cud b savni scenes ......uPdated scene7 p:28

a cud b savni scene 1

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guys dis is very close 2 me.im not so gud @ it ,but tried 2 write sumthing...plz read nd comment
a cud b savni scene 2:

every 1 is happy dat ptc r off to jail nd was bz in group hugs(lol!!!)sam was standing bside avni nd both were smilling nd luking @each oder.

suddenly, avni had a mood swing nd goes to sit on da sofa.sameer 2 sits beside him nd keeps staring @ her.but she doesnt even luk @ him.sam is clueless @ her changed mood.

Damini:roshni chalo dinner serve karne mein mujhe help karo..bohut rat ho gayi hain..aur avni ko itna late dinner nahi karni chahiye.

roshni:okkkay di

avni:di ruko .main bhi chalti HOON.....

prithvi :nahi avni tumhare liye kitchen mein no entry!!!!!!!!!

avni:lekin jij mujhe yeh sab karna acha lagta hain.

varun 2 sameer:bhaiya ap kuch kehte kyun nahi.

sameer:chote teri bhabi meri bat sunti kaha hain..(nd luks @ avni lovingly but she didnt respond)........aur tu bhi bachke rehna roshni in dono gujral behno se alag nahi hain.

prithvi:tune bikul thik bola.meri aur sameer ki halat to mausi ne bhi dekha hain...

nd da 3 brothers r havin a gud laugh.......

damini while serving food on da table says:kya batein ho rahi hain tum bhai o mein...

sameer:kuch nahi bhabi.bhaiya kehre rahe the k u 3 sisters r very lucky to ve us in ur lyf....

damini wid her killer luks:toh yeh bat hain mr. prithvi saxena!!!!!!!

prithvi:nahi damini.........sameer k bachche(give a luk 2 sam)

roshni:varun tum kyun has rahe ho?????tumhe bhi kya aisa lagta hain???

let me tell u guys dat u 3 r damn lucky 2 ve such lyf partners..

damini:yeah..hain na avni

avni:jeej aur varun ka to pata nahi par sameer ko to waise bhi rani mil hi jati...itni garelu itni trustworthy ladki aur kaha milti sameer ko..(nd goes to da table)

sameer understood dat avni is angry bcoz he didnt bliv dat rani is trying to kill her

prithvi got her point ndwas laughing @sameer ,said to him:teri ajj kher nahi..mere bhai ko ab koi nahi bach sakta

sameer: avniiiii.........(gets up nd follows her to da table)

sameer pulls a chair 4 her but she sits on da chair bside it.having no oder way sam himself sat on dat chair nd pour juice in a glass.

sameer:yeh lo tumhari fav orange juice

avni:di mujhe apple juice chahiye......i want a change 4m oranges

damini giver her da juice, luks @ sameer nd says to sam in sign ling-wat happened

sam responds by saying -hes dead 2day(in sign lingo)

sameer is getting nervous but tries his best to manofy avni.while eating he tries to hold her hand but she removes her hand 4m da table.

after dinner avni is going towards her room leaving sameer.

varun:sameer bhaiya bhabi ko mana lena.....all da best

roshni:ha jeej aj to avni di ko apko patana hi parega......goo nd pushes him

sameer runs to da corridor nd pulls avnis hand nd says:tum abhi bhi naraz ho mujhse........kaha na im sorry..mujse phir se galati ho gaya......but im really sorry

avni doesnt bother nd enters her room.sameer follows her nd closes da door.

sameer holding her :kya hua avni ........mujhe batao na

avni:main kya kahu...u wont bliv me

sameer:okay.....i guess my wife is getting possessive 4 me...nd im loving it.avniiiii main kaise mausi ya rani ko blame karta....u kno na mujhe in sab mein koi interest nahi hain.

avni:chahe meri jan hi kyun na chale jaye.....nd how can i forget dat uve already left me 4 dying////

sameer realises dat avni is very angry nd frustrated as she has so many unanswered questions in her heart

avni:woh tum hi the na jo pyar aur vishwas ke duhai de rahe the.i knew tumne mujhe kabhi pyar kia hi nahi hai.otherwise u cudnt ve denied our love ,marriage nd yourrrrrrrrrr baby.(Pointing fingers @ him)

now i kno dat u niether love me nor trust me

sameer:kisne kaha dat i never loved u.....iloved u from da moment i saw u ..but i was a jerk to not accept da truth

i thot i was lying to u for da revenge.......but whenever u were wid me i cudnt help but love u more n more.

avni:den y did u leave me lyk dat.i cud c da happiness in ur eyes when i gave u da divorce paper.u didnt even think twice b4 signing it.moreover u said to i can never get u....tumhe laga ke mein tumhe pane ke liye tumse aise bhave kar rahi thi...

sameer(holdin her tightly):avni i had no oder choice....did u ever think how hard it was 4 me 2 leave u in dat condition,nd how i felt when i saw u in da hospital fyting for ur lyf,nd how did i felt when u didnt let me touch u nd said its ur baby nd in neway we have to part our ways.....

