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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

awesome update

loved AR gettting along with eachother
wonder who grabbed ridz
con soon
thanks 4 da pm



well thanks for the comment

ya slowly but gradually AR will come closer and canteen mein kaun tha yeh bhi jaldi pata chal hi jayega😃

i will update it as soon as i can😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: hunder

res. hmph am 3rd.😆
wow chalo ab tum bhi 3rd aayi ho to ek gift rakh hi lo. thanks bhai. aapko yaad tha ki mera fav flvour choc hai, ya phir aise hi le aaye😆😆😆

EDITED😉 kam akkal kamine it was a superb part. simply minblowing. man i was laughing like maniacs after reading ur dialogues. u defo know how to entertain ur audience bhai😆😆😆
pata hai sis ab tumse hi to seekha hai😉😆😆😆😆
oye hoye, aur kya kya sikha hai mujse darling😉😆😆😆

i mean the way you portrayed every character is just superb and especially my fav characters till now- sani and shin.😆 man i loved them, sacchi not cuz sani is me and shin is twinzy but the way they are portrayed in ur ff are just too good and hilarious.😆😆😆
ab kya kahun sis jaisey ki pehle kaha tha woh dono hai hi itne special ki zada mehnat nahi karni pari😆😆😆

ab mein bhi kitni baar kahu ki yeh writer ke upar hai ki vo apna kitna dimaag laga ta hai, characters ko special banane mein and thank you bhai😃
bhai hats off to you ki aap new writer hote hue bhi itna acha likha. loved to the core bhai.
oye ab zada tareef bhi mat karo pata chale ki maine likhna hi chor diya😆😆😆😆😆😆

haha so funny bhai😡 agar aapne likhna chor diya then mein pm attack kar dungi😉😆

Shin: Excuse me Miss Nattu, u have no rights to talk to me like this (looked at all the other 5 with narrowed eyes which were speaking just one thing, stop laughing or get ready to get your ass kicked by me)

haye meri kamini twinzy ne aate hi apna aatank phelana and apni dadagiri shuru kar di🤣

ab shin to shin hai na, woh aur uska gussa dono hi mahan hai, kyu???????😆😆😆

haan lekin uska gussa bhi bohot sweet hai and muje to mostly apne careless behaviour ke wajah se hi daant parti hai usse😆😆😆. i love u and my twinzy itnaaaaaaaaaaa sara😃
Everyone: ya ya we will be there in 1 hour (just thinking in their hearts ki agar late ho bhi gaye to kya bigar legi yeh hamara)
nattu ko kam mat samajhna. she is an atom bomb, jab phategi tab pata chalega in trainies ko. sirf bholi bhali dikhti hai nattu kamini, hai nahi🤣

nahi sis agar woh atom bomb hai to hume bhi ussey bachna aata hai😉😆😆😆😆
haan bhai and make sure muje bohot punishment na mile cuz mein hi filhal aisi hu jisse sabse zyaada punishment milne ke chances dikh rahe hai😆😆

Armaan: well dude Mr Gupta is a very experienced man, its better we learn something from him. His experience and his words can be very good for us and for our career. Rahi baat larkiyo ki to mein yaha kaam karne aaya hoon larkiya tarne nahi.
arey mere shareef zyaade armaan. dekh bhi hot larki ko, mar nahi jaoge😆😆😆 god armaan is too sidha saadha😆😆😆
sis abhi to shareef hi hai but uske saath ke log usey shareef rehne denge thorna.......pata nahi ussey kitna bigar dein😆😆😆😆😆😆

