RadhDev Uninterrupted SR -- Eva's version

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Well the edited episode in the US omitted so many beautiful scenes of SR and on top of that we had to tolerate those two psychos.. the drooly eyed and the mouth organ psycho..
I thought I will remove all unnecessary elements and give our RadhDev one wonderful memorable night.. truly uninterrupted and unedited version....😊
Hope you will like it..

RadhDev are seen at the entrance of the of the hotel. Holding the shopping bags in one hand and the other encircling his beloved wife, Dev walks in the hotel looking at Radh's happy face and talking softly with her. He tells Radh to go ahead in the room while he signs some paper at reception. Radh walks on and opening the room throws the bags on the bed and sits on the sofa resting a bit. In few minutes Dev walks in the room. He looks at Radh's tired face & sleeping form on the sofa. He smiles tenderly at the scenario and walks toward bed, bringing the pillow he tries to put it under her head to make her more comfortable. But feeling his presence Radh drowsily looks up at him and tries to get up. Dev says no Radh take some rest you must be exhausted from that walking. Radh says you must be tired too. Dev says hmmm.. Than Dev sits on the sofa and taking Radh in his arms he says shhhh.. Now sleep and rest a bit. Radh snuggles and makes herself comfortable in his warm embrace. Instantly she goes back to sleep. Dev tenderly looks at his wife's innocent face caresses her hair. His heart feels with warm glow he bends his head to kiss her soft cheek he smiles at himself thinking he just could not resists kissing his wife once again he plants a soft kiss on her forehead and tightens his hold on her that makes Radh smile softly in her sleep. He tells her to rest. Radh sleeps on.. In a few minutes Dev too closes his eyes and drops off to afternoon nap. After a while Radh opens her eyes to see herself snuggled in his arms. She smiles at that. He was sleeping so peacefully she did not even want to stir. She lifts her head a little and looks at his loving profile. Her gaze falls on his closed eyes.....She thinks .. His eyes are so beautiful so full of love when he looks at me.. My whole being just gets fills by his love... her gaze travels lower she sees his nose she almost lifts her hand to touch that small black mole at the base of his nose but than she stops herself as if not to wake him up. Her eyes travels lower to his lips. By this time Dev was already awake and was watching her under his lashes. She lifts her hand to touch those warm pink lips but than lowers it slowly.... Watching that Dev says in his sexy drawl .. Radhika why did you stop. Totally caught off guard she looks at him with wide eyes and seeing him laughing softly she blushes and hides her face in his shoulder hugging him tightly... Dev laughs softly and hugs his wife tightly rocking her gently. Than he lifts her hand and brings it to his lips for a soft kisses. He kisses each of her finger tips giving her the full fill of his warm lips.. Radh was so shy she just could not lift her face from his chest.. Dev says Radhika I am totally yours the way your are mine.. But Radh just keeps her face pressed in his shoulder.. Dev laughs softly at her discomfort. After a while to make her feel more comfortable Dev says let's do one thing.. Why don't you go and ware all those beautiful outfit and show me how incredibly beautiful my wife is.. Dev lifts her chin from his chest he says won't you show me? Shyly Radh nodes her head.. Dev says ok lets go and get those dresses. He softly puts her on her feet and drawing her closer to him walks toward the bed for the bags. Dev goes and brings those bags and hands over one bag to her and says you go and dress up I will wait down stairs for you saying he takes all bags downstairs and waits for her.

He was waiting for her downstairs. The jingle of her payal makes him turn and lifts his gaze. His eyes just could not hold his joy looking at his incredible beautiful wife clad in hot pink saree with silver embroidery. He watches her slow approach, his gaze traveling the full length of her. She looks just so breathtakingly beautiful.. looking at her he feels as if his heart missd a beat... his eyes stop at her face. She was smiling delicately at him waiting for his approval. Taking a deep breath he says softly.. You look exquisitely beautiful. His words bring the joyful glow on her face. He goes forward and holding her face between his two palms kisses her on her forehead. Than giving her second bag he says now try this. Radh takes the bag from him and was turning to go. Dev asks her to look in the bag. She looks in and sees blue sateen. She was wondering what that is. Dev tells her that this is the blue dress he as looking at the display in the mall. Radh remembers the dress. She looks at her husband's face and knows that he really wanted her to see her in that dress. She takes the bag and goes up to change. After a while Dev's gaze falls on radhika who was climbing down the stairs clad in blue sateen sheet. He watches her slow progress with heightened emotions. He really wanted to see his simple Radh in western outfit. Radh comes at the base of the stairs and stands there. Dev was looking at her with so much desire in his eyes. Slowly Radh unwraps the blue sheet around her body. She really feels uncomfortable. Though this is her husband but she feels little exposed. Suddenly Dev's eyes notices how uncomfortable she is and how exposed she feels.. He undersstood the fact that in spite of that she put that dress just for him as he so much wanted to see her in that dress just so that he will be happy. Dev feels little remorse and going forward he wraps her in the blue sheet and covers her. He than lifting her in his arms and holding her close to his heart takes her upstairs showering soft kisses on her face. He tenderly puts her down and drawing her closer to him says. Radhika forgive me for making you this uncomfortable. Radh does not say a word but hides her face in his chest and just shakes her head. Dev stands there holding her close. Than after a while he says Radhika today is our SR and I want to see you as a beautiful bride. Would you dress up as a bride for me?? Radh looks at him and nodes her head with a sweet tender smile.

