Story-KISSA ULJHE SWALO KA(UPDATED-6th Aug Pg-27)

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Bhinder

@bhinder.thind

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Posted: 15 years ago

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SAGNIKA

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Posted: 15 years ago

WOW....👏really GOOD job dear!!!👏👏 AWESOME...I mean loved it....👏

1st one was WONDERFUL..very true....u described him really well!!!👏SUPERB!

2nd one was a bit too long(obviously, cos its a story)..one needs patienece to read..but was worth reading! Good job i must say..👏

Overall, Mind Blowing!!!⭐️

Keep up the good work BOY!!!👏

Looking forward to many more creations from you...😃

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@totallynotme101

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Posted: 15 years ago

great work...................
thnks for 1 of the best posts in cid forum....👍🏼

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

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Posted: 15 years ago

Very good creations loved both. I cannot write poem like this. I cannot write one line in rhyme like this and you wrote whole story. So I must say you did wonderful job. Keep up good work.

In first one description of Freddy was great. and second one (story) as said by Sagnika who need to have patience to read but was excellent enjoyed reading it.

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

GR8 work yaar,i must say u are quite good at this both were good 1st one sweet and cute,2nd one awesome keep it up 👍🏼

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Bhinder

@bhinder.thind

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

thanks a lot guys.....really appreciate your efforts to read and comment.... 😊 😛 😉
i know it could be better but as i am really busy in study and work so i could took just 15minutes for freddy part and 2 hours for story one continuously....i promise next time i will give better stuff 😊 😉 😛

Edited by bhinder.kamboj - 15 years ago

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JP22

@JP22

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: bhinder.kamboj
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hey nice buddy...eak idea hein kya ye poem thodi improve karake signature campaign ke sath bhej sakate hein..ense unko pata chal sakata hein fredy aapak eliye importanat nahi hoga lekin audencwe ke liye kitana imprtant hein....even abhi pe aisi poem kar sakata hein tum vo bhi bhejenge....ab hame na munna bhai jaisi Gandhigiri karani chahiye....ye sab aajamate hein lekin esase hum hamara campaign strong bana sakate hein..

firworks get well soon..what u say gyes?

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Bhinder

@bhinder.thind

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: jiya1

</div>hey nice buddy...eak idea hein kya ye poem thodi improve karake signature campaign ke sath bhej sakate hein..ense unko pata chal sakata hein fredy aapak eliye importanat nahi hoga lekin audencwe ke liye kitana imprtant hein....even abhi pe aisi poem kar sakata hein tum vo bhi bhejenge....ab hame na munna bhai jaisi Gandhigiri karani chahiye....ye sab aajamate hein lekin esase hum hamara campaign strong bana sakate hein..
<div><font size="5">firworks get well soon..what u say gyes?</font>

hey Thanks dii a lot but yar i don't thik it will be right to send this there..b'coz this is way long despite this what we can do is suggest them to visit India-Forum C.I.D page on regular basis...this will result in they would come to know about all the changes we want one by one and how importance those are to us... 😊 😉