i bet hum log hi usse mil kar bigaar denge😉😆😆😆 bhai plz ek baar armaan ko andar mere haatho talli kar dena😆😆😆
Sani: he guys I am sani and pata hai what I have had 50 crushes till now and I have dreamed of marrying all 50 of them. I was just telling ridz, vini and shin about that only. Pata hai I even had dreams of divorcing them and then getting huge alimony from them and become rich by this method.
bhai nalayak, meri izzat ka faluda bana diya aapne iss dialogue mein. i mean itni despo and greedy! thora to kam karte🤣
nahi sis abhi to aur bohot poll kholni hai na tumhari😉😉😆😆😆😆 plz bhai don't forget mere ff ke bhi saare readers yeh ff parte hai😆😆😆
bhai i loved the way you showed contrast between two twinzies. i mean meine bhi aaj tak nahi socha tha ki mein and twinzy itne opposite hai and still like best friends, wah aapne notice kar liya😆😆😆
haan notice hi nahi kiya show bhi kar diya FF mein aur aage aage dekho aur kya kya hota hai😆😆😆😆😆 i will be waiting to see aur kya kya notice kiya mere mr topper ne😆😆😆
and uff that dialogue when shin got all protective about sani and thretened sid, i wanted to hug u for writing such a fab dialogue and kiss twinzy on her cheek for saying that.😆😆😆
waisey ab bhi kar sakti ho yeh roka kisne hai😆😆😆😆 aww here *sani giving bhai a big bear hug*😃

armaan and riddhima's bonding is going quite good. love that meow meow and bhau bhau thing😆😆😆 that was cute😳
well thanks sis and i hope aage bhi aapko unka convo pasand aaye😉😆😆 sure bhai and i will be waiting for some garam garam scenes aswell😉😆😆😆
Sani: aur agar punishment di bhi to mein apne 50 hubbies mein se ek usey gift kar dunga, rishwat chalti hai yaar, corruption zindabaad.
bhai ab aur kya baaki reh gaya hai.😆 meri image ki ko watt lag gayi aapke ff par🤣 ab mein corrupted bhi hu and apne hubbys gift bhi karti hu, wah🤣
well kya karen mein jhoot to nahi bol raha na, sach hi to likha😆😆😆😆😆😆 kamine thora to manipulate kar dete😆😆😆

last scene was a shocker and i kinda know who that person is😆 but riddhima's kick was haye mein mar jawan. aapko itna acha idea kis mahan aatma ne diya bhai🤣
well idea to mera hi tha bas thori help ek churel ne ki thi😉😉😉😆😆😆😆😆 haan haan ab aao help maange churel SIRF THORI SI madad karegi😡😆😆😆

wow yaar itni bari comment meine apne life mein kabhi nahi di🤣 a superb part bhai and a total entertaining package😆😆😆 ur ff is going hit bhai. ur just toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good u know. and the funny thing ki aapko bhi nahi pata ki aap kitne ache writer hai.😃 now i seriously can't wait for the nest part and aaj aapne muje subah subah part 3 bhi pm nahi kiya😭. now update soon warna i'll eat ur pages up bhai😆😆😆
oye thanks for thesesweet comments, i really love ur comments and don't worry next month tak update kar dunga pakka😉😆😆😆😆ab you deserve them bhai and nalayak tab tak to tumhare najane kitne thread hum spam kar chuke honge😉😆😆😆
love
sani

love
PJ

p.s- kamine reply jaldi karna and muje batao na sani ke opposite kaun larka hoga. *sani looking at bhai with a puppy face*
nahi sis woh to surprise entry hi hoga trust me😉😉😆😆😆😆😆
bhai ekdum hot handsome and muje suit karne wala hona chahiye kk😉😆😆😆 and kamine jaldi lana, ab mujse aur intezaar nahi hota😆😆😆

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: hunder

EDITED***😉

Hey BHAi....🤗
lo aa gayyi Comment karne......😛
REALLy nice part.....😃
aapto sach main awesome likhte ho...
😃
GOOD GOING.....👍🏼
hi rondu mal.....thank god tumne jaldi comment kar diya......sis chalo tumhe pasand to aaya part😆......oye thanks for he comment sis but mein itna bhi acha writer nahi hoon, bas halke fulke jokes likh leta hon aur sabko hasane ki koshish kar leta hoon😃aaree...main to kar hi rahi thi na😆😆....aapko maine mana kiya na😡...ye name se yaha pe maat bulao😆😆😆...but meri sunta koun hai😡😡....
phir bhi it's really good...😃


aree aisa lagta hai NATTU bhi shin se darti hai yaar😆😆😆
shin ki gussa to mashallah......😆
kya gussa hai.......👏👏
arey sis jab mein shin ke gusse se darts hoon to nattu kyu nahi daregi😆oohhhh....i see😆😆😆😆

