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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pari_smile

Part1:
wow bro u really r an awesome writer acha hua ki started writing a ff.
anyways bck to the part it was really good well written and funny😆 poor shashank he is really trying to make them feel less nervous lekin unhe yeh nahi patha ki they r not nervous but just bored of his lecture😆 lecture interesting banake ka socha tha lekin unhe kya patha ki he just made it more boring (if thats even possible) lol i wld start day dreaming if i had to ever sit in a 2 hr long session😆😆(actually had that experience my phys lecture😕😆) lol bck to the ff chalo armaan finally made a friend aur woh sid hi hona tha kya actually its fine i like sid as long as he stays away frm ridz!!
lol sid was funny "yeh budda kitna pakka raha hai"😆😆

lol but the funny thing was what the joinees were thinking i mean ridz lol uska papa itna acha "interesting" lecture de raha tha aur she was thinking of boyfriends😆 office main hot larka hai na humara armaan😉😆
and Shin lol i really feel for her sachi mai yaar her parents shld have found her a plae where the boss doesnt give these long lectures😆
and sani hmm humari sani will always be the same na😆 boss main hubby😆
jaldi se isse iski umar ka koyi ladke se introduce karwao😆😆😆
Vini such a good empolyee she pays soo much attention isse aur points chahiye😆koyi mujhe dadna do need to hit her😆😆😆
Sid hehe luving him "kis gadhe ne kaha chamcha banna buri baat hai"😆😆😆luv that line
amd armaan aww poor him he has to listen to shashanks boring lecture😆
lol and sashank's last line "was this clapping for the session or coz its over"😆😆😆what do u think shanky😆😆😆 he really is trying to be a good cool boss😆😆
Overall it was great part bhaiyya😊
sorry for the blabbering😆

nahi i am not a good writer yeh to mazak mazak mein likh diya😆😆😆.............wow loved ur comment and loved the way u described all the characters..............mommy aapko part acha laga thats great for me and sorry mat kaho plzzzz and baki parts bhi jaldi se paro aur comment karke batao kaisey hai😃

Part 2:

great part luved how u showed everyone's interactions
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This line made me laugh soo badly😆
Nattu: well Miss Shin why do u always remain so angry. Are you some kind of factory where anger is produced (started to giggle loudly after her comment)
hehe really shin need to chill a bit and not be angry all the time.lekin hehe sweet how yaha bhi woh dono twinzy bangaye😆 and now i am starting to dislike sid arghhh stay away from ridz she prefers armaan than u. lol AR greeting bhau bhau and meoe meow😆 u knw this kind of reminds of something🤔but i forgot😆 hehe armaan puppy dog and ridz pussy cat😆 luv it
oye woh shin hai gussa karna kam nahi kar sakti and nattu ka comment aapko acha laga i am so glad to hear that, haan woh dono yaha bhi twinzy ban hi gaye😆😆😆...........well ridz kissi prefer karti hai yeh abhi kisko pata hai yaar😆😆😆😆........oye puppy dog and pussy cat ke romance ko nazar mat lagao😆😆😆
and sani yaar she talks so much and its all abt her crushes etc😆 luv her character its just soo much fun.

ya she is one character in my FF jiski baat par koi bhi hass de and jiski band bajana chahti hai woh bhi baja deti hai😆😆😆😆
and aww armaan is falling for ridz tooo and ridz already kin of likes him cant wait for more of their interactions. oops pehla din aur they dont even care abt the instructions well except for vini hope nattu doesnt punish them😆
and arghh hate that gu who ever he is
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well ab AR FF mein AR ek dusre ko pasand nahi karenge to kya waha ke peon ko pasand karenge😆😆😆😆.............arey natu se darta kaun hai😆😆😆..............well woh kaun hai yeh abhi thora baad mein pata chalega😃




Edited by hunder - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pari_smile

Part 3:

I think it was sid not sure but hate him now😡 acha hua ki ridz ko ab armaan pe koyi shaq nahi hai lekin usse sid pe bhi nahi hai, hope she finds out soon abt that person.
and lol sachmein great team sani and shin😆luved this part of the convo bichara sid...NOT
well ab woh kaun tha yeh to time hi batayega😆😆😆...........oye sid bechara nahi hai and ya even i love sani and shin's team

Sani: who did u call hubbies ki malika Mr male chauvinist, u know u have a blind belief in national superiority and glory. Why do u think that I will be jealous of u, I have seen much handsome men than u in my life.