Dev says I will go and finish couple of errands mean while you get ready.. Radh nodes her head. Radh turns to go in the bedroom and Dev leaves to talk to the reception to make some arrangements for the night. He thinks in his head that tonight he really wants to surprise radh with few special gifts.

Radh is getting ready. She has a tender smile on her face while putting each ornaments. She looks at her reflection in mirror and lastly puts the red bindi between her eye brows. Laslty she covers her head and walks down stairs to sit on the chase all dressed up as a new bride and waiting for Dev to come to her. She looks exquisite and so pretty in her Red bridal outfit and her bridal ornaments.... She wanted to be the most beautiful bride for her husband.

She hears the door and puts the palloo on her head she feels shy but her ears are attentive to his foot steps.. She feels him approaching her.. Her heart beats faster with the anticipation of his tender touch... Dev slowly comes near her stands behind her looking at her. She was sitting so delicately with the palloo on her head waiting for him. One look at his beautiful bride takes his breath away. Taking deep breath he sits behind her on the sofa resting his back on the side. He tenderly encircles her neck from behind drawing her closer to him. He plants a tender kiss on her forehead. Radh closes her eyes with his tender touch and rests her back on his chest. She leans back completely on him and rests her head on his shoulder. She closes her eyes with a deep satisfied sigh. Dev's other hand comes in front of her and rest on her folded hands across her midsection. She feels the heat of his breath so near to her face. Dev looks down at each heightening emotions displaying on her delicate face. He delicately uncovers her head and nuzzles his face in her long exposed neck and takes a deep breath as if to take in her delicate perfume and fills him self with her presence. He tenderly looks at her and says Radhika I was dreaming and waiting for this moment since the first time I laid eyes on you. He turns her to face him and says I wanted to take you in my arms and kiss your mang like this where you put the sindoor in my name saying he bestows tender kisses on her mang. He says I wanted to look deep in to your lovely eyes and tell you how much I love you. Radh opens her eyes wide to look at him, the desire in his eyes makes her blush and she looks down. He says and when you blush like this and close your eyes I wanted to kiss your eye lids.. saying he tenderly holding her face in his two big palms and blowing softly on her eyes lids he kisses each of her eyelids.... He could feel her shudder... The touch of his hot luscious lips on her eyelids makes Radh shudder and open her eyes wide to look at him in real wonder. She just could not fathom the churning of emotions rising in her... The expression of awe and wonder on his Radh's face makes him smile tenderly at her.. He says Radhika I love you with my whole being. There is none in the entire world who can ever take your place in my heart and in my life. I can never exist without you. You are the one I live for and you are the one who will be always by my side. Today we are celebrating our love and I will make each moment memorable for you..

Hearing his words with so much love and tenderness and truthfulness Radh's eyes started to feel up. She turns and hides her face in his chest and bringing her arms around his waist clings to him tightly.. Dev tenderly lifts her head and kisses her tears away.. In fact his eyes were also glistening with unshed tears with the tenderness of the moment. Radhika says I can never thank you enough for making me your bride and loving me so very much. I am the luckiest girl in the world whose beloved loves her like no other man could ever love his wife. I could never imagine my life without you. I thank my Kanha every time I take breath and my eyes look at you. My whole being exists just for you.

There is a knock on the door while Dev goes to attend it let's read this beautiful song or you may listen it on youtube I have added the link just below the song..

Ok with RadhDev celebrating their love I just remember this wonderful romantic song by Peabo Bryson and Roberta flack.... It just so very well fits RadhDev hope you will like it....

