AR/Premeer SS: I Hate LuvStories [Chapter 2 Pg 5]

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Hey Guys...Hi i am maryam... and this is my second ss...and i have a lot of ffs...So first of all i want to tell u ka ye pura mera idea aur thora i hate luvstories trailer say lia hai..warna its all my idea...i hope u like it... i am posting the first part...



"Hey honey, whats up?," asked Prem...with his cool dude style

"nothing..whats up with u, sweety?," said a girl name Tina

" As hot and happening as ever," said Prem

"sooo.... What say... today at pub at 8?," asked Tina

"sureeeeeeee... ok then i will pick u up at eight," said Prem and blow a kiss to the girl who was standing in the food counter..in sanjeevani


"Hey Heer... how was ur day?," said Muskaan

"It was @#!*% tiring," said heer as she stretched her head

"oh...for some people... hey angie," said Prem as he came with his coffee and sat in front of heer

"hey prem...you look really fresh," said Angie as she came and sat beside him

"ya I am... unlike Muskaan and heer," said Prem

"oh well...if you work like us... other then flirting with ur patients..you be tired, too," said heer glaring at him

"oh Miss. glaring eyes.. I am different and if you notice i attend more patients then u," said Prem with same eyes

"ok guys... plz stop," said Atul

"ok bye guys... I am going home... see you all tomorrow..byeee," said Heer and left



"If you make the deal with us then it would be profit for both of the companies. It will also make your company more popular," said Armaan


"Thats all, now the discussion is all urs," said Armaan as he picked his coat and walked out of the conference room

"wow...I am impress with his confidence," said a man

"we should sign the deal..it will make us more popular and will give us more profit," said another man

"ok then lets sigh the contract papers," said the third man




"I am in love!!!," said Riddhima as she came of the theater... watching DDLJ

"For the Twentieth Time???," exclaimed Sapna

"Soo what???... its the same guy," said Riddhima

"well.. ok," said Sapna dropping the topic as it was useless to talk on it

They were walking in silence, when suddenly Riddhima spoke.

"Sapna... mera raj kab ayega???," said Riddhima






Encounter???






Hey guys thats for the chapter one

i hope u like it

plz give ur comments

luv

maryam


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Edited by armaankashridz - 15 years ago
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Uhm uhm,
Hi Mini Jaan,

finally am here,
sorry, wo ghadi kharab ho gayi thi, so time ka pata nahi chala, n am editting it late,
ab sorry bola na, itna bhaav mat khaana 😛
atleast i managed to secure my first position na *sweet innocent look*

now lemme comment on the part first

first comes Prem
its so tough to imagine the sweet guy in such a casanova look, but i guess he wud do justice with the character😆

Muskaan, Heer, Atul n Anjie seem like the friends of dmg season 1, n Prem being the mischievous guy, Heer really suits in the sweet n cute character😃

Then comes My Hero, Armaan, good to see him with the angry young businessman look, n not tht casanova n careless thingy, i am already liking it😳

And last of all, Riddhima with Sapna, waah waah, the bubbly n cutie pie just suits her so much, lost in the dreamland for her Raj😃

finally, a very wondeful start,
congrta sfor ur new ff,
and ab jaldi upload karna,
n promise main comment delay nahi karungi,

ps - i deserve a party for being the first one😃

love u loads
ues
jia
Edited by kweetrockstar - 15 years ago
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Hi maryam

its awesome
i loved it lolz u changed Prem's character it was awesome
And i will wait for Armaan And Ridzi to meet and even All the other couples.
DO pm me
i will read but will be read commenting :)_
Edited by ..NiyaPari.. - 15 years ago
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hehehe dat was cute u totally flipped dere proffession dats cool.......thnx fr d pm n cont soon
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hey nice cocept.. AR and PH together... :)
gud luck and plzzz continue.. :)
thanx for the PM and add me to the PM list when u have 1.. :)
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wowww sounds cool...
update sooooon......
😃
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hey Maryam..😃 thnxx for PMing me..loved the introduction and the concept..👍🏼 nice work dear..you've included two of my altime fav couples..PH and AR..just love them! and the trailer for IHLS spells awe-some-ness! can't wait for the movie, Imran-Sonam and ur FF..😛
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nice concept....
n sounds really cool........
thnx for the pm............
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Hi maryam its awesome i loved it

contd soon

love,

sonia

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