@ dat tym ididnt want to hurt u more bcoz i thot u wont neva eva forgive me after knowing da truth of me being sameer nd not jai .u wont ever love me again

avni:den y r u saying dis now...i still dont love u ....

pulling her closer sameer says:jhoot i know u love me a lot but i love u more

avni is struggling hard against his arms....but sameer is determined to confess nd win her heart all over again

sameer:i was in luv wid da eyes of da girl whom i wanted to kidnap

i fell in luv wid da mali who did not want me 2 pluck da flowers

i fell in luv everytime u fell in my arms.

i fell in luv everytime u blinked @ me nd shied away from me.

i fell in love everytyme u denied nd resisted me

i fell in luv wid ur dimple as well as wid ur tears(avni getting softer 2wards him nd not resisting him)

i wanted to b ur tears dat u concieved in ur heart nd i wanted to b ur smile which kissed ur lips(touching her face)

i fell in luv when u shouted @ me,whenever u were angry wid me.

i luved u when u called me jai nd wanted to hug u when u called me patidev,but i want to kiss u everytym u call me sameer.itna to haq banta haina(both of dem smiled)

i hated myself denying u na wanted 2 die b4...........

avni stops him from saying further

sameer:nahi avni !!!!!!!aj mujhe kahne do.nahi to mein kabhi nahi keh paunga.......i luv ur eyes dat luvd me so much (kisses on her eyes)nd ur arms which i never cud resist nd hugs her

sameer moves away,holding her hands nd says:i kno i dont deserve u but no1 can luv u more dan me...i hve been very bad to u ....but i promise dat i wud compensate 4 every mistake of mine nd will love u more nd more

i lud ur denial ur refusal nd luvd ur luv 4me............

avni i fell in luv wid u wid every passing every moment, every second of my life.i dont want 2 lose.....(nd leaves her hand nd tries to move away hiding his tears)

avni holds his hand nd says:plz mujhe chodke mat jao.....i love u so much.

sameer smiles nd pulls her into her arms.both of dem r lost in deir arms nd r hugging each oder very tightly

.den dey kiss each oder very passionately

avni opening her eyes slowly says:itna pyar karte ho toh kehte kyun nahi nd puts her hand on his heart.

sameer wid his fingers on her neck slide down thru da mangalsutra nd kisses on her neck.both of dem cant deny deir luv nd deir arms.sameer carries her 2 da bed nd lies on her

kissing her on da forehead he says:i luv u

maine kabhi kisse itna pyar nahi kia

hum hamesha sath rahenge ,khush rahenge

i luv u

avni:nd i luv u

both of dem surrendered dem to each oder.........

gonna add more pic later........

muahhhhhhhhhh it was awesome
kitna accha likhti ho aap naz di deeps di se bhi zyada accha
the way u have expressed there feeling was just mindblowing

i want u to write more ffs
u r an awesome ff writter,u r making me crazy with ur sweet and romantic scenes on savni
just loving them more now and missing them a lot

that's awsome buddy...oh i damn wish karneet are together...they r just made for each other

In lnmdj they dint show Sameer's realization properly and yes there were so many unanswered questions......

Originally posted by: carie

that's awsome buddy...oh i damn wish karneet are together...they r just made for each other

exactly carie di they r just perfect for eachother

wiase when r u updating ur pyaar ka rishta😃😃😃

really cool di...luv it....god yeh sab show mein hota toh kitna maza aata...still luved dis 1....

waoooooooooo naz it was awesome
u should write more ffs yaar

OMG...
Soooo romantic...
If this happened in the serial...
It would be soo much fuun too see...

Ummmm..............
Wat a perfect confession was wanting to see it frm long
Strange avni didnt reacted to kidnap thingie!
May be tooo lost in those sexy eyes of sam
Ah wat a masterpiece of writing

Its so well excecuted
Nd written!

Throughly enjoyed nd reacted to each of savnis reactions

Fab job di
Do continue wid more savni stuff!