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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
Abhi Simi are back in T mansion!!

Simi is arranging the closet in their room and Abhi is trying to reboot his laptop !!
Its been ages he feels that he has been in his room.. Abhi says " Pata hai Simi Jaab mai boarding mai that tab Mai ek cheez bahut miss kartha tha mera room .. yeah cozy bed aur mera table chair !" " Aab achha lag raha hai Ghar vapas aakar !!"😊

Simi smiles and comes close to him and cups his face and says" Abhi ab hum yeahi rahengay !!" 😊

Abhi smiles back holding Simi's hand and says " Tum Saat Ho tu Idhar rahenay ka mazaa Ki kuch Aur Hoga and tries to kiss her coming close to her with just 1/2 inch between their lips 😉"

Simi hits him and says " Besharam !!!😊

Abhi says " arrey Aab Humay Bahut privacy milega Aur Jo Kaam tumnay Adhura choda tha 12/24 KB mai Aab tum yaha puri karogi !!!"😉

Simi thinks and says " Abhi kaun Si baat mai tu bhool gaye Itney problems they vaha par Mai Yaad karthiu hoon tum Thoda waqt do na !!!😊"

Then Abhi says " teek Hai Ab mai tumhey 2 ghantey detha hoon Tum yaad karkay Meray paas aoo !"😉

Simi goes down stairs and Anusha is in the kitchen .. Simi asks Anusha "aaj Kya banayegay Papaji ki pasad banaoo??"

Anusha says " Simi beta Tum to inhay Janthi ho na Kitan nazaar hai Abhi aur tumsay !!"
Simi then says " Koi Baat Nahi Mummyji Mai unhay Manaloongi !!"
Anusha hugs Simi and says " Thanks Beta"🤗

Food is prepared and then its almost 2 hours up ..
Abhi calls out to Simi from the top " Simi Simi zaraa idhar anna!!"

Simi would have forgotten the time given to her..

Simi goes upstairs and Abhi is sitting on his desk and doing somthing..
Simi says " Abhi kya kaam tha Kyun boloaya !" 😡

Abhi says " Yaar bahut garmi hai toda fan bhi chalado na !!"

Simi says " Lekin room itna thanda hai tumhay saardi lag jayegi !!" 😡

Abhi says " Nahi yaar mera body bahut garam hai !!😉" Simi smiles and says " Teek hai 😊" she knew his intentions with the smile he gave

Simi switches on the fan and sprinkles of rose petals fall on her!!

Simi is thrilled and surprised by the shower of these roses..😲😳
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Abhi stands up with folded hands and watches her happiness glowing in her face and smiles😊

Simi looks at Abhi smiles and puts her head down blushing

Abhi goes close to her and says " Duo ghanta pura ho gaye Ab yaad ayya Kuch kehna tha tumhay sweetheart 😳 !!"

Simi who is standing still and thinking Aab mai tu gayye !!!

She says " Abhi yeah saab Meray liye !!" 😳


Abhi says " Baat Mat talo Mainay duo ghantey lagaye itna saab karnay kay liye ! Meray Mehnay Ka phal Chahiya !!"😉

Simi says " To teek hai Aaj Mai Bol doongi !!"😳

Abhi is very happy Finally she is saying it !!
Then Abhi goes close to her and holds her shoulders and glares into her eyes !!😉

Simi is trembling by the way Abhi is holding her she likes his warmth but is shy and is blushing !!! Simi says " I LOVE YOU ABHI !!!"❤️
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Simi's eyes go down with Shyness and she goes red on her face.. Abhi lifts her chin up with his index finger and says " Finally Simi Tarneja na bol diya Ki who Abhi Tarneja's say Pyaar Karthi Hai !!"
🥳

" Uff Mainay itnay din intezaar kiye yeah char lavz sonay kay liye .. "😊


Simi smiles and says " Babutaar kahinay !!" 😊 and leaves but Abhi grabs her and says "I love you kay baad Kuch meetha ho jaye !!!"😉 is about to kiss her she puts her hand on his mouth and says " Picture Abhi Baki hai Abhi Tarneja !" " Toda wait karo!" 😉

To be continued----------------------------------

Please let me know if you liked it !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
very well written shanti👏...waiting to read some more....

