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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: .Daksha.

Phone ringing at Samrat's house........No one can hear it because of the noise during the marriage proceedings.......
Mayank is dialling Samrat's number continuously......
Samrat and Gunjan stand up for the pheras.......
Mayank and Nupur in their car are coming towards Samrat's house......
Ok.......I am coming back soon......sorry bina bataaye chali gayi thi.....par actually maine bataaya tha bas PM nahin kiya tha.... https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/30344717
Ho sakta hai thoda late ho jaaon update karne mein....but I will be back sooooon

scary promo
wonder wat will happen next
can't wait to read it
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Posted: 15 years ago
part 11-
wow
daksha
this was amazing
mayur were so magical
sajan were cute
waiting for the gang scene
continue soon
give us a promo as well
luv
mahima
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Posted: 15 years ago

Nupur pulled Mayank out of the car but he was still calling Samrat's number'.

Mayank and Nupur are entering into the gate''.and Samrat and Gunjan are about to take their seventh phera'..

Watchman stops Mayank and Nupur at the gate'''

"Excuse me sir''.card please" watchman said

Mayank was still dialling Samrat's number'..he was looking down at his mobile''

He said "Nupur, main keh raha hoon na chalo"

"Dekhiye bhai sahab hum ek aadmi ko dhoond rahe hain''aur shayad wo issi shaadi mein aaya hai toh hum usse mil lein phir chale jaayenge" Nupur said to the watchman''

"Dekhiye Madam card ke bina kisi ko entry dena humein allowed nahin hai" Watchman said

Samrat and Gunjan completed their seventh phera''..they were seated back at their positions''

Samrat's cell phone was ringing in the room''a girl bought the phone to the mandap'..she gave it to Dadi who was standing behind Samrat

Samrat tied mangalsutra around Gunjan's neck''and then he was about to put sindoor into her maang when he heard something from the back''

"Arre'.Mayank ka phone'..wo shaadi mein bhi nahin aaya" saying this Dadi switched on the phone'.

Samrat placed the sindoor in Gunjan's maang in a hurry'.the red powder also spread over her forehead and nose'..

Panditji said "Ye shaadi sampann hui" and Samrat stood up'..he snatched the phone from Dadi's hand'..the knot tied between Samrat and Gunjan tightened because of the pull as Samrat stood up'.

Nupur and Mayank were coming out from the gate'..when Mayank heard'.

S: Hello

M: Hello Samrat'..thank god toone phone toh uthaaya

S: Haan bol kaise phone kiya

M: Ye tere peeche itna disturbance kaisa hai'..

S: Wo main shaadi''I mean hello kuch sunaayi nahin de raha

M: Ye teri lane mein jo shaadi hai tu wahin hai kya''thoda zor se bol'

S: Tujhe kaise pata'.

M: Abe main ussi ghar ke bahar khada hoon'..

S: Kya'.????

Samrat looked down at Gunjan who was looking up at Samrat''

M: Tu andar hai toh main aata hoon''

Samrat was in deep shock''he married Gunjan a moment before and if Mayank would come inside everything which was settled between last few months will again ruin back''.he has to stop him'

S: Tu'..tu'.wahin ruk main bahar aata hoon'..yahaan andar bohot shor hai'..

Samrat removed his stole and kept it in Gunjan's lap and removed his sehra and gave it to Dadi''

"Arre Samrat kahaan ja raha hai'..beta aise mandap chodna apshagun hota hai" Dadi said while stopping Samrat''..

"Aur agar Mayank ne mujhe aise dekh liya toh yahaan har shagun adhoora reh jaayega Dadi'.mujhe bahar jaana hoga" Samrat said and he stepped towards the gate'..

As the word "Mayank" came out from Samrat's mouth'.Gunjan became tensed'.she also stood up and started moving towards the gate''

Outside the house'..

"Maine kaha tha na Samrat issi shaadi mein hoga'..meri baat bhi sun liya karo Mayank" Nupur was talking to Mayank when Samrat came out''.

Samrat bought a smile on his face and hugged Mayank''..Gunjan also followed Samrat but she stopped behind the gate''.

Mayank broke the hug and looked at Samrat from head to toe''.

"Oye'.mujhe lagta hai tu toh iss shaadi mein dulhe se bhi zyaada tayaar hokar aaya hai''kya baat hai" Mayank said teasing Samrat

But lines on Samrat's forehead tightened'..he was sweating'.afterall he was hiding the fact of marriage from his best friend and that too with Gunjan'..

Gunjan was sneaking out from the door''for her Samrat and Nupur were visible and Mayank's back was towards her''.

