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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: newbe

wah kya timing hai😆 idhar maine hukoom diya aur update hazir!😆
dutta smiling 😍 good good😆



Aapka hukm kaise taal sakte hain ..😛
thnx 4 reading & commenting ...glad that u liked it ..!😳


Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Wow..... yaar... what a romantic epi..... bole..to ek dum rapchik epi...😉

Dutta ke khayalon mein Naku....aur.. Dutta ke gano mein Naku..... wah wah..... Dutta bhao ko to premrog lag gaya hai... jao jao.. kisi vaid ko bulao...😆😆
Super epi yaar.. 👏i just luvd the whole Tasha sequence... n man...can so imagine.. just how cute Dutta wuld hv looked smiling to himself thinking of Naku on that song.......😳 Haiiiii...just awesome..!!
Btw mere chote se dimag mein yeh khayal aaya hai..ke the sub plot culd actualy b a past for the main plot.. as in ..chintu bunty...culd b baji / dutta.. n pari for sure has to b naku... sups ka pata nahi....🤔
Rocking update Shabz ji...👏



Thanx Tanu ...
I m glad that u liked it ..😳

Shukr hai kisi k dimaag mein to aaya k the side story could b the past ..
i waz getting worried that may b maine zyada twist de diya ..!😆😆


Originally posted by: skavitha08

wow that was good .....oye dutta already dreaming so much that he feels hes imagining her running behind him abey yeh dutta apne aap ko kya samjhta hai 😆 hai nakku ne bechare ko pagal kardiyaaa........ 😆
serial main bhi keh raha tha bohut badi machli phasa li toone nakku.......i thought he should say shark whale phasa li then i thought shark whale ko phasathe nai hain ulta phas jaathe hai ......aur yahi ho rahi hai nakku ki haalat
sorry for the diversion
well bak to ur ff..........wow nice way of putting who became what n how.......hmmmm ab is baar late mat karne u better update soon 😉

well done me enjoyed 👏 ⭐️ 👏



Thanx Kavita ..
glad that u liked it ...😳
nw ur diversion is confusing me ...😆
will update soon ..!





Thanx Sinak ...
Glad that u liked it ..!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mariescott14

hey shabz

great update yaar..loved it
loved the tasha sequence..bichari naku running after dutta..but dutta thinking was imagination hehehe
hope you update soon



thanx Marie ....😳
Will update soon ...!😉

Originally posted by: jani-yeh

hey Shabz awesum awesum upd8...👏👏👏... luved how Dutta thgt Naku was a dream...😳😍...so so cute... soooooooooooooooooooooo cnt w8 4 ur nex upd8 Shabz...

afterthgt...i missed Baji...😆...



Thanx Jani ..
Dutta ki har baat cute hai ....
Baaji in next part ....will update soon ..!



Originally posted by: nsb416

I liked it Shabz :) It had a different story and it was interesting! Keep updating. 👍🏼



Thanx Ameera ..
I m glad that u liked it ...😳
will update soon ..!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: 92icycool

😉bole to ekdum jhakaas FF tha..😆😆....woow dutta has started dreaming abt nakku😳😳...aur jab woh reality mein uske aage hai still he thinks its a dream😆..bechari nakku...she should be singing this song 4m PAA.."mili mili dutta bhao se mili mein ladi ladi ittefaq se..."😉😉...



Thanx Nazia ..
i m glad that u liked it ...!😳
haven't heard this song ,,,but it does suit the situation ..!
😆




Thanx Cindy ..
btw ,,where is ur blushing emoticon ..!
😆


Originally posted by: jess_dutta

hey shabz

thanks for the p;m...caught up with the story...great update yaar
missed baji though
hope you update soon



Thanx a lot Jess ..😳
Baaji in the next part ...
will update soon ..!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: moully

really very very nice concept. bt plz make fall tasha in love. plz....

wo fight karte hu acche nahi lagate.
plz pm me whn u update........




Thanx Moully ..
so glad that u liked it ..😳
arey pehle pyar aur phir ikraar mein hi to asal maza hai ...😉
will sure add u in the PM list ..!


