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hey i wanted to predict the future story a lil......đ in the form of an ff of one chap....
in court---------
amit congratulates pratigya...-----to pratigya ji aapka kaam ho gaya...apke papa reha ho gaye...humne apna vaada nibha diya....
pratigya(lil unmindful)-----hmm....hume pata nhi hum aapka ye ehsaan kaise chukayenge....bla bla bla...đ¤˘đ
amit-----its okay...bla bla (lectures) đ¤˘đ he choses to leave wen suddenly returns and says to her-----pratigya ek baat bataye?
pratigya looks up...
amit----aap apne pati ko....mera matlab......kya aab sabkuch janne ke baad wo aapko apnayenge?
pratigya keeps mum....
amit----dekhiye kehna to nhi chahiye par aap jisse pyaar karte ho uspar bharosa hona bht zaroori hain par krishna.....
pratigya------krishna ye sab nhi samajhta......
amit----hum wohi kehrahe the...jistarah wo yahanse gaye....usse hume to nhi lagta ki.....khiar chodiye ye aapka personal zindagi hain......
he sighs and leaves...... pratigya is with her familky agen....(more tears and cries𤢠with naina ji leading,)
shyam ji is terribly concerned abt krishna..he tells pratigya------tumhe abhi isiwaqt uske paas jana chahiye...usse baat karni chahiye......use samjhana chahiye......jao......
pratigya----par papa...woh...
shyam ji-----nhi beta.......woh tumhara pati hain aur isse pehle tum dono ke bich galartfaimi aur bade.....tum usse baat karlo
pratigya calls krishna bt he does nt pick up her call.......
pratigya to shyam ji-----papa woh krishna fon nhi utha raha hain.....
shyam ji-----aab kya hoga...kahin woh kuch
pratigya----nhi papa...woh aisa kuch nhi karega....hum ghar pe fon karte hain....
SS abuses and shouts at pratigya wen she calls at home as she had completely destroyed his image and left little chances for him to win the elections bt she gets to find out frm his wrds that krishna isnt in the house as well...
pratigya(thinking)-----kaha gaya hoga?
krishna in his favourite place(that dangerous place....he was seen standing after his frst appearance and he called lucky to join him and he was slipping...remember?) he is quiet, calm..... coz his mind was in a storm...... the wind ruffled his hairs..... he sighed...he was determined.....this time he was truly determined...... he cudnt live with her anymore.... not only did she betray his trust bt also she NVR EVR LOVED him.......in fact she married him to take her revenge.......this was too much for him to handle... he cudnt live with this truth......wich shattered his heart into a zillion pieces....... wenevr he thot of pratigya...or her face flashed in this mind....his anger became uncontrollable and he felt like ripping the world apart........ he stood there like a statue,silently mourning over the broken pieces of his heart...... until it had become evening...... the light disappeared bt he did nt move a muscle......
suddenly he heard footsteps behind him....he didnt turn......bt his heart started to race....he cud feel whu was there....... his fingers clenched into fists.....and his jaws tightened...... he was no longer that funny,witty,loving,krishna.... he was a wounded tiger........
"krishna...."
krishna(without turning)-----chali jao yahan se.....
pratigya----par krishna woh.....
he shouted,making her almost jump------humne kaha na....CHALI JAO......
she moves back....frightened at his intensity.......
pratigya-----hamari baat to sunlo.......
it was too much....he turned...and walked towards her in quick steps..... he grabs her by her shoulders and made her look straight into his eyes...he hisses-----bht maja aa raha hain na tumko.......aab to tumra badla bhi pura ho gaya.......tumne humko puri tarah barbad ka diya.,.....aab kya ye dekhne aye ho ki tum kitna tadap rahe hain? to dekho......dekhlo.....aur maja le lo apne jeet ka..... he pushes her roughly...-------bht khush ho na.......aab jao....jake jashn manao....krishna ke barbadi ka jashn.......jao........
he agen turns away.....and rubs his palm on his face.......
pratigya tries to check her tears...she didnt want to show him that she was falling weak......
