Tumse Maine Pyar Kyun Kiya [Pg.19 new]

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hiya People! I was bored, so i thought i'd write a fan-fic. Its a Bit Hec-tic lmao.
Don't ask who Prena who was she married to because thats a new-entry. You'll find out more about him later. Its More on Rishabh, Anurag, Prena & well.. ;)
Ok Here is the story:

Rishabh And Anurag are Brothers, and Prena is Their Cousin! 😆
She is a widow, and has a Son called Prem, He has been really negative and Agressive since His Father's Death, He Lives with His Grandma and she's someone who is always having a bad temper and an attitude problem and always neglects prem and treats him badly,because she hates prena. She has never liked prena and blames Prena for his Son's death. So she never lets prena meet prem. Prem has never seen his mother since childhood.
Anurag is divorced From Sampada. And has a crush on his neighbour and childhood friend Anjali! (😆 guess who that could be?!)

Prena and Anurag, Have broke apart because, Anurag had denied the fact that they were in love because he knew Rishabh Loved Prena so he Sacrificed his love and broke apart from prena many years back. Rishabh Secretly admired his cousin Prena since childhood. But Prena has Secretly Admired Anurag instead of Rishabh. Prena doesn't know that Rishabh Loves her, but Anurag Does. Prena hasn't met Anurag and Rishabh since childhood. Because of rivalry between Prena's Family and Rishabh/Anurag's Family, because Prena's Family had refused to get Prena Married to that family, because Anurag's/Rishabh's family were very poor when they were in childhood.
So they had torned apart from each other. Now the Two family's are againest each other and are also rival's in business aswell.

[Anurag and Rishabh are in the Office, Anurag and Rishabh are Talking]

Anurag: Big B, We Have to Finalise that Contract Today, Big B? Big B you There?
[Rishabh is Lost in his thoughts and Realises Anurag is talking, he starts talking slowly]
Rishabh: ...How Long has it been Anu..10, 20 years..Don't you miss her..
Anurag: Miss Who?
Rishabh: Preni..I mean Prena.
(Preni is what they used to call her since childhood)
(Anurag pretends to not remember Prena)
Anurag: Big B, that was long time ago..I..I can't remember.
(Rishabh Looks at Anurag Suprisingly and Raises his eyebrows)
Rishabh: Anu. I know you. You can never lie to me..
(Tears Fall Down Anurag's Eyes. But trys to hide them he turns around)
Anurag: Shall we go to the meeting, we're getting late.
Rishabh: Ok. You Go. I'll Come.
(Anurag leaves the room)
(Tears fall down Rishabh's Cheeks. and Remembers Prena, Anurag and Rishabh Playing Football together :FLASHBACK:)
(They are making fun of Prena)
Anurag and Rishabh: PRENII PRENNIII CHOTI PRENIII Girl's Can't play football!
Prena: YES THEY CAN!
(Anurag and Rishabh Start Laughing and Pull faces at Prena)
(Prena Starts Crying and Leaves, Anurag looks at Prena and Frowns, Rishabh follows Prena)
Rishabh: Sorry Pri...(Holds his ears)
(Prena Smiles)
Prena: Its Ok..(Sniffs)
(Rishabh smiles and Leaves Smiling to himself)
(Anurag comes with the football)
Anurag: Sorry Pri. we didn't mean that Your good at football. Sorri...(He trys to hide something from his back)
Prena: Its Ok..Whats that behind your back?
(Anurag smiles and Gives Prena Flowers Hand-picked by himself)
(Anurag Smiles And Leaves, Prena Sniffs the flowers and blushes)
(Rishabh Looks at that whole thing and Frowns)
(Rishabh Gets back into time and Tears fall down his cheeks)


😭 Yes i know its a bit sad, but thats the story and it gets more interesting later on! It took me ages to think and Write this, tell me what you think and i'll continue!