Originally posted by: betty123

👏⭐️👏hey shabz.......dats was a good one👏⭐️👏.........our gadhe is really a gadha............Naku was actually dere n he thought he is dreaming.........😆........i like sweet frndship btween Naku n Nupur........




Thanx Betty ..😳
glad that u liked it ..
Yes he is a gadha ,,no doubt ...!
😆


Originally posted by: sana786a

omg shabz dutta is soooooo cute loved it alot👏👏knw make dem again bump into eachother pleaseeee update asap😆😃



Thanx Sana ...
& Yh he is cute ...😉
bump them ,,,aage aage dekh hota hai kya ..!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kshreya2002

Dutta being lattoo over Naku from the start...I love it!




Thanx Ksh ...😳
Glad that u liked it ..
If only in the shw ,,he would hav been latoo just as Naku is to kya baat hoti ..!😆


Originally posted by: shonapinky

Wow...shabz......👏👏loved d tasha scene yaar.....😍.....awesum az alwayz....awaiting ur nex update...!!!😃



Thanx Shona ..😳
will update soon ...!



Originally posted by: SanRajDeewani

Wow Shabz.. Brilliant as always.. =)

Dutta seeing Naku and falling in love already.. 🤗 I loved him in the car and thinking that Naku was waving.. I could just imagine him looking back and then messing his hair and carrying on smiling listening to the song..
Just loved it..

Hmmm Dutta and Baiji FaceOff.. Can't wait.. =)



Thanx Sanju ..😳
Baaji & Dutta face off in the next part ..i just hope that u like it ...
will update soon ..!


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jnawaz

hola!! me is here 😉

aww...at the mention of "bahu" Dutta thought about Naku 😃😃😃...wah wah...doh hi mulaquat mein yeh haal hai...lage raho 😳😳😳...lmfao!! 🤣 dutta lost in his dream land...thinking about Naku...while she's trying to flag him down...but he thinks shes not real🤣🤣🤣 oh that is gonna cost him!! 🤣🤣🤣...

if you can...give me a short summary of the kala/chintu etc story line so far...cuz im a wee bit lost 😕

JAZ




I m so glad & thankful to see u here ...😆
Yh ,,,this Dutta is different ...he believes in jhat mein love & pat mein shaadi..ain't he kooolll ..😉
Aage dekh kya hota hai ...

Short summary ..😲😲..shuru se padh le zyada parts nahi hain ...😆

Okkkkkiiee here it is ...Chintu mom dies ,his father remarries Kala ..
she does not love him ,,,she has married 4 money ..
Kishore friend is Arvind ,,His wife takes Chintu under her wings ...she loves him like her own son that is Bunty ...bunty & chintu becum gr8 frndz ..they r never apart ...kala gives birth to a girl ...chintu is very attached to his lil sister ,,,he just adores her ...Kala has never been a good mother to Chintu or even Sups also ..Chintu has alwayz looked upto antara as hiz mom ..kala cums to knw that nearly 75% property & house is under Chintu's name ,,,her hatred 4 him increases ..!


Hope its clear nw ..!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PremLeoManav

Wow yaar........kya tasha scene tha shabz?.........rockingg.........KAASH CREATIVE DEKH LEIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳




Thanx Sheeba ..😳
i m glad that u liked it ..
wo waqt kab aayega jab CVs humse ideas le ..!😆



Thanx a lot ..!
😳


Originally posted by: Miketa

So far I am liking the story...



Thanx a lot Miketa ..
I m glad that u liked it ..!
😳


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

Shabz Ki Bacchi

How In the World Am I supposed to know you update????

PM kardia kar naa


UFF updt toh
Masha allah mast thi

Agli baar PLEASE pm KAR !!

Lekhu



Hey lekhu ...
i did PM u ,,,sachhchi ...😲
check ur PM dabba ..
i think i did ...if not then sowwie ..😳

will PM u next time ..
Glad that u liked it ..& thanx 4 reading & commenting ..!


