AR/Premeer SS: I Hate LuvStories [Chapter 2 Pg 5] - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
heyy sweety!
nice beginning!!
really enjoyed reading it...
just one thing..
who's prem n heer.?? like wat show?
cuz this is the first time i heard that.. lool:P
but otherwise..
really liked it =D
luv,
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
superb start thx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
hey mary
whts up
congrats for ue second ff
n i loved it......
the concept ios really intrestion....
plzz contieu soon
love ya
habs
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
the concept is mindblowing n i liked prem as flirt 😆😆 n m waiting for AR meet 😉😃'
Edited by riddhan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
Hey Maryam!
That was spectacular cont soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
oye hoyye
madam
beautiful siggy
loved it
lekin update kab mil rahi hai?????????/
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

oye hoyye
madam
beautiful siggy
loved it
lekin update kab mil rahi hai?????????/

inshallah aaj milgayege😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
Hey guys... Thx a lot for the comments... Sorry didn't reply... I was busy... But i am here with the next part i made it long... I dont know is it really long or not but it is long... so here u go... i hope u have fun reading it.... And ya one more thing... I made a siggie for this ff.. I hope u like it... and do tell me is it gud or not?






Armaan came out of his office with his guards behind him.

Then they walked to his black Nissan. There he stopped his guards and took the key and went off to home.

There he went to take a shower and change his clothes. He wore his red, V-neck, T- shirt and his black jeans and his sports shoes. Then locked his house and went to his garage.

There he took his car and went off to Ambala.


[Authur's Note: there is going to be a persons point of view from now on... but not all the time and i am gonna tell u... who's point of view it is...]

*Armaan*

Well... todays work is done and now i am off to Ambala. Ambala? Am i not suppose to go to Ludhaina???

Anyways, lets call Dad and find out.

Armaan- Hey dad
Dad- hey son... how are u and how was the meeting?
Armaan- Dad.. I am totally fine... u tell me... and the meeting was successful... now we would open out fifth branch in India, in five different cities.
Dad- I am gud... and congrats... its all done because of ur mehnat
Armaan- No... No dad... dont say like that... we all worked and it was ur dream... so it was everyone's mehnat
Dad- I am proud of u, son
Armaan- ok dad... but i called you for a different reason... u r in Ludhiana...so why am i going to Ambala???? I really didnt get the connection.
Dad- Oh...ya i am in Ludhiana but that stupid preet went to Ambala's Shiv Mandir...there are some really beautiful flowers... and they smell really gud.. so i wanted him to get them for the decoration of the house for the engagement.... but that idiot got lost there and now i cant even send Harman as he is busy with decoration. So i thought you can get him
Armaan- ok dad.. no problem... i will get him and ya i will reach home around 11.
Dad- ok son... tc... bye
Armaan- bye

Hmmm.. so this is the story... ok lets call Preet.

A- Saala... where are u?
P- A.B... oh thank god...finally someone is coming to get me..
A- ok...tell me one thing... do you all ways find trouble or does trouble finds you??
P- I dont know
A- hmmm.... tell me where are you now or some landmark??
P- Bhai.. I am a bit ahead of the shiv Mandir
A- Ok... wait for around 2-3 hours... it will take time to get there
P- ok bhai
A- ok then cya... bye
P- cya... bye

AFTER THREE HOURS

Finally, i am here.... I just realized.. that dad told us to go to this shiv Mandir... if we ever go to Ambala... It is really famous and all you wishes comes true..

Tell u the truth, i am not the person... who goes to Mandir every day but then.. I just wanna do it for the engagement and pray that everything goes well...

I started climbing up the stairs.. when i got up.. I heard someone's cry... some was weeping badly...It was a female... She wanted something from God...

I started walking towards her...slowly and steadily... so she doesn't know that there is someone else, too.

I was really close to here, about ten steps away... when my cell rang...i wanted to go in front of her face and see her...

It was preet, who called.

I picked up that call and ran behind that girl.

"Hey preet... I will be with u in ten mins," said Armaan and hanged up

Suddenly, I saw she is going to fall, as she tripped on a rock.

I ran fast and caught her. At that time, I notice her face was covered by her stole.

I could only see her eyes, which were even closed.

She was holding my T-Shirt tightly.

Gradually, she opened her eyes. They were beautiful,green color as neem leaves.

I made her stand. She bowed, as in saying thank you and ran away. i was about to run after her when i saw something on the rock.

It was a silver anklet. I took that and ran after her but she was too fast.

I couldn't catch her, couldn't ask her name.

I turned around and there was preet.

"bhai finally you are here... now lets go home," said Preet and drag me towards the car.

I turned around to look as if she is still there, but she was gone, from there and from my life, too.


*Prem*

Man!!! Why does some love-stories stay incomplete??? I feel sorry for them.

For example, just look at Rohit and Claire. They both love each other a lot, but Rohit's parents wont accept Claire as she is a christian and they are hindu.Rohit wont go against their will, as they are old and he cant leave them.Claire wont marry any one else as she only loves Rohit.

Now, they both are my best friend, but i am helpless. Even though i want to help then, but i cant.

Rohit wont let me help him and Claire wont go against his will.

I dont know what should i do?

I wish, I had someone who can help me
😔

Other then all this, I have one more problem, Heer.

She...She...she...arghhhhhhhh... she always makes me feel bad and to add on that she always blames me for everything.

Sometimes, I feel awful that, I wonder am i that terrible?

I also notice one thing: She is different. She is not the type of girls who will fall for my charm.

BUT...but..that doesnt mean that she would think about me, as i am a irresponsible, insensitive, useless and dont know how to respect women

She thinks, i use them and that 'love' word for me is a play. I use that word for the wrong intentions.

I wish... I had Armaan...sigh... I am sure he would understand me. Because he is the only person, who knows how much i believe in true love.

Anyways..there is no use of thinking about this.

Suddenly, i heard someone's weeping.

I looked around.. I was the only one in the fire escape staircase.

I got up and climb down some steps.

There, I saw a girl, actually its Heer.

Why is she crying? What happened?

I walked down to her. I sat down beside her. I tapped on her shoulder.

She, without turning, moved my hand.

"heer," I said gently

She immediately stood up and i did too.

First she look at me with accusing eyes, as if i was the reason for her sadness.But after a min or so, she started climbing stairs upwards to go out.

"Heer wait," said again but she didnt stop.

I took some fast steps and got hold of her hand and then pulled her towards me.

She was struggling. I was holding her by her shoulders.

"Heer stop.. you will get hurt," I said loud enough

She stopped. She just looked in my eyes.

I notice that those twinkling eyes, had tears today

Those tears were like knives
piercing my heart. It was like ... i could feel her pain.. I had tears in my eyes.

She said nothing.. not even a word... just hug me, really tight.

I just rubbed my hand on her hairs and hush her.

She cried her heart out in my arms.




Engagement
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
wow
Mini jaan
awesome part
i really loved the whole thing

too good
sachi mein

first, Armaan as the hard working guy, wow, i was drooling imagining him, lol

next, Armaan as the good son, n an amazing bro, waah waah, thats like my guy,😉

preet was also rocking,

uske baad, tht heart stopping mandir ka scene, i just totally fell in love with that one, kya mast scene tha, hayyee

n next, prem ki confusion, so cute n adorable,

n wow, ek aur fire escape ka scene, too good yaar,

the precap is cool, pata nahi kiski engagement hai

thanks so much for this amazing part

love
jia
Edited by kweetrockstar - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
Rocking part dear.Waiting for the next part.
Fatima

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