The Hard Reality of Life (AR FF)Note - page 122 - Page 26

Originally posted by: aRohAAnGeL

mein mahabharat nahi likhne waali, filhaal mood nahi hai 😆 great concept, awesome first 2 parts and intro, add me to that PM list.....and mommy hi bana diya mujhe?? 😆 WAH! my pati better check this out! hamara FF-FF ka saath hai mere puttar ki wajah se...🤣 oh BTW, in ur nick-names u didnt mention puttar.... *heart break* lol

awesome job, continue soon

Originally posted by: Sani_Rani

nalayak abhi tak part 3 likha bhi ya nahi?

Originally posted by: hunder

nahi sis abhi nahi likha kal college se exam de ke aane ke baad likhyunga aur update kar dunga😃.................waisey tum apna inbox khali karo plzzzzzzzzz😡😡

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

*EDITED*

Wohooooooo ..m second......🤪
wah partner lo fit tumhara gift

wow... kya gift h ... yummyyy........😆😆
bas ab chocolate ice cream bhi de de.....😉😆😆warna me sani me se hi share kar loongi..........😆😆
maine koi dukan nahi khol rakhi, dubata agar pehle comment post karogi to de dunga😉😆😆😆😆

Hey partner 🤗
ya partner🤗

WOW ..it was an amazing part yaar .. m loving d story as it has a bit of realistic touch........😆😆
wah i am glad yaar partner that u are liking this story mein to aisey hi time pass ke liye likha tha aur sani ke kehne pe shuru kar diya tha😆😆😆
chalo acha h usne kuch acha kaam toh kiya... meri toh umeed hi toot gayi thi us nalayak se..........😆
oye meri churel ko nalayak mat bolo, chalo bol lo haq banta hai😉😆😆😆😆😆

Tune Shin ko kya Angry young lady banaya h....🤣..itna bhi gussa nae karti yaar ..usse jyada toh nattu karti h.......😉😆😆 ....par isme toh nattu ki bolti band kardi shin ne .. aise bhi koi teacher se baat karta h kya?....bechaari nattu mam..😆
tumko bari chinta ho rahi hai shin ki, actually yaar ab kya karen shin thori serious types hai but i am sure an sani ke saath reh kar thora joke karna bhi seekh jayegi and haan abhi nattu ka gussa bhi hum dekh hi lenge aagey😆😆😆
haan yaar kya karoon .. uski chinta toh uska gussa dek kar aur bad gayi...........😆😆...waise acha h tune use uski twinzy de di ..ab thoda balance ho jayega........😆😆
haan ab dono mill kar sabki chutti kar denge😉😆😆😆😆😆

N man, u actually made me a geek in d FF... i cudnt stop laughing at dat......🤣... pehle toh itne borin lecture ke notes banaye n upar se unhe padh bhi rahi thi and dat too in d relaxing time... 😲🤣.. mere dimaag ka fuse udana h kya ?
haan mein bhi yahi soch raha tha ki vini kya actually itni paraku hai, har time itna seriously sab kuch sunti hai fir notes bhi banati hai aur free time mein masti ki jagah unhe revise bhi karti hai........kafi paraku hai na vini😆
yaar tune mujhe itni paraku ban diya.. itna toh me first boards me bhi nae padhi thi.....😆😆.. masti ki jagah padai kaun karta h jab tak examz sar par na ho....😆😆
on top last xam ke din toh me hamesha itni khushi se pdhti hoon coz xam ke baad kya kya karna h uski list bhi toh banani hoti h.........😉😆😆... jk.. me itna bilkul bhi nae padhti yaar..sachi muchi .. mujhe badnaam mat kar.......😆😆
vini dear ab dekhna ki tumhara character sudhar jayega jab tumhari dosti nattu aur armaan se ho jayegi to, jo larki ko zada baat karna pasand nahi tha woh masti karne mein kitna addict ho jayegi thora wait to karo😉😆😆😆😆