Sid: ok ok miss sani relax karo I was just joking

Shin: acha hi hai ki tum mazak kar rahe the warna mein abhi apni sandle ka number kahin chapne wali thi.😆


hawww miss nattu was angry lekin armaan's plan worked well atleast nattu is not always serious.

no bhaiyya this part was not boring at all i liked it.

wow so u loved those comments haan😆😆😆😆


well nattu is a nice hearted person and ab to sab ki dost bhi ban gayi hai.............well i am glad ki tumhe yeh part boring nahi laga😃





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Posted: 15 years ago

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cheater partner.............😡😡

nananaanaanaaaaaa olalallalal *sani doing hulala dance*🤣
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thik hai i am updating in 30 minutes, be ready😉😉

okay okay mein yahi hu😉😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pari_smile

Part 4:

Another great part pj bhaiyya!!!😃 really luved armaan and sani's bonding aww so sweet they became bro and sis lolz and also nattu sees him as a younger brother. lolz kam akal😆😆 wah bro kya naam hai😆😆
lolz i knw i must have already said this but i luv sani's character😆😆(urff my beti🤣)
haan ab sani and nattu ne armaan ko apna bhai bana liya hai😆😆😆.......oye naam ka mazak mat banao and ur beti is just too spoiled child😆 and u liked this part aswell

the whole part was really good
wonder who that gu is i hate him😡 thoought it wld be sid but it seems like its someone else
well ab woh kaun hai yeh to itni jaldi pata nahi lagne dunga😆😆😆..........well koi bhi ho sakta hai mommy😆😆😆







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sapne dekhna chod de beta .. m here.........😉😆😆😆

sorry vini par tere sapne par paani phir gaya🤣 sani ki gustakiya maaf ho😆😆😆
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PART - 7


Armaan and Riddhima moved towards Armaan's bike. Armaan was feeling a bit nervous as he has never allowed any girl to sit on his bike and today he was about to drop his boss's daughter home. They both were silently moving towards the bike, one side where Armaan was silent because of nervousness and on other side Riddhima was silent as she wanted armaan to start the conversation.

Armaan was always extremely passionate about driving or riding bikes. But today more than driving the bike he was thinking about how sweet it would be to have a sweet girl like riddhima next to him while he drives or how romantic it would be to ride his bike when a beautiful girl sits close to him, hugging him tightly and whispering in his ears. All this feelings were new to him as this was the first time that a girl is going to sit with him on the bike. His first bike ride with a girl on his back, really made him feel very special.

Lot of thoughts were coming in his mind like a drive with a girl is romantic, thrilling and ofcourse ever-rememerable. He wanted this ride to be very special as presence of Riddhima may change the mood of the journer entirely.

Armaan: (trying to make eye contact with riddhima) so riddhima have u informed ur dad that u will be going to home with me.

Riddhima: arey nahi but no need for that, ghar pohonch kar call kar dungi. (passed a very sweet smile so that armaan could feel comfortable talking to her as she realized that he was feeling nervous talking to her alone when no one else was around them)

Armaan: I feel a little embarrassed about this, but I would like to tell u that this is the first time that a girl is going to sit with me on my bike.

Riddhima: well I must appreciate your honesty, larke ho kar itne honest.

Armaan: haan ab honesty to dikha hi sakta hoon na jhoot bolkar mujhe kya milega. Actually I was a bit nervous about all this.

Riddhima: well I know yeh to tumhara chehra dekh kar koi bhi bata dega.

Armaan: you know actually I am fortunate to find a good friend like you on the very first day of my work.

Riddhima: oh that's so sweet but mein to tumhari jaan hoon na

Armaan: oye madam game kab ki khatam ho chuki hai.

Riddhima: game khatam ho chuki hai my puppy dog but not your dare, bhool gaye u have to flirt with me for 7 days.

Armaan: but haan who to sabke samne na abhi to koi nahi hai.

Riddhima: well no dear, dare yeh nahi tha ki tumhe sabke samne hi flirt karma hai, dare yeh tha ki poore 7 days tumhe mere saath flirt karma hai koi ho ya na ho.

Armaan: ok baba thik hai, but bike ride karte huye flirt kar lenge abhi thori normal baatein hi kar lein.

Riddhima: thik hai batao kya baat karni hai.

Armaan: kuch khas nahi tum batao apne baare mein, why did u join this company only?

