MN & SG FF: Kyun? Promo @ Pg 139 - Page 69

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome promo.... do cont soon... cant wait 2 read more....
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey Daksha m glad ur bak... hope evrythngs fyn now...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyyy daksha
Really nice promo
Do update fast
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

thnk god..u r back!!!continue soon dear...

n i'll wait 4 u..jst 4 nupur's memory's sake..

luv mayur always!!!🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey... awesome promo dear !!

I'm really happy dear.... that finally u r coming back !!

really missed u a lot !! 😭😭



hope everything is fine now.....

its ok dear we will wait for u.... n ur updates !!

you take your time n update when u'll feel like !!

good luck n keep smiling dear !!

we all love u..... n love mayur forever !!


love u...
varsha

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Posted: 15 years ago
wow....awesome promo after such a long time!
hope the part comes soon.....
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Posted: 15 years ago

When first ray of sun striked on Mayank's face, he opened up his eyes……Nupur was still sleeping on the bed……Mayank rumbled his eyes and stood up…..

Nupur's face was glowing with the gleam of sun……serenity was reflecting from her face but those rays were also disturbing her sleep….she groaned in her sleep and Mayank came back to his sense which were lost in Nupur's purity…..

He went nearby the window and pulled of the curtains but he stopped when he saw his father outside the house talking to someone….he wasn't able to identify that man…..he didn't knew him….

Mayank was sneaking through the window when there was a knock on the door…..

Mayank went and opened the door…..

"Nupur kaisi hai ab" Mayank's mom asked very slowly to Mayank

"Abhi so rahi hai…..uthegi tab pata chalega" Mayank replied

Then after a pause of few seconds he asked "Maa, neeche Dad kis se baat kar rahe hain?"

Mayank's mom made a face of ignorance "Mujhe nahin pata…..hoga unki party ka koi aadmi….tu pareshaan mat ho, wo khud dekh lenge"

After this Mayank's mom left…….

When Mayank turned, he saw Nupur was trying to sit……

"Arrreerrree…..aaram se Nupur" saying this Mayank went to help Nupur…..he helped her to sit…

"Ab kaisa lag raha hai" he asked

Nupur was pressing her head with one hand….she said "Hmm….thoda dard ho raha hai…."

Mayank gave her some tablets…..

"Ye le lo…..phir dekhna dard kaise gaayab ho jaata hai"

Nupur smiled and took the medicines……

It is the afternoon time……Gunjan is dressed in a beautiful light green lehnga…... some girls are gathered around her "Didi didi……aap mehndi ka ye waala design lagwaana" a girl said

"Nahin ye waala" another girl said

Gunjan smiled and very quietly said "Accha iss haath par ye waala aur iss haath par doosra waala….theek hai"

"Theek" girls smiled and went running after each other……

Gunjan looked up at the door…..Samrat was standing at the door…...he was looking at Gunjan very admiringly……when their gaze collided Samrat mouthed "Acchi lag rahi ho" Gunjan smiled and blush crept over her cheeks…..she removed her gaze from Samrat and turned around…..

Dadi came and pulled Samrat's ears "Tu yahaan kya kar raha hai ladkiyon ke beech main…..jaa jakar apna kaam kar"

Gunjan turned around and looked at Samrat…..both of them smiled seeing each other…..

Nupur was in the kitchen……she was cooking something…..

"Arre tumse aaraam nahin kiya jaata…… jab dekho chef Nupur kitchen mein milti hain" Mayank said entering from kitchen's door……

"Mera kuch tasty khaane ka mann kar raha tha….wo dawaaiyon ko khaake ulti aati hai" Nupur said
"Toh itne servants hain….kissi se keh diya hota" Mayank said

"Toh kya hua agar maine bana liya" Nupur said

In the meanwhile Mayank's mom entered into the kitchen. She smiled on seeing both of them together…..Nupur was licking her fingers "Maine kaha tha na….tasty bana hai"

"Kya hua Nupur….kya tasty bana hai" Mayank's mom interrupted "Koi khush khabri hai kya….hain Nupur jo itna khaane ka mann kar raha hai"

The curved up lips describing the smile on both of them's face……slipped to a staight line….Mayank looked at Nupur and Nupur looked at Mayank……

What did she said just now….

"Kya hua tum dono ko" she interuppted again but they were not able to look into her eyes…..

"Hayyee….kasie sharmaa rahe hain…..mujhe pata hai kuch nahin hai…..ek saath bhi tumko muddaton baad dekha hai……saath mein samay bitaaoge tabhi toh ek doosre ko jaanoge…..tum dono ka joda bhi ajeeb hai…..pehle ek ko chot lagti hai….wo theek ho jaata hai….phir doosre ko chot lag jaati hai……arre jis kaam ke liye aayi thi wo toh bhool hi gayi"

She pulled up Mayank's hand and placed two holiday tickets on his palm "Delhi se flight hai…kal shaam ki…..yahaan se door…..acche se chuttiyaan bitaao……thoda aaram karo, ghoomo phiro aur…… ek doosre ko samjho"

Mayank looked down and then he looked up at her face "Parr….maa…."