Tonight I celebrate my love for you
It seems the natural thing to do
Tonight no one's gonna find us
We'll leave the world behind us
When I make love to you

Tonight I celebrate my love for you
And hope that deep inside you feel it too
Tonight our spirits will be climbing
To the sky lit up with diamonds
When I make love to you tonight

Tonight I celebrate my love for you (ooh)
And that midnight song is gonna come shining through
Tonight there'll be no distance between us
What I want most to do
Is to get close to you tonight

Tonight I celebrate my love for you
And soon this old world will seem brand new
Tonight we will both discover
How friends turn into lovers
When I make love to you

Tonight I celebrate my love for you (ooh)
And that midnight song is gonna come shining through
Tonight there'll be no distance between us
What I want most to do
Is to get close to you

Tonight I celebrate my love for you

Please listen to it on you tube you will live it..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoGWxREwii8&feature=related

Suddenly the knock on the door made them think who it could be. Dev goes on the door and sees a man with the cake trolley he thanks him and wheels the cake in the room. Radh says what is this? Dev says I wanted to make this night memorable for us and as this is our first night of many nights I wanted it to celebrate as the 1st birthday of our new life together. Radh smiles at him. Dev goes to her and brings her near the cart. The lights of the room gets automatically turned off.. Dev strikes the match and lights the candle. In the soft glow of candlelight they look at each other and smile. Dev encircles her waist and draws her closer to him. He keeps her in front of him and brings his both hands around her and holding her hand they both cut the cake together. Keeping her in his arms where her head was resting on his shoulder he extends his right hand to lift a piece of delicious chocolate almond cake. He brings it to her mouth and let her have the first bite. Radh than holds his hands and guides it to his mouth and feeds him the cake. He takes the bite and puts the cake away. They stand there with close eyes. Dev's one arm was around her shoulder and the other was on top her arms in front hugging her back to him. Turning her slowly to him, Dev looks in to her eyes and says happy 1st night Mrs. Dev Raj Purohit. Radh blushes beautifully. Holding her close he stands there savoring the feel of his wife's body resting against him. He lifts her chin planting a delicate kiss on her nose. He could feel a light shudder passing through her.

After a while... He says how would you like your next surprise. Radh says another? With twinkle in his eyes Dev says yes another..... just close your eyes. Radh says but why? Dev says softly Radhika just close your eyes. Cutely Radhika brings her palms up and closes her eyes Dev goes behind her and holding both her shoulder he leads her in other part of the room. Where he lets her stand in the lobby area... Radh was intrigue she asks may I open my eyes? Dev says just in a moment and he pulls the hanging cord. The sudden shower of rose petals makes Radhika open her eyes wide and look above. The rose petals keeps on showering on them. With a radiant smile she looks at her husband who was watching her enthralling delightful expression with tender smile.... Radh's delightful soft laughter fills the room. She extends her hands and catches few petals in her hand.. than her gaze falls on her husband who was smiling tenderly at her. She comes closer to him and throws herself in his arms circling his waist tightly.. She just could not believe that her husband is showering her with rose petals... Never in her wildest dreams she ever imagined such a beautiful and incredible thing.

She was so delighted she just could not contain her joy. She hugs him all the more and resting her head on his chest looks up at him. Dev looks down at her happy face and said Radhika I want to shower you with all the happiness in the world everyday of our lives.. Radh says softly my happiness lies with you. You are my world.. Kanha has given me all the happiness of the world when he selected you for me.. She was so overwhelmed with this she just would not let him go... Dev was delighted with her possessive hold. He than completely envelopes her in his arms and stands there with her under the shower of rose petals. The aroma of the fresh roses was making the whole room like a bed of roses. They both stare in each others's eyes and find the same love reflecting for each other. Looking down at the floor they felt like the floor was adorned with the rosy carpet covered with soft red rose petals. Than he says are you ready for one more surprise?? Radh eyes widens.. Dev delicately holds her chin and turns her face toward beautifully decorated bed. Radh looks at it and hides her face in his chest.. A soft laughter escapes Dev's lips.. He absolutely adored his blushing bride hiding in his arms. He just could not hold it any longer and lifting his bride he slowly walks toward bed. His gaze was fixed on Radh's face on his shoulder. He was delighted to watch her blush delicately. Radh could not hold his intense gaze and closes her eyes hiding her face in his shoulder with a slight shudder. A slow tender smile appears on Dev's face. He loved the feel of her delicate weight in his arms.. He tenderly carries her toward bed and slowly puts her down. He lifts her head and looking in her eyes says Radhika.. Wait here for me. Radh was blushing and could not find her voice.. Looking at him through her lashes she slowly nodes her head. Smiling, Dev walks away for a change of cloths. Radh stands there looking at all. She shivers with the anticipation of her surrender to her husband. She brings her hand closer to her body as if feeling cold without the arms of her husband around her.

Dev changes in his favorite white pajama suit. He slowly approaches Radh and watches her hugging herself, he comes closer and softly blows soft air on her face and says in her ears miss me? His soft seductive voice makes Radh shudder more. She turns to him and He takes her in his arms and says Radhika I have waited for this moment for so long. Radh as if lost her voice. She just stands in his arms saying nothing but feeling all..

