Tum bin jiya jaye kaise....NEW FF...Epi 6-Pg 19 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: k_sarala

Betty very good FF. What a concept of our NAkku being an IO and will come back to India for Dutta shriram patil. Do continue man. IAm dying to know how she became one.

thnx sarala...........i will continue soon.....😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: PremLeoManav

Just read it all..LOVELY ............awsomeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳

thanx a billion sheeba..........😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33

EPISODE-2

SCENE 1 IN RUPA'S HOUSE(U.K)

(rupa is nakusha's sister ………u remember na….)

Naku , lost in her thought goes in d house.Its vacant n a servant tells her dat Rupa is not at home. She walks in an opens a dusty door. Her eyes r wet n she goes n stands in front of a portrait n cries –"Main aapse itna door aagayi phir bhi aap ki yaadein mera picha nhi chodti. Aap khush honge supriya tai ke saath………..(she sobs) .Jab main aapki zindgi se gayi tab tai aapke zindgi mein aa gyi .Mujhe aaj bhi vo din yad h jab apne mujhe More se bachaya tha ………….pata nhi abhi aap kya kar rhe honge……"

SCENE 2 A PLACE NEAR THE SEA SHORE ,MUMBAI (INDIA)

The silence in d air is ruined by a series of cars headed by a black Ferrari/BMW

.Dey cum n stops on the beachside .A man cums out. He luked a complete man, handsum n mature.His eyes gives d feeling of power n courage.It seems dat he had alone d guts 2 change d scene of dis world. His steps wen reached d ground can make all d girls fall for him (like us…).He is wearing a red T-shirt with black pant and black coat .He takes of his goggles n gives a sharp luk.(Goggles ke sath luk …..acha h na …)

He holds d collar of a man(let d name b Kamle) n yells furiously "Mujhe dhokhebazon se nafrat h….."

"tumhe laga ki tm mujhe dhoka de sakte ho "n gives a slap n den an action scene .

He cont;…….tumhe laga ki tum mujhse bach jaoge……….DUTTA SHREERAM PATIL SE………..

Kamle says "mujhe maaf kar do bhao .Agey se aisa nhi hoga….."

Dutta replies "Sahi keh rhe ho aagey se aisa ho nhi payega………kyunki aaj tumhara aakhiri di h…….." n points d gun on his forehead.

D man ties 2 be smart n jumps into a nearby boat .He feels relieved as he thinks that he hav outscored Dutta bt after a second he finds dat Dutta is following him in a streamer

Dutta gives him an intense luk as if he wanna say "u r going 2 die man…."

(kuch achche stunt scene imagine kro guys………Dutta in streamer …….drool.)

The man is filled with terror .He knew its d last day of his life.Dutta cums near n says…"jante ho is pani mein bahot magarmuch h aur to ab in ka khana banega…….."

Malwe rows the boat faster n Dutta throws arope wich goes round his neck

n finally shoots him .He falls into d water n d crocodiles eat him 2 d last morsel……..

Dutta cums out of the steamer n sits on his car n goes away .

At d times wen dutta is busy here Nakusha is crying her heart out remembering her past.

(Yar I wont repeat everything its just like happened in d show till d haldi rasam n naku doesn't know anything abt sups truth. I will start d flashback from d day of Dutta-sup's marriage …….)

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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
ah-ha...the same circumstances but with a twist...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: kshreya2002

ah-ha...the same circumstances but with a twist...

ya.....bt sorry dutta isn't an io here......hope u liked it shreya....i tried my best.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
Wow...betty..👏..v get d much awaited duttaz entry....of a stylish sortz.....awesum yaaar...!!!😍👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: shonapinky

Wow...betty..👏..v get d much awaited duttaz entry....of a stylish sortz.....awesum yaaar...!!!😍👍🏼

u liked it ....??...thank u ........so much...........😊.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: betty123

u liked it ....??...thank u ........so much...........😊.

ur most welcum betty...am luving diz 1...!!juz wondering how dutta -naku wd meet...!!WOW...awesum betty👏😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
hey betty welcome back
great update and like shreya said same circumstances but a diff twist.
hope u continue real soon
by the way missed u a lot yaar
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
heyy betty nice part waiting 4 the next chapter

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