Story-KISSA ULJHE SWALO KA(UPDATED-6th Aug Pg-27)

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#211

Reading your story first amongst all the creations I've missed,will review as soon as I finish

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#212

OK bhinder first of all kaafi dino baad tumhara creation padhke mazaa aa gaya
I really liked the beginning of your story
Had all elements that we would like to see,kai dinon baad we got to read a non-officer centric story,Vivek was very good,some little moments were indeed special,newcomers were also well handled

One imp. mention I liked the forensic scene,this is what a proper forensic scene should be like but haan disguise scene thoda chota laga mujhe

Overall was a nice time pass 😃

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prettywomen22

@prettywomen22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#213

bhinder, too good yaar, Abu Kaleem based story was too good dear..... waqt kaisa kata pata hi nahin chala story ko padte padte.... this story made me change my nominations... good work!!!!

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Bhinder

@bhinder.thind

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: Bhavanab
disguise scene thoda chota laga mujhe. Overall was a nice time pass

First of all thanks for commenting on story .. thanks thanks a lot .. Disguise scene was Proper thats what I felt and feel ... it was not like that out of 1 hour 10 minutes on disguise scene and if i have to enhance this scene, why director will be getting pay? understand what i mean na? In disguise they done their job and left .. I did not want any dragging of scene So I tried to make to appropriate and according to need ...

Nyc Time Pass..Aww Thanks 😊

Edited by bhinder.kamboj - 15 years ago

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Bhinder

@bhinder.thind

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: angelfire_mr
bhinder, too good yaar, Abu Kaleem based story was too good dear..... waqt kaisa kata pata hi nahin chala story ko padte padte.... this story made me change my nominations... good work!!!!

😆 😆 😳 Thanks a lot ji..don't 😳 me 😆