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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
yesterdays episode
abhi says " cahi piyogi tum mai bana raha hu..."
simi says"nahi abhi mai bana dungi..."
then abhi put his hands on her shoulder and says"nahi simi tum aaj is bagootar ke haath bani chai piyogi..."
simi smiles abhi continues " meri chai tumare chai se aachi banegi.."
they both simile and hug.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
Dear creatives.. We have some one shot scenes for you written to make it easy to give us more romantic scenes of Abhi and Simi just like todays..
No need to rack your brains too much just use these scenes and make them alive for us !!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
Thank u shanti. great writing! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
Wow.. Well written Really liked it.. Please keep writing
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
Very beautifully written Shanti👏👍🏼
Keep writing😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
Thanks I will continue soon !!!
shanti05 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
One shot Airport ride and beyond....

Milli finishes packing her bags.. She is excited to leave for London to do her further studies.😊

RS and Manju come to her room and wish her all the best.👍🏼

RS tells her that "Milli beta all the best man lagakar padna aur matarani ki krupa tumpay hamesha Rahegi !!"

Milli comes out and Abhi Simi are there waiting for her since she will be given a drop at the airport. Neetu and Omi ,Anuj and Anita also hug and wish her all the best.👍🏼

Abhi, Simi and Milli leave for the airport..

Atthe airport Milli gets down and Simi also..
Abhi gets her luggage out and Simi hugs Milli and kisses her forehead and says "Baccha Khub man lagakar padna aur email Bejna !!!"👍🏼😊

Milli holds back her tears and says "Simi di you are the best and then looks at Abhi and says Abhi jiju meri Simi di ka khayaal Karna"😭 and hugs him !!!

Simi and Abhi both wave to Milli as she enters the secutiry check in for her flight!!

Simi who's holding back her tears also looks at Abhi and he hugs her and says " Sweetheart Kya hoga Humari Milli jald hi laut ayeegi !!" 😳and kisses her head!!

Abhi then looks into Simi's eyes and says 'Simi chalo hum ek drive pay Jathey hai !!"

Simi then says " Abhi!!"😲 Abhi says " Jee hai Abhi aur Isee waqt !!" 😉

Then Simi says " Paar !" Abhi puts his finger on her lips and says " SShh !! Chup Chaap Chalo !!"😉😈

Abhi starts the car and they leave on a smooth road ..

Abhi puts on some sweet soft music which plays " Kuch na Kaho Kuch Bhi na Kaho Kya Kehna hai Kya Sunna Hai Samaya ka Yeah Pal tham sa na jaye !" 😳

Simi looks at Abhi who looks at her passionately..😍

Simi tells him "Road pay Dhyaan Do !!!" 😡

Abhi smiles and his eyes are back on the road !!

Abhi stops the car near a nice cottage type Dhabba !!

Simi says "Yeah kaha Agaye hum.. ??"😕

Abhi tells her "Baas yeah sunder si kutiya turned dhabba.."😊

Abhi tells Simi "Pata hai Simi jaab mai chota tha mom aur dad aur Anita aur mai yaha aksaar Athey they !!!"😊

Then he knocks at the door and a middle aged lady opens the door and says " Arrey Abhi baba kaisay ho !!" 😊

Abhi hugs the lady and says " Mai teek hoom Aap Kaisay Ho !!" 🤗

Then Abhi introduces Simi and says " Aunty yeah Simi hai Meri.. " ❤️

That middle aged lady [Meera Aunty] says "Jaan!!" to complete his sentence

Meera Aunty invites them inside and says " Bacchey baito mai kuch khana lathi hoon !!"😊

Abhi thanks her and they sit down..