Aww.. shin n sani yahan bhi twinzy 's ban gaye... it was soo sweet....😳... N dis Sid .😡..himmat kaise ho rahi h uski ridz par line maarne ki?....😡..i wonder who had so much guts to touch her like this.. such a cheap jerk.... i wud kill him.. n why i feel it must be sid...nerve of dat guy ..😡
well aage aage dekho aur bhi logo ki bonding hogi dhere dheere and ab sid to sid hai na woh kuch bhi soch sakta hai but successful hoga ya nahi kya pata😆.........well u will soon find our who was that mysterious man in the dark😆..............well why are u doubting sid koi bhi ho sakta hai partner tumhe kya pata😆
kya karoon yaar bechare ki shakal hi aisi h ki doubt kiye bina raha nae jaata......😆...n agar woh bewkoof success ho gaya toh isse bada ajooba koi nae ho sakta..🤣... n ya, ab toh mujhe us mysterious man ke liye detectives ko bhejna padega..address toh dena yaar ??......😉🤣
partner abhi agle 2 parts mein yeh raaz khol dunga chinta mat karo😉😆😆😆😆

Btw, AR ka meow meow n bhau bhau thing was sooo funny..... 🤣.. ll u keep ur towel dance too ??....i ll help u selling the tickets of d show....😆
It was all over a nice update..
shhhh abhi ini aage jump mat maaro woh bhi aayega but thora patience to rakho na😆
yaar mujhe kudne ki bahut aadat h..hamesha idhar se udhar kudti hi rehti hun isliye yahaan bhi jump laga liya............😆😆..n patience kya hota h...??shayad kahin suna toh tha..... 🤔🤣
well mujhe bhi uska matlab nahi pata but wait karo abhi to unhone baat karna shuru hi kiya hai, pehle dosti fir pyaar hone to do 😆😆😆😆

Continue soon.. thanx 4 d pm (finally u added me to ur pm list.....😡😆)...
partner jab comment karogi tabhi to list mein naam add karunga na, so when u commented i added ur name, ab zada gussa mat karo😃
nahi kar rahi na... ab khush?........😆
haan bohot khush😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

Love
Vini

Love
PJ

Originally posted by: Sani_Rani

oops meine to notice hi nahi kiya ki inobx bhar gaya😆 wait karti hu

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

arre nae ..me tujhe hi reply kar rahi thi..........😃

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

Hey partner 🤗
Finally tumne comment to kiya partner🤗
haan ab tune mandir me prasad chadaya ya nae ... 🤣
haan chara diya partner 😆
partner jhooth mat bol..abhi abhi mujhe god se text aaya h ki tune unhe prasad chadane ki jagah unke mandir se prasad chura liya.......🤣
sshhh ab god ne yeh baat sab ko bata di kya😆😆😆


Wow !! I luvd ur concept... n i was really a great start .!! ... i luvd Armaan 's family intro .. esp his bonding with his dad.. par u know wat update bahut bahut bahut bahut hi chotta tha.........😆
sis ab jitna likh saka utna likh diya afterall intro hi to tha😆😆😆..........ab intro mein 90 page ka mahabharat to nahi likh sakta na😆😆😆
wow ..!! not bad idea...soch kitna unique FF hota na tera ... 😆... waise u can use it in ur next FF.........😆
well abhi mera next FF likhne ka koi irrada nahi hai, abhi mujhe partner ka FF parne ka dill hai😆
hehe...mera FF toh is janam me post nae hone wala.. 😆

partner plzzz post karo na tumne to ab tak mujhe apna OS bhi nahi dikhaya.......ab baat mat karna mujhse😡😡

N on top jab mene CS padha toh pata nae mujhe PJ missing mila.. woh bhoot ko is FF se door hi rakhna warna yahan par bhi mental asylum kholna padega.......... 🤣..pata nae kyun khud ko hamesha Armaan samjhta rehta h... 😉😆😆.. uska dimaag bilkul satak gaya h shyad.. tabhi kam akal se bin akal ho gya....... ...par suna h aaj kal genius kaam bhi karne lag gaya h kyunki mera partner ban gaya h na...........😉😆...
partner baat sirf itni si hai ki mujhe fictional characters par FF likhna acha nahi lagta, mein to real life characters par FF likhna chahta tha, aur yeh FF sirf mera ek POV hai iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki jo mein likhu wohi sahi ho

