||The Face Staring At Me|| AR/MoNaya Ch 5:Pg 111 - Page 51

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Chapter4:The Romantic Night

(I'll repeat some parts of the previous chapter, so it becomes easy for me to continue with the story)

Mohit takes Sanaya to a very special place..The place where their journey started..and plans to give her a surprise?what's the surprise..read on?

'one...two?three..tadaan?surprise..'

Sanaya opens her eyes..and is stunned to see where she is?She remembers that she is on the Beach where she and mohit had started the journey so pure n elegant.. the journey of their friendship and then slowly turned into love..they were also not able to understand ki when they started loving each other..they confessed their love here only..at this special beach?She then remembers a number of incident..

*Flashback*

'Mohit?you are so bad !! When you know that we site together in the class toh tumhre side mein voh Shee?naaa kaise baith gayi !!'

'Areey Sanaya..but main karta bhi toh kya..she said I want to sit toh I said ok..!!'

'haan haan?one day she will say jump pff the mount everest?and you'll jump off na !!'

'Sanaya tum paagal ho gayi ho kya !! voh baith gayi tho baith gayi?talks are over !!'

'No?not over yet..'

'Sanaya why are you so jealous..??'

'me..jealous?huh?why will I be envious ??'

'you are?'

'noo..'

'yeh you are..'

'okay fine I am..but don't you know ki why am I envious..'

'I know..but don't over react Sanaya..we will be best friends forever !!'

'best friends are nice...mm..'

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'I love you Sanaya !!'

Sanaya turns around to see mohit with open arms on his knees..she then runs back towards mohit n buried herself in his arms..

'Itna time kyun lagaya bolne mein..'

'kya karoon?I don't speak so much like you..'

'Mohit..'

She pats him on his chest

'ahh..'

'oh gawd?lagi kya..'

'nopes..'

'toh aise hi?

'haan..'

'you'll never change mohit..'

*Flashback*

************

Iss manhoos ki baby kharab ho gayi?pata nahi how will we reach the prom?arghh?n aisa lag raha hai it's gonna rain in sometime..no..i hate rains so much?please no rains god..please..

'So Mr Armaan Mallik, how will we reach the prom..??'

'umm?I think that's difficult?'

'kya..?? Oh god?then what we will do now ??'

'Zyada kuch nahi..we just hav tio spend a night there..'

I looked where Armaan had pointed his fingers out and the only word after seeing the place came to my mind was OH MY GOD !! We were supposed to live in a mud house?nooo?and who bhi iss manhoos ke saath?a BIG BIG NOO.. !!

Iss manhoos ke saath hi why do I have all my weird experiences !!

'Noo?I'll not go there !!'

'mm?okay..as you wish..i'm going..and If you get scared then don't wake me up okay..i'm feeling very sleepy !!'

He went away from there while yawining?huh !! kaisa ladka hai yaar?he doesn't even care how will I manage..chod ke chal pada !!

'Haan haan go..i'll not get scared !!'

'Yeah we will see Riddhima..'

'yeah yeah?we'll see armaan..'

Jerk !! Between lemme stand under that tree. OMG..this tree is so scary?it seems like ti's a chudail there all ready to eat me up..i'm getting scared yaar?mumma..

Just then a whole branch fall son riddhima's hand and she was damn scared and go running into the kattcha (mud house) and gets birrueid in armaan's arms.

'Armaan?thank god tum mujhe mil ghaye nahi toh?'

'Bachaoo?bachaaoo..'

I stood straight and asked him ki why was he shouting which the gilrs are shupposed to shout !!

'Because you are trying to rape me ms Riddhima gupta..tumhare gahr mein baap bahi nahi hain kya ..??' (I just luved all the jungle scenes of KaSh so much)

Oh god?uski itni gandi soch hai?euuks..

'shutup armaan..dtop your bakwaas fm radio !!'

'hehehehe?waise you got scared na..!!'

'No..i wasn't?me and scared..no way?poles apart..!!'

'chal jhooti?'

'watever..now move and lemme sit here?'

'yeah yeah?QUEEN VICTORIA..please do the honors..'

paagal hai pura..but itna bhi bura nahi hai?just he irritates me far too much than expected..

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'Sanaya..'

'ab?haan..'

She gets out of her thoughts and finds mohit sitting on his knees. She was not able to understand anything as if completely blacked out !! But still she was loving this sweet gesture so she let mohit continue..