Nupur was looking at the house, at the decorations when her gaze stopped at a figure'..red and brown lehnga'.she was a girl'.she was not visible to her'.but she was giving her image of someone known'..

While Samrat and Mayank were busy in talking'..Nupur stepped forward towards the girl'..she placed her hand on the girl's shoulder'..the girl became shocked and turned around''Nupur too became shocked on seeing Gunjan'..

Nupur exclaimed with joy "Gunjan"

Gunjan then imitated to keep quiet "Ssshhh"

Before Nupur could call Mayank, she noticed Gunjan'..she was wearing the bridal wear'..red vermillion in her maang'.and mangalsutra round her neck'.

"Gunjan''shaadi" Nupur expressed amazement "Aur wahaan Mayank tumhein yaad kar kar ke pareshaan ho raha hai"

Tears rolled down from Gunjan's eyes'.she said wiping them off "Tum please Mayank ko mat batana''meri poori baat samjhne ki koshish karo"

And then Gunjan told Nupur about everything that happened, her father's death, then Mayank's accident and then she came to Delhi with Samrat, then a minute before she married Samrat'..

Nupur was just looking at Gunjan, she then turned and looked at Samrat who was busy in talking with Samrat''

Gunjan continued "Ab bhalaai issi mein hai ki Mayank mujhse door rahe aur main Mayank se"

Nupur was still looking at Gunjan'.she had no words, she didn't knew how to react, she should be happy because now Mayank will be totally hers or she should be sad that she was the only one who thought to bring two souls together and now she will have to hide'..how would Mayank react if he would come to know that his love married his best friend''

Nupur was totally confused when she heard a voice "Nupur'..chalein tum deewaaron se bhi baatein karne lagi"

Gunjan was hiding behind the pillar''.she just said "Mayank ab tumhaara hai ussko kabhi dukh mat pohonchne dena"

She smiled with her wet eyes and Nupur turned to move towards Mayank''

Nupur came and quietly stood beside Mayank'.. she was looking at Samrat'..constantly'..

Then Mayank hugged Samrat "Accha ab chalta hoon"

He then broke the hug with Samrat and then both Mayank and Nupur started moving towards the car'.. Mayank sat down in the car and Nupur was about to sit when her heart felt something and she ran towards Samrat''.

She went to Samrat and quietly said "Gunjan ka poori tarah se khayaal rakhna aur Mayank ki chinta bilkul mat karna"

Nupur turned and get back seated in the car''

"Kya hua'.dubaara kyun gayi thi" Mayank asked

"Kuch nahin'..tumhaari shikaayat karne gayi thi" Nupur replied

She decided that she would not tell anything about Gunjan to Mayank'..for the first time she was selfish in her life'.but she was feeling very happy''both Mayank and Gunjan now have no problem with their marriage'..

Samrat came inside'..Gunjan was standing behind the gate'.she looked at Samrat and a drop came rolling down her cheeks and Samrat caught it on his finger tip''and blew it out'.

"Ab toh sab theek hai'..toh ab kyun ro rahi ho" Samrat said "Chalo, andar chalein"

Samrat and Gunjan were about to enter the gate when Dadi stopped them "Ruko ruko"

She placed the kalash of chaawal in front of the door "Wo kehte hain na'..jo hota hai acche ke liye hota hai'.ab tum dono bahar nahin jaate toh andar kaise aate'..Gunjan apne dahine paer se kalash girakar andar pravesh karo'..ab meri laxmi ka pravesh hoga"

Gunjan did as Dadi said and both Samrat and Gunjan entered into their new life leaving everything of past behind them''

Flight of Mayank Nupur also flew off for Switzerland''.

Thats for now......do comment ki kaisa laga Ok haan me waiting
Edited by .Daksha. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yaayyy..
Me First...
I Loved the part..
And SaJan Married
Wooowwww.....
MaYur In Switzerland...
Gr88...
Cont Soon..
Thnnxx For PM...
*Sana*
😳
Edited by SaJan_Sana4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
so sajan are married
and mayank didnt know about marriage
hope this will not create prblm bw mayur in future
do cont soon
Edited by fanofmjht - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update dear,....eager to know mayank's reaction......
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesooooooome......
wonderful........ud........
loved it..........
thanx for the pm........
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy dear,
mind blowing part
thanks for PM.
continue soon


love
Riddss
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr8 update daksha..ugh..y is mayank in the dark..phir se confusion :( :(
nahiii :) LOL I liked it :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing update daksha and plz cont the next part soon and thx alot for the pm

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