TaSha FF..Yeh Bheege Pal.. Part 21 Pg 94 - Page 23

Originally posted by: skavitha08

yayyyyyyy me first 😆

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that was superb shabzzzz 👏
i liked it so much especially i love ur side story thats the flashback segment
and y do u say its over......we are yet to know what happened with baaji n dutta neway u know how to put it better can't wait for the next update TaSha are going to meet for the exchange of bags
i had an idea where ur story is going n i will be glad if m right
so chintu will meet pari soon 😆

love u n ur ff shabz gr8 work keep it up 👏

Originally posted by: Aamirlover

loved it shabz...keep it up!!

Barah mazah ata hai yeh sab par ne ka... :D

Originally posted by: Irika95

woowww that was really awesome shabzzz...now waitng 4 the next part...

Originally posted by: kritika4eva

Wow!! shabzz!!!! Simply awesome!!!! Loved it!! 😊kudos to u!!

Originally posted by: sana786a

as usual it was amazing👏👏gosh u write sooo well mashallah👏👏but one complaint its 2 short shabz i want u 2 focus on dutta and naku plus baaji plzzzzzz update quickly😆😃

Originally posted by: Dew-drop

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Yaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyy ,,,,u first kavs ..😆

Thank u Kavs ....glad dat u liked it ..😳
U want me to continue the side story .....my mind is getting twisted ..
Hey if knw ,,,,,then share wid me ,,,kya pata i may like it ..😆
U hav to w8 4 the next part to knw .....</font><font color="#990000"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica,
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<font color="#990000">will update soon ,,if my net permits ..
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Originally posted by: SanRajDeewani

I loved it Shabz..
Woooowiiee.. Its just brilliant..=)
Pari gone.. I am guessing the girl who has come for job in Baiji's office is Pari?? 😳
Hmmm.. I can't wait for the next update.. This is just to amazing..=)

Originally posted by: 92icycool

hey shabz...great work!!fabulous!!!👏👏...i thoroughly enjoyed reading it!!!acha hua ki tum ne bags mein sirf shorts n Tshirt rakha😉😆😆

thanx for updating..eagerly waiting 4 the next part😃

Originally posted by: kshreya2002

I am confused...Bunty aur Chintu mein who is Baji and who is Dutta. My guess is Bunty is Dutta and Chintu is Baji...and the Pari chic is for Baji. Dutta must have refused to marry Baji's sister Supriya hence the enemity?

Originally posted by: skavitha08

hey continue with ur side story only if u feel the need to otherwise no..........
even if i have some ideas i wud not like to tell u those i just love the way u write so let it be simply shabzzzz style my side of story may confuse n evn ruin ur story or mabe it pollutes ur mind 😆
so the point is me loving ur style of writing so .........ok so we will come to know in the next update as jani says whoa-k then bring it on......... 😆

Originally posted by: skavitha08

bhagwaan kare tera net salaamat rahe taaki hame updates mile its weekend now