new ff: ~Behti Hawa ~ part 4 pg.12 - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aweeeesome awesome part! 😃 🤗 It was happy, sad, romantic, confusing... wow... so many emotions packed into one part. 👏 👏 It was seriously an awesome part. I know I already read the first few paragraphs before, but I really felt like reading them again.
Prem-Heer car scene: love your descriptions! Just made the whole part really nice. Plus, Prem decided to call her AGAIN? WOW... I wanna know how he apologizes to Heer. 😳
So, why is Heer's dad so darn strict? 😲 It sounded like you and your feelings for your dad. You love him, but really want him to give you more freedom. Heer's dad is just like yours? 😲

This was such an awesome part.....And since now, you are enjoying your summer... I do expect the next part soon! 😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
wow! that part was really relatable! I feel so bad for heeer but i feel like i can relate. i know what the academic pressures are like, but i dont have a prem to make everything all better! i also liked the meet part( because they are my favorite!) preet was really mean to meher. he shoulld take her flowers with a sorry card! i also loved the sisters bonding at the end! that was so sweet! update soon please! :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
thnxxxxxx 4 pm
its awesme update really very nyc
hopefully next tym ull update it asap 😛
amazing part😊😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
nice update
Prem and Heer car scene and accident. kiss very cute.
loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
great update...poor heer her father is really mean.....i hope meet again😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
awesome!!!
premeer scenes were too good!
why their dad is sooo rude and ironic towards them???
continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
awesomeeeeeee update
loved it umm y heer's dad is always rube to heer?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
Lovely update.......
but i cant believe prem kissed heer the same day 😉...
im shocked that preet called meher bad luck 😲.....
i hate this balraj....
so now prem called heer.....
cant wait to know wat happens next........
thanx 4 the pm.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
what a kiss yaar.............
and Heers dad uugh
and the call is from Prem
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
hahahah Zebra and Mr.Juneja ahahhaa
Poor Preet... Meher ne koi kasar nahi chodi for makin him feel
guilty abt wat he said ahhahaha
Very nice scenes between Premeer..
hope ur work goes well and thnks for the pm

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