Riddhima kuch jada hi bold hai.....😳
Sid is cool here....not so bad😉😆.....
well ya ab ridz ko bold banana hi mera maksat tha as i wanted to write something different from most of the FFs where ridz is shy😆😆😆...........well sis abhi to cool lag raha hai but aagey dekhna kya hota hai😉😉😉Opposite to dikhana hi aapko😛...uss STUPId se mujhe aur kuch achche ki ummed bhi nahi hai🤣....

sani ki to😆.........ruko thoda haass lu main chain se🤣🤣.....
yaha pe bhi 50 hubbies ko le aaya😆.....
aur TWINZ bhi bana liya😆.....kafi realistic ho😉......
sis mein hamesha sach hi likhna pasand karta hoon😆Sani Ki TRP bohot barne wali hai.....😉😆😆😆


armaan kuch jada nahi sharmata😳....
aap sachmain itna sharmate ho😆.......
shhhhhh kuch raaz ki baatein sabke samne nahi karte, tumne mera ek hi roop dekha hai, tumhe nahi pata ki pehle ke months mein kya tha mein😉to pata karwao na....taki hum jada surprised na ho...

I loved the things that u brought that MEOW MEOW & BHAU BHAU thing here😛😆😆
well abhi to aur bhi bohot kuch hoga AR ke beech as this is a AR FF sis😃yup...looking forward to read more of it😃
i enjoyed reading the part😃
above all it was FAV....😃
wow u enjoyed it that is so sweet of u😃......what is FAV sis😕But i am sugerfree bhai😉😆😆😆....aree it's short from of fabulous😃

Loved it
keep it up....👍🏼
will be waiting for 30th june 😃
thanku for the PM😳
well keep waiting sis😆jada wait maat karwao bhai😳😆😆😆


love u
prinz😳

LOVE
PJ


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Posted: 15 years ago

PART – 3



Well as she was getting late she rushed to the training room think to check out aswell ki where is armaan and sid, kahin un dono mein se koi ek to nahi. Well as soon as she was near the room she saw sani, vini and shin talking to each other outside the room. Well she quickly rushed to them to ask where are armaan and sid as both were missing right now.

Riddhima: Girls why are u still standing outside the room, why haven't u all gone in and where are armaan and sid? (Trying to avoid the talk on what just happened with her in the canteen)

Shin: Oye thand rakh na, kitne ques ek saath poochegi. Ek ek kar ke pooch taki hume bhi answer karne ka time to mile

Sani: oye tumhare mood ko kya ho gaya andar to itni khush thi aur apni itni tense kyu lag rahi ho.

Riddhima: kuch nahi bus who darr lag raha hai ki hum late ho chuke hai aura b who Miss Nattu hume kya punishment degi. (still looking here and there to find out who it could be, just few questions running in her mind was it one of the 2 boys who are in his batch, was it someone from the office or did someone hug her by mistake)

Vini: yaar mein bhi yahi keh rahi thi but yeh log hai ki sunte hi nahi, pata nahi aaj pehle din hi hamari reputation tp kharab ho jayegi yaar.

Riddhima: haan but jab pata hai already late ho chuke hai to hum log andar training room mein kyu nahi chale jate, what are we waiting for.

Shin: actually we are waiting for those 2 idiot boys, pata nahi pichle 5 minute se gayab hai.

Riddhima: (now really getting curious ki who it could be and why are those 2 not here) haan but who dono to tumhare saath hi the na to kahan chale gaye dono.

Shin: arey kuch khan nahi armaan ko boss ne bulaya tha kyunki uske shayad koi ek document kam tha and sid ko achanak kisi ko imp call karma tha to who canteen se bahar nikalte hi kahin chala gaya aur usne kaha ki who 5 minute mein aa raha hai call karke.

Riddhima: oh ok so agar un dono ko kaam tha to hum log yaha kyu khare hai, chalo hum to andar chalte hai

Vini: dekha mein bhi yahi keh rahi thi but yeh dono sunti hi nahi

Shin: arey kya stupid jaisey baat kar rahi hai, armaan ne itna acha idea diya hai Miss Nattu se bachne ka, agar abhi uske bina andar gaye to hum logo ko punishment milegi but agar uske aane par uske saath gaye to uske paas bahana hai na hum sub ko bachane ka

Riddhima: arey kya idea mujhe bhi batao na please, me also interested in knowing ki hum kaisey bach sakte hai. (suddenly she say sid coming towards the training room)

Shin: arey yaar armaan keh raha tha ki uske saath hi andar chalna taki who Miss Nattu ko keh dega ki usey Boss ne bulaya thya and ho sakta hai boss ko sab se kaam ho islia abhi ruk jao. Islia ab uske saath hi andar jana thik rahega.

