes n she says that she likes listening music n as she was talking yash starts playing piano n reva feels gud, she turns n yash says that he cant play radio but he can play piano for her n she sits beside him n was feeling gud, she compliment him that he was playing gud....a romantic sequence going on, yash looks at reva , she shy n puts her head on a side of piano n yash also closes his eyes n both were feeling..arya sees al this, he came closer n
disturbs yash saying that reva was in sleep, yash sees her n picks her to room n lay her down on bed , remove hair from her face n was continuesly looking her, with a song in BG.......
Na Hai Yeh Pana
Na Khona Hi Hai
Tera Na Hona Jane
Kyun Hona Hi Hai
Tum Se Hi Din Hota Hai
Surmaiye Shaam Aati
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi
Har Ghadi Saans Aati Hai
Zindagi Kehlati Hai
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi
Na Hai Yeh Pana
Na Khona Hi Hai
Tera Na Hona Jane
Kyun Hona Hi Hai
Aankhon Mein Ankhne Teri
Bahoon Mein Baahein Teri
Mera Na Mujhe Mein Kuch Raha Hua Kya
Baaton Mein Baatein Teri
Raatein Saugatein Teri
Kyun Tera Sab Yeh Ho Gaya
Hua Kya
Mein Kahin Bhi Jata Hoon
Tumse Hi Mil Jata Hoon
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi
Shoor Mein Khamoshi Hai
Thodi Se Behoshi Hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Aadha Sa Wada Kabhi
Aadhe Se Jayada Kabhi
Jee Chahe Karlu Is Trah Wafa Ka
Chode Na Chote Kabhi
Tode Na Tute Kabhi
Jo Dhaga Tumse Jud Gaya Wafa Ka
Mein Tera Sharmaya Hoon
Jo Mein Ban Paya Hoon
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi
Raste Miljate Hai
Manzile Miljati Hai
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi
Na Hai Yeh Pana
Na Khona Hi Hai
Tera Na Hona Jane
Kyun Hona Hi Hai

Morning..
In the hotel
Jyotika was sitting in her cabin n sharad came, he brings her closer n says, she cant hide it anymore that thy both r in love n as he was about to kiss her, she wakes her from her day dreaming n smiles.
In the village
Sharad was resting on a bed at his home n was smiling, lakhi came n ask him wats the matter, y he behaving so werid these days, he sees the time n rush to hotel n forgot his volet.
In the palace
Reva wakes up n thinks who she came here, n remembers last nite n thinks abt yash n was shy, suddenly her hand goes to sumthing on bed n she sees blood n got scared , she looks n sees yash's blood stain shirt was lying there, n a letter was there in which it was written that if she tries to come closer to yash, one day yash would be found lying dead on bed one day, she got so scared that ran away from the room, n as she goes outside, collides with arya n arya ask her abt the tension but she says that she saw a bad dream n leaves, arya thinks that reva looks so beautiful n innocent when lies. Reva came to room n think how come that person knows each n everything abt her n yash n thought there might b sum hidden camera in her room n tries to search but couldn't find anything n the door knocks she got scared n ask who's there n it was rani maa so she hide the shirt under blanket n rani maa came inside n ask her about her dream as she heard her scream n when she was coming arya told her that reva saw a bad dream, rani maa says that if the dream was abt yash n reva says yes, rani maa advice her to spent sum time with yash so that all her fear will be lost n yash brings smiles to her n ask her to dnt take tension as God will protect yash.
Love Guru Bom Ki Jai Ho!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏😉
Yash goes to meet bom n he ask him abt if sum magic happens bcoz of that music n yash says that it happens but a l'il bit, so he gave him tip to bring jealously as its the one n only weapon that can help reva n yash to come closer, firstly he denies but then agrees.
Back To Palace
Rani maa, reva n arya were sitting n having tea, yash arrives n rani maa ask him y he returns from hotel, he says that the guest wants to meet reva so came to take her with him, rani maa ask her to go as decided by them, arya interfares n ask abt wats going on n rani maa says that he says no right to interfare between mother n daughter, so he tries again n says to yash n ask him to come with them but rani maa stops him.
Precap:Yash was coming with sum petrol can n a car tries to hit him n reva sees it n it was raining also.
~*The End*~