Riddhima: koi specific reason nahi hai its just that kahin career to banana than a and then bachpan se I have seen my dad work for this company so I decided to join it aswell.

Armaan: oh that's cool

Riddhima: chalo tum batao how were ur college days.

Armaan: they were quite cool, we used to do lot of masti, bunk classes, do proxy for friends, watch movies, sit in canteen and play games all day and at the time exams study hard to get good marks. Man I really miss those days yaar. Kisi baat ki koi tension nahi hoti thi and we used to hang out whole night and do lot of masti.

Riddhima: wow that's great, I my college we used to flirt with almost all the boys. Hamara to favourite time pass hota tha canteen mein baith kar har lark eke saath flirt karma.

Armaan: tum bachpan se hi sabke saath itna flirt karti ho kya.

Riddhima: yes'I...was'lolzz I remember in 1st this boy asked me to marry him!

Armaan: then what was your answer yes or no.

Riddhima: I said maybe, I said it depends on my mommy, I will do it if she agrees.

Armaan: haha thats a good answer. (a smile came on his face and said) Bachpan mein bhi tayiaar thi agar mommy maan jati to.

Riddhima: agar maan jati to mein shaadi kar hi leti, mere liye mommy ke decision ke upar kuch nahi.

Armaan: ok tell me seriously, did u ask ur mom about it.

Riddhima: nahi bhool gayi thi, I was just 6 years old na saari baatein yaad nahi rehti thi. (started to laugh). Lekin dat boy was chooo adorable... he was shorter then me.

Armaan: well pyaar mein height matter nahi karti dear

Riddhima: well I wouldn't know na.. mujhe kabhi pyar nahi huya... lolzzz

Armaan: oh ok, chalo ab chalen dekho baatein karte karte bike tak bhi pohonch gaye.

Riddhima: ok fine but I am bored now jo start flirting with me please.

Armaan: ok but first let me sart the bike and lets sart our journey of getting back home.

Armaan before turning the keys of his bike took riddhima's address and decided what route will he follow. Armaan decided to follow a route which was a bit lengty but safe. He didn't wanted any trouble during this ride. He checked the bike properly as he didn't wanted Riddhima to spend her night at rideside while he repair the bike. Then he went straight to the prtrol pump to fill his bike with enough fuel to return home safe and sound. Then he checked the air pressure of the wheels, inspected the break and gear before he began with the journey.

Riddhima: ab agar poori tarah se checking kar li ho to chalen, I am getting bored sitting at petrol pump.

Armaan: ya sure I was just checking whether everything is fine with the bike or not.

Riddhima: well agar chaeck kar liya ho to ab ghar bhi chalen.

Armaan: haan haan kar raha hoon drive, ab chup ho jao.

Armaan started to drive but was driving slowly and safely.

Riddhima: ab kya tortoise ki speed par chaloge kya. Thori to fast chalao. Ab itna darte ho kya fast drive karne se. thore brave bano na.

Armaan: look this is not a time where I want to exhibit my bravery and skills. I want to avoid the display of my driving skills when you are with me as I want to get u home safe.

Armaan was driving for the next 15 minutes without saying anything. He completely got into driving and neglected Riddhima and the journey definitely became boring one for her.

Riddhima: Armaan will u say something, talk to me yaar I am getting really bored.

Armaan: arey to abhi drive karte huye kya karun tumhe entertain karne ke liye.

Riddhima: ok I will tell u what u should do ( she brought her face a bit closer to armaan's face, made her lips gently brush against the skin of his earlobe. Breathe softly into his ear and just in a soothing voice spoke slowly ) start flirting with me again my puppy dog. Meow meow.

Armaan: (got really shocked to see riddhima doing this and decided to avoid telling her what he was feeling) ok my pussy cat. Bhau bhau.

Riddhima: between hamari date ka kya huya???

Armaan: kaunsi dae?? (got really confused)

Riddhima: oye itni jaldi bhool gaye, andar restaurant mein promise to kit hi na.

Armaan: (yaar yeh larki to piche hi par gayi hai, ab isey date pe bhi lijana parega kya, iski speed to dekho aaj pehli baar mili hai aur aaj hi dete ke peeche par gayi hai) dare mein zabardasti bani girl friend ke saath date bhi to game ke saath hi khatam ho gayi na.

Riddhima: Haww choote u promised me inside ab tum na nahi kar sakte.

Armaan: thik hai preparation to karne do, we will go in another 2 days.

Riddhima: 2 DAYZ!!!(shouted in armaan's ears) me can't wait so long.

