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Hiba

@Hiba282

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

beatiful lines!! i liked it much 😃
looking forward to reading more of ur poems!!!
i loved the last two stnzas

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geet.a

@geet.a

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Hiba282
beatiful lines!! i liked it much 😃
looking forward to reading more of ur poems!!!
i loved the last two stnzas

Thanks hiba! I'll surely post more.. 😛 😳

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Deezi

@Deezi

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

awesome geet......👏👏
exactly describes maans feelings atm......👏

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liv2laugh

@liv2laugh

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Hi Geet

You have done it again. Beautiful poem conveying Maan's feelings eloquently.

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

These were my favorite lines

Somehow I couldn't get her out of my mind,
She convinced me without trying that she was one of a kind

Her beautiful innocence caught me by the heart,
I noticed the fiery truth and passion of her eyes from the start,

It brings out how Geet might appear to him and why she is the one who tugs at his heartstrings. I love reading your poems.