Riddhima: oh thik hai and dekho sid bhi aa gaya

Sani: abe sid tu itna langra kar kyu chal raha hai, phone par hi kisi larki ne pitai kar di kya (and started to laugh)

Sid: nothing sani bas aate time ek table se takra gaya tha to I have hurted my leg abit.

Sani was about to say something when Riddhima came in between and looked at Sid and said

Riddhima: are u sure yahi reason hai tumhe chot lagne ka (looking at sid with a suspicious look)

Sid: haan but aisa kyu pooch rahi ho, kuch hua kya?

Riddhima: nahi kuch nahi waisey hi (she thought that it may be someone else but abhi ke liye is topic ko bhool jati hoon agar dubara huya tab dad se baat karungi)

Sani: waisey kissey call karma itna important tha ki late hone ki chinta bhi nahi thi tujhe

Sid: nahi kuch khas nahi bas ek dost hai jiska aaj birthday hai usey wish karma tha.

Sani: Friend ya Girl Friend

Sid: well every girl sooner or later turns up to be my girlfriend

Sani: kyu aisey kyu bol raha hai tujhme kaunsa hire jare hai jo har larki teri girlfriend ban jati hai.

Sid: I am just too sexy baby (said that proudly and a bit loudly so that riddhima can hear that)

Sani: are u kidding me, do u thing that just because u look a bit ok to har larki tumpe lattu ho jayegi, well jahan tak meri baat hai I do like handsome men but tum mujhe koi itne sexy nahi lage ki mein tumpar lattu ho jau.

Shin: chor na twinzy usey bol apna muh dho kar aaye, my over confident apne aap ko kuch zada hi sexy samajte hai

Sid: well girls lagta hai tum logo ne mujhse zada smart aur handsome larka aaj tak nahi dekha tabhi tum logo ki choice itni buri hai (started to laugh)

Shin: chup ho ja warna abhi ek punch marungi aur tere saare daant yaha zameen par pare honge

Sid: oh ok, sorry I was just joking, waisey hum log yaha kyu ruke huye hai andar nahi jana kya

Vini: lo ab into bhi poori mahabharat sunao (she told him about armaan's plan to save them from Miss Nattu)

Sid: wah wah bachne ka kya plan socha hai us ammy ne

Sani: haan chalo kisi ne to socha warna yaha kuch logo ko to apni so called girlfriends se fursat hi kahan hai.

Sid: listen miss hubbies ki mallika are u jealous of me by any chance

Sani: who did u call hubbies ki malika Mr male chauvinist, u know u have a blind belief in national superiority and glory. Why do u think that I will be jealous of u, I have seen much handsome men than u in my life.

Sid: ok ok miss sani relax karo I was just joking

Shin: acha hi hai ki tum mazak kar rahe the warna mein abhi apni sandle ka number kahin chapne wali thi.

Sani and shin started laughing loudly and riddhima and vini who were listening to this convo joined them aswell whereas sid felt a bit embarrassed so decided to keep his mouth shut for some time. Sid was trying hard to make riddhima get attracted to him but everything was going in vain.

Sani: kya jawab diya hai twinzy, dill khush kar diya tune

Shin: chalo ab kisi ko to mera jawab pasand aaya and dekho Mr Armaan bhi aa gaye

Armaan came out from Mr Shashank Gupta's cabin and went straight to his friends.

Armaan: so kya chal raha hai guys and why are u all laughing

Riddhima: kuch nahi puppy dog bas koi abhi maar khata khaata bach gaya.

Armaan: (didn't get what she said but right now he was worried about facing Miss Nattu) ok guys jokes choro and chalo lets go in before she comes out to hunt us.