Armaan: tumne kabhi suna nahi hai kya "sabar ka fal mitha hota hai". Wait it has to be a great date as meri life ki pehli date hai. So I have to think ki karma kya hai, I don't want to sound as a joker on our date.

Riddhima: ok mein wait karoongi, happy now. But meow meow wants a naughty naughty date.

Armaan: ab yeh naughty date kya hoti hai and tumpe kya koi billi ka bhut sawar hai, bhau bhau.

Riddhima: chalo tum date plan karo usey naughty mein bana dungi (started to smile thinking about the date) and to phir tumpe kya koi kutte ka booth sawar hai kya!!!

Armaan: ab tum aisa kya karogi date ko naughty banana ke liye (pata nahi ab yeh kya soch rahi hai, armaan beta tu to gaya)

Riddhima: who tum mujhpe hi chor do. (started to laugh) and tumne bataya nahi ki kya tumpe kutte ka bhoot chara huya hai.

Armaan: fine, as u wish and mujhpe to sirf tumhara bhoot chara hua hai.

Riddhima: romantic ho rahe ho (started to blush)

Armaan: flirt kar raha hu as usual.

Riddhima: pata hai ab ghar ja kar I have to clean my room! reli messy!, Armaan can u clean it for me.

Armaan: I am your boyfriend not your servant, khud saaf karo.

Riddhima: kaisey boyfriend ho yaar, aapki girlfriend yaha pe sick hai, aur tum ho ki uski room bhi nahi clean kar sakte.

Armaan: yaar tum kaunse angle se bimar lag rahi ho.

Riddhima: ab tum apni girlfriend par trust bhi nahi karte kya.

Armaan: acha bhi karta hoon trust, acha chalo ab tumhare boyfriends ke baare mein discuss karte hai

Riddhima: bolo kya discuss karma hai

Armaan: so how many boyfriends do u have these days.

Riddhima: actually none, don't be so shocked, I mean okay there is a guy and we are just like "Hanging out" but not together.

Armaan: so how many guys were lucky enough to hang out with you this year.

Riddhima: ok see most of my friends are guyz, at the moment about 11 guyz like me, out of the 11 I flirt with 5 of them and the rest 6 are weirdoz.

Armaan: so anyone special out of those 5.

Riddhima: ya there I one guy his name is Seve and we are like really close. Like he keeps asking me out and all but I keep rejecting him as I don't want to be in a relationship.

Armaan: bechara Seve kitna rejected feel karta hoga na.

Riddhima: haan who to hai but meri kya galti, maine thorna kaha tha mujhe like karne ke liye. Hey would u like top see my childhood pic.

Armaan: haan haan dikhao

Riddhima: (took out one pic from the purse and showed it to armaan) kaisey hai.

Armaan: hey you look so cute as a baby yaar

Riddhima: thanks

Armaan: so how many boyfriends till u had till date

Riddhima: well I had about 8 of them but I was not serious about any of them and u know what I hated my last boyfriend a lot.

Armaan: kyu kya huya?

Riddhima: this was a guy named Ravi, that kutta invited me to his house to watch movie, while we were watching the movie he tried to get physical with me so I got angry and first kicked him very hard and then slapped him and went away.

Armaan: oh u are really brave and that kamina deserved it

Riddhima yes he did that kutta kamina

Armaan: so did u ever meet him after that

Riddhima: no and uske baad se I have not made any boyfriend I just have hanging out friends.

Armaan: tum to kafi choosey ho gayi ho

Riddhima: yes I know (passed a very sweet smile), u know I have never let anyone of them to touch or do anything, the maximum they can ever do is hold my hand.

Armaan: oh thats so sweet, so u seem to be a very good girl.

Riddhima: yes I am a very good girl. The only reason why I have boy friends is that those boyz annoy the shit outta me...!. The longest relationship I was in was like 4 months. Shortest was1 day (started to laugh on remembering that)

Armaan: 1 day wale ki kahani to batao please

Riddhima: nahi yaar, choro na your gonna get jealous

Armaan: nahi yaar trust me I won't be jealous, ab batao na.

Riddhima: it was soooo funny! This happened with me in the college, ok so this guy comes up to me and he goes like your really cute. Then he said I like u a lot and then he runs away. Pata hai then he comes back 10 minutes later with his full biodata. So to shut him up, I was like okay fine i'll give u a chance.

Armaan: agar chance de hi diya tha to ek din mei n hi dump kyu kar diya.

