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i use to read ur fic earlier i remmber reading 4 5 parts dne ekdum se dunno how i always missed out reading it now finnaly i read it whole n u have wirtten it very beautifully
too gud
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thank u so much...both of u.ur comments r 2 sweet 😳

hey neelu! u rock! this last part esp. was cho chweet! 😳

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pls continue!

n a request to you, whenever you post ur next part, pls put it in the title, like all the rest do! it would be easier to know that u hv updated ur fanfic! 😃

neelu ..............what should i say ?? i can onlyy 👏

neelu me jst read d lst 4 prts n 😆 n dese r alll d emotions i had its jst awsome

That last part was really awesome. 😊 😊 😊 but I am feeling sad for Yuvi. 😭 😭

the last 2 parts r just awesome 👏
ashi nd yuvi's relation was brought out beautifully .
do continue soon

"yuvi,i hav 2 go now,"ashi got up n pressed his shoulder. "i luv u all rite?just remember that."
yuvi : yes ashi i know.good nite n tha...i mean ..(he paused not wanting 2 say thanks after her last outburst)
she smiled at him, n then noticed the tears in his eyes.
she ran 2 him n pressed his head against her chest even as she stroked back his curls so tenderly that he lifted his tear-stained face.
yuvi: ashi?i never knew u luvd me so much?? 😕 😕
ashi: i luv u more than ne1 else,u r all i hav.i already told u,yuvi.why don't u believe me? 😳
he had unknowingly hurt her.now she waz the weaker one emotionally n he lifted her face with his hands.
yuvi: don't get me wrong sweety.i waz just thinking--i've never seen u so emotional.this is a new ashi that i'm seeing n i can't quite understand whether i miss the old ashi or love the new one!(he pulled her into his arms)
ashi : i'm the same aashi,u wacko.kya mujhe tumhe abuse karna padega 2 prove ki main koi alien nahin hoon?theek hain--u psycho,wacko,idiot,donkey...
they both laughed amidst their tears.he kissed the top of her head."i love u no matter wot u say or do,ashi,...
someone again banged on the door."coming,coming!"ashi stood up up ruefully."just give me 2 min..."
the same teacher who had broken the bad news 2 yuvi loked in."yuvraj dev?i'm sorry,there's been a change in plans.u r recquired 2 go home right now,not 2 morow morn.ur father has sent a ticket.apparently ur mother's health is going down by the min."
"wot!"both ashi n yuvi said 2gether.n both felt their hearts sink."the car is suming,"their teacher continued."it will drop u 2 the airport rite now.i will cum with hu.just take ur suitcase if u haven't unpacked it."she left,leaving the door open
"ashi;"his voice waz trembling 😭 ."ashi,wot will i do?" 😕
"yuvi,there's no time 2 waste,"she held his hand."let's go rite now.even i'l cum 2 drop u 2 the airport."the next 10 min. were awful.yuvi was now white n trembling,n his hands shook.ranveer n sid brought out his suitcase.
ashi n vrinda were on yuvi's both sides,vrinda trying 2 soothe him,but ashi didn't say nething.his pain chocked her,n his worry waz reflected in her own eyes."ma'am,can i also go plz?"she pleaded but the teacher didn't agree.
"no,ashi,its pat ur bedtime.your coming won't help.all of u plz go 2 bed."
"ma'am,why don't u get it!"ashi burst out."i hav 2 b with him!" "ashi,please,"vrinda n tia tried 2 restrain her.even yuvi waz 2 much in shock 2 say nething,n ultiasmtely he left without her.
as the car disapeared,ashi collapsed on the floor.her head throbbed,she waz almost derilious with fever n stress."wot will happen now?vrinda in tears."aap chinta mat keejiye,hum abhi doctor ko bulate hain,"ranveer n varun went inside even as the girls crowded arnd poor ashi,getting her water n watching with deep symaptyhy how much poor ashi waz suffering both physically n mentally 😭

wow neelakshi i'v read ur entire fic nd really its awesome!

awesome.......... 👏

really very very nice.......