pratigya-----woh thk keh rahe the....
krishna turns with fire in his eyes.....
pratigya-----tum humse pyaar karne ka dawa karte the na? to tumhe apne pyaar par zara sa bhi bharosa nhi hain? to kya hum ye manle ki tumne humse kabhi pyaar kiya hi nhi?
krishna-----haan....nhi kiya.....to...kya karlogi? humne poocha kyqa karlo gi? HUM TUMSE PYAAR NHI KARTE.....khush? sun liya jo sunna chahti thi....? aur aaj ke baad hum tunhara shakal tak nhi dekhenge.........
the earth under her feet seemed to slip away.......
krishna-----tum jo chahe kar sakti ho....jaha chahe ja sakti ho......jiske saath chahe...... he paused...-----reh sakti ho...ek raat do raat...sari zindagi.......
pratigya-----KRISHNA !!!!!!!!!! she cudnt take this anymore..... tears rolled down her eyes....at his making fun of her kidnapping and using it to hurt her......
her tears did have no effect on him...coz he was a heartless man now....she had broken his heart......wich he had once lost to her.......
krishna smirked------kyun? sach kadwa laga?
pratigya------humne socha tha....humne tumhe samajhne mein thodi galati kar di thi.......lekin tum wohi krishna ho...jisne hamare aur hamare parivaar ka izzat mitti mein mila di thi.....jisne hume apne parivaar ke samne zalil ki thi......
krishna----aha....tumne galati nhi.....BHT BADI galati kar di hain hume samajhne mein......abhi sahi samay hain......apni galati sudhar lo........ apni zindagi mein wapas jao.....aur chain se raho....aaj se koi krishna tumre parivaar ko tang nhi karega.....koi krishna.....tumpar jabardasti nhi karega.....kyunki wo krishna jo tumse itna pyaar karta tha...wo mar chuka hain......aur tumne usko mar diya.......
pratigya------thk hain.......hum jaa rahe hain.....par pichli baar ki tarah nhi....isbaar hamesha ke liye.......
she turns and walks off.........struggling with her tears.......... whereas krishna stands there,unmoved.......as if made of stone..........
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pratigya walking towards her home....in slow steps....some thoughts troubling her.....
"aab hamare zindagi ki sare pareshani dur ho gayi? lekin...in kuch mahino mein humare zindagi jis tarah badal gayi hain......kya hum firse apni purani zindagi mein laut payenge? kya hum firse apne ghar mein...apne mummy papa,aarushi...adarsh bhaiya.....sabke saath khush reh payenge? kya sachmein aisa ho sakta hain? to fir.......hum khush kyun nhi hain? hamare hoton par hasi ki jagah aaj aansu kyun hain? ek ajeeb si bechaini.....ek ajeeb sa ehsaas hume itni taklif kyun de rahi hain? hum us insaan ke bare mein kyun soch rahe hain jisne hamari zindagi barbad kar di.......jise humpar koi bharosa nhi hain? uske liye......uske liye.......
she breaks down and starts sobbing bitterly....... she thot why was she crying? wat for? bt she cudnt cntrol herself and neither cud she find her answers.......
a car comes and halts in frnt of her.....amit comes out of it..... he is surprised to see pratigya at such an hour...
amit-----pratigya ji aap?
she looks at him...he is shocked to see her face.....-----kya hua? then he seems to get it------krishna?
pratigya wipes her tears away and says-------nhi....hum krishna ke liye nhi ro rahe hain....aur kabhi royenge bhi nhi........jo kuch bhi huya accha hi hua....aab hume usse chutkara mil gaya.......
amit smiles------aap bhul rahe hain hum ek lawyer hain....hum insaan ke shakal dekhkar baat ko samajh jate hain...khair...agr aap batana nhi chahti to fir....chaliye hum aapko ghar chod dete hain......
she nods and walks towards his car...... the scenes are split and divides into two...... in one half its shown krishna';s mourning state....and on the other half pratigya walking towards amit's car..with him......
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(if u people want i cn cntinue.....đł)
Anupamaa
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