MN & SG FF: Kyun? Promo @ Pg 139 - Page 29

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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome updates..
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 15 years ago
fabulous part daksha....
you rockkkk!!!! 👏
loved this part to bits,
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry dear..
i'm replyin so late .. had my MBA exams & finally done wid it..
d update ws really scary...
mayu is still critical...really worried😒....
i hope agle update mein u will make him fine... (my sincere request)😃
luvd it 2 d core...
pls update soon...🤗
-supriya
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update Daksha..
I loved it.........
It's really very nice.....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Gunjan was sitting in a room.....Samrat brought food for Gunjan and sat beside her......

"Pehle kuch kha lo.....Gunjan" Samrat said....

Gunjan was in her own thoughts.....she didn't responded to Samrat.....

Samrat shook Gunjan by her shoulders......Gunjan came back to her senses......

"Tum pehle khana kha lo.....phir hum hospital chalenge Mayank se milne" Samrat said

"Nahin.....main ab Mayank se kabhi nahin milungi.....kabhi nahin... usski ye haalat bhi meri wajah se hi hai.......main apne pyar ko paane ke liye usski jaan nahin le sakti...."Gunjan said

Samrat tried to console her "Par Gunjan...."

"Nahin Samrat....main nahin jaaungi...par tum zaroor jaao.....please....please tum Mayank se milo.....par usse mat bataana main kahaan hoon" Gunjan said....

"Par tum khaana toh kha lo.....mujhe nahin lagta tumne do din se theek se kuch khaya hoga" Samrat said....

Gunjan sided the plate of food..... "Mujhse nahin khaya jaayega Samrat"

Samrat took a spoon and fed her "Khana nahin khaogi toh kaise chalega.....haan....sab theek ho jaayega Gunjan.....bhagwaan acche logon ke saath humesha accha hi karte hain"

In the hospital, Mayank's mom bought a plate of food for Nupur "Beta kuch toh kha lo"

Nupur was sitting outside Mayank ward who was still unconscious "Nahin maa....mujhse nahin khaya jaayega.."

Then nurse came "Patient ko hosh aa gaya hai....aap mein se koi ek usse mil sakta hai"

Nupur wanted to meet Mayank and that could be seen in her eyes....Mayank's mom told Nupur to go inside....but she refused and insisted her to go "Mujhse zyaada Mayank ko aapki zaroorat hai"

Mayank's right hand was fractured and his ankles were having sprain...... Doctor told them to take him home......but advised him of complete bed rest......

Mayank was shifted to his bedroom.......Nupur entered with a bowl of soup.......she sat beside Mayank......

"Tumhein zyaada lagi toh nahin wahaan.....ouch" Mayank was having pain while talking....

"Ssshh...mujhe kuch nahin hua hai....ab maa ne ye soup bheja hai isse pee lo" Nupur took the spoon to fed him.....she herself made the soup but told that his mom has made it....

Nupur was feeding Mayank when there was a knock on the door.....Samrat entered....

Nupur stood up and Samrat sat beside Mayank......

Samrat was looking at Mayank.....Mayank smiled "Aise kya dekh raha hai.....haan"

"Dekh raha hoon.....dost ko toone kitna paraaya kar diya....mujhe bataaya bhi nahin kisine" Samrat said "Nupur tum to bata sakti thi na"

Mayank said "Accha ye sab chod.....aur mujhe ye bata tu Gunjan se mila"

Samrat understood that Mayank don't know about the death of Gunjan's dad......she was with him....but Gunjan told him not tell anything about her to Mayank.....

"Nahin" Samrat said

"Usse mat bataana meri iss haalat ke baare mein.....faaltoo mein pareshaan ho jaayegi" Mayank said

"Accha baba....par tu poori tarah se aaraam karna....ab main chalta hoon" Samrat said and he left

Samrat reached his house.....Gunjan was sitting nearby the window.....Noise of footsteps made her come back to her senses......

"Mayank kaisa hai ab" Gunjan asked curiously from Samrat "Usse zyaada chot toh nahin lagi na"

"Nahin.....wo theek hai" Samrat said......

At night......

Nupur placed the pillow on the sofa and she was about to sleep.........

"Ab tum meri wajah se theek se so bhi nahin paaogi" Mayank said

"Isska matlab tum do din se theek se nahin so pa rahe the" Nupur said

"Nahin.....mera matlab wo nahin tha" Mayank said

"Mujhe pata hai tumhaara kya matlab tha.....mere liye zyaada pareshaan mat ho.....main theek hoon" Nupur smiled and pulled the blanket to sleep.......