Riddhima: he got all happy and he dropped me off to all my classes and stuff. GOD! he was soooo boring. Next day I made my friend go up to him and tell him we were through. He wasen't worth me breaking up with him in person aswell. HE WAS SOOOO BORING!!!!!!!!

Armaan: oh poor him, u broke his innocent heart.

Riddhima: yaar I need entertainment in my life and that guy was sooo dull!!!

Armaan: chalo acha hai, may be u will find someone of your type soon.

Riddhima: hmm... me still waiting for him!!!! but I wont find him... I know. I am going to marry the guy my mommy tells me to!!!!!!

Armaan: well your mommy will find the best for u and maybe he will be of your type

Riddhima: I trust her blindly, waisey do u know ki in my last days in college I was with 4 guys at once.

Armaan: your speed is like a rocket yaar

Riddhima: mein kya karu! I just love guyzzz

Armaan: lo ab tumhara ghar bhi aa gaya. Finally hum flirt karte karte poonch hi gaye.



Note - sorry first of all for late update and ya promo mein bohot kuch tha but part mein nahi aaya, rest of the things will be in next part


Promo - AR go to watch a movie in he night

sid takes vini for a date

all had fun after the day by pulling nattu's leg

Armaan got a good scolding from the boss


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yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!! m first .......😉🤣

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The part was full on entertainer ......😆😆😆 ... it was really nice ...

Aww... armaan nrevous ho raha tha .. soo sweet ... jahaan Ridz ko nervous hona chahiye tha wahan bechare armaan ki phus phus ho gayi.....🤣... .yaar, u knw dats why i luv this FF so much ... sab kuch ulta hota h.... shayd sidha jaana toh humne sikha hi nae , haina?.......😉🤣... I m sooo much in luv with the Ridz of ur FF ... Ridz with Muski's aatma.......🤣

But today more than driving the bike he was thinking about how sweet it would be to have a sweet girl like riddhima next to him while he drives or how romantic it would be to ride his bike when a beautiful girl sits close to him, hugging him tightly and whispering in his ears.

By God! kuch jyada nae soch liya.. mujhe toh lag raha tha ki bechara pareshaan ho jayega and isne toh pehle se hi sapne dekhna shuru kar diya.......tchh .. .par beta, ye sapna toh sach hoga hi nae.....😉🤣

(passed a very sweet smile so that armaan could feel comfortable talking to her as she realized that he was feeling nervous talking to her alone when no one else was around them)

dat was really sooo sweet of ridz.. bechare ko comfortable karvana bahut jaroori tha....😆..warna pata nae bike start bhi kar pata ya nae.....😆😆


Riddhima: wow that's great, I my college we used to flirt with almost all the boys. Hamara to favourite time pass hota tha canteen mein baith kar har lark eke saath flirt karma.

Waah Ridz...! kya amazing hobby hai ... 😆...larko par thoda toh taras kha leti ... ya fir unki gfs par....😆

Riddhima: yes'I...was'lolzz I remember in 1st this boy asked me to marry him!

Oh now i GOT it... iski toh bachpan ki aadat h flirting ! tabhi itni aasani se chutegi nae....🤣
I luv the fact dat she luves her parents a lot and trusts their decision ... it actually makes her unique as she enjoys her life the way she wants but not at the stake of her morals n values.... 😃

Lekin dat boy was chooo adorable... he was shorter then me.

hayye!! isko apan bachpan ka pyaar yaad aa gaya ... n ridz , chota h toh kya hua? he wanted to marry you na....😉🤣...u can keep him as a spare option...🤣

Riddhima: ab agar poori tarah se checking kar li ho to chalen, I am getting bored sitting at petrol pump.

Sach me yaar ... while reading i was like ki ye isse aaj hi ghar pahuchaega ya fir kal... concern hona achi baat h par ye toh over over over concerned ho gaya ... koi is kam akal armaan ko batao k ridz ko kuch nae ho sakta atleast jab tak woh uske saath h......🤣

Armaan started to drive but was driving slowly and safely.

