ma very short ff hope u guys will lyk it

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys i am not so good in ff or story writing but as in weekends i am missing maneet so badly so i just imagined some scene and thot to share wid you all hope you will lyk it .
and plz excuse me for any mistakes
so here it goes
You all have already red da article that maan will be eating in dhabba
So I wz wondering wat if geet get drunk in dhabba (u knw da old Indian style by exchange of order juice to beer 😕 ) nd den strt her childish behavior and strt thankng maan for evryytime being on her side to help her from hoshiyapur to delhi maan will be really glad to hear that(as geet has remembered evry bit of time he hv hd spent wid her in hoshiyarpur😳 ) .An as maan's car's wheel is robbed they will have to go home by walk as dey r nt gttng ny taxi so on der way geet is makng him luf on her silliest joke , maan really njyng that nd giggling nd lufing 😃 den geet immediately tells him why dnt you smile ever "u look so good when u smile , just keep smiling lyk dis alwz u luk so sweet wid smile (as she is nt in her sense )" maan whos is loving her compliments asks her wat else she DZ ND dznt lyk abt him den she tells "wen u scold me nd dnt trust me even if i am ryt but i know you r nt bad person frm inside u are very good human being frm inside but u show world da rude side f urs nd I knw thats nt true maan "You r the bestest person i have evr met nd i really like you i wish u wer alwz der for me to help ,maan who is listing all this nd is lost in geet in loving her convo ❤️ instantly reply i will be alwz der for you geet ..... nd lyk dis story go on i am nt sure wdr u guys will lyk dis or nt so din write further so if you liked it den do let me knw

thank you anu 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow that is so cute...only problem will be pregnant and drinking not safe!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oh thank you 😊 ya bt u knw 🤢 Indian serial dis is ma 1st ff so plz excuse on am mistake 😉 i will take that in consideration next time
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Please do continue writing!!!! We love reading any think about maaneet here!!!!

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