Originally posted by: Irika95

Shabzz awesome update...wating to read the next part update asap



Thanx Irika ...😳
glad that u liked it ..
will update soon ...!
😉



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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi frndz ..
well me bak with another part ...
hope u all like it ..!


Part 7

Baaji is working in his office ….he is doing some work on his laptop ,,when his manager comes & stands there ,,he wants to say something but is a little hesitant ..Baaji looks up at him & then back at the lappy screen asks him if there is any problem …the manager a little nervous tells him there is a girl who he knows & is in need of a job ,,,since they have a vacancy so if its possible that she be appointed for it …he further tells that she is a very deserving candidate , u can see her certificates ..

B : If she is deserving then she will get it on merit ….why are u recommending her ..

M : Sir ,,she is new in the city & I thought may b ..

B cutting him off : Call her for the interview 2mrw …we will see then ..

M : Thank u sir ..

Baaji shuts down his lappy & gets up to leave ,flinging the coat over his shoulder ,,he leaves the office ..

Just as Baaji leaves the manager gives a call to the girl & tells her about the interview ,,,& asks her to b there on time ..


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Baaji exits his office building , his car is already w8ing 4 him at the gate …the gateman opens the door 4 him ,,,he gets in & drives off towards the main gate ,,,just as he is about to exit his office premises , a car comes in front of his car ,,he quickly pushes the brake ,,,both the car are in facing each other …Baaji looks 2wards the other car & notices Dutta seated in the driving seat ,,a smirking smile comes on his face ..

Dutta gets out his car & so does Baaji …they walk up to each other & stop when they r face to face ..

B : Kya baat hai ,,aaj Dutta Patil mere office mein ..

D : Tum jo ye kar rahe ho theek nahi hai ..

B smiling : Achcha ,,Ab aisa maine kya kar diya ..

D : Tum achchi tarah se jaante ho ke main kya keh raha hoon ..

B : Oh c'mon Dutta ,,ab tum us zameen k bare mein baat karne aaye ho …jis ki kismet mein wo tha use mil gaya ..aur wo kya kehte hain "Everything is fair in Love & War .."

D : Sahi kaha tumne ..waise tumhe kya lagta Baaji ,,Bilkul nahi Baaji …tumhari in chotti chotti se harkaton se tum mujhe nahi hara sako ge …sach mano Baaji ye tumhari bahut chotti si jeet hai ..Tumhara jo ye guroor tumhare sar chad kar bol raha hai ,,,wo bahut jald utar jayega ..aur wo din door nahi Baaji ..aur tum apne mooh k bal giroge …koi nahi ho ga tumhare paas ..waise dekha jaye to ab bhi koi nahi tumhare paas ..

B laughing loudly : Oh really ,,aisa kya …& then getting all serious " Ye to waqt hi batayega Dutta k kiski jeet hogi aur kiski haar ,,aur filhaal to jeet meri hui hai aur haar tumhari ..aur mujhe celebrate karna hai apni jeet ko ,,,so u better move ur car from my way ….Baaji pointingly sayz to Dutta & goes & sits in his car ,,,

D replies bak in a stern voice : Meri baat mat bhoolna Baaji …

Baaji starts honking the car horn ..Dutta gets bak in his car ,,reverses it …Baaji getting way drives away past him ..

Dutta too drives away to his home ..


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Another beautiful day has arrived ,,Dutta gets up ..he remembers that 2day is Aaye 's birthday …he hurriedly freshens up & takes out the gift bag which he had bought 4 Aaye ..On seeing the bag he remembers Naku & their little tiff at the shop …It brings a smile on his face ,,,he wished that if only he could meet her again ..he takes the bag & heads towards Aaye's room …He doesn't find her there so he makes way to the kitchen ,,,she is sitting there at the table giving instructions to the servant ,,,Dutta cums 4rm behind ,,,he hugs her 4rm the back singing happy birthday aaye…Aaye face lits up ,,she kisses him on the forehead sayz " tumhe yaad tha mera janamdin "

D : Kya aaye ,,,main kabhi bhoola hoon tera janamdin ..ye dekh main tere liye kya laya hoon ..he hands over the gifts to aaye & himself goes to the fridge & pours himself a glass of juice ..