'Ms Sanaya Irani, would you like to marry the person who is so madly deeply in love with you, that's me Mr Mohit Sehgal ??'

'Mohit?.'

'Bolo Sanaya?'

'ab?what should I say..'

'oh that's simple..say Yes or No'

'unme se toh kuch kehana hi hai mohit?.'

'it's simple sanaya..say yes..'

'ab?You know na I can't reject you..'

'So is it yes ??'

'Yeah?obviously..'

Mohit gets up and hugs Sanaya..

'Mohit..that was so sweet..you are the best person in my life..'

'aww?thanxx sanaya?this all was for you..'

'waie nice place?haina..'

'haan nice toh honi hai?we had did so many things here..'

'mmm..'

'waise this eve is so romantic na mohit?and all this just because of you..aww?I love you so much '

'mm?me too..!!'

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'Wow bearish?chalo na Riddhima?!!'

'paagal ho armaan kya?pehli baat I'm wearing this sarree..which is so difficult to handle n plus I HATE RAINS !! samjhe !! so you go !!'

'Aao na Riddhima..'

'Armaan..tum paagal gaye ho,...don't get drenched..you'll fall ill !!'

'Uf foo Riddhima, you don't know how to enjoy the life, get a life yaar?come join me !!'

'No way?I'm not coming !!'

'Arrey pleashh come na..it's raining so heavily !!'

Yaar yeh manhoos bhi na !! arghh?itni baarish mein koi dance karta hai !! uff !! A Big NO from my side again?

'Noooo..'

'Arrey Riddhima?come I'll drag you here !!'

'Ahhhh?'

Oh my my my..i'm for the first time standing in the rains and for sure I'll be dancing like mad people too because yeh armaan mujhe surely dance karwa hi dega..look at my outfit it's all wet..arghhh?this manhoos flirt.. I hate him so much !!

************

'Wow rains..mohit chalo na?let's get drenched !!'

'chalo chalo..let's get drenched?paagal hai kya tu..we'll fall ill..!!'

'arrey baad ki baad mein dekhenge..haaye?mausaum is so awesum..!! wnjoy this moment..!!'

'no..'

'yesh'

'no..and I'm going in the shade..!!'

Okay?so I haven't' ever written any song in any of my ff..so I reaaly son't know how should I present it?so plzz read it..don't leave it..!!

Song: Dekho Na (listen it?excellent song !!)

Firstly the tune comes in which there is Monaya capture and the second rhythm it is AR capture. And then Sanaya starts singing?

Sanaya calling out for Mohit: yeh saajish hain boondon ki koi khwaahish hain chup chup si

yeh saajish hain boondon ki koi khwaahish hain chup chup si

dekho na dekho na (goes near to him and put his chin up with her hand)

dekho na dekho na

************

Armaan in the rains with riddhima, taking rounds around her: hawa kuchh haule haule zubaan se kya kuchh bole

kyon duuri hain ab darmayaan

dekho na dekho na (goes near to her and put her chin up with his hand)

dekho na dekho na

************

Middle tune: Armaan is requesting riddhima to stay in the rains and starts dancing with her on the beat rimjhim rimjhim sana sana?and the beat after that..(slow dance)

************

Mohit to Sanaya while talking her hand in his: phir na hawayen hogi itani besharam

phir na dag mag dag mag honge yeh kadam

phir na hawayen hogi itani besharam

phir na dag mag dag mag honge yeh kadam

Sanaya : haa saawan yeh seedha nahi khufia bada

kuchh toh baraste hue keh raha

Mohit while rolling his hand at her back: samjho na samjho na

samjho na samjho na

Sanaya turns towards himand face him: hawa kuchh haule haule zubaan se kya kuchh bole

kyon duuri hain ab darmayaan

dekho na dekho na

dekho na dekho na

Middle tune: Mohit and Sanaya slow dance on the rythm

************

Riddhima finally speaks and armaan is astonished but at the same time happy: jugnu jaise chahat dekho jale mujhe

meethi si mushkil hain koi kya kare

jugnu jaise chahat dekho jale mujhe

meethi si mushkil hain koi kya kare

Armaan comes from the back :hmm hothon ki arzi aaise thukraaon na

and opens his arms and looks at the sky: saanson ki marzi ko jhuthlaaon na

Riddhima comes from the back and put her hands on his waists: chhuu lo na chhu lo na

chhuu lo na chhu lo

And now they dance in the same postion: hawa kuchh haule haule zubaan se kya kuchh bole

na duuri hain ab darmayaan

************

Last tune:Slow Dekho na

First appear Monaya almost dancing very close and then Armaan n Riddhima in the same postion as Monaya are.