Samrat was sitting in the dining area......completing some of his work.....Gunjan came and sat on another chair.......

"Kya kar rahe ho" Gunjan asked

"Kuch nahin....bas thoda kaam hai....kal office mein meeting hai... mere promotion ke chances hain....issliye acchi report honi chahiye" Samrat smiled and started doing his work again

"Ye toh bohot acchi baat hai" Gunjan said

Next morning.......

Nupur came out from the bathroom......her hairs were wet.....Nupur was drying her hairs by the towel....Mayank just got up from the sleep.....he was struggling to get up.....Nupur saw him and went to help him.....

Mayank grasped her arms.....he was trying to get up when Nupur's hair struck his face......tiny droplets of water started rolling down from his forehead.......she was so close to him that he could feel her warm breath on his face......Nupur made him comfortable on the bed......Mayank for a moment was lost in her......when Nupur wiped water from his face with her saree "Wo baal geele the issliye"

Nupur brought the breakfast for Mayank......she fed him.....

In the evening.......Samrat came back from the office....he was smiling......and went to his Dadi's room......he stopped outside the door.....

Gunjan was laughing with his Dadi......after his father's death it was first time when she was opened up so much........

"Aa gaya Samrat" Dadi saw and called Samrat

Samrat smiled and went inside the room.......

"Mujhe nahin pata aap log kis baat ki khushi mana rahe ho.....par mere paas ek khush khabri hai"

Gunjan looked at Samrat and said "Promotion ho gaya.....haina"

Samrat smiled and said "Haan....Dadi mujhe company ka manager bana diya hai.....par Delhi branch ka.....toh humein do char din mein Delhi jaana hoga"

He was happy.....Dadi blessed him "Khoob tarakki kar beta"

Samrat saw Gunjan and said "Tum bhi chalna humaare saath...Gunjan"

"Main.....main nahin chalungi...nahin" Gunjan said "Main yaheen koi job dhoond loongi....waise hi tumhein itna pareshaan kar chuki hoon...aur nahin"

"Yahin rahogi.....tumhaari marzi.....par mere khyaal se naye shehar mein tumhein apni puraani yaadon ko bhulaane ka mauka milega.....pichle do dinon mein jo hua.....baaki main tumhein force nahin karunga" Samrat said

"Beta....tu chal humaare saath....kaam toh tu Dilli mein bhi kar sakti hai......aur yahaan akeli kahaan rahegi.....aajkal zamaana bohot kharaab hai.....toone mujhe Dadi kaha na....apni Dadi ki baat nahin maanegi" Dadi said

Gunjan thought something and then said "Theek hai Dadi"

Samrat smiled "Ye hui na baat....chalo ab packing shuru kar do"

Samrat phoned Mayank......Nupur picked up his mobile

"Mayank se baat karni hai" Samrat said....

"Haan abhi karaati hoon" Nupur replied

"Haan bol Samrat" Mayank said

"Ab dekh tu toh mujhe chodne aayega nahin....issliye main hi tujhe bata deta hoon...main Dilli ja raha hoon" Samrat said

"Kyun mujhse door bhag raha hai....main khud bed par pada hua hoon" Mayank said

"Arre yaar....mera promotion ho gaya hai...issliye" Samrat said

"Ye toh bohot acchi baat hai....congrats....aur wahaan jaa kar mujhe bhool mat jaana" Mayank smiles

"Accha theek hai....tu apna khayal rakhna...main chalta hoon...Bye" Samrat said and cuts the phone.

Aaj ki update kaisi lagi likh kar zaroor bataayein....feel free to comment...arre yaar I love ur comments

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Daksha, lovely update, thank God Mayank is ok and Gunjan-Samrat moving to Delhi.. will give them a chance to get closer, leaving a chance for Mayank-Nupur too.. and looks like that has already started with Mayank being lost in Nupur for a moment when she was helping him.. Looking forward to next part.. update soon. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update..... Loved the part...
Good that Sajan are moving to Delhi.....So, now Mayur in their world and Sajan in their world right???
Pls continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oye Daksha.......Awwwsome yaar

Amazing....... Mayank lost in Nupur for a moment...

Start of something new.......

I really loved this part....

do continue soon

luv
Nidzy

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Posted: 15 years ago
res me abhi uni jrhe hu ake commnt karugi
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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice update........
mujhe bohut pasand aa gaya
agar ab sajan aur mayur banenge pairs haina?
please update soon.............

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