Can this be love? AR Mini FF Part 4 pg 9 last part

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey guys...I started a mini FF on AR. It only has like 3-4 parts...It will be done by sunday hopefully😃
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Part 1
"Armaan no'stop'don't'Armaan NO'" Riddhima was trying to stop Armaan from throwing water at her'she had woke him up by throwing a bucket full of cold colored water, so now he wanted to take revenge. Riddhima ran into his house'seeing Armaan's mom (Juhi) in the kitchen..she went and hid behind her "Aunty plz stop Armaan'I just took shower and he wants to throw that dirty water on me" Riddhima said ducking behind Juhi.
"Mom look what she did to me? I won't leave her" Armaan made a funny face'seeing him covered with that colored water, Juhi laughed. "Mom, you're laughing at me?" Armaan pouted.
"Aunty he wasn't ready to wake up so I had to do this'" Riddhima was now standing next to Juhi.
"Well done Riddhima'at least he woke up early today, and Armaan go and take a shower'you look like a clown" saying that both Juhi and Riddhima giggled.
"I won't leave you basket!!" saying that he left for shower.
Armaan and Riddhima are best friends. They are in New York and they live next to each other too. Armaan lives with his mom, his dad died when he was 3. And Riddhima lives with her parents, but they went to India for some work so she is lives alone at the moment.
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"Wow mom I love you for making my favorite kheer for me" Armaan hugged her from behind.
"This kheer is for me" Riddhima said tasting it.
"No yeh tum dono mein se kisi ke liye nahi hai'it's for the guests" Juhi informed.
"Guests? Who's coming?" Armaan asked.
"Larki waale'" Juhi said stirring the kheer.
"Larki waale? You mean you're having a kitty party? Wah wah apne friends ke liye kheer aur bete ke liye kuch nahi?" Armaan pouted.
"Oye idiot'larki waale means that they are coming to see you'you're about to get married Armaan" Riddhima grinned and then suddenly her smile vanished.
"Yes beta'remember we had gone to see a girl for you..like a month ago? And you even liked the girl?" Armaan nodded "Toh aaj shaam tumhara roka hai" Juhi smiled and kissed his forehead.
"But mom we had this discussion of getting married after a year'then why are we doing this now?" he asked confusedly.
"You're getting married within this month Armaan, Aahana's parents have to go back to India for their business and they don't want to leave her alone here'so we decided to get you married so that they don't have to worry about her" Juhi continued her work.
"And you didn't bother asking about my opinion?" he sat on the counter.
"Why? You don't like her? If you don't then I'll call them and tell them'" Juhi said.
"I didn't say that mom'"
"Ok then no more questions'" Juhi smiled.
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"Kya karon, kya karon kya karon?" Armaan mumbled to himself, jumping up and down on Riddhima's bed.
"Uff, Kya karon main is larke ka?" Riddhima said walking around.
"Basket aaj larki waale aane wala hain, mein bohot nervous ho raha hoon, aaj mera ROKA hai'I don't even know what does it mean" he said biting his nails.
"Armaan stop behaving like girls, aisi halat usually larkiyon ki hoti hai" She sat on the bed "I'm sure you'll mess up if you continue acting this way'and stop jumping on my bed will you?" she hit his legs.
"Aaoww, stop being so violent" rubbing his legs, he sat next to her.
"Ok listen'tum mujhe shaadi ke baad bhul jaoge?" She looked at him.
"No way, how can I ever forget my best friend?" he gave her side hug, making her heart skip a beat. From past few months Riddhima had started loving Armaan. But never dared telling him that, coz she didn't want to lose a friend like him. And then she heard about him getting married'which made her upset. But she was happy to see him happy.
"Armaan, I think you should get going now'" she looked away.
"Aren't you coming?" he held her hand.
"Main wahan aa kar kya karongi? And I have some books to read as well'I have exams coming up" she explained.
"Thori der ke liye aao na? mere liye? Please?" he pouted. She looked deeply into his eyes and got lost for a min "So are you coming?" he asked again making her come back to reality.
"I'll be there in 10 mins'" she smiled.
"I'll wait for you'Bye" saying that he left.
"Kaash main tumhe bata sakti ki main tumse kitna pyaar karti hoon" she took a deep breath and closed her eyes, controlling her tears.
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Armaan was mesmerized seeing Riddhima looking like an angel in her white choridaar dress. He starred at her, while she was talking with some of their friends. He had never saw her this beautiful before. And he had never thought about her in any other way. For him, she was his best friend, who takes care of him, understands him, helps him, tolerates his mischievous behavior, and is always there for him no matter what.
Riddhima watched the roka ceremony. She smiled seeing Armaan so nervous. She felt heartbroken, not that she wasn't happy but coz she felt lonely. She was missing her mom a lot today. Controlling her tears'she went up to Juhi and told her that she had to leave'as her exams are in 2 weeks and she has a lot to study.
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It had been almost three hours since Riddhima had came to the beach. The beach was nearly empty, as it was getting darker and it was a cold winter night. Riddhima didn't care about the weather though'beach was her favorite place and she would come here whenever she wanted to, it was near her house too'she could just walk to the beach. She and Armaan always come here and play in water, take a walk, and enjoy the sunset.
Sitting on the rock, burying her face into her hands'she sobbed like a baby. She felt lonely. It's not like she didn't have friends'she had many friends..Rahul, Muskaan, Atul, Anjali'but Armaan was closest to her. And she knew once he gets married he will get busy taking care of his wife and other work. Their friendship won't be the same, and she doesn't even expect it to be same as she knows'after getting married everyone's life changes' "We are not made for each other I guess'I was so stupid to think that way" she thought.
Leaving all her thoughts aside'she headed home. She got changed into her night suit and grabbed her book and started reading. Just then Armaan came running to her room.
"Basket'where were you? I came here like 5 times looking for you and your phone was switched off as well" Armaan sat next to her.
"I went to the library and then to the'beach" she said looking into her book.
"You went to the beach? It's freezing out there'" he lifted up her chin and saw her red eyes "What's the matter? Why were you crying?" he asked looking into her tearful eyes'he knew that Riddhima goes to the beach alone when she is extremely upset about something.
"Nothing'I was just'was just missing mom" she said looking down as tears rolled down her cheeks'
"Hey basket'shhh don't cry" he hugged her to calm her down "Tumne kuch khaya?" he asked coming out of the hug.
"I don't feel hungry'" she replied pulling her blanket more closely as she was feeling cold.
"I knew it'you are becoming so careless about your health basket, it's not good ok? And looks like your getting sick'ghar mein beth kar bhi toh mom ko miss kar sakti thi na'beach pe jaane ki kya zarrorat?" he went and turned on the heat "I'll be back'don't sleep" saying that he left.
Riddhima smiled at his concern, but then she thought she should stay away from him as much as she can coz she is already in love with him'she doesn't want to fall deeply in love with him'or has she already fallen deeply in love?
After 15 mins, he came back with hot vegetable soup.
"Armaan you made aunty make this soup at this hour? Are you crazy?" she said putting her book aside.
"Oye mom ne nahi maine banaya'now drink it before you catch cold" he handed her the bowl.
She really wasn't hungry, but she had no other choice but to drink it.
"By the way'my engagement is in 2 days" he smiled.
"OMG Congrats!!!" she hugged him "I'm soooooo happy for you" she grinned coming out of the hug.
"Ok ab tum so jao bohot late ho raha hai'we have loads of arrangements to do tomorrow"
"Alright'Gnight Sweet Dreams" she smiled.
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Next Morning at Maliks
Everyone was busy with the engagement preparations. Riddhima was decorating the back yard along with Atul, Anjali, and Rahul. Armaan had just taken shower. He stood there next to his window and saw Rahul chasing Riddhima for some reason, he shook his head and smiled but then he frowned as he saw Rahul so close to Riddhima. Rahul had held Riddhima from behind and was tickling her. "Why is he holding her that way?" For some reason he felt strange seeing them so close'he got mad or may be jealous?
Hope you liked the first part...Please do comment guys!!😳
Index
Part 1 - page 1
Part 2 - page 4
Part 3 - page 8
Part 4 - page 9 (Final part)
Edited by x!reema!x - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey,
Its a really cute part, and already alot has happened. Quite different from DMG b/c Ridhhima's realized that she loves him but Armaan still has to realize that. After reading the last bit, I'm sure he loves her too, but just doesn't recognize it.
I liked the AR relationship as well as Ridhhima's relationship with Juhi. Altho I don't understand why Juhi would get another girl for Armaan when she knows how close AR are. Just a bit odd.
Anyhow, nice start and please send me a pm when you update next.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I love the FF Reemz!! 🤗

