heheheh sowwieeee.......for the late coomnet lekin ab tujhe to pata hain na....i m the reserved queeen but tu phir bhi lucky hain mene yaha sirf 1 hi din tuk reserve chora baaqi sab mein to kabhi kabhi ek hafta ho jata hain hehehehe
 chalo ab coming to the part
 i reallly loved it ...it was really nice ur really an amazing writer so keep it up n dont underestimate ur self coz ur trully good
 u trust me na???so trsut ma words ok
  
 i loved rahul muskaaan nokh jokh hehe i alwayz love it coz i love them tehy r reeally sweet hehehe i couldnt stop laughing whn muskaan was screaming u know typical muskaaan 
  
 n i got a bit confused whn tehy were talking baut the gul whu passed form the corrider abut 2 3 years back i was like did i missed something wht r tehy talking i read two three times but samjh nai aya thn i m like ghaddee age to phar so i reead more n phir samjha me aya ke whts happening.....
 u knwoww i would like to clap for u .....
 coz tht part was really amazing...it looked real....
 i mean agar koi dusra hota to they would have directly explained whts happening but u didnt do tht ....
 u strted form the middle like AR were talking to each other n rahul suddenly came n v readers came ( lolz) soo this is the converstion v here n v get confused n thts where armaan explain
 samjhi wht i m trying to say hope u did heheheh
  
 n abut the dimple baby ..n bahi ..hehehehehe haaiii i know whu it is lolzz...
 soo ab jaldi uske bhai ko lav orr ye ek big problem ko solve karo as i really want to know
  
 n plzz update the part sooon mein tujhe pyar se abhi keh rahi hun ......kyu ke agar nahi kiya to i will bring my gang 
 heheheh
 love u maleee
 muahh
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