N partner i actually luv d concept of real characters ... u can try it ..m sure it ll be hit too.......😃
pata nahi but mujhe likhne mein to maza aa hi raha hai😆
aur humein padhne me... 😆..seriously its soo much fun reading them...!!
well u made my day partner by saying that😃

waise, thank god! finally sani ko uska Mr A mil jaayega yahaan..........nae mila toh uske saath kaam kar ke hi khush ho jayegi... 😆😆 ... n bewkof tujhe sharam nae aati mere mom-dad ko yahaan kyun publicly declare kar raha h....unki bachi kuchi izzat bhi kharaab ho jayegi....😆
nahi partner just wait and watch ki kaun kisko milta hai and maine kab tumhare mom and dad ko publicly declare kiya maine to sirf tumhare join karne ka ek reason diya hai na😆😆😆
yaar mere parents ko toh baksh deta... 😆... n mujhe bhi dekhna h kaun kisko milta h .. bas sid ko kisi ke saath pair up karne se pehle soch lena..bahut joote padenge tujhe.........😆
well don't worry sid sooner or later kisi na kisi ko zaroor patayega but aage kya hoga dekh lenge😆
yeah, tu sab ko suspense me rakh raha h nae?? sani ko bhi itna tadapa raha h.. use kitna mann hai apne next hubby se milne ka.......🤣
partner ab tarpane ka bhi apna hi maza hota hai..........yaar abhi to FF shuru huya hai thora wait to karo yaar

btw, partner ..tu toh bilkul chupa rustam nikla .. u got a nice writing style........ ab toh lagta h yahan bhi attacks hone lagenge ...(waise hone lagenge nae abhi se hi update soon ke demands aane lage h) ..tera FF toh Super duper hit ho gaya yaar ........😉😃😆
oye partner mera style kaisa hai pata nahi kyunki issey pehle kabhi yeh chees try nahi ki hai........aur attack kar dena i don't mind but bata kar

Oh ...so u need a warning before attack..chal koi na..kar denge..waise abhi sani ke 3 FFs and habz ki FF baaki haina?? .........😆
arey warning ki jagah koi reason to hona chaiye na, mein regular update karta to hoon😃........well haan sani ke 3 FFs hai aur chalo jaldi hi kisi par attack to karna hi parega😆

haan par 30th tak toh nae karega na....😆😆... haan yaar uski FF ke darshan kiye hue bahut tym ho gaya nae?? ab wahan apan charan rakhne ka tym aa raha h........😉😆
arey kal kar dunga meri maa😆😆😆😆😆.................well why don't we attack all 3 of her FFs tomorrow😉😉😆😆😆😆😆

see finally aate hi teri FF first padhi n comment bhi kar diya.. ab toh jaldi se reply bhi kar dena...😛
kar to diya partner😆😆😆
toh mene bhi kar diya na.....😆😆
aur maine dubara kar diya😆
mene bhi kar diya.....😆😆
maine dubara kar diya

Continue SOON...😆..n Tune mujhe pm list me add kyn nae kiya............??😡
oye jab comment karogi tabhi to PM list mein add karunga na😆
kyun tujhe doubt tha ki me tera FF padhoongi ya nae? ?........😡
nahi but fir bhi maine apne FF ke life kuch rules rakhe hai na😆kaunse rules.. ?? n yahan follow karne wala h kaun ...??..😆
tum follow karogi partner, its called PJ rules😉😉😆😆😆😆😆

Love
Vini

love
PJ

Originally posted by: moonlight2630

very nice part
yaar itna shy or sharif arman kabhi dekha nahi
is liye baat kuch hazam nahi ho rahi hai
yaha tu ridzi line maar rahi hai
i like ur FF
plz update soon 😊

Originally posted by: hunder

jaldi karo mein tumhe koi PM bhi nahi bhej pa raha tha😕................ab haar baat mein batayunga kya😆😆😆