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Posted: 15 years ago
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dear khushi909
thank you so much for your beautiful update 👏👏👏
the first part of episode was😍
best of luck
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks for the update.
Hmm Ranima you tell reva - she has spent so much of time with ash now and she still has doubt. Thats why we call her DUMBO.
Monster --- I wish I could enter the screen to tackle this guy. I am getting irritated and sick of him.
Cutie - stop being one and get macho. Stop that Monster before its too late.
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Thanks dear for the wonderful update😊
Love Guru ki jai ho...alas....he gave Yash wrong advice...Reva ke saamne piano bajana matlab gadhe ke saamne been bajana....dumbo went to sleep and forgot that she had to serve dinner to her tired hungry husband...😭
Now I know why tv heroes need those dolle sholle....they must be always prepared to carry their injured/sleeping infantile wives...😕
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yawn i was feeling sleepy...though the 1st part was gud bt smehow i feel lack of chemistry or wat??i dunno maybe boring scenes over n ovr aggain...i feel its time yash does smethng else...their romance is moving 2 slow n dull.....plus reva ...i dunno wat 2 say...2day she luked lifeless 2me...yash is playing n shes fallen 2 sleep..i feel she cud hve said smethng nice 2 him...thy cud hve shared a convo...i dont see communication between thm just formalities...n arya as usual kabbab mei haddi..y tat guy has 2 b everywhere...i think its high time sme1 in the palace teach thim privacy or revash do ur slowpaced snail romance or pls shift the piano in ur room...4 heavens sake!!!!
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well written jaan...loved d 1st part
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Absolutely agree with u Monali! Reva completely forget the fact that her hubby was starving. Music didn't do any wonders for Yash . Hoping that the 'jealousy advice' given by Love Guru works for Yash.

My heart goes out for Yash. Poor guy , keeps trying but yeh ladki pata nahi kaunse planet se aayi hai. She was in such a deep sleep that she didn't even realise that yash tucked her in bed. Wish I could sleep like that!

yash - ignore her completely, she'll come back to her senses. The more u run after something, lesser the chance of winning it.
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Originally posted by: monalidp

Thanks dear for the wonderful update😊

Love Guru ki jai ho...alas....he gave Yash wrong advice...Reva ke saamne piano bajana matlab gadhe ke saamne been bajana....dumbo went to sleep and forgot that she had to serve dinner to her tired hungry husband...😭
Now I know why tv heroes need those dolle sholle....they must be always prepared to carry their injured/sleeping infantile wives...😕

😆😆😆😆😆😆
I simply love this post monali. So well described.
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Originally posted by: mehraan

yawn i was feeling sleepy...though the 1st part was gud bt smehow i feel lack of chemistry or wat??i dunno maybe boring scenes over n ovr aggain...i feel its time yash does smethng else...their romance is moving 2 slow n dull.....plus reva ...i dunno wat 2 say...2day she luked lifeless 2me...yash is playing n shes fallen 2 sleep..i feel she cud hve said smethng nice 2 him...thy cud hve shared a convo...i dont see communication between thm just formalities...n arya as usual kabbab mei haddi..y tat guy has 2 b everywhere...i think its high time sme1 in the palace teach thim privacy or revash do ur slowpaced snail romance or pls shift the piano in ur room...4 heavens sake!!!!

so true. Snails are faster when compared to Dumbo and cutie.
And man you dont just fall off to sleep when a man plays piano so lovingly for you. Does it mean she prefers the radio😕
Arya ko koi kaam dhanda nahin hai sirf Reva ko stalk karna aur yash ko ghur na.
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Originally posted by: beenarn

Absolutely agree with u Monali! Reva completely forget the fact that her hubby was starving. Music didn't do any wonders for Yash . Hoping that the 'jealousy advice' given by Love Guru works for Yash.

My heart goes out for Yash. Poor guy , keeps trying but yeh ladki pata nahi kaunse planet se aayi hai. She was in such a deep sleep that she didn't even realise that yash tucked her in bed. Wish I could sleep like that!

yash - ignore her completely, she'll come back to her senses. The more u run after something, lesser the chance of winning it.

Thats why I told yash stop being a cutie and become macho.
yeah I want to sleep like that where someone will tuck me inot bed and i wont even know.
and Yash true, if want soemthing just leave it free. It will come back. You chase her, she will run, you ignore her she will chase you.

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