Writing One Shot Updated new addntion 7/11 - Page 3

Shanti, How can you stop like this yaar.

Thanks for encouraging !!!

Will continue whenever I have my creative mind up and running !!!😆

Of course enjoyed:-) kindly continue it ASAP

Very beautifully written, superb!!!👏
Hope Cvs come to this forum and use your ideas😉😃
do continue Shanti😊

Dhaba Ghar in the dark continued last part!!!

Simi is pulled by Abhi close to him.. Her heart starts beating fast

Abhi can hear it Abhi says" Simi tumhara Dilbahut zooron say Dahak raha hai kya ho aa?""😳

Simi Smiles and puts her head on his chest and says " Abhi mujhey Sharam Aa rahi hai koi Aa jaayyeeggaa !!!" ☺️

Abhi looks at her with a cunning smile and eyebrows up" Nahi meri jaan Aunty soo gaye hai aur ab hum tum ek Kamray mai Baand aur Chabi Ko gaye !!" 😉

Simi looks at him with gussa and says " Abhi mazaak Band Hum wapas Kab jaa Rahey hai!!"😡

Abhi tells her "Chalo Abhi chalet hai !!" He's a little disspointed thought he could spend the night here !!😡😔

Simi then is about to pick her bag when the lights go off and she runs to Abhi who is standing a few feet away " Abhi !!" she calls hugging him" Mujhey Anderay say Bahut Daar Lagtha hai !!"😲

Abhi lifts her chin up and says" Jaan mai hoo na don't get scared dekho muhey zoor say pakad lo saab daar bhag jayega Aur mai tumhey essay hi pyaar Karonga !!"😳

Simi pushes him off and says " Batameez !!!"😡😲

But again holds on to him..

Abhi then says " Meera Aunty tho so gaye hai lekin I think candle yahi kahi pa hoga " and he looks into the drawer and find the candles and the match box..

Abhi places the candle on the table and lights it.. He places a few around the room so that Simi feels comfortable..

Simi smiles watching him do that

Simi goes close to Abhi and says "Thanks Abhi Aab yeah candles nay is room ko kafi Roshini de diha aur tum meray saat ho tho mujhey Anderay say Daar nahi lagtha hai " and she holds his hand and puts her head on his shoulder..

Abhi kisses her forehead and says " Simi tumhey need aa rahi hai kya ??"😊

simi says " Nahi Abhi Mai teek hoon and she yarns!"🥱

Abhi looks at her and she looks tired and Abhi tells her " Simi chalo vaha bed pay chalthey hai !!"😊

Simi looks at Abhi and says " Abb Koi masti nahi I am very tired!"

Abhi smiles and says " Na baba na Koi Masti nahi Tum soo aur mai tumhey dekhey soo jaoo ga!!"😈

Abhi lifts Simi up Simi says " Abhi yeah kya kar rahey ho !!" 😲

Abhi says " Andera hai Tumhey Kuch Lag jayega aur tum zoor say chilaogi isliye Mai tumhey Utta kar bed pay dheera say nazook say daloonga !!"😊

Simi smiles and says " Wah Pati ho tho essa !!!" 😊

Abhi gives her a devilish wink and takes her to the bed and puts her down.. While putting her down her braid gets stuck to the button of Abhi's shirt and she shouts "Ouch !!"

Abhi " O sorry Simi ek Minute dheeray say Mai tumhar baal ko mera shirt say nikaltha hoon.. 😊

Abhi is unable to remove the hair stuck so he slowly opens her braid up and her hair falls loose on her face ..

Simi is relieved but her beautiful hair is covering up her face and

Abhi is staring at her beautiful hair but unable to see her face so he moved her hair from her face to see her beautiful face😊

Abhi says " Simi tum Kholey Baal mai bahut sundar dikthi ho Essay rakha karo !!"😍

Simi smiles shyly .☺️. Abhi pushes her hair from her neck and sees her again and says " Mainay Pheley bhi tumhey Kulay Baloon mai dekha tha aur socha Meri biwi sunder tho hai lekin Kulean baloon Mai Aur bhi sunder dikthi hai !!"😍

Simi is turning red like a beetroot..☺️☺️☺️

Abhi scoots closer to her and cups her face looks into her eyes!!

Simi knows something is coming up and her lips are trembling,

Abhi's lips are just centimeters away from hers and he draws closer to her lips and suddenly the lights come on !!❤️

They move away and Abhi says " Areey yaar yeah current ko Abhi hi anna tha kya !!!"😡

Simi laughs and says " Chalo Aab candles bujahoo aur mai soo rahi hoon Good night Jaan!!!"😉

Abhi looks at her sad😔 and she winks and says "good Night !!"😉

Wow guitaar wala scene mera tha !!!

They took it from my one shot only difference it was with all of them Kaash only Simi and Abhi alone rehthey aur who bajatha
Nevertheless atleast close to my one shot !!!

hey shanti continue mazaa aa raha, even i did not know abhi could play guitar, cv's could use some ideas, i am waiting for Abhi's camera to come back just like the bell.😉

hope they show the morning wala scene from here where Abhi is busy working on the laptop and Simi is trying her hair and he looks at her

As it he will be working from 12/24 his Tarneja Empire ka kaam and then some roamance too can spice up between Abhi and Simi

Originally posted by: shanti05

hope they show the morning wala scene from here where Abhi is busy working on the laptop and Simi is trying her hair and he looks at her

As it he will be working from 12/24 his Tarneja Empire ka kaam and then some roamance too can spice up between Abhi and Simi