Aaye on opening the gifts & checking it sayz : Ye tu mere liye laya hai ..

Dutta who's back is turned replies : Haan Aaye ,,,maine khud pasand kiya hai ,,,tujhe pasand nahi aaya kya i ..

Aaye laughing : Ye main pehnugi …arey bachpan mein bhi maine aise kapde nahi pehne ..

Dutta looks towards aaye who is holding a short & a T shirt in her hands ..Dutta who is surprised cums 4ward & takes the cloths 4rm aaye's hand ..he exclaims " maine to ye nahi kharida tah ..ye kahan se aa gaya .."

Aaye : Mujhe kya pata ,,,tuhi to keh raah tha maine khud pasand kiya tha ..

Dutta : haan aaaye maine kiya tha ,,magar ye woi nahi hai …

Aaye : Achcha ye nahi hai to phir kahan hai ..

Dutta suddenly remembers that he & Naku had bumped in the parking lot & their bags had dropped 4rm their hands …these bags must have got exchanged there only …so it means that my bags are with her ,,On this thought a mischievous smile comes on his face ..he just knew fate had set up another meeting with her ..

Aaye looking at him : Ab tujhe kya hua ,,,kya soch raha hai ..

Dutta puzzled : wo aaye mera khayal hai mere bags kisi se exchange ho gaye hain …tu fikr mat kar ,,main aaj hi waapis shop per jaa kar change kara loon ga ..

Dutta checks the bag 4 the number of the shop …he decides to give a call 4rm the office as it waz too early & the shops would not have opened up so soon …


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Time is passing by…Kala has told Sups of her father decision of her engagement with Bunty ,,,she doesn't like the idea & cries in 4rnt of her that she doesn't wanna get married to Bunty ,,she doesn't like him at all .. Kala pacifies her so as not to worry ..she will never let this happen ,,,Kishore who by chance cums early hears Kala convo with Sups …he gets very angry ,,,he asks Sups to go to her room ..after Sups leave Kishore & Kala have a fight ,,,he is angry as to why Kala had to disclose this news to sups so soon …the talk had been only between the elders ,,,& Sups is too young to understand these matters now ,,but when she grows up she will happily accept his this decision .. Kala yells back at him that she will never this happen ,,,it waz the matter of her only child happiness & she will never Sups get married into that family ..she further badmouths them specially Antara .. at this Kishore looses his temper & slaps Kala hard on her cheeks ..Kala is stunned & dumbfounded ,,she stares at him & then yells " tumhari himmat kaise huyi mujhpar uthaane ki .."

Kishore replies back : Ye haath mujhe bahut pehle utha lena chahiye tha …to aaj ye naubat nahi aati ...he further sayz that he curses that day when he met her & decision to marry her waz his biggest mistake …

He then turns to leave the room but then turn backs & sayz that Sups ki shaadi to ab ussi ghar mein hogi ..

Kala to herself ..Ye thappad main hamesha yaad rakhungi Kishore …ye shaadi to kabhi nahi hone dungi ,,aur haan zinki wajah se tumne mujhpar par haath uthaya hai na unhe bhi chain se nahi jeene doongi ,,,aisa zeher gholungi unki zindagi mein k na jee payeinge aur na mar payenge aur isme Chintu bhi shaamil ho mujhe parwa nahi ..

Sups is all the time listening to their conversation 4rm the window ...after Kishore leaves she goes inside the room & hugs Kala ,,,she is looking scared ..but she trusts her mom ..

Bunty & Chintu hav started college ..after college they would come to the school to pick them up ..their routine have not changed ,,,the foursome still spent their time 2gether & that too mostly at bunty's place ..Antara used to luv it having them around ..

Bunty knew about his engagement to Sups ,,but he hadn't said anything about this decision ..Antara had assured him that when time comes & if they are not happy with their decision they wouldn't force him into it …this had relieved Bunty for he waz not comfortable with Sups ,,he didn't like her arrogance ,,he knew she waz young now & there waz still time & she could change with time ..

