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Posted: 15 years ago

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DM feeling

DM just lies on his bed as it is late now closing the Tallboy on her photo……….but she still with him even after he let her there…………..

DM lie looking at her side in silent and suddenly she come front him

With her smile …..her shining eyes looking at him as her long hair on the side of her shoulder …….and her neck so clear to him ………..she wear his favorite sari …….and in this moment DM smile ………..she say

Santo: malik …...Happy that we together and soon we will have our baby……hina? ……u says we will have other one just I want him to be like u ……just like u

Here DM tries to hold her cheek and she smile more for him …………………..

As his hand touch her he just can't believe that she is real ……..DM pulls him self more to her and he about to hug her when she disappears ………….

Here DM tears start to fall down on her pillow on her smell or what is remaining of her smell…………….

In the silent of his sad DM think

Why santo why? Maybe it is my wrong that I am not following u maybe it is my deep guilty that visuall is my son ……..but …..I never ever touch her never ……..

Oh santori it been wrong see u walking out without stopping u from walking away………ha my fault but

U just not believes me u just walk away u hurt me more then u can imagine …..Come back to me santorii come back to me nothing in this world deserved to be away from my nothing

And DM cry his pain his feeling which he imprison them inside his chest …..As his work a lot smile a lot and pain himself a lot tears stope for long time but now he can not take it more and he cry ……….in louad …….

Someone in this moment pass near his room ……it is Birow who stand there hearing her dad calling

DM: santo come back

Birow have pain in her chest ………at some time she make her ma away from him and other time come to take her ma away ………….her father is paining

And she just must bring her ma home again ………..ha but how and birow walk carry her sadness with her wonder where is my ma go?..........

In other place santo lies on her mat thinking………

TBC

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Posted: 15 years ago
I would like to see something like this DM feelings...he hides it too much...I want to see what he actually feels...thanks Sara mhwaaaaa!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Sara I am dyeing to see such things in DM's behaviour. But they are not showing it in the actual serial. They should get lovely ideas from my frnds like u.Bcaz WE WANT SANRAJ SANRAJ SANRAJ AND ONLY SANRAJ.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely emotions by DM Sara👏 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: irinthom.3

keep gng man................

thanks dear :)
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shahara3

I would like to see something like this DM feelings...he hides it too much...I want to see what he actually feels...thanks Sara mhwaaaaa!!!

awww shahara it is my pleasure ha me too see that and i wonder what is wrong with CVs
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cuckoo_chand

Hi Sara I am dyeing to see such things in DM's behaviour. But they are not showing it in the actual serial. They should get lovely ideas from my frnds like u.Bcaz WE WANT SANRAJ SANRAJ SANRAJ AND ONLY SANRAJ.

oh chucko i think they read it dear lets hope for that
any way me too
want sanraj
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Soni-Sanraj

Lovely emotions by DM Sara👏 🤗

soni thanks dear ^_^
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sara, I only wish to see this in the serial..amazing portrayal of DM's feelings...👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely sara.l just hope they will show him expressing his feelings to santu n not asking 4 divorce on monday.

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