😃


Anjali
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Please continue writing...its fabulous...& for once Anurag & Rishabh are not fighting 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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good job yaar ! 👏 👏
Noor
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey there Anjali! It was indeed a favulous effort on your part and I am sure more people will come forward and appreciate it:)) Keep up the good job- the storyline is pretty interesting!

Keep it up and all the best:))))
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks Everyone! I didn't know everyone would like it that much..Ok i'll continue! I'm writing the 2nd chapter right now.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow thats great keep it up man u tell me u can write pages about my luv wat abotu u man u can write pages about ur serial lol 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey hun

that was really good and anurag and rishabh cousins would never of thought of that one please continue soon

luv noori
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its sooo interesting yaar.......continue...cant wait for the 2nd part 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW...tihs is intresting.Bajaj n Anu brothers 😆
plz keep it going. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Second Chapter:
(Rishabh Sits on His Chair, Hands on his Head)
Rishabh: Prena..Why because of our differences we seperated..its true we're related to blood...But why did that blood turn to water? you don't know how long i've been waiting for you..
(More Tears Fall Down his cheeks)
(Someone Knocks on his door)
(Rishabh Wipes His Tears)
Rishabh: Come In.
(Its ANJALI! She's a Secretary who works for Anurag and Rishabh)

Anjali: Sir. The Board of Directors Are Calling for you.
...Sir...Wheres Anurag..?
(Rishabh Smiles)
Rishabh: Anjali You don't have to call me Sir..Your Anu's And My friend. Please there shouldn't be any formalitys between each other.
(Anjali Smiles)
Anjali: Sorry Rishabh. Shall we Go?
Rishabh: Yes Lets go.

(Meeting)
Rishabh: Sorry I'm Late Everyone, I..I was Just Sorting something out.
(Anjali Walks In, and Anurag Stands Up)
Rishabh: Anurag sit down..
(Anurag Looks at Anjali and Blushes and Sit's down)
(Anjali Smiles and Sits beside Anurag)
(Rishabh Holds a Presentation and Starts talking)
(Anurag Looks at Anjali and Doesn't realise that Rishabh is whipering his name to carry on the presentation)
Rishabh: Anurag...CARRY ON..the Presentation..ANURAG?
Anurag: Yes... 😃....Ok.....
(Rishabh Holds Anurag and pulls him up)
(Anurag Realises)
Anurag: Sorry I was Just...Lost in My thoughts.
(Anurag Starts talking and Rishabh Sits back down)
(When the Whole Presentation is finished)
Board of Directors: Wow I'm very impressed with this Mr.Bajaj, we have agreed to give this contract to you.
(Rishabh and Anurag Smile, When They leave. Anurag, Rishabh and Anjali in the Office)
Rishabh: Thanks for telling me Anjali.
Anjali: no problem.
Anurag: Anjali..Umm you go i have to talk to Big B.
(Anjali Agrees and Leaves)
Anurag: Big B..you know that question you asked me..
Rishabh: Yes Anu..Tell Me..Don't you remember her?
(Anurag Stalks the Question And Starts talking about the contract)
Anurag: I'm really happy we have this contract..yeah happy..
(Anurag turns for the door but rishabh holds anurag's shoulder and stops him from going any further)
Rishabh: Please. Tell Me. Since Prena Has Gone You've never mentioned her since.
(Anurag Turns around and Frowns)
Anurag: Yeah i do miss her. But i never mentioned her name because whenever i mentioned her name. You have tears in your eyes and Big B i can never see tears in your eyes. we've seen too much since we were small.
Rishabh: How can you ever say that? I am your Big B, Your Problems and Sorrow is My problems and sorrow. I miss her too. Just because Father and Mother are No Longer doesn't mean we'll always be alone. As long as we have each other we're never going to be alone.
(Rishabh Gives Anurag a Brotherly hug, Tears In Both of their eyes)


😭 I had to show some brotherly love between Rishabh And Anurag. Prena will be mentioned soon and so will everyone else!


Anjali

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