Pari & Sups are now in their 12 th yr of age ,,Pari is a little confused over Sups behavior …she knows that she is a moody girl but now a dayz she waz always getting irritated ..She asks Sups about it but she ignores it ..Pari also couldn't understand why Sups hated her brother ,,,she knew that Chintu simply adored her & would do anything 4 her ..she had started to feel 4 Chintu ,,,she used to stare at his face & think ..poor guy he didn't know that the person whom he luved the most in the world & whom he adored & pampered just hated him ..she didn't understand that just bcoz he is a step brother so u have to hate him ..she could see their waz nuthin of step brotherly treatment shown 4rm his side ..he waz a very loving brother & sumtimes she used to envy Sups ..

Sups had also found a change in Pari's attitude ,,,she doesn't seemed to b scared of Chintu anymore …she had found many a times of Pari to b staring at Chintu face with fascination when he waz not luking ..Sups now knew dat Pari had started liking Chintu & also teased her about it …Pari would get embarrassed & deny anything such as this ..

Sups suddenly starts encouraging her & sayz that she would love to see her as her bhabhi ,,,at which Pari blushes,,, she even confides in her about her engagement with Bunty …Pari is surprised at this news ..

One day after school Pari goes to Bunty's house ,,she knew everyone would b there …On reaching there she could Chintu & Sups voices ,,,they were laughing over something ..she slowly makes her way there to surprise them ..but then gets a shock of her life when she hears them making fun of her …Sups is telling Chintu of Pari's infatuation with him & how she is dreaming of getting married to him one day ..& they laugh at her …Pari gets all tearful ,,,she feels so embarrassed ,,,she hears Bunty cuming there & scolding them on their behavior & tells them to b ashamed of themselves …they r making fun of their childhood friend ..Pari runs 4rm there ,,,,no one notices her ..

Pari doesn't show up in school for 4 days …they all go to her house & find that she had high fever …They all cheer her up & tell her to get fine ..She has gone all quite ,,Bunty notices her silence & asks her if anything waz wrong …she faintly smiles at him & nods at him ..telling that everything waz fine ….she just felt weak ..He tells her to get well soon ..

After that incident Pari became very reserved & quite with them ,,she used to spend most of her time nw studying & or kept herself busy ..Only Bunty noticed her changed behavior ,,,he even inquired about it but she said she waz all rite ...Bunty had a doubt that Pari had heard Sups & Chintu convo ..after a few dayz they cum to know that Pari father had been transferred to another city & that they were leaving ..They all get very sad ,,but deep down Pari is happy to get away 4rm here …She waz also unhappy that she had to leave a brother like Bunty & also Antara ,,she had been very loving 2wards her & Pari had also been very attached with her ..On the day of her leaving everyone had cum to see them off …Chintu also looked sad ,,,he gives a flower & sayz sorry 4 his behavior ,,he knew that he been annoying & that he would miss her very much .. Pari smiles 2wards him …Bunty asks her that she would not 4get him to which she replies that she would never 4get him..he had always been there 4 her like a brother & that she would miss him terribly ..She then hugs Sups & bids goodbye to everyone …& the train departs the station ..they stand there at the platform till the train is out of sight ..That waz the last they saw of Pari ..



Well dats its 4 nw ..

The side story ends here ...as u all must know it by now that its a flashback of Dutta & Baaji ,,& as to giv u an idea what happened in the past ..

will try to update soon ..

Plzz do leave ur comments ..!😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
yayyyyyyy me first 😆

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that was superb shabzzzz 👏
i liked it so much especially i love ur side story thats the flashback segment
and y do u say its over......we are yet to know what happened with baaji n dutta neway u know how to put it better can't wait for the next update TaSha are going to meet for the exchange of bags
i had an idea where ur story is going n i will be glad if m right
so chintu will meet pari soon 😆

love u n ur ff shabz gr8 work keep it up 👏
Edited by skavitha08 - 15 years ago

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