I love how you took a different approach and you did an awesome job writing!

baaki ke comments i have told you already 😎
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome start
loved it
plzz add me to ur pm list
cont soon
luv dhruvika
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thats gr8 start loved it...
god armaan is already getting married to other girl...and poor ridhima is in love with him.....
wow now that everything is set for armaan's marrige and he is getting possesive about ridhima....
i hope it works out soon.....
thanks for the pm
cont soon
nruti
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh my god reema do continye soon and pm when u update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyyy dear,
awsome part
do update soon
& continue with ur other FF
also

thanks for PM.


love
Riddss
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey reema..nice intro..
AR are best friends..n they still fight like kids, lol cute!..
It was armana's roka today, and he didn't want it to happen..riddhima was heartbroken..but since he insisted she went there.
he was mesmerzied looking at her..n didn't know why he felt this way..aww..
she felt really lonely..so she went to the beach..n when she returned armaan took full care of her..she loved him but she didn't want to get really close 2 him..
armaan saw riddhima-rahul really close n got jealous?..wow..nice!..
thnx 4 d pm
update soon
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwww choo chweet...
ammy is jealous huh.....😛
hope he realise dat they r made 4 each other....
loved it 2 d core....
update superrrrrr soooon.....eagerly waiting....
thnx 4 d pm.....😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very cute 😃
Edited by -Steffz- - 15 years ago

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