Tum bin jiya jaye kaise....NEW FF...Epi 6-Pg 19 - Page 6

nice entry of dutta betty😊cant wait 2 read more please update as fast as u can

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nice entry of dutta betty😊cant wait 2 read more please update as fast as u can

Originally posted by: swati2008

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EPISODE-3

SCENE 1-(IN FLASHBACK) PATIL'S NIWAS (INDIA)

Naku: abhi abhi ....aayi hoon .Aayi sahib ne kaha h ki aap jaldi se tayyar ho jaiye

She turns to leave bt dutta stops her n says "naku tumhare wajah se mujhe ye khushi mil rhi h.........agar tu na hoti to main Supriya par kbhi bharosa na kar pata.......Tumne sahi kha tha supriya mujhse pyaar karti h aura ab shayad......main bhi use pasand krta hoon"

Naku who is already very disturbed gets more disturbed .She just nods n leaves .

Naku moves out of his room n goes to her room.She rememders his word dat he likes supriya.Baabi cums in .

Baabi:- Naku tune dekha Supriya tai.........ko........haldi lagne ke bad uska roop aur nikhar aaya h.......aur uski shaadi ka joda.....itna sundar h........tune dekha naku'.......

She gets a glimpse of naku n finds her weeping

Baabi:- naku tu ro rhi h......(she too bcums upset).........naku aise kaise chalega......tu kitna royegi........main boli thi tere ko ki pyaar-vyaar ke chakkar mein mat pad.........par tu meri baat manti hi nhi.

Naku:- Aayi main nhi dekh skti .........sahab ko kisi aur ka hote hue nhi dekh sakti...main nhi ji paungi aayi.....main khin door chali jaongi bahut door.......

Baabi:-Pagal mat ban .......naku .......kahan jayegi tu ..........bahar kutton ki tarah More tera peecha karega .Tab kya karegi tu .....??

Baabi tries to calm her bt widout success.Naku moves out of d room.

Aayi sahib in d hall:- ye kya abhi tak mandap ka saman nhi tayyar hua...baje.......aur tu sun baabi......mujhe sindoor ki dibiya lakar abhi de ....

Baje:- Ho aayi saheb..........

Aayi sahib:- Baje ye kya hai dekho pooja ke saman mein nariyal nhi h..........tu koi kam ek bar mein nhi karta. Saare mehman aa gye h aur lo wo pandit ji bhi aa gye ........dekh unka achche se aadar-satkar karma......kisi ko koi shikayat nhi honi chahiye '''.samjhe''

Baje:-Haan......h.......haan ........samajh gya...........Aap koi tension mat lo aayi sahib........main hoon na main sab sambhal lega''.

Baabi enters with sindoor ki dibiya:- ye lijiye aayi sahib..........

Aayi sahib(AS):-theek tu ja baabi mehmanon ko dekh .......... (she luks inside d sindoor box n finds it empty.)

AS:- are ye to khali h .

She gets a sight of naku n calls her.

Naku cums near.

AS-:Naku ......ja pooja ghar mein sindoor rakha h...........ja ke is mein dal de...........main kab se iss din ka intezar kar rhi thi Dutta is mein se sindoor nikalkar sup ko lagyega'''

AS smiles 2 herself thinking abt d moment. Naku is helpless.She leaves her n goes 2 da pooja ghar n sits dere.

While she is putting sindoor she thinks abt dutta n den she is lost in her dreams.

(*dream sequence starts*)Naku is wearing a red sari .Her hair is wet n she is sitting in Dutta's room ( abhi to dutta ka room h baad mein tasha ka ho jayega).She is sitting infront of d dressing table. Just den dutta cums out of d bathroom wearing vest n trousers n is drying his hair. Naku picks up d sindoor box n moves her hand 2wards her forehead 2 put it bt dutta stops her.She stands up n giv him a confusing smile...........Dutta take a pinch of sindoor n puts it on her forehead. Naku blushes. Dutta says "tum sirf mere naam ka sindoor hi laga sakti ho....." an den an eyelock session between d 2.(back ground music- aankhon se aankho mein bharne do zara'.lamhon ki guzarish h ye paas aa jae....... Hum...humtum....)dey cum closer.Naku closes her eyes n den d screen blacks out (*dream sequence ends*)

Naku: aisa kabhi nhi hoga...aaj supriya tai ke maang mein sahib ke naam ka sindoor hog....(she sobs).She fill d sindoor box n handle it 2 aayi sahib. She moves out of d house.

thanks 4 updating betty

awesum betty...lovd almoz every scene...esp d dream seq....👏👍🏼keep up d gud work yaaar...!!😊

thnks 4 da pm betty😃n u updated fast like it👏loved da dream sequence hope u can update da next part really soon will wait😃

Very good FF. I must say the creatives should borrow some ideas from the forum yaar.

good job ..keep going betty..!😃

Missdd 3 parts!!! *runs to hide*

Betzieee mee ishh shoowwiiee :(

I bill reaadd nowww nd cmmnt :D:D