Uffooo... iska toh kuch nae ho sakta ... 😡🤣 ... yaar tu normally drive nae kar sakta ..itna darr raha h toh bel gaddi me hi le aata na... 🤣...PJ! is bechare armaan ko kuch tips de de... ek tu h jo over excited ho kar bike chalwa kar accident karwa leta h and ek ye Armaan h jo bike or bel gaadi me farak nae samjh pa raha h....🤣

OMG! in dono ki cat-dog fight on the route bhi chal rahi thi... u knw i cudnt stop laughing at that.. it was really soo funny!......🤣...

yaar yeh larki to piche hi par gayi hai, ab isey date pe bhi lijana parega kya, iski speed to dekho aaj pehli baar mili hai aur aaj hi dete ke peeche par gayi hai

aage aage dekho hota hai kya?.....😉😆😆😆

So I have to think ki karma kya hai, I don't want to sound as a joker on our date

Ohooo..aisa kya different karne wala h..?...... m getting curious nw... n this ridz is such an impatient soul......🤣..thoda bhi sabr nae hota isse.......😆

ok mein wait karoongi, happy now. But meow meow wants a naughty naughty date.

Iska matlab toh mere bhi sir ke upar se gaya ... 🤣..aisa kya karna chahti h ridz..?? 😲😆😆😆

Riddhima: pata hai ab ghar ja kar I have to clean my room! reli messy!, Armaan can u clean it for me.

WOW ! wat a gf !! sahi h yaar ... i guess sab ko isse tips lene chahiye...🤣... boy frnd ki jagah servant kyun nae dhund leti beta.......🤣
and waise bahana hi banana tha toh kuch acha sa bana leti ...sick kis angle se lag rahi thi jo armaan taras kha kar ek baar help ki soch leta... yaar, PJ ! tu ise dimaag dena bhul gaya tha kya?...... 🤔🤣

😲..yaar Ridz ki list of boyfriends toh seriously sunne layak hai.. .kya list h ..i wonder use sabke naam yaad kaise rehte hai... 😆😆😆.... is she on a mission to complete her target....🤣... man! she's sooo funny yaar ... simply luv her ... muaahz for the amazing dialogues......❤️...

yaar is baar oh sach me part pata hi nae chala kab khatam ho gaya.... it was sooooooooooo small...........😡😆😆😆...ab jaldi se next update karna ... m really waiting for more AR scenes...... 😉😆😆

and see, is baar WITHOUT cheating m the FIRST to res.....😉🥳...
bechari SANI ko toh attack aa gaya hoga ... uski bani banai setting par pani fir gaya ... 😉😆😆... koi baat nae yaar.. next time tu pakka se first aa jaana..i wnt come in between ...sachi me... 😃.!


Love
Vini
Edited by coolvini4u - 15 years ago
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res AAAHHH vini tera to mein khun pi jaungi😡 EDITED
bhai ever since i red the precap, i was waiting for this part and trust me u lived upto my expectations. it was so awesome. u know ur ff is one of it's kind. i mean ur ideas are so innovative that i haven't red in any other ff before. haha riddhima to pakka armaan ko bigaar degi week khatam hote hote😆 i am guessin that armaan will go thru extreme changes after that 1 week (after the bet finishes). i want to see that naughty armaan now and he makes riddhima shocked by his new avatar. it will be fun to watch blabber mouth riddhima toungue tied in front of armaan😆
and armaan was so nervous when riddhima was gonna sit with him. bless bhai can i pull his cheeks plz🤣 i mean he was like awww cho chweet😆 i love his simplicity and honesty and riddhima haha madam ka kya kehna. i saw a different avatar of her in this part. she is not that spoilt as she shows herself to be. she is a good girl😉😆😆😆 and hahahah it was hilarious when armaan gave his bike full service before dropping riddhima home. socho agar sirf ghar drop karne pe armaan ka yeh hal hai, to jab date pe le jayega to janaab ka kya haal hoga😆😆😆
and ooooohhhh riddhima was seducing armaan on the bike😆. ridzy bbz that can get utterly dangerous if armaan looses his control😉😆😆😆 bechare armaan ka bura haal hua tha when riddhima was seducing him😆.
and ah how can i forget flirting partners😆 bhai i loved that idea of flirting partner thing. it makes me laugh. riddhima taking full advantage of armaan's helpless state and bechara armaan getting annoyed😆. i was like wow after listening to riddhima's BF's story. good she slapped that ravi kamina😡 and man she's has got too many BFs😆. ur ff is a perfect example of opposite attracts. excellent part bhai and am egarly waiting for the next update when both chunnu munnu will go on a date😆😆😆. sorry for the late comment bhai. NOW DON'T GET ME HANGED AND EAT MY BRAIN😡😆😆😆
love
sani
Edited by Sani_Rani - 15 years ago

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