Dev says Radhika you are the most beautiful bride.. You look so exquisite today and I feel fortunate that you are mine. He touches the corner of her eyes and taking a little bit of Kajal rubs behind her ears saying so that you might not get my nazar.... Radh slowly lifts her head and looks at him and gives delicate shy smile.. but than with his intense gaze on her she slowly closes her eyes and waits for his tender touch. She was afraid of her own overwhelming emotions.. In lamhoke daman me starts playing.... Dev understanding her shyness starts slowly removing those heavy ornaments. Radh just looks at him under her lashes. His slow seductive smile makes her blush all the time. Dev stands behind her and let her shivering body rest against him.. He delicately brings his hand forward and lifts her left earrings. His touch on her cheek makes Radh sucks in her breath. Dev smiles at her closed eyes. He lifts the other earrings and keeps them on the side table.

He than delicately turns her to him and softly blows soft hot air on her blushing face. His hot breath makes her open her eyes. He says Radhika I want to look in to your eyes when I make love to you. Radh shuts her eyes tightly and shakes her head. Dev holds her close for a few minutes. Looking at her face he removes the nose ring from her nose and keeps it aside. Leaving one tiny kiss on her delicate nose. Than holding her face in his big palms he lifts her chin he tenderly says Radhika look at me. Summoning all her courage Radh looks up at him.. His face was so close to hers. She could feel his warm breath on her cheek and then sudden touch of his lips makes her shudder and close her eyes.. Going behind her Dev delicately unties the heavy necklace and lift it from her delicate neck. Bending his head down he kisses her delicate neck. Than comes off her another necklace. Dev bends his head and leaves butterfly kisses on her shoulder. Radh feels his lips on her flesh and shudders a little. With every touch of his warm lips She as if feels mild electric current passing through her body. Dev feels her shudder. Dev than slowly removes her mang tikka and bestows soft kisses on her mang. Radh lifts her head with tender smile and receives those kisses with awe. Dev than moves forward and holds her hand to take of those heavy bangles. With each one coming off he leaves small tender kisses on her arms. He looks at Radh she is now only wearing her Mangalsutra. Dev leads her to bed and makes her sit in the middle of the bed. He slowly slides behind her and bends his head to kiss her exposed shoulder and back. He leaves the trails of kisses on her expose skin. Radh feels so shy she covers her face with her palms. Slowly Dev draws her near to him. He slowly removes her hands from her face and kisses each palm but his gaze was fixed on her face. He delicately runs his index finger all the length of her arm.. She folds her arms across her midsection and leans her back on him. He brings his both the arms around her and hugs her tightly.

Dev switch offs the overhead light and in the soft candlelight taking his wife in his arms he slowly slides under the cover with her. We see Radhika tucked in the blue sateen sheet. Their entwined hands were holding each other tightly and Dev draws them under the cover. In a little while bare chest Dev lifts himself up to kiss those inviting lips which were driving him nuts all these days.. He finally claims those as his blushing bride closes her eyes.

In the beautifully decorated bedroom in the shadow of soft candle light and a room perfumed with aromatic rose flowers he finally covers them completely with blue sateen sheet and makes Radhika his parineeta. The two were made one flesh.... and started their blessed married life' in true sense Mr. and Mrs Dev Raj Purohit...

Edited by evasumi - 15 years ago

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billo77 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was amazing Eva ...WOWOW !!!šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
You really know how to describe every single detail ..Amazing !!!!
I absolutly loved the uninterrupted SRšŸ˜‰...So beatifully written
Thank you so much eva 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow Wow. Eva this was great, u r the best...and had to take alot of your time, thanks very much...
I enjoyed it, everything was so beautifully written. šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow eva amazing written. must took lot of time to write it. well good work! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Eva didi, that was simply beautiful. I am speechless and have no further words! I had tears in my eyes while reading it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks Eva for this beautiful version.

We all wanted to see this version. There was absolutely no reason for the SR/HM scenes to be interrupted.

Shantanu was brought in for absolutely no reason. That track has not even been forwarded. The whole scene could have been so beautiful and romantic and keeping with what CB is all about. Instead we got a poorly diluted version.

You, with you amazing talent. at least brought romance to the whole episode.

Please send this to the creatives, may be they will use some of these ideas and flow for a 2nd HM.

Thanks a million
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WHOA !!! evasumi, u were too good...
I just hope ki CV's could have shown us the SR just like this...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank you Ladies. Glad you like it.
Yea the presence of those psychos were totally getting on my nerves.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Eva didi,
i really liked it.
this was just amazing and soo romantic.
very well written ,nice surprise with nice beautiful and romantic scenes.
just loved it. šŸ‘ šŸ¤—
Edited by naseebraman - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW......Great job Eva.........it was so nice to read your post........😊

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