Everyone nodded and went in

Nattu: welcome back welcome back guys, aap log thora jaldi nahi aa gaye abhi to aap log sirf 30 minutes hi late huye ho, thora aur ghum fir lete abhi to poora din para hai aur mujhe aur koi kaam thorna hai tum logo ka wait karne ke illawa.

Armaan: sorry mam, actually….

Nattu: shut up Mr Armaan, I am not interested in listening in any excuses, I told u guys ki kuch bhi ho jaye u should be back within 1 hour……….abhi to training ka pehla din hai to yeh haal hai aage tum log pata nahi kya kya karoge.

Shin: (slightly came close to sani and whispered in her ears so that no one else can hear) kina bol rahi hai, mera to dill kar raha hai ki iski kursi ke neeche bomb laga kar isey ura doon.

Sani: yaar maine to pehle hi tum logo ko usko mere ek hubby dene ka idea diya tha, ab bhi time hai usey offer kar do shayad maan jaye

Shin: tu to chup hi hoja, aisa na ho ki hume chorne ki bajaye humhe company se hi nikalwa de tere hubbies ki offer ke chakkar mein (and both passed a smile to each other)

Nattu: well abhi maine bolna band bhi nahi kiya hai aur yaha kuch log apni gossip mein lag gaye hai. Miss sani and shin agar aap logo ko itni hi zaroori baat discuss karni hai to ya to aap mere aaj ki training khatam hone ka wait kar sakte hai ya fir mein aap logo ko ghar bhej deti hoon aap logo ka termination letter haath mein de kar.

Sani: sorry mam hum to bas yahi soch rahe the ki aap hume kya punishment dene wali hai.

Nattu: lagta hai tumhe punishment ki kuch zada hi jaldi hai kyu??????

Armaan: actually mam mujhe Mr Shashank ne apne cabin mein bulaya tha, actually ek document par mere sigh reh gaye the and kuch formalities bhi thi and baaki sab ko confusion ho gaya ki sir ne sab ko bulaya hai islia late ho gaye sab.

Nattu: well aaj pehla din hai islia mein aaj aap logo ko punish nahi karungi but agar kal se aap log late huye to get ready for punishment as well as fine.

Armaan: thanks mam and we will try ki ab se aapka koi bhi rule hum na braek karen.

Nattu: ok sit down all of u now and dekho treat me as ur friend, mein nahi chahta ki hamare beech koi trainer ya trainee ka relation ho, I want ki hum sab yaha doston ki tarah behave karen.

Vini: sure mam

Nattu: ok here is ur training schedule for the whole month, u guys have to sit on the PCs that are infront of u and read all the slides that I have prepared for u and then in the evening we will be discussing that. Is it ok

Everyone: ya sure mam

Nattu allotted everyone their PCs and they all started to read all the material that was provided to them. The training continued for the whole day with 2 small breaks in between them. Everyone got very much friendly with Miss Nattu as she was really fun loving and was cracking lot of jokes during her session the whole day.

At the end of he day everyone decided to go to some restaurant for a party as their first day passed quite well. Riddhima was still confused about the thing that happened with her in the canteen but decided to forget that as it may have happened because of mistake.

All the 6 joinees invited nattu as well to join them for the party and she agreed to that. So after the day ended they all went to the restaurant to enjoy and party with each other so that they can know each other more.

Armaan was very excited as did wanted to spend more time with riddhima as he was getting attracted towards her whereas sid wanted to go so that he gets a chance to impress ridz and make her fall in love with him.


Note - Sorry part shayad thora boring lagega but bore ho raha tha aur parne ka dill nahi tha to jo dill mein aaya likh diya, really sorry agar boring lage to.....i will make next part a bit interesting and good, abhi ke liye is boring part ko par lo

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Posted: 15 years ago
aur res..yipeeeeeee i am first


hey bhai kya mein isse ff pay ho?
Edited by armaankashridz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: armaankashridz

aur res..yipeeeeeee i am first


hey bhai kya mein isse ff pay ho?



sorry champ tumhari baat samaj nahi aayi😕
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: hunder



sorry champ tumhari baat samaj nahi aayi😕

oh bhai mein kah rahi ho ka
am i in this ff?
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: armaankashridz

oh bhai mein kah rahi ho ka
am i in this ff?



abhi nahi ho but future mein jab naye characters add karunga tab le aayunga😃

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