"Chup…..parr maa….aise keh raha hai…mujhse kyun sharmaa raha hai" She said and walked out of the kitchen….

Mayank and Nupur were left in the kitchen…..gazing at the holiday tickets…..they were experiencing a different feeling….none of them thought about it….they looked up at each other…..a mixed up feeling of confusion and excitement…..

Then Mayank broke up the silence "Haan….toh chalte hain na….waise bhi Mumbai kitni boring jagah hai"

Nupur started looking here and there….not in his eyes……

"Shaayad yahin se hum ek doosre ko alag tarah se jaan sakein….." Mayank said and walked out of the kitchen….Nupur looked up and smiled….in her thoughts she said "Haan Mayank ek doosre ko samajhne ke liye….kyunki tumhein main abhi tak nahin samajh paayi"

Next morning……

Mayank and Nupur were moving out of the house…..both of them were happy and at the same time nervous too…..not talking to each other….

They sat in the car and left for Delhi….

It was in the evening…… Gunjan was getting ready…..a complete bride, dressed beautifully in a brown and red lehnga, duppatta draped over head and her hairs flowing over her shoulders from the sides…….She was looking at herself…she was looking perfect….wait…not perfect one thing and most important thing was missing that was her smile….. it was missing because of an unknown factor….. actually known….she was missing Mayank whom she has decided to forget and start her new phase of life with Samrat…..

Gunjan was looking at herself in the mirror when few girls entered into the room…..

"Gunjan tum tayaar ho gayin….chalo neeche pandit ji bula rahe hain" they said

Then they took Gunjan with them……

Mayank and Nupur reached airport and there they came to know that due to some weather problems flight is delayed by 10 hours…..

"Ek toh uss travel agent ke bacche ne flight Delhi se book karvaayi aur upar se wo late…..lagta hai poori holiday safar (actually he meant suffer) karte huye beetegi" Mayank said grumbling in anger….

"Koi baat nahin Mayank hum issi bahaane Delhi ghoom lenge" Nupur said consoling Mayank…..

Firstly Mayank sat down on the chair and then he remembered something and stood up…..

"Samrat bhi toh yahin hai…..hum usske ghar chalte hain….usse mile hue bhi kitne mahine ho gaye" Mayank said to Nupur with a spark in his eyes…..

Nupur smiled and said "Theek hai" then after a pause "Par usska address?.....tumhein pata hai?"

"Arre kuch rough idea toh hai lane ke baare mein aur exactly phone karke pata chal jaayega…..chalo phir Samrat se mil kar aate hain" Mayank said and they left for Samrat's house….

Gujan came down to the mandap and she was seated beside Samrat…..

Panditji started reciting some mantras….

Then he said "Var vadhu jaimaala ke liye khade ho jaayein"

Samrat and Gunjan stood up for the jaimala……firstly Samrat placed it around Gunjan's neck and then Gunjan placed it around Samrat's neck…..

Mayank and Nupur reached to the lane which Mayank knew…….

"Lane toh yahi hai…..par house number mujhe yaad nahin….Samrat ko phone karke poochta hoon" Mayank said and took out his cell phone from his pocket and dialled the number….

Samrat's cell was ringing in his house but no one could hear it because of the noise of the marriage proceedings……

Nupur was looking out from the window of the car to find Samrat's name on any of the house…..

"Pata nahin phone kyun nahin utha raha…..number toh yahi hai" Mayank said and again dialled the number……

Then Nupur saw a house all lighted up with lights and decorated with flowers (actually it was Samrat's house. Name plate was hidden behind the flower decorations)….

"Lagta hai yahaan kisi ki shaadi hai" Nupur said to Mayank…..

Then she said in a jesting mood "Kahin Samrat ki toh nahin"

"Wo bandar shaadi karega aur mujhe nahin bulaayega aisa ho sakta hai" Mayank said "Ek baar phone lag jaaye bas….phir ghar dhoondne mein koi problem nahin hogi"

Samrat and Gunjan then stand up for the pheras……

"Mere khayal se Samrat issi shaadi mein gaya hoga…..aur shor ki wajah se usse ring sunayi nahin de rahi hogi……humein iss shaadi mein chalna chahiye……aur agar Samrat nahin mila toh ice cream kha kar aa jaayenge" Nupur was in a jesting mood "Mayank chalo chalte hain"

"Ab chothe (fourth) phere mein….vadhu aage aur var peeche" Panditji said and Gunjan came forward to Samrat…..

Nupur pulled Mayank out of the car but he was still calling Samrat's number….

Mayank and Nupur are entering into the gate…….and Samrat and Gunjan are about to take their seventh phera…..

Kaisa laga? thodi bohot likhne mein gadbad ho gayi ho toh maine check nahin kiya kyunki bohot jaldi likha hai......kaisa laga please comment karna aur aage kya expect kar rahe ho ye bhi bataana OK

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Posted: 15 years ago
wow.....lovely update!
really wanting to know what happens next!
continue soon.....thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey.continue soon dear,waiting egarly for the next update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part dear.........thnx fr the pm.........

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