Simi sees the glow on Abhi's face and notices that he missed a lot of things due to her family problems but now since things are fine he is happy again😊

She keeps looking at Abhi and smiles..
Abhi notices that and goes close to her and puts his hand on her shoulder and says " Essay Kya dekh rahi ho Jaan!!"😳

Simi blushes and says " Kuch bhi nahi tumhari kushi dekh rahi hoon" 😊

Abhi touches her nose and says " Achha Tumhay Kaisay pata Meri kushi kya hai !!" 😊

Simi says " Tumari muskaan tum hara yaha Anna Meera Aunty say Milna yeah saab tumhay Kushi dethi hai na !!" 😊

Abhi says " Haa Magar Aur bhi kuch hai jo mujey kushi dethi hai !!" 😳

Simi looks at him surprised and says " Kya !!"😕

Abhi comes closer to her and he is centimeters away from her lips and staring at her eyes and says " Bataoo!!" 😳

Suddenly some one comes clearing their throat none other that Meera Aunty..

"Opps!!" Abhi says and moves away from Simi

Abhi thanks Aunty and gives her a peck on her cheek..

Meera Aunty then says " Abhi tumharay liya ek aur surprise hai !!"😊

Abhi says " Kya Aunty!!"😊

Meera Aunty asks abhi to close his eyes

And then she gets a beautiful guitaar out and says " Surprise!!"😊

Abhi opens his eyes and there is spark in his eyes and he gives a broad smile and says " Wow Meera Aunty mera guitaar!!" 😲

"Aapko Kaisay mila papa nay tho usay bhara daldiya tha !!"😭

Meera Aunty says " Abhi beta Mainay Sambhalkay Karka tha Tum jaab aoogay mai tumhay doongi !!"😊

Abhi hugs her and says "Thanks Aunty!!"😊🤗

Meera Aunty then says " Chalo tum donno Khana Kha loo and enjoy yourself "😊

Simi thanks Meera Aunty and she leaves closing the door of the cottage room ..

Simi tells Abhi who is looking at his guitar " Abhi mujhey pata nahi that tum guitar bajathey ho !!"😊

Abhi the looks at Simi and says " Muhey music ka bahut passion hai and Meera Aunty nay yeah muhjey present kya tha lekin papa ko pasand nahi tha wur phir mujsay door ho gaya !!" Aaj itney saal kay baal meray paas wapas hai O simi I love this guitar and I love you !!😊

and he hugs the guitaar and Simi

Simi who is happy for him says " Chalo kuch Ka lethey hai bahut bhook lag rahi hai !!😊

Abhi and Simi eat then abhi is busy looking at his guitar trying to play something..

Simi watches him and tells " Abhi kuch suna do na meray liye !!"😊

Abhi then smiles at Simi and says "Teek Hai " and starts playing the tune

"TuM HO TOH GAATA HAI DIL
TuM NAHIN TOH GEet kAHAN
TuM HO TOH HAI SAB HAASIL
TuM NAHIN TOH kYA HAI YAHAN
TuM HO TOH HAI.
SAPNON kE JAISA. HASEEN Ek SAMAA
JO TuM HO TOH YE LAGTA HAI
ke MIl. GAYEE HAr kHuSHI
JO TuM NA HO YE LAQTA HAI
kE HAr khushi MEIN kAMEE
TuM kO HAI MAANGtl YE ZINDAGI
TuM HO TOH RAAHEIN BHI HAIN
TuM NAHIN TOH RASTEY kAHAN
TuM HO TOH YAHAN SAB HI HAIN
TuM NAHIN TOH kYA HAI YAHAN
TuM HO TOH HAI HAR
EX pAl MEHERBAAN YE JAHAAN"

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Simi is blushing as Abhi is singing this for her and she walks away feeling shy and Abhi notices it and leaves the Guitar but the bg music is going on with the same tune and walks towards Simi who is standing against the wall..

Abhi says " Simi vaha say kyun otkar yaha ayee.."

Simi who is shivering with his presence so close says " Abhi chalo dheer ho gaye hai ghar nahi jana !"

Abhi clears her face since her hear covers her eyes and looks into her eyes and says " Ghar janey ki kya jaldi hai yeah bhi tho ghar jaisa hai!!"😳

Simi looks into Abhi's eyes which is full of passion for her and says with a smile " Tho kya aaj Raat hum yahi pay ruk rahey hai !!"😊

Abhi smiles and says "Jee ha!!" and caresses her cheek.. Simi walks off but he grabs her hand with a tight grip..😳

To be continued....


Please let me know if you enjoyed it !!!
Edited by shanti05 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
it was so cute & lovely waiting for next

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