FF - how to make him listen? she should kidnap him

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I'm not indian and have no idea what they are saying in the serial 😆😆😆 I stumbled on the show before my cable provider blocked the chanel and got hooked on Krishna. OMG HE'S SOOO MERSMERIZING so ive been folowing via the written updates
BTW 👍🏼 👍🏼👍🏼👏👏👏 to the daily updaters
OK this is what has been buzzing in my mind ever since cv said truth will be revealed in court.
if you want to provide dialogues (i really wish I understood Krishna's 😭😭😭) feel free to add to my fiction below:
Now since she has been trying to tell him 4 a while now... she should arrange w/ chandu and Baba's other friend and FAKE kidnap Kris to somewhere private......she can tell them she needs their help arranging a surprise 😉😉😉. They keep him there overnite. We dont need to know at this point that his wife arranged it or that its his freinds that took him. Remember how the lawyer was taken? Just like that.... no faces 😃😃
Next day morning is the court day where the truth will come out and Kris has not come home night before.Amma & co. are taunting Pratigya about how her husband does not even bother to come home to her in the nite anymore but she does not show any reaction to them. She gets ready for court and instead goes to where Krishna has been taken by his friends.
Of course by now he is 😡😡😡 and ready to explode....Who would DARE to do this to KRISHNA !!!!! He is vowing to kick some serious ass when he gets out from there when the door opens and Pratigya walks in with a basket of food
He is SHOCKED SPEECHLESS. before he can say anything she says to him: U know all what u are feeling right now? Imagine if you were a female that it happened to......... multiply that feeling by 1000. That is what happened to me a few months ago.. Then she tells him everything..... again we dont need to hear what she is saying to him (i'll get to that later 😃) Then she tells him that the truth is going to come out today in court and I wanted u to hear from me 1st. Baba is still 😲😲😲😲😲. Can not utter a single word. She trys to make him say something.... show some reaction.......anything ????
Then she tells him that she is on her way to cout and he can come with her if he wants. He does not react to this either and she starts to 😭😭😭 and slowly goes from there thinking 'Have I just made everhting even worse'?
In court room, lawyer is questioning and gets to when truth comes out .... hmmmmm who would be the best person to spill?
In court room SS & co. are there and they also hear everything that happened. Of course they can't wait to get home to pile on Krishna about his wife.
Then we see Kris at home(he had not follwed er to court ) in his room thinking about all that Prats told him.... (Here they can synchronize his flash back with who ever is telling the truth in court....that way we save time and not drag it out and we are sure that both sides know the same story). Mind you so far, we still dont know what Baba's reaction is. Only his mind is working overtime
The Thakurs retrun home from court with Pratz following behind them and everyone bumps into Krishna on his way out (to look for Prats maybe? 😉😉😉?)
ooooohhhhh who goes first with the taunts? SS? Amma, Shakti.......take your pick. Well who ever finally wins start telling Krishna everything that happen in court. We see reactions of everyone's face..... Kesar is sad, Pratigys is scared and tears starts to leak (of course)... Amma is smilling with evil, SS is trying to keep a straight face so his son does not know hs real feelings. OK I guess Shakti will be the one telling.
From the moment that they all walk in we see Krishna's attention fixed only on his wife...... as Shakti is blabbing, Kris is slowing walking towards her. Then he stops right in front of her and eveyone there is thinking he's going to do somehting bad even Pratz.
What does our hero do? He walks up to her and 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 real tight. Now is turn of all present to be shocked . we hear that romatic song playing and while his family is trying to understand what they just saw, he takes his wife's hand and leads her to their room.
SS and Amma follow them trying to talk to him and the scene ends with Baba closing & locking the door to their room in his parents faces.
What happens next in the room and when they finally come out to face everyone is left for you all to imagine 😆😆😆😆.
Hope you like my fantasy. Press like button and feel free to add dialogues....

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Posted: 15 years ago
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i love what you've put - the cvs should take advice from you! 😆 anyways nice scene! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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😆😆😆 wooww so many CVs are being born here...with fruity and colourful ideas...am proud of this forum....😳😳😳🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely, very well written👏👏👏👏
Dont worry, your not the only one wjo doesnt understand especially when the Thakurs are talking..... have to read pritirays updates.....
Anyway havent been watching lately only reading updates.......
Pratigya forum rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
We have the best cvs here...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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NIce one!!....I like the showing by example scenario..!!..👍🏼....Maybe the real CV's can take some notice here....seeing as Pratigya can't seem to find the right word or time or even keep her husband's attention for long to spill the beans....😆😆....Yeah definitely want to see baba being kidnapped and held at Pratigya's mercy until she said her piece.......Only thing knowing our Krishna, he will be retailiating to fulfill his vow!!!..😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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woowww amazing! 👏👏👏phenomenal writing, loved it! x

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Posted: 15 years ago
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KRIYA certainly inspires our imaginations 😍😍😍😍..... we can give cvs enough material to work with for a long time...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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You've got some good imagination there.It was nice to read your take on the future track😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was gr8. i like it.u did a very good job.keep it up.

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