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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey everyone!
I thought of writing one from Maan's side as well!

here it is



A man who created his own dessert-
I kept myself aloof since that first hurt,
Created a shell made of the toughest looks,
looks cruel enough to be a part of history books

She kicked down all those walls,
from the start, all her problems I would have to solve,
screaming and shouting, she ordered me to help her,
and yet at the same time aware of the tragedy that had befallen her

I forgot all about her, and yet she came back again and again,
yet again,she found me to drive me insane,
Somehow I couldn't get her out of my mind,
She convinced me without trying that she was one of a kind

Her beautiful innocence caught me by the heart,
I noticed the fiery truth and passion of her eyes from the start,
She shocked me with such contradictions,
that it seemed she was not in real life but someone in fiction

Everytime she raised her eyes to mine, I get lost,
a single touch makes me feel as if I am being shot,
every time she falls in my arms due to some miraculous clumsiness of hers,
My heart sings for joy and pulse leaps with excitement everytime she clutches my shirt

What's happening to me? who have I become,
I never liked her, and yet for me, she is my sun-
my heart's sole purpose of beating, there she stands giving orders to me,
and here I am, too mesmerised by her goodness and beauty to see...

Is it that I'm falling in love with her?
Or am I going crazy
LEt me ignore everything else and look deep within me





okay, so I had some really beautiful lines while I was sleeping last night, but iforgot them in the morning :(

anyways, comments welcome and press the like button if you want more!!

lots of love 😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
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it's very well written!!!!
lookin 4rwrd to ur wrk:)
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This is so -speechless- aaapt for maan 😊 it seemed as if he really did write this and that too from his heart! i abso-freaking-lutely love this and ur an amazing poet 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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geet,

u granted my wish !!!!! u wrote a poem from maan's point of view.... thanks!!!!! 😊

its really nice.....!!!!!!!!! 👏

soumya

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Posted: 15 years ago
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geet very beautful poem and apt for the present situation.Very lovely.OMG!U r such a genius..!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: geet.a

hey everyone!
I thought of writing one from Maan's side as well!

here it is



A man who created his own dessert-
I kept myself aloof since that first hurt,
Created a shell made of the toughest looks,
looks cruel enough to be a part of history books

She kicked down all those walls,
from the start, all her problems I would have to solve,
screaming and shouting, she ordered me to help her,
and yet at the same time aware of the tragedy that had befallen her

I forgot all about her, and yet she came back again and again,
yet again,she found me to drive me insane,
Somehow I couldn't get her out of my mind,
She convinced me without trying that she was one of a kind

Her beautiful innocence caught me by the heart,
I noticed the fiery truth and passion of her eyes from the start,
She shocked me with such contradictions,
that it seemed she was not in real life but someone in fiction

Everytime she raised her eyes to mine, I get lost,
a single touch makes me feel as if I am being shot,
every time she falls in my arms due to some miraculous clumsiness of hers,
My heart sings for joy and pulse leaps with excitement everytime she clutches my shirt

What's happening to me? who have I become,
I never liked her, and yet for me, she is my sun-
my heart's sole purpose of beating, there she stands giving orders to me,
and here I am, too mesmerised by her goodness and beauty to see...

Is it that I'm falling in love with her?
Or am I going crazy
LEt me ignore everything else and look deep within me





okay, so I had some really beautiful lines while I was sleeping last night, but iforgot them in the morning :(

anyways, comments welcome and press the like button if you want more!!

lots of love 😳




@red: i simply love the way u worded these lines!!!! lovely....!!!!!!! ⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

<font color="#ff3399">it's very well written!!!! </font>

<font color="#ff3399">lookin 4rwrd to ur wrk:)</font>



Thanks a lot :))
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: cooldude10

This is so -speechless- aaapt for maan 😊 it seemed as if he really did write this and that too from his heart! i abso-freaking-lutely love this and ur an amazing poet 😊



😛 aw,thanks a lot for liking it :)

I will write more 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: pickle6586

geet,

u granted my wish !!!!! u wrote a poem from maan's point of view.... thanks!!!!! 😊

its really nice.....!!!!!!!!! 👏

soumya



Thanks a lot 😆

😉 for the idea abt writing for Maan too

love ya
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: bestfan

geet very beautful poem and apt for the present situation.Very lovely.OMG!U r such a genius..!



thanks a lot 😳 🤗

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