Writing One Shot Updated new addntion 7/11

shanti05 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
#1
Hi Guys i was thinking we should write small snippets a One Shot for a particular day

Its not a fan fiction but just writing snippets of the scenes..


Let me know if anyone is interested.!!
Bring out your hidden talent !!

I had written one earlier in the what we want to see with Simi and Abhi

*************************************************************************************************************

Abhi has his laptop now in 12/24 KB Finally he got a job and is doing some presentation..🤓
Its early morning and he has got up really early.. he is busy doing presentation and is on bed doing it..🤓
Simi is still sleeping and suddenly the alarm rings and she gets up and says O M G subah go gayee and I have to rush for a lecture ..
So she goes and hurries up and gets ready .. Abhi still doing his work.. then Simi asks Abhi kya tumnay chai piyaa> Abhi says nahi yaar please lekar aoona😳
Simi gets chai for him and Manju wud have given her clothes to hang outside.. 😔
So she first comes and gives Chai to Abhi and she leaves and he pulls her and Simi say Abhi chodo mujey Bahit kaam hai !!
Abhi says Arrey es kiss to dethi jaoo❤️
Simi says Nahi mere Natkat laal Abhi Nahi and she winks at him and goes..👎🏼
Abhi looks at her and again gets back at his work on the laptop..😔

Simi takes the wet clothes to hang outside.. She has had a shower and her hair is wet but she needs ti hurry and out the clothes out to dry and get ready tio go to college..

Abhi sees Simi putting the clothes while sipping his chai,. Simi also sees him and gives those loveable looks like I will not give you want you want types !!😉

Then when she gets another cloth to hang she sees Abhi not there in her sight.. 😕

She again looks and he is not there and she thinks he must have gone to take a shower ...

Then suddenly someone holds her from the back and she turns around to see but her wet hair covers her face and then she sees a hand running around her face and moving the wet hair off ..
Its Abhi who says " Sweetheart Aab Tum kiss Diya bina Kaha Jaoogi !!"😍

Edited by shanti05 - 15 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

29

Views

4.5k

Users

13

Likes

71

Frequent Posters

paroma roy thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#2
Great job..😛 you should apply for the post of script writer for the show then none of us will have complains...😆
Laila2009 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
#3
Shanti, when are we going to see your fan fiction? I think you are a damn good writer. I have read FF but recently nothing has interested me but this is really well done and you build up the story very well. I thought it was cute and funny - nicely done!!!
shanti05 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
#4
Yeah we can write snippets with cute moments they have so i brought this up!!
I will try sometime to write more
Thanks friends

ramas thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 15 years ago
#5
good one abhi all the time ask her to say I love you in othe episode. Please continue in this topic.
shanti05 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
#6
Another of my One Shots!
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Simi in the kitchen busy making a quick breakfast for Abhi..😳



She is very happy that her days as a married lady is going nice..

Looking outside at the birds chirping she smiles and thanks Matarani who gave happiness to her in the form of Abhi..😊

Abhi in the room upstairs is getting ready and just got out of the shower and his hair is wet and a towel round his waist looks for his clothes but then sees it on the bed and talks to himself that "Arreay Wah Meri Biwi nay saab kuch ready Raka hai !! "

Then Abhi starts wearing his clothes and and his favourite burgandy shirt..😊

Lekin yeah kya Opps the button of his shirt is gone.. Then one below the collor button..The second one ...😔

Abhi calls out "Simi Simi" But she doesn't listen.. Then He comes down and calls out Simi again

Simi hears and says "Kya Huaa!!"

Then he goes to the kitchen and says " Simi Areey Yaar Dekho na yeah meri favorite shirt aur uska button missing hai !! 😭

Simi says "Ok Ruko Mai sil dathi hoon" and she goes to get the thread box.." Abhi looks at her and tells himself " Haii Meri Patni Subah Sibah itnee fresh dekthi hai kaash mai usaay Pura din dektha Rahoon ..."😍😊
😊
Simi gets the thread and puts it through the needle.. Abhi keeps looking at her and then she goes closer to him .. 😊

Her heart is beating faster since just a while back she was feeling happy that her marriage is going so nice and now this moment she is soo close to her husband !!😳😉
😉
She takes the button and places it on the missing point on the shirt..

Simi's cold fingers are touching his chest and he suddenly says "Ouch!!" Simi thinks she pierced him through and asks "Abhi kys hoaa Laga To nahi !!" 😲

Then Abhi smiles and says " No sweetheart Tumharay thanday Haat nay maray naram dil ko choaa hai !!"😉



Simi then smiles and says " Batameez Kitnay Shaitaan Ho Tum " 😳
Then She finishes stitching and looks at Abhi and goes close to the end of the knot of the stich and bites it off with her teeth.. 😉
And then Abhi whispers in her ear " Thank You "😳



Simi smiles and says " You are welcome" 😊and then sees his hair and says" Abhi Tumhary Baal To geelay hai Aoo Baito yaha mai Soka Dethi Hoon"

Abhi sits down and Simi takes a Towel and starts wiping /drying his hair..

Abhi is very happy that his wife is doing soo much Seva for him.. 😛

Then she is done and is about to go Abhi pulls her back and say " I love you to bolti jaoo !!"😳



Simi says" Abhi nahi Koi aa Jaaye ga!! "😉

Then Abhi says "Ghar Pay Koi Nahi Hai" 😊

Simi says "Achha Tumhey Kaisay Pata "😕

Abhi grabs her waist and says " Mainay Saab Ko Bhaga diya "😳

Simi smiles and says " Jhoothey"😉

And then she touches his lips with her index finger and says" I LOVE .....

Simi !!!" Zara yaha Aana " Manju loudly calls out to her !!!🤔

And Simi releases herself from Abhi's clutches and runs of ...

Disappointed Abhi then Says" Array Aunty ji Ko Bhi abhi Annatha !!" 😡😔

and then Simi looks back and gives a thenga!!!👎🏼😉
😉
------------------------To be continued!!!😛
Rumi007 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 15 years ago
#7

Well written shanti.👏

Feel sad for Abhi,missed the chance🤣

Kash serial mai iske adhe bhi dekhata.

Jenila thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#8
Wow Shanti it's so romantic,
Know i want them to be like this in on screen too yaar.
KBfanNo1 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#9
wow Shanthi love this...i was also planning to post one...
i will also post one soonn..
shanti05 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
#10
Thanks for the encouragement..
Please do post some of your one shots.. Hope to see somthing like this somtime
When the Cv's stop by to read they can see how we want Abhi Simi scenes to give a Big smile on your face 😊

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".