Then the screen gets divided into two parts one side monaya n on the other are AR and the chapter ends !!

Edited by xxiheartmexx - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Eloo doston !!

how are you all ??
Good na..!!
hope so !!
*formality hai kya karoon*😆
lol..
have updated the Chapter 4 of my ff !!
Hope you all liked it..!!
Do comment and press the like button !!
*radz*
Edited by xxiheartmexx - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hii..!!!!!

My fav song.... Dekho na.. Omg missin KaJen Dekho na seq😭😭😭😭
Lozl shuru mein hi bakwaas
Yaaaay i m first congo me congo me..!!
Chalo thank u in reply for the congo..
Well tahnk u for givin me the link first 😃
U knw mujhe bhi woh dialogue bahut pasand hai i totally love it..!!
its my all time fav scene and dialogue..!!
lolz ARmaans expression was awesome tht time
lolz tumhaare ghar mein baap bhai nahi hai kya 🤣
lolz i love it lolz i totally love this part bcoz it has my fav couples fav dialogue fav song.. and everythin
Totally loved it yaar..!!
Lolz bahutttt bakwaas ho gaya
Yaaay yaahaaan bhi baarish..!!
mein bhi gaongi Dekho na.. (sab bhaag gaye) 🤣
OMG loved the way sammy asked gunjan... Sooo sweet..!!
Yaay AR lsingin lolz great..!!!
Jaldi se love track shuru kar do Mr.Manhoos flirt and Ms. Riddhima ka..!!
lolz
lozl
Chalo anyways aaj is se lamba nahi ho sakta
MOM ALERT>>!!!!!
Ok bye talk to u later
Bye bye
Take care see u later
Lots of Love
Pari niya niyu chameli hunterwaali (kitna likhna padta hai) 🤣
Edited by ..NiyaPari.. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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*edited*
Awesome Update!👏
I loved the MoNaya moments, specially tht u didnt describe the proposal in the ermm lets say Princess style....it was sweet, subtle and typical MoNaya :D
And again ridz Uff she's soo funny! I love her character...! but wats with armaan yaar...i cant get it! wat does he feel?he's one mysterious person....dancing in the rain, staring at her....plain attraction? and he openly flirts yaar!hmmm chalo lets see wat u have in store for us...!:D

Song part was kool...i had to google the song before reading..lol
i didnt rem the tune actually...perfect song..LoveD it!:)

Do cont sooon...!
and ur pm hasnt reached me yet...lol

Luv
ZeeJay!:):)
Edited by VampirePrincess - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey..

lovely update...

rain scence and song is amazing...

do cont. soon...


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Posted: 15 years ago
I am new reader of this FF but I really liked the bit I read just now.
Will soon read the full thing and keep in touch with this regularly!

Love,
Nidzi.. . <3

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey radz

waise toh u always brillant 😛

update soon...!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: VampirePrincess

res
*edited*
Awesome Update!👏
I loved the MoNaya moments, specially tht u didnt describe the proposal in the ermm lets say Princess style....it was sweet, subtle and typical MoNaya :D
And again ridz Uff she's soo funny! I love her character...! but wats with armaan yaar...i cant get it! wat does he feel?he's one mysterious person....dancing in the rain, staring at her....plain attraction? and he openly flirts yaar!hmmm chalo lets see wat u have in store for us...!:D

Song part was kool...i had to google the song before reading..lol
i didnt rem the tune actually...perfect song..LoveD it!:)

Do cont sooon...!
and ur pm hasnt reached me yet...lol

Luv

ZeeJay!:):)


thanxx zee !!

i'm glad dat u lyked d upd..!!


lol...yeah princess style..

could imagine only this while writing !!


lol..ridzi..mm..

i hope you can see more shades of her charac soon !!

armaan...dat u'll now quite soon..

u hav to wait for it..


i'm sure u'll lyk wat armaan feels for riddhima..


yeah..dekho na is a perfect song..

lol..even i had to dwnload it before adding to my ff..!!


will cont asap..!!


*radz*

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ryka_27

hey..

lovely update...

rain scence and song is amazing...

do cont. soon...



thanxx dear..!!

i'm glad dat u lyked d upd..!!


will cont asap..!!

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Posted: 15 years ago


thanxx dear..!!

i'm glad dat u lyked d upd..!!


will cont asap..!!

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